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Post by Noivian on Sept 20, 2018 16:48:57 GMT -5
Oh, perhaps a band of rogues steals her from camp or something and she comes back with kits? Yeah it's kinda dark but I guess it could work?
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 16:49:42 GMT -5
Ahh okay! I'm a lil frazzled and kinda really happy with how much of a spike in development this got!! I have my cats already too. I just need to prep a form. I'm going to use that intro you created. I think we should keep like Sea-seer and Moon-seeker as the roles but we can also have them as suffixes if you guys don't want to use moon or conch. I just know that otherwise those names may be restricted. I'd also say yes! Healers can have mates and kits as long as if they are a she-cat they have a replacement healer. however Seer's cannot have mates and or kits!
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 17:00:35 GMT -5
Thanks! I'm editing up the Medicine cats right now too! I may add you guys as mods on the thing too since you've helped out so if I'm not on you guys can accept someone. that is if you're all okay with that or even want to be mods on the rp. What are our offical idea for the Med cats names
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 17:07:12 GMT -5
For med cats i rlly like -glow for healers and -moon for oracles tbh, but its your decision
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 17:11:09 GMT -5
So are we calling them Healers and Oracles? Because looking at those, while I love them, they feel more tribe like? I feel Seer and Seeker (with ocean or moon or tide) added on feels more clan-like but I know you settled on Healer and Oracle earlier.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 17:14:24 GMT -5
yeah seer and seeker are good titles, we should use those as the official names of their ranks
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 17:18:28 GMT -5
So Tide-seeker and Moon-seer? Or something else?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 17:20:09 GMT -5
yeah, those sound pretty good :O
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 17:23:41 GMT -5
So do you guys wanna help me on the history! I have the original founder's name, her name was Sunny and she was a rogue in the twoleg place for a while before leaving and hiking up and around the forest (The forest is kind of a hill like figure that leads up into becoming the cliff that beachclan's cave is within.
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Post by Noivian on Sept 20, 2018 17:29:38 GMT -5
((Edited the intro to fit my character's specifics, instead of a placeholder. Small changes, but important ones.))
Calm. You never expected to feel so calm... especially not while several tail-lengths underwater. The salt stings your eyes, but you don't mind. Waves rolling above you gently ripple your fur as you sink lower and lower. Lights play on the surface, a dazzling display of rays reaching. Something pulls at your scruff, and you're dimly aware of the pressure in your ears releasing as you're pulled to the surface. Your vision dims...
"Wake up! Hey! Spit out the water, do you have rocks for ears? Don't you dare fall asleep on me now!"
A she-cat's sharp voice pulls you from the darkness. You attempt to inhale, but your lungs are full of water. Your eyes fly open and you turn, heaving to push water from your chest. Finally, finally, you take a sharp breath, relishing in the sting of salt water and sweet sweet air filling your lungs at last. Coughing and sputtering, you shudder as the she-cat runs her paws on your side, against the flow of your fur. Taking a quick glance around, you realize you're on the sandy shore of a beach, an outcropping of rocks a few tail-lengths away, jutting out into the water. The she-cat must have pulled you to shore.
"That was a close one, huh?" she comments idly. "You nearly drowned. Good thing I saw you fall off the rocks. Can you walk?" You stand, wobbling a bit, but she provides plenty of support. "I'm Gullsong, Deputy of Beachclan, by the way."
You inquire what Beachclan is, in a raspy voice.
"Why, it's where we're headed right now," she purrs pleasantly. "After all, you did nearly drown. I can't simply let you go without seeing my Tide-seeker. What kind of Deputy would I be?"
She seems friendly enough. You figure you might as well stick around.
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 17:33:02 GMT -5
cool! Its updated. Im putting in the territory and prey and such right now.
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 17:45:49 GMT -5
Perhaps!
