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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 27, 2017 23:58:12 GMT -5
Structural Integrity [ Welcome! ] Welcome to Structural Integrity, a short Beach Bash course run by yours truly! As oppose to the usual courses that are posted here, I decided to run a course on something crucial to any kind of writing, yet it is rarely touched upon on the forums - theory. Much of what we do here is based around practice - we write a story, we post it, we gain fans, and slowly, we improve. This crash course aims to look at the reasons why we improve, and to answer a few key questions; - why do we enjoy a story? - what are the elements that make up a good story? - how do I adapt that to fit all kinds of stories?
Hopefully, by the end of it, you'll understand not just how to write a story, but what makes a story. We'll begin with the key elements of stories and how it fits to an overarching structure, and end with adapting that structure to fit any type of medium. Much of this course is adapted from the four units of advanced English I take at school, so I hope you all find it as useful and as fascinating as I have.
While, of course, there is no fixed way to write a story, aim to teach you some new techniques, and how to break away from the stereotypical plot lines and their cliches. To help you put this theory into practice, each lecture will conclude with a short (and optional) activity, designed to get you to think critically not just about your story, but about what makes it a story.
If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to approach me! I promise I'm very friendly. So, sit back, relax, take some notes, and enjoy. [ A Cautionary Word ] Less cautionary and more 'have patience'; I've got exams very very soon, so these lectures will be posted rather sporadically over the following weeks. I actually only have the time for to post this as it coincides with the research I'm doing for my own projects, so please have patience, and I'll get everything online asap! [ Words of Wisdom] I'll find some quotes or something... [ Lectures ] 1. Structure vs. Form vs. Feature 2. Seven Points 3. The Hero's Journey 4. Subverting traditional structure 5. Short story structure
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 27, 2017 23:59:56 GMT -5
structure vs. form vs. features[ Lecture ] Form, feature and structure are key components of any body of writing as it enables the human brain to recognise the work as a complete narrative. It is the presence of these things that allows the readers to connect scenes together, forming a cohesive body of work that would otherwise be a collection of paragraphs shoved together. Without form, features or structure, we are left simply with words on a page. Form;There are a variety of forms within the literary genre, including visual means, such as graphics and films, auditory means, including radio plays and monologue, and perhaps what we are most familiar with - the physical literary means, the most prevalent of which are full-length novels, short stories and poetry. Each form has distinctive features that make it what it is. For the purpose of this lecture, I will primarily be focussing on the literary mediums. So what, then, is the difference between them? What makes a poem a poem, and a novel a novel? Whats the difference between a novel and a short story, a short story and a one-shot? The answer, my friends, is features. Features; Each form has a set criteria. In literary forms, the key difference is length. In order to be classified as a novel (or a short story, for that matter) must fall within a certain word count. - a novel must have 40 000 words or over - a novella has 17 500 - 39 999 words - a novellette has 7500 - 16 499 words - a short story has fewer than 7500 words Anything shorter than this becomes flash fiction, which typically includes one-shots, sudden fiction (750 words), drabbles (100 words) and dribbles (50 words). A novel can be broken down into four basic features; plot, characters, setting and length. In a novel, the plot is typically complex, with several side plots accompanying the main storyline, the characters are rich and developed, the setting is intricate and well thought out, and the length appropriate to both the genre and the storyline. Fitting all this into a singular piece of writing, and fitting it well, relies not only on the skill of the writer, but on structure. No matter the plot line, every piece of writing follows one of two prime structures - the Seven Points or the Hero's Journey. Any further features are ultimately dependant on genre; each genre has a set of distinct guidelines that determine your piece as belonging to any one genre over another, and each of these guidelines dictate a set of distinctive features and ideologies. I could go into more detail, but describing exactly what each and every genre entails would take an entirely seperate crash course. The best way to discover what genre your novel fits into is to research the features of each genre. It is best to work backwards - fit your novel to a genre, rather than forcing a genre to fit your novel. It is important to remember that genres are fluid. They are ever changing, and often adapt in order to reflect contextual concerns. A good example of changing genre (and therefore changing features) is science fiction. As a genre that primarily aims to reflect the concerns of its audience, its form and features changes constantly. While early science fiction novels such as Mary