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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 15, 2017 18:51:23 GMT -5
Well, some specific examples is that Whitestorm will be the father of all three of Willowpelt's litters (so yes, he'll also be Darkstripe's father, but Graystripe's as well). Another change I had in mind is making Redtail and Spottedleaf (and maybe Willowpelt as well) Sunstar and Dappletail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's in order to explain why they're tortoiseshell and also why Sandstorm is ginger even though neither of her parents are, as well as to reduce the amount of cats directly related to Adderfang and Swiftbreeze. I'll also be changing some mentor-apprentice relationships, as well as cats having different ranks than they did in canon. Sounds neat Thanks. Do you have any other questions?
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Post by โญ แแแIแแ แแฉOแช โญ on Aug 15, 2017 18:52:06 GMT -5
Thanks. Do you have any other questions? Well what kind of mentor relationships do you think you will be developing? Please tell me no SpottedXThistle
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 15, 2017 18:55:31 GMT -5
Thanks. Do you have any other questions? Well what kind of mentor relationships do you think you will be developing? Please tell me no SpottedXThistleOh, heavens no! And I actually said that I'll be changing some mentor-apprentice relationships. For example, remember how Graypaw said in ItW that Bluestar only mentors deputy's kits even though it seemed like she never did? Well, guess who Sandpaw's mentor will be in this AU. And Spottedleaf's warrior mentor wasn't even Thistleclaw, it was Thrushpelt.
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Post by Tas on Aug 15, 2017 20:24:48 GMT -5
I actually still think the one of the three that should die at the end of the DF battle should be Lion not Holly. It would have more of an impact imo. Well, I do want more cats do die during the Great Battle, especially from ThunderClan. Especially considering they were fighting dead cats and no one died pretty much, right? I mean, I don't want to get in a big discussion about the logistics of the DF there are other threads for that so yeah, I agree
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Post by โญ แแแIแแ แแฉOแช โญ on Aug 15, 2017 20:26:07 GMT -5
Well what kind of mentor relationships do you think you will be developing? Please tell me no SpottedXThistleOh, heavens no! And I actually said that I'll be changing some mentor-apprentice relationships. For example, remember how Graypaw said in ItW that Bluestar only mentors deputy's kits even though it seemed like she never did? Well, guess who Sandpaw's mentor will be in this AU. And Spottedleaf's warrior mentor wasn't even Thistleclaw, it was Thrushpelt. Oh wait yeah...but good. Also so thank you for changing that weird weird error on the Erin's behalf.
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Post by Tas on Aug 15, 2017 20:26:07 GMT -5
Well if Lionblaze is gonna die then why don't you make it that once the battle is over he receives all the wounds he has achieved since birth and any wound he has already doesn't heal? that would be like murder goodness think about all the times the little scrapes and stuff he gets are mentioned especially when he was training with tiger and hawk
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 15, 2017 20:28:36 GMT -5
Well, I do want more cats do die during the Great Battle, especially from ThunderClan. Especially considering they were fighting dead cats and no one died pretty much, right? I mean, I don't want to get in a big discussion about the logistics of the DF there are other threads for that so yeah, I agree Well, only a few cats died on ThunderClan's side, and even then I was thinking of there being a bigger death count in general.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 15, 2017 20:30:07 GMT -5
Oh, heavens no! And I actually said that I'll be changing some mentor-apprentice relationships. For example, remember how Graypaw said in ItW that Bluestar only mentors deputy's kits even though it seemed like she never did? Well, guess who Sandpaw's mentor will be in this AU. And Spottedleaf's warrior mentor wasn't even Thistleclaw, it was Thrushpelt. Oh wait yeah...but good.ย Also so thank you for changing that weird weird error on the Erin's behalf. Sure thing. Anything else you wanna know?
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Post by โญ แแแIแแ แแฉOแช โญ on Aug 15, 2017 21:30:34 GMT -5
Oh wait yeah...but good. Also so thank you for changing that weird weird error on the Erin's behalf. Sure thing. Anything else you wanna know? Nah not right now at least.
