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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 25, 2018 16:42:37 GMT -5
I know!!! The rest of this is going to be sooooo much fun. :'D (I'm 13 pages in now... o.o )
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Post by Dingoleap on Jan 25, 2018 16:46:30 GMT -5
Aaahhhhhh! It’s so exciting when that happens!
Man, I can’t beleive how close you are to finishing!
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Post by Katanaheart on Jan 25, 2018 16:58:49 GMT -5
Yay! Also how could you not calculate Darkmoon into the plan?!
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Post by Dingoleap on Jan 25, 2018 18:22:37 GMT -5
» ѕнαdσω ⚔️ I JUST REMEMBERED THAT ITS ALMOST YOUR BIRTHDAY
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 25, 2018 19:01:27 GMT -5
Yes! My birthday is on the 9th of February. (:
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Post by Dingoleap on Jan 25, 2018 19:15:45 GMT -5
Yes! My birthday is on the 9th of February. (: I've gotta dust off all my half finished sketches and colour them for you!
I actually have something that I've been wanting to do for you for ages, so now I'm gonna stop procrastinating at actually do it.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jan 25, 2018 19:30:36 GMT -5
Yes! My birthday is on the 9th of February. (: Ah my brother and my Darwin share the same birthday Feb 10!
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Post by Katanaheart on Jan 25, 2018 19:51:15 GMT -5
So many Aquariuses!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 25, 2018 20:13:48 GMT -5
AQUARIUSES UNITE! Dingoleap - Anything you make for me I will love. <3 <3
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 25, 2018 22:06:03 GMT -5
*coughs* 17 pages in.
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Post by Katanaheart on Jan 25, 2018 22:07:15 GMT -5
YAy! Also I think mine is before anyone else’s? 2nd.
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Post by Mosspool on Jan 25, 2018 22:26:04 GMT -5
Just finished reading the chapter! I absolutely loved it! It was dark and morbid, which for some reason made it even better. I’d forgotton how much I missed Rushstorm. It was so nice to see him again! For Snow’s death, I’m conflicted. I do think that Eaglefrost had a valid point about keeping her alive, but I also think that her death came at a perfect time, plus it was a great fight scene. Overall, I loved the chapter! I’m so excited for the next one!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 25, 2018 23:27:07 GMT -5
Mosspool - Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! <3
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Post by Dingoleap on Jan 25, 2018 23:36:23 GMT -5
AQUARIUSES UNITE! Dingoleap - Anything you make for me I will love. <3 <3 TOO MANY AQUARIUSES
I've wanted to draw this for you for a while, so I'm determined not to procrastinate this time.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2018 11:10:45 GMT -5
*chuckles* I'm already six pages into Chapter 36 and a plot bomb has already been dropped! *laughs in full scale madness* Ooooooh! Yay! Don’t make me wanna write the next episode! (I still need/want to see Mint’s response before I start writing anymore.) I'm reading it now! O.O GO WRITE THE NEXT EPISODE.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2018 11:12:49 GMT -5
Nooooo. Too many birthdays. I know what I'm starting next art class. >:3 I have plotting in mind. Also! I know most of those books, Shadow!
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Post by Katanaheart on Jan 26, 2018 12:09:52 GMT -5
Ooooooh! Yay! Don’t make me wanna write the next episode! (I still need/want to see Mint’s response before I start writing anymore.) I'm reading it now! O.O GO WRITE THE NEXT EPISODE. I’ve been waiting for this, considering what happens! )
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 26, 2018 13:51:09 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur - Well dang! :'O HAPPY FRIDAY EVERYONE!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2018 14:39:54 GMT -5
That's something to celebrate!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 26, 2018 18:19:17 GMT -5
"She's gone...
...taken from me.
This world is cold...
...without love. I will fix this.
I'll make this right." - Teaser for Curse, Chapter 36: TBA (title under revision) - From the "Red Cold River" music video by Breaking Benjamin
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Post by Katanaheart on Jan 26, 2018 21:12:49 GMT -5
I’m going to assume Blackheart is dead or Lionshadow has done something to her.
Also Lionshadow have better priorities kill the She-kits already.
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Post by Katanaheart on Jan 26, 2018 21:20:24 GMT -5
How Kat feels about the main Siblings: Stormkit/Stormshadow- I liked him, thanks to his name at first. Then Shadow killed him... He was also pretty cool with Ospreypaw with protecting the others, now that I think about it, shouldn’t they be protecting Blackheart?
Ospreypaw/Ospreyflight- She annoyed me a lot when she was alive. I actually lik her character better since she died.
Mintfeather- I’ve always hated Mintfeather, for some reason. I just never got around to liking her character and was pretty indifferent when she died. (I believe she burned to death? I don’t remember...)
Blackheart- My only favorite of the She-cat siblings! Her name actually makes her sound like an evil cat till one remembers what the suffix, heart means. It stands for loyalty and courage among other meanings.
