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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 22:51:42 GMT -5
Chapter 6: Onewhisker catches a rabbit just before it crosses the border into Fourtrees. Firestar lauds his catch and asks him how prey is running. They discuss Twolegs interfering in their territories. Onewhisker wonders if he should have been so candid with Firestar and mentioning shortage of prey, but remembers Firestar is an old friend and trusts him as much as his own Clanmates. In third-person, a paragraph recalls how he had met Firestar several seasons ago. Onewhisker had been shocked to learn that Fireheart had been a kittypet first. He later told Ashfoot that he was wrong about Brushpaw and that a kittypet can become a warrior.
Even now, he still felt guilt about Brushpaw’s death, while his admiration for Fireheart had grown as he became deputy and then leader. As Firestar and Onestar talk in the present, Onewhisker growls that he wished he could have killed Tigerstar himself in revenge for Gorsepaw. As he remembers the dead cats, he thinks how Deadfoot lived long enough to see Crowpaw. The conversation ends and they say farewell happily. Onewhisker, on the way back to camp, is thankful that he had no ambition to be Clan leader and that it must be a lonely job.
Few days later, he and Whitetail hunt for the Clan. Whitetail has done exceptionally well and he notes how after first seeing her as a kit in the nursery, she became his apprentice and is now a clever, capable warrior and a good friend and was the first cat he had thought of to come with him on the patrol. He returns to camp expecting to see the camp empty, but it looks like he disturbed an ants’ nest. Mudclaw tells him that Crowpaw is missing. Ashfoot is super worried as Crowpaw was the only surviving kit of her litter. Most cats give up, but Ashfoot then yowls she can scent him in a gap between two bushes; he seems to be heading to Fourtrees. Tallstar sends Onewhisker, Ashfoot and Whitetail there to find him. But the trail ends at a stream. But Whitetail jumps it and picks up his scent again. They lose the trail again as they head toward Fourtrees but Whitetail picks it up again. At Fourtrees, they realize other cats of all the Clans had been here with Crowpaw and that they met. Whitetail makes out that there were six cats who met. Two ThuderClan, two RiverClan, one ShadowClan and Crowpaw. Whitetail locates where they left and that they left together. They wonder if Highstones was their destination, but the trail is soon lost completely, even Whitetail gives up.
Onewhisker suggests Crowpaw and five other apprentices went off to be kittypets. He muses that life as a kittypet wasn’t as bad as the Clans made it out to be and that he had never been able to turn his back on kittypet life. He tells himself he will check Twolegplace for Crowpaw the first chance he gets.
That night, he sneaks out of camp and goes to Twolegplace, eager anticipation speeding him up. He thinks that if Twolegs destroy the camp, he knew enough about Twolegs to convince them to take him in. He reaches the den he was aiming for but the cat he wants to see doesn’t emerge, but soon a lot of kittypets surround him, including Melody and Dudley, a small orange tom. Melody is noted to have never spoiled the stories for the other kittypets despite knowing what Onewhisker said wasn’t entirely true. He tells them a story about a fox then tells him that his Clanmate is missing and if they’ve seen him. They haven’t seen him and upon their request Onewhisker tells them the missing cat’s name is Crowpaw. As he is describing how Crowpaw looks, Smoke arrives and tells him the same thing about not seeing Crowpaw. Onewhisker admits that the real reason he comes back to Twolegplace is to bask in the kittypet’s praise of him. Before he leaves, Dudley has Onewhisker try one of his treats in the garage, a term Onewhisker knows at this point. Onewhisker has to try one and silently admits they are delicious. Before telling Dudley they are good and thanking him. Dudley tells him they are bacon flavored. The night grows darker and the kittypets leave, leaving Onewhisker with Smoke. Smoke licks his ear and offers to walk him back to Clan territory, saying they can go the long way around.
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Post by Cloud on Aug 25, 2022 22:53:32 GMT -5
hey, how many chapters are in this, Spine? Doing some wiki stuff and I'm curious.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 25, 2022 22:55:14 GMT -5
Okay, so we're not just going fast in this book, we're practically speedrunning! Not sure how to feel about that.
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Got The Ashfur Tattoo!
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 22:56:46 GMT -5
hey, how many chapters are in this, Spine? Doing some wiki stuff and I'm curious. 33+epilogue
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Post by Cloud on Aug 25, 2022 22:58:19 GMT -5
hey, how many chapters are in this, Spine? Doing some wiki stuff and I'm curious. 33+epilogue woo, thanks! is there also a graphic novel adventure as well as an epilogue?
