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Post by Ligerfrost on Aug 2, 2017 20:14:37 GMT -5
A new mate for Millie? Well clearly it should be Dustpelt
Jk. Not really sure about Thornclaw...I don't know why but the only cat I can see being Thornclaw's mate is Tawnypelt otherwise I just look at him as a single Pringle.
Firestar...hmm...Swiftpaw? Is he going to live? ...hmm...Spiderleg?...hmm...What Toms will be available at the time...I'm having a brain fart.
On an unrelated note. In a AU where Hawkfrost is a loyal jerk (Berrynose)... HawkfrostxDaisy. I literally thought of this pairing in a AU where Mothwing frames Brambleclaw and makes the Clan believe he tried to kill Firestar and Firestar can't defend him because he slipped into a coma. Somehow someway this pairing came to be in my mind and I've been obsessed with it. And the idea of them having two daughters who Hawkfrost is overprotective of.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 2, 2017 20:39:24 GMT -5
A new mate for Millie? Well clearly it should be Dustpelt Jk. Not really sure about Thornclaw...I don't know why but the only cat I can see being Thornclaw's mate is Tawnypelt otherwise I just look at him as a single Pringle. Firestar...hmm...Swiftpaw? Is he going to live? ...hmm...Spiderleg?...hmm...What Toms will be available at the time...I'm having a brain fart. On an unrelated note. In a AU where Hawkfrost is a loyal jerk (Berrynose)... HawkfrostxDaisy. I literally thought of this pairing in a AU where Mothwing frames Brambleclaw and makes the Clan believe he tried to kill Firestar and Firestar can't defend him because he slipped into a coma. Somehow someway this pairing came to be in my mind and I've been obsessed with it. And the idea of them having two daughters who Hawkfrost is overprotective of. I don't even know why I picture her with Thornclaw, I just do. XD Swiftpaw will live and I already have a planned mate for him, and it definitely won't be Firestar either. As for which toms will live by the time Millie's joins ThunderClan, I don't even know yet. ^^" I can sort of see Hawkfrost being a loyal jerk as well as being an overprotective father. XD He definitely won't be mates with Daisy, though. As for the Firestar-coma thing, it's an interesting idea, that's for sure. ^^ Although I do already have something else in mind. And speaking of Mothwing and Brambleclaw, I do plan on having them actually interact, unlike in canon.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Aug 4, 2017 0:13:22 GMT -5
I actually....think Dustpelt would be a good idea? If we're not going with the whole uncle x niece thing with him and Fern? Actually my problem with that pairing veered more toward the fact that he was creepin on her when she was still an apprentice. But all in all I can def see Millie with someone like Dust or Thorn, someone to match her "spunk" but is also a responsible and respectable tom in their own right.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Aug 4, 2017 0:15:49 GMT -5
I was actually thinking, about Cinderpelt, and what if she remained a warrior, I wonder if she'd still pursue Firestar romantically? Or maybe she'd stand by and allow Sand to have him, while finding a different interest later on...it's actually pretty nice to think. Tbh we do need more physically disabled warriors tbh, like Brightheart and Deadfoot.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 4, 2017 1:32:41 GMT -5
❅Maplefrost❅I just can't see Dustpelt with anyone other than Ferncloud, though his crushing on her when she was just made an apprentice is kind of creepy. And again, I just can't picture her having any feelings for Firestar even after it was confirmed, though I do agree the series could use some more disabled warriors. If she did become a warrior though, I can kind of see her with Sootfur for some reason.
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Post by Ligerfrost on Aug 4, 2017 17:18:58 GMT -5
Oh that reminds we are you gonna fix it so Swiftpaw becomes a warrior...When he should have been a warrior...*cough* before Brackenfur*cough* and make Ferncloud and Ashfur (and their litter mates if any of them are alive) apprentices before Cloudtail since they were born before him? Meaning they'd be apprentices around the time Brightheart and Thornclaw were apprenticed (They also were apprenticed late.)
