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Spinestar
Got The Ashfur Tattoo!
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 15:32:38 GMT -5
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Aug 25, 2022 15:39:22 GMT -5
lucky! im still looking forward to seeing what happens in this book!
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Post by stupidflower on Aug 25, 2022 16:00:30 GMT -5
So excited!
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Aroace
#b6efff
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Dɾҽαɱƈʅσυԃ
Villain Enjoyer
Arcane Season 2 has got me in a chokehold once again (do not send help)
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Post by Dɾҽαɱƈʅσυԃ on Aug 25, 2022 16:01:03 GMT -5
Lucky you! So excited to get a spoiler thread. Thank you in advance! I will actually go to sleep now so there might even be some chapter summaries for me to read through when going online again tomorrow.
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Post by Bristleflight on Aug 25, 2022 16:18:36 GMT -5
How!!!
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 25, 2022 16:22:23 GMT -5
Noice!
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Spinestar
Got The Ashfur Tattoo!
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 16:36:12 GMT -5
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Heterosexual
#64c1a0
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𝙵𝚎𝚛𝚛𝚎𝚝𝚜𝚝𝚎𝚙
𝙼𝚘𝚘𝚛 𝚁𝚞𝚗𝚗𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚒𝚜 𝚜𝚞𝚙𝚎𝚛𝚒𝚘𝚛.
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Post by 𝙵𝚎𝚛𝚛𝚎𝚝𝚜𝚝𝚎𝚙 on Aug 25, 2022 16:39:18 GMT -5
I hope you have fun reading it!!
I’m going to try my hardest and not read any spoilers this time though!
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Post by Jaysnow on Aug 25, 2022 16:50:46 GMT -5
Swell
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Post by Darkshine Laufeyson-Barnes on Aug 25, 2022 16:51:09 GMT -5
Could you post pictures of the cover underneath?
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Asexual
#07B04C
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Ṣanɗypaw™
The Shiny User
🎵Guess that's just the way it goes, easy come, easy go🎵
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on Aug 25, 2022 17:04:22 GMT -5
AWESOME! Thanks for posting these and I can't wait to see what's in the book!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2022 17:38:14 GMT -5
This is the third time you’ve gotten something early, I think something is wrong with Amazon, hope you enjoy the book though!
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Post by *Faith* on Aug 25, 2022 18:03:48 GMT -5
Congrats! I hope you like the book. c:
Who are the kits born in chapter 2?
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Post by Jaysnow on Aug 25, 2022 18:09:27 GMT -5
*keeps refreshing page*
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2022 18:25:01 GMT -5
I’m hanging w my roommate, it’s his last day in the city. I’ll start later tonight/couple hrs Take your time! I’m in no rush
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Heterosexual
Spinestar
Got The Ashfur Tattoo!
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 20:46:08 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Onepaw has his first taste of kittypet food with a big mouthful. He finds it terrible, citing their “hardness” and spits it out. The group of kittypets behind him, including Brushpaw, laugh.
Almost 2 moons have passed since their first expedition to Twolegplace. Even though Onepaw at first vowed to never return, Brushpaw had persuaded them, even Ashpaw. Onepaw admits to himself that coming to the Twolegplace is fun. Brushpaw and Smoke, the gray cat he had seen before, urge Onepaw to tell them about the fight they had with ShadowClan warriors. Nutmeg is also present. The kittypets ask more questions as Onepaw continues his story. Onepaw states that he stood up to the ShadowClan cats and that Deadfoot woulda been killed if Onepaw hadn’t intervened. Onepaw feels uncomfortable, as that wasn’t exactly what happened, as some of ShadowClan trespassed unintentionally due to rain and no cat struck a blow. Smoke looks at him with admiration and tells him he is so brave. Onepaw and Brushpaw continue to exaggerate Clan life. Onepaw had perfected his “brave and modest” appearance over the last few trips to Twolegplace.
Smoke begs to hear more, but they have to go back to camp as Deadfoot wants them on an early evening patrol. Onepaw realizes that its is much easier to sneak off to Twolegplace in pairs than as a large group. While feeling guilty, he realizes he loves going there as it made him feel good and important. On the patrol with Deadfoot and Pigeonfeather, Onepaw and Brushpaw do poorly and catch almost nothing. Deadfoot notes that all five of the apprentices will be having their warrior assessments tomorrow.
During the assessment, Onepaw catches a rabbit, which pleases Deadfoot. When they return to the hollow, Brushpaw and Tansypaw are the only ones who look dejected. When their mentors give their reports, Tallstar tells Brushpaw and Tansypaw that he is very disappointed in them and notes that their mentors told him that they were falling behind before their assessment. Onepaw doesn’t see how its fair that their mentors let them be assessed if they knew they weren’t ready, and approaches Tallstar and voices his thoughts and defends the apprentices. Tallstar admits that Onepaw makes a good point. But he continues and says that Onepaw is right – allowing the kittypets to stay and keep failing would be cruel. He announces that the kittypets are to leave.
