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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 31, 2018 16:54:07 GMT -5
No problem! Actually, can you fan me? I've enjoyed reading the trilogy
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Jul 31, 2018 18:09:36 GMT -5
No problem! Actually, can you fan me? I've enjoyed reading the trilogy Sure thing! Also there's a novella out that features Stonetail called Shining Skies if you're interested in reading that c: |
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 3, 2018 14:09:40 GMT -5
No problem! Actually, can you fan me? I've enjoyed reading the trilogy Sure thing! Also there's a novella out that features Stonetail called Shining Skies if you're interested in reading that c: Awesome! I'll check that out if I get time c: |
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 15, 2018 11:10:50 GMT -5
Great chapter! But no, poor Sagepelt  I'm worried Shadow's going to do something reckless now. |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 16, 2018 15:38:48 GMT -5
I think I started reading this a long time ago!
Time to dig in and catch up!
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Post by Pyropelt on Aug 20, 2018 23:38:55 GMT -5
I liked the end of the battle!
And good thing Leaf didn't kill Firelight!
At first Inwas like how come Stonetail said that? Then I realized that he didn't probably know all the things that happened, from Shadowheart's perspective.
Awww poor Sagepelt! I totally didn't expect that.
I liked the ending! Wonder when he'll get Dune.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Sept 1, 2018 20:58:00 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Thanks! And he may, he may not. Only time will tell xP phantomstar57 You may have lol. This story has been going for a while now XD Pyropelt Thank you x3 And yeah, Shadowheart wouldn't be able to handle two heartaches at once, poor bean. And yep! Stonetail doesn't really know anything about Cinder, apart from her being kidnapped by Hawk when she was a kit. ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ So sorry XD But happy late birthday! <3 ---- Another aside, FINALLY updated the allegiances at the end of the first page if anyone is interested x3 And since the second arc's planning is coming along well I decided to reveal the names of the three main characters for it! We have Frostpaw, Sunpaw, and Rosekit! I won't reveal their relations to the current characters or what Clan(s) they are from, but you guys are free to speculate! I also added some trivia to the trivia section~
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Post by Pyropelt on Sept 6, 2018 17:44:06 GMT -5
Hey! What a great chapter!
I really love how you portrayed Shadowheart's grief. I liked how you had him knowing that he was taking a long time to process his pain. I believe that everybody deals with grief in their own way.
Also it was cool how he went and talked to Pinefrost!
I thought it was perfect how you also talked about Shadowheart not feeling he had any right to feel so much grief for Sagepelt, way more than Hollycloud and their kits. I don't see it that often in stories, so it was refreshing!
Awesome as always!!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Oct 18, 2018 7:11:00 GMT -5
Hey! What a great chapter! I really love how you portrayed Shadowheart's grief. I liked how you had him knowing that he was taking a long time to process his pain. I believe that everybody deals with grief in their own way. Also it was cool how he went and talked to Pinefrost! I thought it was perfect how you also talked about Shadowheart not feeling he had any right to feel so much grief for Sagepelt, way more than Hollycloud and their kits. I don't see it that often in stories, so it was refreshing! Awesome as always!! Thank you! Awesome feedback as always <3 everyone is sad and now I'M SAD >:c |
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Post by Gray Pool on Oct 19, 2018 9:27:06 GMT -5
This is awesome!! I binged all three last night, love your writing style  |
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Oct 20, 2018 19:29:16 GMT -5
This is awesome!! I binged all three last night, love your writing style Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy what I have so far <3 Since I always ask new readers, who is your favorite character? I'm always curious xD |
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Post by Gray Pool on Oct 20, 2018 23:06:41 GMT -5
Hmm. That's hard to say, but probably Firelight or Sagepelt!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Oct 20, 2018 23:30:12 GMT -5
Hmm. That's hard to say, but probably Firelight or Sagepelt! Ah both good characters! Firelight is always fun to write haha |
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 23, 2018 12:14:50 GMT -5
Love the new chapter! I'm glad Fire and Storm made up - in the nick of time, apparently. After that cliffhanger, I feel like we're going to get to the big climax soon o.o
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Oct 23, 2018 15:22:13 GMT -5
Love the new chapter! I'm glad Fire and Storm made up - in the nick of time, apparently. After that cliffhanger, I feel like we're going to get to the big climax soon o.o Thank you! <3 And oh yeah definitely! There's still quite a bit of story left, but things are going to get more intense soon! |
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Post by Pyropelt on Nov 2, 2018 16:21:23 GMT -5
Chapter 19 is great!
I really like the detail you put for the scenery. Especially the part where Shadowheart misses his catch. Oh and also Firelight dropping hers in the snow, then killing it.
It's good that Shadowheart helped drive off the fox. And that was nice that he and Blackflame saw Stonetail at the gathering!
Oh man I didn't expect the ending! Nice!
Hmm I wonder if the Clans will stand and fight as one, or if some cats will turn tail and flee.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Nov 2, 2018 18:34:39 GMT -5
Chapter 19 is great! I really like the detail you put for the scenery. Especially the part where Shadowheart misses his catch. Oh and also Firelight dropping hers in the snow, then killing it. It's good that Shadowheart helped drive off the fox. And that was nice that he and Blackflame saw Stonetail at the gathering! Oh man I didn't expect the ending! Nice! Hmm I wonder if the Clans will stand and fight as one, or if some cats will turn tail and flee. Thank you! The next chapter will be more intense than most of the chapters we've seen so far. Hawk is a shifty guy man, the Clans will have to listen to Blackstar's plan or else |
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Nov 16, 2018 21:49:45 GMT -5
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Nov 25, 2018 23:08:10 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Dec 7, 2018 0:43:43 GMT -5
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Dec 8, 2018 4:14:21 GMT -5
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Post by Pyropelt on Dec 8, 2018 21:01:30 GMT -5
Hey!
These last two chapters were great!
Aw poor Stonetail. Glad he wasn't killed!
Yay for Blackflame! Plus, I thought his talk with Shadowheart was nice.
Poor Foxstar. She must feel so much burden from having cats in her Clan killed. Well, and all the LeafClan cats too must feel a lot of grief.
Can't wait to read more!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Dec 19, 2018 23:56:35 GMT -5
Hey! These last two chapters were great! Aw poor Stonetail. Glad he wasn't killed! Yay for Blackflame! Plus, I thought his talk with Shadowheart was nice. Poor Foxstar. She must feel so much burden from having cats in her Clan killed. Well, and all the LeafClan cats too must feel a lot of grief. Can't wait to read more! Thanks! Yeah, Foxstar has a lot to carry on her shoulders. But all will be alright! c: --- New chapter up! ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ ~Sapphire~ Gray Pool |
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Dec 20, 2018 20:35:25 GMT -5
 New Artwork I commissioned of Firelight and Shadowheart! Done by Shellykeyartwork on dA if anyone is interested ^^ |
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I'm worried Shadow's going to do something reckless now.