Actually weirdly enough DustpeltXMillie could be a thing...Ish
On a side note I'd like to see a picture of the real Millie the one Millie is based on. I wonder what kind of cat she is since she's supposed to be a silver tabby with blue eyes...I thought maybe she's another ojos azule cat. But now I think she might be a Bengal cat...maybe
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2017 17:23:41 GMT -5
this is a great idea, Moth! I'm not a great writer, but I hope you do a great job! scratch that, I know you'll do good!
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 4, 2017 17:24:34 GMT -5
Oh that reminds we are you gonna fix it so Swiftpaw becomes a warrior...When he should have been a warrior...*cough* before Brackenfur*cough* and make Ferncloud and Ashfur (and their litter mates if any of them are alive) apprentices before Cloudtail since they were born before him? Meaning they'd be apprentices around the time Brightheart and Thornclaw were apprenticed (They also were apprenticed late.) Actually weirdly enough DustpeltXMillie could be a thing...Ish On a side note I'd like to see a picture of the real Millie the one Millie is based on. I wonder what kind of cat she is since she's supposed to be a silver tabby with blue eyes...I thought maybe she's another ojos azule cat. But now I think she might be a Bengal cat...maybe Yes, I do plan on having Swiftpaw become a warrior, as well as have Ashfur and Ferncloud become apprentices before Cloudtail, though I still haven't decided if their littermates are going to even exist in this AU.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 4, 2017 17:25:02 GMT -5
this is a great idea, Moth! I'm not a great writer, but I hope you do a great job! scratch that, I know you'll do good! Thanks.
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Post by Sea Drops by a Bird on Aug 4, 2017 18:38:18 GMT -5
If you plan on sticking with the "civil war" in WindClan between Onewhisker and Mudclaw, I think you should make it so we don't know what happened between Onewhisker, Tallstar and Firestar. The Erin's missed a great opportunity to add real tension to the story and credibility to the accusation that Firestar was lying when they showed us what happened. Think about how interesting that part of the story would have been if there was a chance that Firestar was lying?
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 4, 2017 22:34:09 GMT -5
If you plan on sticking with the "civil war" in WindClan between Onewhisker and Mudclaw, I think you should make it so we don't know what happened between Onewhisker, Tallstar and Firestar. The Erin's missed a great opportunity to add real tension to the story and credibility to the accusation that Firestar was lying when they showed us what happened. Think about how interesting that part of the story would have been if there was a chance that Firestar was lying? True. Honestly, I'm still not sure if I'm going to add in the civil war plot for WindClan or not.
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Post by Emberleaf on Aug 5, 2017 1:19:01 GMT -5
So this would be the Warriors Redux but all of the book?
Question: would you use traditional naming? Also if you are going to make Ravenpaw and Barely a thing please remove the age gap, it's pretty creepy.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 5, 2017 2:09:57 GMT -5
So this would be the Warriors Redux but all of the book? Question: would you use traditional naming? Also if you are going to make Ravenpaw and Barely a thing please remove the age gap, it's pretty creepy. I've only read a few parts of Redux, and even then it's not like I'm the first or last person who plans of rewriting the series. And I don't see why I wouldn't be using traditional naming. As for RavenxBarley, I don't care for the age differences in this series and neither do the cats, though I always did imagine Barley to be younger when he's first introduced in the series. Then again, his exact age is never clear either, but it's mentioned in YS that he moved into the barn recently not long after Brokentail became deputy, so he was at least a year old by then.
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Post by Ligerfrost on Aug 12, 2017 18:20:02 GMT -5
Hey Moth do you remember my CInderpelt theory? Do you think Cloudtail could help make her a real warrior? Or even be Cloudtail's second mate?