Shelley's Frankenstein explore a fear of technological advancement, as prominent in her context, modern science fiction stories such as The Martian celebrate technology and are primarily concerned with exploration. Structure;Structure remains relatively constant throughout literary history, but, like all things, can be experimented with. A traditional approach to structure involves character A getting object B to point C before event D happens - it is chronological, linear and provides a consecutive timeline of events. While this structure works - which is why it remains such a prominent structure - it is often boring. If all stories were written in the exact same way, everyone would rapidly loose interest in literature. This, my friends, is where experimentation comes in. A lot of this involves constructing a non-linear or dual structure. Some ways of doing this include; - flashbacks - dream sequences - multiple perspectives - fragmentation of events - utilising a variety of mediums within your story (inserting fictional newspaper clippings, or transcripts of your characters speaking) This fragmentation of structure often creates an interesting way to tell a story, even if variation is simply added through having multiple perspectives, and therefore multiple perspectives of a singular event. Things like flashbacks are incredibly useful for describing events that take place in the past; beginning when your character is twenty and flashing back to the traumatic event that happened when they were nine is much more effective, and interesting, than beginning at nine then inserting a huge time skip to twenty. Structure is ultimately flexible, and ultimately forgiving. There are no hard-and-fast rules that dictate exactly how you tell your story or portray your characters, but a basic structure is still necessary in order to transform your collection of scenes into a cohesive storyline. The next few lectures will expand on structure in more detail, before we move on to subverting the stereotypical structures. Thanks for reading! - Dingo [ Challenge ] Your challenge this week is fairly simple. To find out more about features, pick a genre of you choice and research what features they usually exhibit. Check out the example below for ideas;
the science fiction genre adapts with time in order to reflect the author's concerns, but almost all science fiction texts demonstrate some of the following; - advancement of science and/or technology - an imagined world or setting - intelligent life other tan humans - exploration of human behaviour - predicts a future for humanity, usually intended as a warning
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 0:01:27 GMT -5
seven points[ Lecture ] blah blah blah [ Challenge ] blah blah blah
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 0:02:13 GMT -5
the hero's journey[ Lecture ] blah blah blah [ Challenge ] blah blah blah
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 0:03:49 GMT -5
subverting traditional structure[ Lecture ] blah blah blah [ Challenge ] blah blah blah
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 0:04:56 GMT -5
short story structure[ Lecture ] blah blah blah [ Challenge ] blah blah blah
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 0:06:51 GMT -5
parting words[ Thank you for attending! ] blah blah blah [ Credits ] - magnificent coding by brownie! - content is my own work, although some parts of it have been adapted from my coursework
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 0:11:07 GMT -5
Ok, that'll do it! First lecture will be up later today c:
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Post by Maplestone360 on Jul 28, 2017 10:08:01 GMT -5
Bookmarked! .3.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 28, 2017 12:42:31 GMT -5
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 16:07:31 GMT -5
I hope you enjoy!
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Post by ยป ัะฝฮฑdฯฯ โ๏ธ on Jul 28, 2017 17:57:18 GMT -5
Thank you for sharing this. <3 Will be keeping an eye on it!
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 28, 2017 19:33:13 GMT -5
Hey there Shadow! Ah, no worries, it would have been a shame not to share it! The first lecture will be going up today!
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Post by Dingoleap on Jul 29, 2017 17:22:45 GMT -5
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Post by ยป ัะฝฮฑdฯฯ โ๏ธ on Jul 29, 2017 20:38:41 GMT -5
Very good first lecture, Dingo! This makes me realize how truly a mess Curse is lol. My goal after I finish it (besides starting other projects) is to go back through it and re-imagine it and cut out some scenes that aren't needed. I can make a much more cohesive and compact story. I'll probably be using these lectures to do that.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 30, 2017 0:40:53 GMT -5
Suddenly, I just had this dawning senses of: Oh StarClan, that story doesn't have sideplots. o.o A story I wrote for Nano two years ago, which I love, ended up really small and skinny and just...direct. No character development for the side characters and I just now realized 'you fool! you forgot about sub-plots! none! you had none! Oh, this is awesome. xD I know how to rewrite it now! I've been stuck on it for ages!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 30, 2017 7:43:05 GMT -5
*is totally not stalking the course*
But seriously, this looks good so far. Couldn't have come at a better time - I'm outlining several projects at the moment. Good luck with your exams!