Tansypaw gladly accepts, saying she wants to be Melody instead. Brushpaw looks at her in disbelief. Onepaw chokes up at the thought of losing Brushpaw, his friend, and begs him to stay. Brushpaw gets up and tells Tallstar he wants to stay and apologizes for failing his assessement and that in his heart, he knows he is a WindClan warrior. Tallstar, impressed, allows him to stay for only one more chance. Bailey asks to stay as well. Melody greets them farewell and leaves.
Tallstar performs the warrior ceremony for the passing cats. Onepaw becomes Onewhisker first, his intelligence and courage being cited. He sees Brushpaw cheering his name as loudly as any cat and feels sad he isn’t sharing this moment with him. Ashpaw becomes Ashfoot and Morningpaw becomes Morningflower. Onewhisker sees determination in Brushpaw’s eyes and vows to help him succeed.
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 25, 2022 20:55:06 GMT -5
Okay, Nutmeg is the last cat I expected to see! But hey, great to see she finally appears in a book. I'm also not surprised that Melody decided to leave, but looks like we're getting another fast-paced SE!
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Post by streamflower on Aug 25, 2022 21:03:23 GMT -5
Poor Brushpaw! It seems a little harsh that Tallstar is flatout just trying to kick him out, especially when he's actually trying; I hope he's able to pass his assessment, but tbh given how Onestar acts towards Smoke after she gives birth to Darktail I wouldn't be surprised if Brushpaw doesn't pass his second assessment I'm also a little concerned that Brushpaw might end up being killed by Shadowclan, and maybe that's why we don't hear from him? Or maybe he leaves because of them
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Post by *Faith* on Aug 25, 2022 21:05:19 GMT -5
So the Twoleg expeditions are continuing. Nutmeg as in Firestar's mom? That would be her first physical appearance if so. So Onepaw has already met Smoke. Ashpaw has been persuaded into going to Twolegplace. Tansypaw, as predicted, left the Clan. We've never heard of her before, so it also made sense. Then again, we've also never heard of Brushpaw before. Bailey stays as well. So basically Tansypaw went back to being Melody and left her mother and brother behind.
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Spinestar
Got The Ashfur Tattoo!
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 21:22:18 GMT -5
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Post by *Faith* on Aug 25, 2022 21:26:47 GMT -5
Don't like that...
Also, do Sorrelshine's kits ever get names?
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Spinestar
Got The Ashfur Tattoo!
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 21:41:53 GMT -5
Chapter 5: As the senior warriors discuss a fox sighted on their territory, Mudclaw approaches with Brushpaw and tells him he isn’t trying hard enough. It had been a few days since his warrior ceremony. Onewhisker tries to cheer his friend up and offers to practice with him. But Brushpaw suggests its better for him to go back to being a kittypet. Onewhisker objects and tells him he can prove his Clanmates wrong.
Tornear and his patrol of Mistmouse and Ashfoot charge into the camp as if a family of foxes are chasing them. Tallstar calmy asks Tornear what happened, who responds. “ShadowClan happened”. Their scent on WindClan’s territory. And worse, they found blood and rabbit fur on the grass – they have been stealing prey. While all the other cats are outraged, Brushpaw looks more confused than angry. Tallstar decides to double patrols along that border. On patrol with Mudclaw, Brushpaw and Ashfoot, they realize there are three ShadowClan cats heading deeper into WindClan territory. They sneak up towards a gully and see Amberleaf, Scorchwind and Finchflight eating a rabbit. Mudclaw reveals himself and greets them. Onewhisker accuses them of stealing prey, which Amberleaf aggressively denies. Finchflight asserts it’s a ShadowClan rabbit. Ashfoot points out that if they were a real hunting patrol, they would take the rabbit back to their Clanmates instead of eating it here. Mudclaw attacks Scorchwind when the latter asks what the WindClan patrol would do to stop them. All the cats start fighting. They defeat the ShadowClan cats, but not before Finchflight badly wounds Brushpaw. Mudclaw acts surprisingly gentle with Brushpaw and tells him he fought like a warrior, but something about what Mudclaw says makes Onewhisker cold with fear.
Mudclaw carries Brushpaw on his back back to the WindClan camp. Bailey visits the medicine cat’s den, Barkface tells her the wound looks worse than it is and has her fetch cobweb and marigold. Meanwhile, Barkface quietly tells Onewhisker that he is concerned Brushpaw’s wound is very deep and might get infected. Barkface gives him poppy seeds and he rests.