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Aug 16, 2017 20:17:53 GMT -5
Killing off a good number would be a good reason to thin out characters, the Erins had the opprotunity but only went for queens and younger cats, instead of older generation ones that would have less likability to survive a battle like that.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 16, 2017 20:27:35 GMT -5
Killing off a good number would be a good reason to thin out characters, the Erins had the opprotunity but only went for queens and younger cats, instead of older generation ones that would have less likability to survive a battle like that. Exactly. I'm seriously already compiling a list of which cats I want to kill off throughout the series.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 21, 2017 18:12:04 GMT -5
I think I'll post the allegiances soon, but first, any more suggestions?
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Post by jayfeather1234 on Aug 21, 2017 18:29:41 GMT -5
Where are you going to write your fanfiction?
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Aug 21, 2017 18:30:05 GMT -5
I think I'll post the allegiances soon, but first, any more suggestions? Mmm...maybe a new term for medical cats, also there should be a limit maybe? Like how about up to 3 to 5 cats? I really like this concept, it would be much more active role wise for medicine cats. Like for example: Say Spottedleaf is the current leader of the group, because she is a medicine cat, chosen by StarClan. Under her would be her helpers, including Yellowfang when she joins. The helpers are there to help injured cats after battles, but also they also have the skills of a warrior, they can battle and hunt, it's just not their main focus. They can also protect medicine cats who are on the field trying to help others, so they don't get killed or attacked, like body guards. The medicine cat is the only one that receives omens and signs from StarClan, they also choose their successor from among the group of helpers, or a new apprentice completely, which would usually be uncommon. Helpers can still have kits, and mates, but the main medicine cat leader can not, neither can the successor once they take the position to train under the main medicine cat. This would be good to help cats that are background characters, with not much focus, or attention, let alone development. For example the MC can be noting that they were out training, and so and so, or they'd see them on the field of battle, etc. You can even add conflict among them, like the other helpers not agreeing with the successor, or maybe they challenge the clan leader's words because the medicine cat doesn't agree with them. Maybe they have more loyalty to their medicine cat than their leader. Think of them as a type of special force medical unit.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 21, 2017 18:50:39 GMT -5
Where are you going to write your fanfiction? For now, it'll be on here in the Fanfiction section of the forums.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 21, 2017 18:56:21 GMT -5
I think I'll post the allegiances soon, but first, any more suggestions? Mmm...maybe a new term for medical cats, also there should be a limit maybe? Like how about up to 3 to 5 cats? I really like this concept, it would be much more active role wise for medicine cats. Like for example: Say Spottedleaf is the current leader of the group, because she is a medicine cat, chosen by StarClan. Under her would be her helpers, including Yellowfang when she joins. The helpers are there to help injured cats after battles, but also they also have the skills of a warrior, they can battle and hunt, it's just not their main focus. They can also protect medicine cats who are on the field trying to help others, so they don't get killed or attacked, like body guards. The medicine cat is the only one that receives omens and signs from StarClan, they also choose their successor from among the group of helpers, or a new apprentice completely, which would usually be uncommon. Helpers can still have kits, and mates, but the main medicine cat leader can not, neither can the successor once they take the position to train under the main medicine cat.ย This would be good to help cats that are background characters, with not much focus, or attention, let alone development. For example the MC can be noting that they were out training, and so and so, or they'd see them on the field of battle, etc. You can even add conflict among them, like the other helpers not agreeing with the successor, or maybe they challenge the clan leader's words because the medicine cat doesn't agree with them. Maybe they have more loyalty to their medicine cat than their leader. Think of them as a type of special force medical unit. I was actually thinking of doing something very similar to this. I still want there to be just two official medicine cats per Clan, but I do also want to do something like this (I guess another way to look at it is Brightheart's role as a helper in the series, though this would be more official, as well as actually having medicine cats in general being capable of hunting and fighting (I know this was brought up a few times in the series, but you rarely see medicine cats hunting or fighting anyway).