Because I was thinking of an idea where Brightheart is a...medicine warrior (for a lack of appropriate term) and she is allowed to have kits as long as there a second med.cat present (In this case it's Yellowfang based off the theory of her being alive if Bluestar hadn't apprenticed Cinderpelt and Brackenfur early) and she and Cinderpelt share Cloudtail as a mate and raise their kits as a family.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 12, 2017 18:27:40 GMT -5
Hey Moth do you remember my CInderpelt theory? Do you think Cloudtail could help make her a real warrior? Or even be Cloudtail's second mate? Because I was thinking of an idea where Brightheart is a...medicine warrior (for a lack of appropriate term) and she is allowed to have kits as long as there a second med.cat present (In this case it's Yellowfang based off the theory of her being alive if Bluestar hadn't apprenticed Cinderpelt and Brackenfur early) and she and Cinderpelt share Cloudtail as a mate and raise their kits as a family. I actually do remember that theory. It's an interesting one, by the way. I already have plans set for Brightheart, but if I do have Cinderpelt still get injured, she'll be a warrior either way, I can tell you that much. As for the medicine warrior thing, that actually is something I've at least been considering.
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Post by Ligerfrost on Aug 12, 2017 18:31:33 GMT -5
Hey Moth do you remember my CInderpelt theory? Do you think Cloudtail could help make her a real warrior? Or even be Cloudtail's second mate? Because I was thinking of an idea where Brightheart is a...medicine warrior (for a lack of appropriate term) and she is allowed to have kits as long as there a second med.cat present (In this case it's Yellowfang based off the theory of her being alive if Bluestar hadn't apprenticed Cinderpelt and Brackenfur early) and she and Cinderpelt share Cloudtail as a mate and raise their kits as a family. I actually do remember that theory. It's an interesting one, by the way. I already have plans set for Brightheart, but if I do have Cinderpelt still get injured, she'll be a warrior either way, I can tell you that much. As for the medicine warrior thing, that actually is something I've at least been considering. When I did the medicine warrior thing in my story it was optional..like you could choose whether you wanted to be a medicine warrior or not, but you could only be one if you wanted a mate.
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Post by Ligerfrost on Aug 12, 2017 18:33:12 GMT -5
I feel like the reason I still want Thornclaw to be with Tawnypelt is because of my twin theory. (Which gained more support in my mind now that he's ended up with Blossomfall as a mate.)
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 12, 2017 18:41:20 GMT -5
Ligerfrost There are already plenty of cats in the series who know herbs without being medicine cats, so I actually was thinking of making it an official rank of sorts, so somewhat similar to your medicine warrior idea. And Thorn x Tawny... I don't know. I still see Tawnypelt with either Crowfeather or Rowanstar than with Thornclaw, who I still see with Millie and I still don't even know why.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Aug 12, 2017 20:26:50 GMT -5
Actually you could do it Naruto style.
In Naruto there is a force of medical ninja, who can fight but also heal people. There is also someone always leading them, especially in times of war, for example the new head of the force is Sakura, one of the MC's.
You can do something similar with the cats, have the head medicine cat be in charge of a medical force? This could especially be helpful for cats that don't have much to do? Like perma queens that don't have kits, cats that are physically disabled and want to help their clan in some way, apprentices that need more duties, etc.
It can be come a thing, ya know like how WC had moor runners, and tunnelers.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 12, 2017 20:30:52 GMT -5
Actually you could do it Naruto style. In Naruto there is a force of medical ninja, who can fight but also heal people. There is also someone always leading them, especially in times of war, for example the new head of the force is Sakura, one of the MC's. You can do something similar with the cats, have the head medicine cat be in charge of a medical force? This could especially be helpful for cats that don't have much to do? Like perma queens that don't have kits, cats that are physically disabled and want to help their clan in some way, apprentices that need more duties, etc. It can be come a thing, ya know like how WC had moor runners, and tunnelers. I have never watched Naruto, but yeah, something like that could work too. ^^
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Post by Sea Drops by a Bird on Aug 14, 2017 12:08:12 GMT -5
So I've also been thinking about medicine cats and the rule that they can't have mates or fall in love, and the reasoning behind it is pretty weak if you ask me. I think it would make more sense if you made it a spirituality thing- where being able to be close to StarClan, accurately receive their messages etc. only happens when you resend physical connections (love, kits, etc- which keeps in line with them being above clan rivalries).
