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Post by Brownie on Aug 10, 2016 22:42:38 GMT -5
sand dollar Thanks! I still need to go around and read all yours now. I know where I'm going, so I won't be tainted. xp 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 Hehe. :mellow: ►ℛavenwish Gotta thank that random tumblr post for the prompt then; it was the contest's idea. And same I just scroll up and down because rainbows. xDD And yeah, the sassy narrator strikes again. I can't get away from them, sadly. Razz This prompt is way too symbolic to not include all the symbolism/motifs ever. There'll be a lot more of that as it goes on, don't you worry. And @all I actually didn't get the chance to edit it any, so if the wording/sentences are a bit rough around the edges. >.< It'll be fixed as soon as I'm allowed to edit again, the changes are already made on the gdoc I just have to copy/paste the improved version in.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 10, 2016 23:01:01 GMT -5
RazzM I've never been really into the whole symbol fad, so mind as well try it out and see how it goes. Heh. That's why I'm reading them all now. xp
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Post by Brownie on Aug 10, 2016 23:09:57 GMT -5
hehe, I do that all the time
Especially late at night
But I love it so I don't stop. <3
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Post by Jas on Aug 10, 2016 23:47:14 GMT -5
I'm intrigued. Would definitely like to know more~
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 8:32:47 GMT -5
JasI'll get the next chapter up as soon as the contest allows~ RazzNow I'm curious. What was it/who's playthrough?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2016 8:55:24 GMT -5
Holy mother of duck pajamas...I absouletly love the way you word everything! It's so descriptive and well-organized! I also like how at the end, the unamed leading lady doesn't even know that she's seen blue yet! I will follow this story in the future for sure.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 8:59:46 GMT -5
Never heard that one before, lol.
But thanks. ;D
We'll have formal introductions next part, I was taking this more like I would a prologue than an actual chapter.
I'll be glad to have your input. ;D
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2016 9:04:15 GMT -5
Neither had I..but a new saying has come. That's cool though, we all have different approaches to our stories. I will gladly post any input you need.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 9:08:32 GMT -5
Heh.
And that's what makes them all special and good.
I feel bad for AM; this is going to be a hard contest to judge.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2016 9:10:42 GMT -5
Yeah I know...all of these are very well-written and have interesting plots to be expanded on. I wish her luck.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 9:15:35 GMT -5
I'm actually surprised how different all the plots are coming from the same prompt. It was a pretty specific prompt too. xD
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 10:14:03 GMT -5
Yasss
I like to binge Mark's horror games. xD
Never watched Spooky's tho, the graphics were weird
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 10:54:40 GMT -5
heh.
If you haven't seen it already, SOMA was amazing.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 11:24:54 GMT -5
And Audrey is the winner by a few slim votes!
Thank you all for voting. <3
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 11:33:49 GMT -5
It's good. It's kinda horror, more story.
It makes you question what it is to be human it's great.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 12:30:15 GMT -5
heh. It's good. <3 I binge watched it all as soon as the last ep came out rip.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 12:55:14 GMT -5
Enjoy. ;D
I need to start watching a horror playthrough again, SOMA was really the last one i watched all the way through.
But there hasn't been anything good out mehhh.
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 13:21:18 GMT -5
AHHHH I want to watch that soooo bad but I want to play it eventually when I'm not broke and I don't want spoilers. </3
That game breaks my heart.
mr. clean on drugs
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Post by Brownie on Aug 11, 2016 14:48:36 GMT -5
heh. I've seen the first bit of it, just because I couldn't not.
Just to the point where Little Pig throws you out the window in the very beginning.
Can't wait for it to go on sale I've been obsessed with wanting to play that for years (after skyrim and fallout first bc rpg yo).
xDD I've never heard of a rat having free roam. The cat doesn't get after it?
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Razz
I WANT TO BE A VET DAMNIT
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Post by Razz on Aug 11, 2016 14:59:19 GMT -5
I don't know, not my pet, lol. XD, Emma, my cat, is a dumb creature, and can't hunt to save herself. Her daughter, well, she would have killed it with no effort. DX, I flipped out, lol.
I have a mouse at my mom's, Danger, but he can't free roam. He's half wild still, I rescued him and two others as orphans.
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