Brambleheart
WCF 15.07.09-12.08.16 Avatar Credit Wayne McLoughlin
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Post by Brambleheart on Aug 29, 2016 15:57:27 GMT -5
Blue! *crashtacklehugs* I know, right? *scoops up chicken and holds it in the air like Simba*
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sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾
rood yelling meanie
be cunning and full of tricks
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Post by sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾ on Aug 29, 2016 16:10:33 GMT -5
•♕• did some stuff today! an excerpt, if interested: Hearth hung low over the embers of a dying fire, struggling to produce flame after the elf had so coldly smothered it to rest her tired nerves. Quiet words had slipped from her tongue for Auita, one of the Vale, as thanks for the blessing the fire had bestowed before it became part of her persistent headache. Aewen’s neck still pained her, battered from hours of being on a swivel, each snap of a twig and rustle of a leaf craning her head in a different direction, heart pounding and knuckles white, gripping the hilt of her knife. Kace still slept, restlessly, the wound on his leg dripping blood onto the forest floor, the cause of many worried glances from strained eyes. Each night sound reverberated in Aewen’s brain, each stretch of silence broken by soft groans from Kace’s lips, eyes moving beneath his eyelids in the dimming light of the fire. She worried, every time his blood dropped onto the fallen leaves, every time his breath hitched in pain. She thanked the Vale that Merrier’s tea kept him sleeping. Though Merrier had not taken any for himself, and he sat, sleepless, against the rowan tree which sheltered their camp, his head cradled in his hand, breathing controlled beats against the vocals of the night.
“Don’t sit there like Vele can hold nothing against you,” Aewen hissed, her voice cracking on the first words spoken since the sun had set. Merrier stirred, lifting his head to rid vision of white hair.
“You don’t think I did this, aiyda?” he breathed, disbelief rising in his voice.
(obviously) its not done. this prolly wont actually be in avenhelm because TECHNICALLY i haven't even started writing it (just random scenes mostly). i write pretty purple because i Suck real bad, also have a hard time balancing dialogue and action. and like, i write really slow. but whatever! •♔•
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Brambleheart
WCF 15.07.09-12.08.16 Avatar Credit Wayne McLoughlin
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Post by Brambleheart on Aug 29, 2016 16:16:30 GMT -5
Ah, writing little scenes before the novel's something I've always found really fun. They helped me connect with my characters before I was done plotting, which actually really helped with the writing of the thing.
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sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾
rood yelling meanie
be cunning and full of tricks
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Post by sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾ on Aug 29, 2016 16:29:22 GMT -5
•♕• i mainly just do it because i suck a plotting lol •♔•
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Brambleheart
WCF 15.07.09-12.08.16 Avatar Credit Wayne McLoughlin
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Post by Brambleheart on Aug 29, 2016 16:46:28 GMT -5
Just keep at it, I promise you'll feel more confident eventually.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 17:22:57 GMT -5
Had to pop in for page 100! Gotta go do some studying though, so I'll chat with you guys some other time soon c':
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 17:27:44 GMT -5
Sorry for poofing.
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sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾
rood yelling meanie
be cunning and full of tricks
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Post by sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾ on Aug 29, 2016 17:27:49 GMT -5
•♕• yea, hopefully! i just am really slow and tend to focus on deatils and not big picture kinda stuff •♔•
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Post by Dreamers Delight on Aug 29, 2016 17:39:45 GMT -5
*parties*
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:06:32 GMT -5
*Grabs cake from counter*
HOW IN THE WORLD DID YOU GUYS DO IT.
100 PAGES *Passes out* *Wakes up* Have some cake! Its marble :P
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Post by Dreamers Delight on Aug 29, 2016 19:10:09 GMT -5
*steals entire cake*
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:11:38 GMT -5
Hey again.
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sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾
rood yelling meanie
be cunning and full of tricks
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Post by sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾ on Aug 29, 2016 19:18:30 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:22:54 GMT -5
*Grabs cake back from Dreamer*
Hey! Share. Silver wants some too c:! *slices the cake. Hands piece to Silver and Dreamer.*
There!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:25:32 GMT -5
*casually takes piece of cake*
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:26:39 GMT -5
c:
*Yippe! CAKE*
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:27:14 GMT -5
Cake is wonderful, isn't it?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:28:33 GMT -5
lol
It certainly is.
I believe Cookie Dough Ice Cream is better though.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:29:23 GMT -5
I've never had it.
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sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾
rood yelling meanie
be cunning and full of tricks
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Post by sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾ on Aug 29, 2016 19:40:19 GMT -5
•♕• but........................................ice cream cake •♔•
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:41:25 GMT -5
I like most cakes. Just plain old vanilla cake's great, though.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:42:06 GMT -5
@lorekeepercrow WHAT?!?!? *Le Gasp* IMPOSSIBLE sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾Meh. It's fine. Not the best, in my opinion.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:45:29 GMT -5
Sorry. I've just always been a little wary of cookie dough.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:46:16 GMT -5
xD it's fine. I was just kidding.
I know some people can't stand it's greatness.
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sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾
rood yelling meanie
be cunning and full of tricks
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Post by sɪʟᴠᴇʀᴏᴡʟ ☾ on Aug 29, 2016 19:49:18 GMT -5
•♕• wow, how can you be wary of ice cream cake?? •♔•
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:50:21 GMT -5
Storm: Oh, right. Sorry. No sense of humour.
Silver: I'm not too sure I follow.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:51:07 GMT -5
I don't like Ice Cream cake cause either the ice cream melts, or the cake freezes :P
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#f0a9e4
Name Colour
Captain Americat
"Don't frown, someone could be falling in love with your smile." - Teen Wolf
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Post by Captain Americat on Aug 29, 2016 19:51:09 GMT -5
welp, I'm here (:
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 19:51:46 GMT -5
Ello!
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#f0a9e4
Name Colour
Captain Americat
"Don't frown, someone could be falling in love with your smile." - Teen Wolf
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Post by Captain Americat on Aug 29, 2016 19:53:03 GMT -5
What's up, Storm? //throws confetti for missed 100 pages! //
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