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 14, 2017 12:23:39 GMT -5
So I've also been thinking about medicine cats and the rule that they can't have mates or fall in love, and the reasoning behind it is pretty weak if you ask me. I think it would make more sense if you made it a spirituality thing- where being able to be close to StarClan, accurately receive their messages etc. only happens when you resend physical connections (love, kits, etc- which keeps in line with them being above clan rivalries). That's actually something I was already considering of doing anyway. Or at least something similar, since medicine cats aren't the only ones to receive visions or prophecies from StarClan.
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Post by Sea Drops by a Bird on Aug 14, 2017 12:28:41 GMT -5
Ok great! I like the rules because of the drama it adds to the series, but personally I've felt that most of the rules in the warrior code were poorly written, and had a "because i said so" tone to them without any clear punishments for breaking them.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 14, 2017 13:32:18 GMT -5
I'm not sure if anyone's said this, but I'd like to have Graystripe remain as deputy instead of Brambleclaw becoming deputy. I'd also like to see a scenario in which Bloodclan and Tigerclan keep their alliance. BTW, is this gonna cost money to read? I already have plans for Graystripe, and they don't involve him becoming deputy at all, or at least not Firestar's second deputy anyway. I always felt like he didn't deserve the position so soon after returning and that the only reason Firestar gave it to him was to respect Whitestorm's wishes. I kind of already have plans for TigerClan and BloodClan. Also, I'm guessing you don't get how copyright works because why in the world would you think that this would cost money at all? I don't own Warriors. It's a fanfiction, not something I'm going to make a profit out of. There would likely be legal issues involved if I did that. Now, if I turned this into my own thing with entirely different characters, then it'd be a different story.
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Post by jayfeather1234 on Aug 14, 2017 14:33:00 GMT -5
You should only focus on the the first book and not worry about the other books.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 14, 2017 14:33:59 GMT -5
You should only focus on the the first book and not worry about the other books. I am focusing on the first book.
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Post by jayfeather1234 on Aug 14, 2017 14:38:47 GMT -5
Really?
Because it seems like you are thinking about the rest of the series.
Just start the book, think of stuff as you write.
It is easy that way
I know all of this because I am in the middle of writing a novel.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 14, 2017 14:53:05 GMT -5
Really? Because it seems like you are thinking about the rest of the series. Just start the book, think of stuff as you write. It is easy that way I know all of this because I am in the middle of writing a novel. I'm a writer as well, but not everyone is going to have the same writing method. I personally like to brainstorm ideas first, even if they won't make it into the final product or are a long ways from happening—sometimes I do it before writing, sometimes during. And just because I haven't been discussing the first book that much on this thread doesn't mean I haven't been planning it out. The point of this thread was not only to announce I'll be rewriting the series, but also for people to simply suggest ideas. But like I said, yes, I have been focusing on the first arc.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 14, 2017 15:37:49 GMT -5
I already have plans for Graystripe, and they don't involve him becoming deputy at all, or at least not Firestar's second deputy anyway. I always felt like he didn't deserve the position so soon after returning and that the only reason Firestar gave it to him was to respect Whitestorm's wishes. I kind of already have plans for TigerClan and BloodClan. Also, I'm guessing you don't get how copyright works because why in the world would you think that this would cost money at all? I don't own Warriors. It's a fanfiction, not something I'm going to make a profit out of. There would likely be legal issues involved if I did that. Now, if I turned this into my own thing with entirely different characters, then it'd be a different story. I understand how copyright works; I was thinking that you and Harper Collins would work out some kind of a deal. Ah, I see. But why would I?
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Post by zeph! on Aug 14, 2017 16:50:08 GMT -5
I would like Thistleclaw to still be alive, maybe he, like, edges Brokenstar to attack them, and killed during the battle by him? Idk
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