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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 20, 2017 17:54:51 GMT -5
Okay, I can do that, although I cringed at Maximum Ride, because while the plot is really good and the characters fairly developed the writing is lacking imo So we need to come up with a general idea for it, do you want to talk characters or plot first? It doesn't have as many sensory details as many other books, and I think that was intentional by the author. I'm assuming you guys are going to make something that's similar to Warriors in the way that it's written(about twenty-five longish chapters and some details). Definitely not purple prose or bare-bones. I'd also like to note that I haven't finished the series yet, I just stated that to give you some sort of premise of what I want to do so you could reject me. And, since I think you're doing some sort of romance, I'll leave. for me i always write with a lot of detail and dont like undetailed books and its not a romance story but a revenge story, if you actually read the thread you'd know that smh |
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Post by nem on Mar 20, 2017 18:05:48 GMT -5
It doesn't have as many sensory details as many other books, and I think that was intentional by the author. I'm assuming you guys are going to make something that's similar to Warriors in the way that it's written(about twenty-five longish chapters and some details). Definitely not purple prose or bare-bones. I'd also like to note that I haven't finished the series yet, I just stated that to give you some sort of premise of what I want to do so you could reject me. And, since I think you're doing some sort of romance, I'll leave. for e i always write with a lot of detail and dont like undetailed books and its not a romance story but a revenge story, if you actually read the thread you'd know that smh I didn't read all of it because I was afraid of spoilers, but now I see when the idea was scrapped for it to become gradually more about a romance. I'd like to help, but I don't think there's any room for me. I also have a concept for a story that I'd want to create with someone else, but it's different from the one you're creating(it seems like you're making a fantasy/supernatural and possibly a different genre, but this is more of a fantasy/supernatural and adventure story) |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 20, 2017 18:35:49 GMT -5
for e i always write with a lot of detail and dont like undetailed books and its not a romance story but a revenge story, if you actually read the thread you'd know that smh I didn't read all of it because I was afraid of spoilers, but now I see when the idea was scrapped for it to become gradually more about a romance. I'd like to help, but I don't think there's any room for me. I also have a concept for a story that I'd want to create with someone else, but it's different from the one you're creating(it seems like you're making a fantasy/supernatural and possibly a different genre, but this is more of a fantasy/supernatural and adventure story) i said maybe romance as a side thing but not between the main characters, i wanted to stay away from it and good luck with finding a partner for your story! |
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Post by ღℳ𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓼𝓽𝓻𝒆𝓪𝓶ღ on Mar 21, 2017 8:28:41 GMT -5
You just found the right type of person! I love writing stories and I would love to help!
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 21, 2017 15:03:58 GMT -5
country probably yeah, and i like river valley high Ok, then I guess we'll go with that ^^ |
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 21, 2017 15:04:32 GMT -5
You just found the right type of person! I love writing stories and I would love to help! Great ^^ Do you mind if I make another thread and we work on a different story? |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 21, 2017 15:14:21 GMT -5
country probably yeah, and i like river valley high Ok, then I guess we'll go with that ^^ sweet, I'm gonna be a bit poofy with replys today bc its q bit busy for me today |
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Post by ღℳ𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓼𝓽𝓻𝒆𝓪𝓶ღ on Mar 21, 2017 15:18:41 GMT -5
Sounds good and no, I don't mind!
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 21, 2017 17:03:09 GMT -5
Mint: Here's the thread ^^
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 21, 2017 17:03:38 GMT -5
So will the town be called River Valley do you think?
Also it's fine, I'll probably be quite poofy too.
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 21, 2017 17:15:05 GMT -5
So will the town be called River Valley do you think? Also it's fine, I'll probably be quite poofy too. sure, where in the world do we want to locate it? |
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 22, 2017 13:16:57 GMT -5
Maybe it the American Midwest? I'm not really sure.
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 22, 2017 15:51:23 GMT -5
I'm pretty good with the Midwest, I know the climate pretty well, living there and all, lol
Should we have it near a major city that way we can have that be where the father is?
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 22, 2017 16:35:33 GMT -5
Well that's good, cause I live no where near there XD
And yeah, do you know of any? I really only know of Texas cities and I feel like we should set it in a less common used place, like Oklahoma or something ^^'
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 22, 2017 21:19:12 GMT -5
well if we do missouri or illinouis we can use saint louis which i know very well lol
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 24, 2017 10:33:01 GMT -5
Ok, I think we should go with Missouri ^^
How far from saint louis do you think we should have the town they live in be?
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 24, 2017 12:07:45 GMT -5
Ok, I think we should go with Missouri ^^ How far from saint louis do you think we should have the town they live in be? probably around the Jefferson county area, plus then its near six flags |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 24, 2017 12:08:39 GMT -5
Ok, I think we should go with Missouri ^^ How far from saint louis do you think we should have the town they live in be? probably around the Jefferson county area, plus then its near six flags its about 45 minutes out |
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 26, 2017 21:03:00 GMT -5
Ok! That sounds good.
Do you think we should work some more on the setting/town or move on to the next thing?
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 27, 2017 8:37:34 GMT -5
We can if you want, otherwise probably make minor characters and supporting characters
(Also sorry I didn't see this earlier)
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Post by Brindleface on Mar 27, 2017 15:59:29 GMT -5
I think we could move onto the rest of the characters for now, and work on another places and details about the town later.
(It's fine, I haven't been back on till now ^^')
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 27, 2017 17:03:25 GMT -5
Okay!
Let's start with his sister and her father
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