Brushpaw dies. Its been 2 weeks since the battle. Every day he had gotten worse and worse. Eulogizing Brushpaw, Tallstar mentions that the whole Clan liked him. The whole Clan is in sorrow. Onewhisker feels guilty for not letting him return to be a kittypet. Barkface says the words that would send him into StarClan, giving Onewhisker peace that his friend would still make it to StarClan despite being born a kittypet. After the elders bury him, Bailey tells Tallstar she will return to Twolegplace. Tallstar kindly accepts. Tallstar tells her not to blame herself and that its his fault – kittypets do not belong in the Clans. He has Onewhisker escort her home. Onewhisker blames himself for his death and apologizes but Bailey tells him it was her fault and calls her son Leo, not Brushpaw.
He spots Smoke when they reach Twolegplace. Smoke asks them where Brushpaw is, Bailey interrupts and asks where Melody is. Smoke, surprised by her brusque tone, tells her she is in her den and Bailey brushes past her. Onewhisker tells Smoke that Brushpaw is dead. When he asks, Smoke tells him it isn’t his fault. He breaths in her sweet scent and purrs.
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Post by streamflower on Aug 25, 2022 21:43:47 GMT -5
Chapter 5: As the senior warriors discuss a fox sighted on their territory, Mudclaw approaches with Brushpaw and tells him he isn’t trying hard enough. It had been a few days since his warrior ceremony. Onewhisker tries to cheer his friend up and offers to practice with him. But Brushpaw suggests its better for him to go back to being a kittypet. Onewhisker objects and tells him he can prove his Clanmates wrong.
Tornear and his patrol of Mistmouse and Ashfoot charge into the camp as if a family of foxes are chasing them. Tallstar calmy asks Tornear what happened, who responds. “ShadowClan happened”. Their scent on WindClan’s territory. And worse, they found blood and rabbit fur on the grass – they have been stealing prey. While all the other cats are outraged, Brushpaw looks more confused than angry. Tallstar decides to double patrols along that border. On patrol with Mudclaw, Brushpaw and Ashfoot, they realize there are three ShadowClan cats heading deeper into WindClan territory. They sneak up towards a gully and see Amberleaf, Scorchwind and Finchflight eating a rabbit. Mudclaw reveals himself and greets them. Onewhisker accuses them of stealing prey, which Amberleaf aggressively denies. Finchflight asserts it’s a ShadowClan rabbit. Ashfoot points out that if they were a real hunting patrol, they would take the rabbit back to their Clanmates instead of eating it here. Mudclaw attacks Scorchwind when the latter asks what the WindClan patrol would do to stop them. All the cats start fighting. They defeat the ShadowClan cats, but not before Finchflight badly wounds Brushpaw. Mudclaw acts surprisingly gentle with Brushpaw and tells him he fought like a warrior, but something about what Mudclaw says makes Onewhisker cold with fear.
Mudclaw carries Brushpaw on his back back to the WindClan camp. Bailey visits the medicine cat’s den, Barkface tells her the wound looks worse than it is and has her fetch cobweb and marigold. Meanwhile, Barkface quietly tells Onewhisker that he is concerned Brushpaw’s wound is very deep and might get infected. Barkface gives him poppy seeds and he rests.
Brushpaw dies. Its been 2 weeks since the battle. Every day he had gotten worse and worse. Eulogizing Brushpaw, Tallstar mentions that the whole Clan liked him. The whole Clan is in sorrow. Onewhisker feels guilty for not letting him return to be a kittypet. Barkface says the words that would send him into StarClan, giving Onewhisker peace that his friend would still make it to StarClan despite being born a kittypet. After the elders bury him, Bailey tells Tallstar she will return to Twolegplace. Tallstar kindly accepts. Tallstar tells her not to blame herself and that its his fault – kittypets do not belong in the Clans. He has Onewhisker escort her home. Onewhisker blames himself for his death and apologizes but Bailey tells him it was her fault and calls her son Leo, not Brushpaw.
He spots Smoke when they reach Twolegplace. Smoke asks them where Brushpaw is, Bailey interrupts and asks where Melody is. Smoke, surprised by her brusque tone, tells her she is in her den and Bailey brushes past her. Onewhisker tells Smoke that Brushpaw is dead. When he asks, Smoke tells him it isn’t his fault. He breaths in her sweet scent and purrs.
never have I been so upset to be correct
RIP Brushpaw
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 25, 2022 21:47:13 GMT -5
RIP Brushpaw! And with plenty of hindsight already, yeah, I really don't blame Onestar for not even trying to talk to Tallstar about Smoke if the last time they had done it had gotten this bad. Highly doubt he would've rejected a queen though, but still.
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Post by *Faith* on Aug 25, 2022 21:53:38 GMT -5
No, Brushpaw. :c I knew that he most likely either left or died. But it's still heartbreaking. Hopefully he made it to StC. Maybe he even gave Onestar a life.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Aug 25, 2022 22:37:44 GMT -5
I'm guessing Cherith wrote this one, right? As for the spoilers so far, I do feel bad for Brushpaw...that's disappointing, I liked him so far. At the same time I can see the seeds that were sown of Onestar's false image that was being built, I didn't expect for it to start since he was an apprentice, yikes. Still, this is interesting so far.
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