So how about sunny wandered from the Twolegs Camp (City) and entered the forest and wandered around for a bit before coming upon the beach, in which she met a small group of cats (almost like a tribe but too small) and decided to stay with them. Then a group of rogue tried to take over their beach and sunny helped chase them out. Everyone kind of respects her enough she becomes a leader but it's not official. Sunny then becomes mates with one of the cats (I'm kind of planning to maybe have a descendant of sunshell's to try and claim that they should be the leader? Perhaps just a small/ more minor plot line. who knows). Then the first seer receives a message from their ancestors and informs Sunshell that about it. Perhaps the ancestors said they should form a clan and that sunny was to be named sunshell and become the leader, along with the information about the seers and seekers. Perhaps the seeker gets this from a conch shell and that's how they come to be so sacred? I also want to talk about the forgotten lake of saltwater in the cave, which is caved in. but idk how to tie it in.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 17:47:45 GMT -5
maybe moonclan caved in that place when beachclan first did something to displease them?
the conch is a good idea, i like that.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 17:49:47 GMT -5
Unrelated, i think there are two typos on the territory/camp section of the main page. when describing the den of the tide-seeker and moon-seer, you refer to them as moon-seer in the title but as "ocean-seer" in the description, and in the territory section, when describing the starpool, you say that the "medicine cat" travels there instead of moon-seer
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Sept 20, 2018 17:49:51 GMT -5
Perhaps! So how about sunny wandered from the Twolegs Camp (City) and entered the forest and wandered around for a bit before coming upon the beach, in which she met a small group of cats (almost like a tribe but too small) and decided to stay with them. Then a group of rogue tried to take over their beach and sunny helped chase them out. Everyone kind of respects her enough she becomes a leader but it's not official. Sunny then becomes mates with one of the cats (I'm kind of planning to maybe have a descendant of sunshell's to try and claim that they should be the leader? Perhaps just a small/ more minor plot line. who knows). Then the first seer receives a message from their ancestors and informs Sunshell that about it. Perhaps the ancestors said they should form a clan and that sunny was to be named sunshell and become the leader, along with the information about the seers and seekers. Perhaps the seeker gets this from a conch shell and that's how they come to be so sacred? I also want to talk about the forgotten lake of saltwater in the cave, which is caved in. but idk how to tie it in. |
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 17:56:31 GMT -5
I just cpied from my first planning parts and the ocean-seer is a typo! Thank you for telling me Ill fix those all up!!!
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Post by Noivian on Sept 20, 2018 17:58:47 GMT -5
Okay so perhaps the first seer was one of Sunshell's kits? They could have had three kits total. One could be the first Sea-seeker, the other the first Moon-seer, and perhaps the third one did something bad?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 18:00:34 GMT -5
concept: the third one killed a high-ranking member of the clan (possibly even a family member) by the saltwater lake for the chance to take their position, and moonclan caused a cave-in crushing the third to death and blocking off the lake (possibly the third who died founded the dark abyss?)
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 18:01:13 GMT -5
Maybe the third one is the reason the lake was caved in?
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Post by Noivian on Sept 20, 2018 18:06:36 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm thinking the third one killed their Moon-seer sibling out of jealousy, and founded the dark abyss. I'm thinking the third one drowned the Moon-seer in the saltwater lake, and Moonclan caused the cave in, trapping him in the lake until he too drowned. Kinda dark, but think of the irony!
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 18:18:18 GMT -5
I think that works! I'm working on Traditions and other info to know sections rn
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Post by Voidastral on Sept 20, 2018 18:19:24 GMT -5
I will also add Dark Abyss and Moonclan cats. If someone wants to take up Sunshell they can! That or her mate and any of her kits and or other previous leaders and warriors.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 18:20:15 GMT -5
I could take up the founder of the dark abyss if you want. im kinda in the mood to play a terrible person (cat?)
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Post by Noivian on Sept 20, 2018 18:29:17 GMT -5
Same, but I'm horrible at being horrible, so I might just make the first Moon-seer? Perhaps their name was literally Moonseer, meaning the occupation of Moon-seer was named after the first Moon-seer, Moonseer.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2018 18:32:02 GMT -5
I've already written out that third sibling. Named him Pikeheart.
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