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 22:59:21 GMT -5
woo, thanks! is there also a graphic novel adventure as well as an epilogue? there is an epilogue and the cover says there is a comic inside too
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Post by Cloud on Aug 25, 2022 23:00:05 GMT -5
woo, thanks! is there also a graphic novel adventure as well as an epilogue? there is an epilogue and the cover says there is a comic inside too sounds good, just wanted to double-check. the cover may say so, but I'm always good for just a quick peek as well. that being said, now I can finish what I needed to do!! thanks again!!
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Post by *Faith* on Aug 25, 2022 23:03:41 GMT -5
And... ...big timeskip. Firestar is already leader. And this takes place during Midnight. So is this supposed to imply that Sorrelshine was indeed Whitetail's mother? And Deadfoot lived long enough to see his son. A new kittypet named Dudley. There's even more confirmation that Onestar never even wanted to be leader in the first place. And I guess Darktail was born during TNP. I'm a little sad honestly. I was hoping to see Onewhisker and Fireheart first meeting. And I guess we're just not getting parents for Nightcloud.
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Aug 25, 2022 23:12:04 GMT -5
And... ...big timeskip. Firestar is already leader. And this takes place during Midnight. So is this supposed to imply that Sorrelshine was indeed Whitetail's mother? And Deadfoot lived long enough to see his son. A new kittypet named Dudley. There's even more confirmation that Onestar never even wanted to be leader in the first place. And I guess Darktail was born during TNP. I'm a little sad honestly. I was hoping to see Onewhisker and Fireheart first meeting. And I guess we're just not getting parents for Nightcloud. damn no kin for nightcloud? i still have her hc parents down as crowfur and sorrelshine and her brother being darkfoot
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 25, 2022 23:43:45 GMT -5
Chapter 7: The second morning after Crowpaw disappeared and Ashfoot is brooding. Onewhisker had a dream in which StarClan Deadfoot told him he must find his son. Onewhisker tries to comfort Ashfoot and goes hunting with Whitetail, Webfoot and Gorsetail. More and more twolegs and strange monsters had been spotted. They split up. Whitetail and Onewhisker spot a pigeon and by applying teamwork are able to catch it. Onewhisker notes how graceful she looks when she catches the pigeon. He wonders if Whitetail likes him when he sees her shining eyes. He realizes that at first he never thought of her as more than his apprentice and then good Clanmate but that now she was a fully grown and capable warrior and that it was a long time since she was an apprentice. They shelter during a rainstorm before heading back to camp.
The whole Clan, including Tallstar, looks skinny and underfed. Tallstar hasn’t eaten and Onewhisker notes Mudclaw was a strong warrior and good deputy but lacked the caring side that Tallstar needed. Webfoot and Gorsetail surprisingly each bring back a huge rabbit, which were sleeping in their dens. Tallstar is convinced to have a bite of the pigeon. The Clan sleeps.
Onewhisker awakes to groaning noises. He opens his eyes and sees his Clanmates leaving their nests and stumbling to open areas of the camp, all letting out horrific groans of pain. Only he and Whitetail are fine. Vomit scent is in the air. Onewhisker and Whitetail offer their help to Barkface. Onewhisker sees Tallstar just fine, and notes the three of them ate the pigeon. Onewhisker buries the now foul-smelling rabbits away from the camp.
While some cats like Stagleap recover, many cats in the Clan have died, Whitetail was strong when her mother, Sorrelshine died but eventually breaks down when Runningbrook dies. Onewhisker suddenly wants to let Whitetail know how much she means to him and rubs his cheek against hers. Whitetail’s surprise turns to love and they confess their feelings for each other.
Mudclaw leads a patrol and discovers the Twolegs poisoned the rabbit hole. Onewhisker goes to Twolegplace the next day. He always knew coming here was wrong and isn’t right. He meets Smoke, who eagerly starts to tell him she caught a mouse. He admits he likes Smoke and guility tells her that while he loved being her friend, their friendship had to end and they couldn’t see each other anymore. Smoke is hurt and tells him they were in love, it wasn’t just friendship. He admits to having had feelings for her but that they led separate lives and wouldn’t mix. She tries to tell him to become a kittypet but he refuses. He says good-by and tries to touch her nose but she starts back in fury telling him “Good—bye, then..” but to never think about visiting her again. Onewhisker has no doubts he did the right thing and that he needs to focus on his Clan and Whitetail.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 25, 2022 23:48:28 GMT -5
Okay, One x White seems to be kinda cute and I'm glad we got confirmation that she's Sorrelshine's daughter, but again, I'm not sure how to feel about the pacing. Kinda feel bad for Smoke here, too. Still hoping either she or Darktail get a novella one day.