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 1, 2017 0:49:22 GMT -5
Very good first lecture, Dingo! This makes me realize how truly a mess Curse is lol. My goal after I finish it (besides starting other projects) is to go back through it and re-imagine it and cut out some scenes that aren't needed. I can make a much more cohesive and compact story. I'll probably be using these lectures to do that. Well, I certainly wasn't expecting to be of that much help XD I'm glad you're finding all this so helpful, and I'm pleasantly surprised that it'll have that much of an impact on Curse
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 1, 2017 0:52:01 GMT -5
Suddenly, I just had this dawning senses of: Oh StarClan, that story doesn't have sideplots. o.o A story I wrote for Nano two years ago, which I love, ended up really small and skinny and just...direct. No character development for the side characters and I just now realized 'you fool! you forgot about sub-plots! none! you had none! Oh, this is awesome. xD I know how to rewrite it now! I've been stuck on it for ages! Glad I can be of assistance! Ah, yes. The subplot dilemma. Subplots are great for slashing out your story, but you must be careful so that they don't distract from or overshadow the main plot line. Subplots should add to the main storyline, rather than distract from it. Ah, good luck with your re-writes, Mint! Ah, getting past writers block is the best feeling in the world XD
Let me know how it does!
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 1, 2017 0:54:17 GMT -5
*is totally not stalking the course* But seriously, this looks good so far. Couldn't have come at a better time - I'm outlining several projects at the moment. Good luck with your exams! Stalk away, my friend XD
Thanks, Saph, on both accounts! I'm glad it will be able to help you outline your projects. As for my exams - as of today, I've got two down. I have an exam-free day tomorrow, then history on Thursday and biology on Friday... then some more next week. The English exams were ok. The essay questions were super specific, but I got it done O.o
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 1, 2017 1:08:28 GMT -5
I'll see what I can do, with starting school soon and everything. ^^
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 1, 2017 1:09:54 GMT -5
Ah, school :/ How many more years do you have to go?
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 1, 2017 1:14:31 GMT -5
My words exactly. I'm in college right now, so how ever many it takes to get my Bachelor's. Then after that, I'm seeing about a Master's, but we'll see.
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 1, 2017 1:21:47 GMT -5
Oh wow, so you're older than me. For some reason I always thought we were the same age
what are you studying? :0
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 1, 2017 1:29:56 GMT -5
I've never said my age on these forums. I have, however, given an age range. I am between the ages of 15 and 19. Or in my high teens, whichever you prefer. We are not that far off in age. A lot of different things, but my Major is in English. Which is kinda impressive, I think, considering my spelling and that it used to be my worst subject. All thanks to this place, really.
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 1, 2017 1:57:31 GMT -5
Ah, so we might be the same age... or similar.
Ah, so wasting time on the internet has paid off then XD
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 1, 2017 2:04:37 GMT -5
Correct. I have yet to reach an age without a -teen suffix. Yep! Got me to read, got me to draw, got me to write. Wanting to be a Librarian was always a strong possibility considering my love of books from an early age, but the forums got me to want to be an artist and a writer. So yeah, a cat forum really can change a life. I think one of my biggest forum pet peeves ever, is when people say "It's just a cat forum. Nothing I do here will ever matter or change anything." Cause it always has mattered for me, since it started me doing so many things I'd never thought I'd do. The people too, you for example, and so many more in the WFF, helped me a lot along the way. But, hey, always improving and learning. Still got a long way to go. Like actually getting that degree, cause that's still a long ways off.
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Post by Maplestone360 on Aug 1, 2017 8:19:20 GMT -5
Still the youngest ,_,
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 1, 2017 12:07:58 GMT -5
*pats*
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 2, 2017 2:17:10 GMT -5
Correct. I have yet to reach an age without a -teen suffix. Yep! Got me to read, got me to draw, got me to write. Wanting to be a Librarian was always a strong possibility considering my love of books from an early age, but the forums got me to want to be an artist and a writer. So yeah, a cat forum really can change a life. I think one of my biggest forum pet peeves ever, is when people say "It's just a cat forum. Nothing I do here will ever matter or change anything." Cause it always has mattered for me, since it started me doing so many things I'd never thought I'd do. The people too, you for example, and so many more in the WFF, helped me a lot along the way. But, hey, always improving and learning. Still got a long way to go. Like actually getting that degree, cause that's still a long ways off. Ah, so we're either the same age or you're a year older than me.
Ah, I feel that. I've taken to telling people its a 'creative writing forum', since thats basically what I use it for anyway (in my family you guys are pretty much referred to as Dingo's internet writer friends, since I've mentioned you all quite a few times XD ) and that seems to get a better reaction than 'its a cat forum'. Similarly, I never thought this forum would be life-changing, but looking back, I certainly wouldn't have written as much as I have these past few years without it, and I certainly wouldn't have started posting my art online. It's been a huge confidence booster, and, of course, I've made so many new friends and met so many wonderful people XD
further off for me. I gotta get through high school first Its just hit me that I think I graduate next month... excuse me while I freak out for a while...
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