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Aug 21, 2017 19:17:53 GMT -5
Mmm...maybe a new term for medical cats, also there should be a limit maybe? Like how about up to 3 to 5 cats? I really like this concept, it would be much more active role wise for medicine cats. Like for example: Say Spottedleaf is the current leader of the group, because she is a medicine cat, chosen by StarClan. Under her would be her helpers, including Yellowfang when she joins. The helpers are there to help injured cats after battles, but also they also have the skills of a warrior, they can battle and hunt, it's just not their main focus. They can also protect medicine cats who are on the field trying to help others, so they don't get killed or attacked, like body guards. The medicine cat is the only one that receives omens and signs from StarClan, they also choose their successor from among the group of helpers, or a new apprentice completely, which would usually be uncommon. Helpers can still have kits, and mates, but the main medicine cat leader can not, neither can the successor once they take the position to train under the main medicine cat. This would be good to help cats that are background characters, with not much focus, or attention, let alone development. For example the MC can be noting that they were out training, and so and so, or they'd see them on the field of battle, etc. You can even add conflict among them, like the other helpers not agreeing with the successor, or maybe they challenge the clan leader's words because the medicine cat doesn't agree with them. Maybe they have more loyalty to their medicine cat than their leader. Think of them as a type of special force medical unit. I was actually thinking of doing something very similar to this. I still want there to be just two official medicine cats per Clan, but I do also want to do something like this (I guess another way to look at it is Brightheart's role as a helper in the series, though this would be more official, as well as actually having medicine cats in general being capable of hunting and fighting (I know this was brought up a few times in the series, but you rarely see medicine cats hunting or fighting anyway). I think they should be able to do it, at least be capable of doing it, in very dire situations. Like Leafpool knew how to hunt and was taught to fight, but apparently not that well when she was a warrior for a while. But I get it, because their main focus should be healing cats, hence why the helpers would be handy. And yeah it would be good if it was more official, which is why they need a title name.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 23, 2017 19:29:42 GMT -5
I'm thinking of posting the allegiances tomorrow, but suggestions are still open.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 24, 2017 23:16:53 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 25, 2017 19:19:59 GMT -5
Fifth update!
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 25, 2017 21:48:31 GMT -5
For a title, how about Gone Wild or Freeborne? I know Firestar wasn't born free, but all the other cats are. Maybe, although that would seem like a name for the series as a whole (it's still going to be named Warriors). I just need a title for the first book specifically and maybe a title for the first arc as well (although I did come up with Blazing Fire for the arc name at least as a placeholder). I'm considering Into the Woods for the first book, but I'm not too sure.
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Post by Lightflame on Aug 25, 2017 22:29:06 GMT -5
I was thinking Call of the Forest for the first book.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 25, 2017 22:32:14 GMT -5
I was thinking Call of the Forest for the first book. That's what I was looking for! It's like I had the name in my head, but I couldn't even put it into words until now. ^^" Thanks, Light. I'll definitely consider that title for a name.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 26, 2017 20:29:24 GMT -5
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Post by Lightflame on Aug 26, 2017 20:36:07 GMT -5
Oh nice.
I actually wanted Call of the Wild more than Call of the Forest, but Call of the Wild is already a well known book.
Then again, Into the Wild was also already a book.
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 27, 2017 13:18:44 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 28, 2017 22:50:23 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by โ
Maplefrostโ
on Aug 29, 2017 21:46:02 GMT -5
What do you think of the idea of DF cats giving lives? Like StarClan?
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Post by ๐ฃ๐ฒ๐ท๐พ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ต on Aug 29, 2017 21:50:41 GMT -5
What do you think of the idea of DF cats giving lives? Like StarClan? I think it would be better if only StarClan gave nine lives, unless that Dark Forest cat had an influence on the leader's life.
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