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Post by streamflower on Aug 25, 2022 23:57:47 GMT -5
Not sure how I feel about Onewhisker falling in love with his former apprentice; like I get that he's making a clear disconnect and that the attraction is only appearing after she's a warrior but it's still odd to me. Not as odd as Fernpaw/Dustpelt, but like, there's still some slight weirdness there.
I guess though that this will confirm Heathertail is his kit maybe?
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Post by *Faith* on Aug 26, 2022 0:05:43 GMT -5
OnexWhite seem pretty cute so far. So he already broke off from Smoke it seems. Was she already pregnant here? Sorrelshine is officially confirmed as the mother of Whitetail. We also got a death not just for her, but also Runningbrook.
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Aug 26, 2022 0:48:37 GMT -5
OnexWhite seem pretty cute so far. So he already broke off from Smoke it seems. Was she already pregnant here? Sorrelshine is officially confirmed as the mother of Whitetail. We also got a death not just for her, but also Runningbrook. so many of my family tree headcanons r going down the drain now lol. is there anything more on runningbrook? i always hc'd her, webfoot, and whitetail as siblngs but i assusme thats not canon
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Post by Spinestar on Aug 26, 2022 1:21:11 GMT -5
Chapter 8: Onewhisker, Stagleap and Tornear try to hunt. They scent a trail of a bunch of rats running from Carrionplace. They follow it and attack the rats for prey, but the rats hold their own for some time. Eventually the cats win and they return home with lots of prey, but the cats still are injured, particularly Stagleap, who’s face has been bitten.
Back at camp, Whitetail sends Onewhisker to Barkface’s den. When he arrives, he sees Tallstar in the den. Barkface tells him that Tallstar lost a life to starvation, as he refused to eat. Mudclaw says that they need to continue secretly hunting on other Clans’ land. Onewhisker feels shame in the deputy’s words, each time having felt terrible guilt, but knows that Mudclaw is right. Tallstar agrees as well and tells him he will consider his advice. Barkface, a sharp edge to his tone, tells Mudclaw he needs to leave to let Tallstar recover, Mudclaw thinks better about arguing with a medicine cat and leaves.
Stagleap later sits next to him, the rate bite on his face swollen. He promises Onewhisker he will let Barkface look at that and tells him he is glad he chose Whitetail as his mate and glad he chose a WindClan mate. Stagleap seemed to be aware there was a time he had feelings for a cat outside the Clans.
He wakes up and goes to the medicine cats den only to see Stagleap dead. The rat bite was infected and he died in the night. Onewhisker wonders if Stagleap had known this and deliberately didn’t tell anyone so that he could be with Wrenflight again.
He is with Whitetail and near the Twoleg bridge, smells the scent of Smoke and gets worried about Smoke and Whitetail encountering each other. He loudly tells Whitetail that he saw prey on the other side and when she hunts there, he goes the opposite direction to meet Smoke and before she has a chance to speak tells her its over between them and to leave. He races back off after Whitetail.
Both his patrol and Mudclaw’s patrol come back with scanty amounts of prey. Mudclaw says he had to chase off a pretty fluffy gray she-cat. Days later, Tornear asks for a private word with him and tells him the gray cat Mudclaw saw asked for him. Tornear tells him he doesn’t want to know what is going on between him and the gray cat because he doesn’t want to end up lying to his Clanmates. He tells Onewhisker to sort out his problems with her and promises not to tell Tallstar or Whitetail and that he arranged for Onewhisker to meet her the next day near the Thunderpath.
He meets her. Smoke cuts across what Onewhisker has to say and tells him she is expecting his kits. He feels different emotions: guilt for mistreating Smoke, panic in case Whitetail found out, regret for not telling Whitetail the truth and a spark of joy that he would be a father. He tells her he is happy for her and will do what he can for her but cant leave his Clan and that she wouldn’t do better in WindClan. Smoke tells him she thinks her kits will be better off in the Clans as no housefolk will take them away. She accuses that he just doesn’t want his new mate to see her or her kits. Feeling guilty, he tells her its not true and that WindClan is starving and asks her to remember what happened to Leo. But he knows that Smoke is not completely wrong – Whitetail is “not not” an issue and cant let her find out.
