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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2018 22:01:39 GMT -5
( Hi Bramble.
Also guys, since no one else offered, I may remake this page soon. You think it is a good idea to start a new thread soon? )
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Post by Rio on Apr 6, 2018 13:18:48 GMT -5
(Yeah that sounds good to me! I'll just say Boldpaw is waking up in the Medicine den then c: )
Boldpaw's vision blurred as he blinked open his eyes. "Where am I?" he asked, struggling to make out where he was. I was in the tunnel and it collapsed, he remembered. Am I in Starclan?, out of panic he suddenly tried to jolt upright but his legs instantly gave way, his chin hit the ground hard. Boldpaw rolled onto his side in confusion as he tried to understand why he couldn't get up. The memory of a large rock striking him hard against his spine when the tunnels collapsed flashed into his mind. "What happened to me?" he asked as he closed his eyes, his voice was shaking.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2018 15:46:18 GMT -5
Foxtail, who had been sitting in the entrance talking in a low voice with Palepaw, jumped up slightly as he heard Boldpaw fall, and hastened to move up besides his apprentice, worry flashing in his blue eyes. Palepaw winched, her tail drooping as she moved to follow. Her pelt as dusty and dirty still from digging out her friends in the tunnel, as she hadn't had any mind or focus to clean herself. Not after this.
Foxtail said. "Boldpaw, don't move... Mooneyes is going to do the best we can, but we don't really know... how it is yet, it could get worse if you move."
Foxtail did not want to admit that his apprentice might already be beyond fixing, so he kept that part out. Mooneyes and Pinepaw could still do something, right?
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Post by Rio on Apr 6, 2018 19:20:54 GMT -5
Boldpaw looked up at his mentor, his eyes round with fear . "I'm so sorry, I shouldn't have left camp without telling you" he looked down shamefully whilst trying to avoid looking Foxtail in the eye. The usually confident apprentice now looked small and timid as he tried to stop himself from trembling. "I can't feel my legs" he said quietly after a long pause, his voice was barely more than a whisper.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Apr 6, 2018 19:26:55 GMT -5
Hey)
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Post by Rio on Apr 6, 2018 19:33:09 GMT -5
(Hey Morning!)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Apr 6, 2018 19:35:12 GMT -5
hey)
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2018 20:15:07 GMT -5
Foxtail winced at the last comment, and nearly jumped as Palepaw's tail slightly flicked him as she moved to sit next to the fluffy tom. Her eyes were wide as she stared down at her friend and she didn't know what to say.
Foxtail almost felt like scolding him, but seeing him looking so miserable the feeling quickly washed away. This could have equally been him laying there instead of Boldpaw- after all, he, Honeydew and Crowwhisper had done a similar adventure when they were apprentices. And without permission... He added to himself, feeling a chill as he recalled the day. It was the same day Ravenstep, Boldpaw's father, was killed.
As he noticed Boldpaw trembling he sat down slowly, having had been sitting up before, and gently laid a paw on Boldpaw's shoulder. It was a weak act at comfort, but he didn't know what else to do!
"I should've told on you." Palepaw said in a very tiny voice, as she herself shivered. Her voice was hoarse from her coughing and shouting earlier and her eyes still looked teary.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Apr 6, 2018 20:18:30 GMT -5
Bramblepaw laid in a rest near Boldpaw's. His back legs had been broken in the tunnel collapse
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Post by Rio on Apr 7, 2018 14:15:47 GMT -5
Bramblepaw was with me, Boldpaw narrowly opened one eye as he remembered how he had convinced the younger apprentice to go with him. "Is Bramblepaw okay?" he asked, his voice filled with concern. "I tried to warn him that the tunnel was collapsing but I lost sight of him" he sighed, closing his eyes again as a wave of tiredness swept over him.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2018 15:21:50 GMT -5
Palepaw has shifted her eyes towards her brother, a small frown on her face. Bramblepaw didn't seem as if his injures were worse, but she felt sickened by his looking at how unkempt and battered he looked.
"He's resting." Foxtail said simply, also casting his eyes on Bramblepaw. "He didn't get out in time to be unharmed... but he's alive."
Crowwhisper walked in then with a hare in his jaws, bowing his head slightly as he looked at the miserable sight, and silently taking a seat besides his brother.
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Post by Rio on Apr 7, 2018 17:56:05 GMT -5
"I convinced him to come with me" Boldpaw admitted regretfully. "I told him that nothing bad would happen but I couldn't protect him, I'm so sorry" his mumble trailed off as he sunk deeper into his nest. He wanted to sleep but fear and a constant sharp pain in his chest prevented him.
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Post by Rio on Apr 11, 2018 18:02:18 GMT -5
(Hey guys! c: )
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Post by Rio on Apr 13, 2018 16:05:18 GMT -5
(RP anyone? :0 I'm also thinking of making a new character c: ! I've thought about making her for a while and think maybe should could help cause a little drama if we're still going with the civil war type idea for Oakclan? )
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Apr 15, 2018 15:04:02 GMT -5
Hey)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Apr 15, 2018 15:04:50 GMT -5
I think we're doing the civil war but we're also trying to do something that combines the clans so I don't know when any of those are starting. Plus cedar is already doing a civil war)
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2018 14:16:12 GMT -5
( I still want to do civil war but we can maybe talk out a different route?  ) |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2018 18:17:08 GMT -5
( That was kinda my idea, not so much a split besides a split in opinions. )
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Post by Deleted on Apr 19, 2018 18:50:42 GMT -5
( Well I was going to have Harestar die at the end of the plot, maybe if we escalate the plot enough a cat can try- with good intentions- to usurp leadership? I like the idea of a plot focusing on an conflict where both sides have good intentions and someone takes it too far. I can offer Whiteraven, but he'd never actually kill Harestar. Chase him out maybe if he thought he was doing what was best for OakClan. )
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Post by Deleted on Apr 20, 2018 11:55:15 GMT -5
( Well, anyone want to rp for now? )
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