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Post by streamflower on Aug 26, 2022 1:29:42 GMT -5
Damn Onewhisker really out here being a more cowardly Appledusk 2.0
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 26, 2022 1:45:33 GMT -5
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Post by Mistybreeze on Aug 26, 2022 2:56:17 GMT -5
WTF?! They just skipped five years! No OS coverage? Seriously???
Did they do any research for this book? Onestar and Whitetail are much older than in older books, Ashfoot and Morningflower are his littermates instead being from an older litter. And there is next to no new information for the family tree! Do we even know who Whitetail's father is? Or her littermates? Whitetail had a litter in TDH, so she had another mate before Onestar? None of this makes any sense!
And what about other important cats like Nightcloud? I would have liked official confirmation on her age.
Okay, rant over. RIP Brushpaw. I didn't think they'd kill him off like that.
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Post by brightheartt on Aug 26, 2022 3:07:30 GMT -5
Are any other of Sorrelshine’s kits confirmed, or her mate?
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Post by dreamingof on Aug 26, 2022 5:18:32 GMT -5
OneXWhite is uncomfortable to read about, I wish they never canonized their relationship as romantic. Also this book totally skipped over characterizing Gorsepaw and giving him a bond with his mentor.
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Post by brightheartt on Aug 26, 2022 5:30:28 GMT -5
OneXWhite is uncomfortable to read about, I wish they never canonized their relationship as romantic. Also this book totally skipped over characterizing Gorsepaw and giving him a bond with his mentor. it literally would have been so easy just to not make them mentor and apprentice. Also Gorsepaw was one of the main this I was excited for with this book and now we don’t even get to see him alive?
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Post by carbonfoot on Aug 26, 2022 6:21:52 GMT -5
Why did they make OnexWhite canon???? This was the perfect time to retcon that can we please stop having cats be mates with their apprentice/cats who are related to their apprentice-
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Post by vectoring34 on Aug 26, 2022 7:55:53 GMT -5
Honestly, I'm happy they aren't just redescribing the same scenes from the OS without adding anything, unlike Leopardstar's Hope
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Post by brightheartt on Aug 26, 2022 7:57:50 GMT -5
Honestly, I'm happy they aren't just redescribing the same scenes from the OS without adding anything, unlike Leopardstar's Hope it will probably just turn into that but for TNP/winds of change and vision of shadows
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Post by vectoring34 on Aug 26, 2022 8:01:33 GMT -5
Honestly, I'm happy they aren't just redescribing the same scenes from the OS without adding anything, unlike Leopardstar's Hope it will probably just turn into that but for TNP/winds of change and vision of shadows Maybe, but it hasn't yet, and I'm hoping it doesn't.
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Post by BrookDapple on Aug 26, 2022 8:09:59 GMT -5
Hi Spinestar, thanks for summarizing this book I'm so excited to see how.it goes. Is there any mention of Nightcloud? Or who Whitetails family is?
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Post by stupidflower on Aug 26, 2022 8:33:52 GMT -5
inda disappointed that there are barely any family tree confirmations. Just an offhand comment would do. Also One X White is pretty uncomfortable, despite him waiting till she was a warrior. Also Dead X Ash is… quite the age difference. Also, when did Wrenflight die?? And Stagleap not getting his wound checked out so that he could DIE and be with her again is pretty dark.
Most importantly, RIP Brushpaw. Idc that it was predictable, him dying is one of the saddest parts in Warriors ever, in my opinion, especially since he won’t be able to see his sister or mother in StarClan most likely.
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Post by Mau Furlong on Aug 26, 2022 10:32:32 GMT -5
when your done reading the book...can you tell me the timeskips for each chapter? plz
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Post by carbonfoot on Aug 26, 2022 11:15:54 GMT -5
Actually I think the more I think about it the more angry I become. As if things couldn't get worse with racism/sexism/etc now we have to add ****philia to the heaping garbage pile of things they're putting in these books
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 26, 2022 11:37:15 GMT -5
Actually I think the more I think about it the more angry I become. As if things couldn't get worse with racism/sexism/etc now we have to add ****philia to the heaping garbage pile of things they're putting in these books I don't think you're using that word correctly. There's an age difference, sure, and it'd be one thing it were like, say, Dustpelt and Ferncloud (they weren't mentor and apprentice, but you get what I mean), but according to the summaries—unless I'm misinterpreting—Onewhisker apparently didn't even start to like Whitetail romantically until well after she had become a warrior.
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