Shadowface- I have disagreed with her recent actions. She and I would also have worked things out a lot differently, but that might be due to the fact she’s emotionally driven and intense: While I’m logically driven and emotions generally confuse me. I still like her character! (She is the main character after all!) Her struggles are her own, and she has dealt with her destiny fairly well; and has subverted Shadowhunter’s expectations. (Useless Shadowhunter is useless as usually.) But I’m still revoking her rights as Tempestkit’s mother. He’s mine, really he’s Darkmoon’s, because I can’t literallg be his mom.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jan 27, 2018 4:22:09 GMT -5
So, uh, I did not expect that I love the trip into the realms! Despite the dark turn of plot, it was one of the moments when I just wanted to live in your universe. Also, Shadow, you gave me the biggest scare of my life when I thought Eagle was dead! Tbh I think Shadowface was overdoing it a little leaving a sign for the rogues. But I can see where she's coming from, and like Moss said it's a great fight scene. Still can't believe Snow's dead - her arc's been so important for so long... (Although by the looks of the new teaser, it's not quite over??) All in all, a really good chapter!
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Post by Katanaheart on Jan 27, 2018 5:15:38 GMT -5
THats right!
Tadpole Door is Abyss Door! *Flees fo DSOTM.*
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 28, 2018 14:07:38 GMT -5
Lol Katanaheart I hope that by the end of this story you will be satisfied. That's all I got to say x'3 ~Sapphire~ - Thank you! The Realms are a big part of the world so I hope to keep that mystery/wonder with future novels. GOOD! I don't want people thinking Eaglefrost has the typical "plot armor" where he just can't die. I want my readers to be scared for them. :'P It does seem much given that's she's never been that much of a violent/dark character...right? Well, actually she has. It's been building up. From her first taste of battle against Spottedmoon to the fox fight when she was pregnant, and now to this. (there's other, smaller instances of this violence/enjoyment of it but these are the more major/remembered ones) Plus, it's symbolism. The color green in this story is representative of pain/violence/destiny. A pre-determined destiny really. I hope this all starts coming together better with these last chapters. ^^' As important as Snow may have seemed...she really wasn't. She was a minor antagonist at best. She forced Shadowface out of the comforts of her clan and showed her the reality of a world where she's essentially on her own and relying on her own strength to survive. She was essential, but not a character to be focused on. Not saying that I don't think she played important role (I created her after all for a specific purpose) but she's not the main/real enemy. She's a step, a stepping stone, a practice dummy (if were being blunt) for what's to come. Not to mention she was (depending how you view the situation) Lionshadow's puppet. I can't give away anything more. x'D <3
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 28, 2018 14:40:23 GMT -5
Posting some more reminders for Chapter 36. This is from Chapter 29. Wolfheart POV “Where is she?”
I paced, kicking up black pine needle dust into the white air, the only color leeching into this world coming from the tens of fiery evergreen eyes glowing from the gloom.
“Relax, Wolfheart. Your pacing will not do you or anyone else any good,” my mother scolded, her green irises narrowed.
I swiveled and faced her, my tail tip twitching. “She’s been gone for three moons now, Shadowstar. I’m tired of sitting here doing nothing,” I hissed.
Shadowstar growled. “Shadowfang. I prefer to be called Shadowfang. And you have been pacing for three moons. Shadowhunter wasn’t pleased with your interference when Snow attacked MountainClan. You shouldn’t be surprised she left to clean up your mess,” she scolded, her mouth set in a grim line.
“What mess?” I snapped, returning to my pacing.
“You fought alongside cats from the Realm of the Living. Making your presence known to them is against the laws of the realms. You should know this by now!” Shadowstar said with frustration, lashing her tail at my shoulder as I paced past her.
“But one of them saw me before making my presence known!” I protested, my soul brightening, “Darkmoon is a cursed like us! Maybe she went through the same thing we did and has learned to cope or live peacefully with it-”
“Nonsense!” my mother spat, denying any proof or words I had for her ears, “if there were more like us out there then Shadowhunter would have told us. Maybe this ‘Darkmoon’ just had a special moment of clarity.”
I turned on her again. “How do you know that Shadowhunter was not aware of others?”
My mother rolled her eyes, returning to scolding me. “Shadowhunter is the eldest of us all. She was there when this curse was first implanted. She would know if there was another way to…cope with this curse, and if there were others out there.”
I sat and huffed. “She sure has always been aloof…
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Falconwing narrowed her gaze, trying to stick her head farther into the crack to see our world and our prison.
“This place…,” she paused and then shook her head, “you must go find Shadowhunter and bring her here! She must know what has transpired.”
“I can find her,” I said confidently, “I know some of her favorite spots.”
And that’s only because I’ve practically been stalking her since the moment I came here…
“Good. Go to her, and bring her back. Tell her I think I can find a way to get you all out,” Falconwing said, her expression now fully serious.
I narrowed my eyes, trying to dispel my sudden excitement. “Can’t we just go in the same way Spottedmoon did?”
Falconwing shook her head. “Your realm is not made of color which probably means it’s been artificially made and doesn’t belong to the natural seven realms. If you were to cross here, you might be erased from reality.”
Sounds plausible…though I wonder how she knows that?
I nodded, containing my emotions of hope and eagerness, turning away and pushing past the crowd of my ancestors.
On my way out, I ran into Cloudspots, her face contorted by desperation.
“You’re going to the Realm of the Living, aren’t you?” She questioned, her voice low, “Please, you must take me with you!”
I narrowed my eyes, my chest filling with suspicion. “Why should I? I don’t need you to fetch Shadowhunter.”
She grabbed a hold of my shoulders tightly, her eyes coursing with fear and urgency.
“No, you do need me. And so does Shadowface. She needs us, Wolfheart. I’m afraid that Shadowhunter hasn’t been truthful with us and that something looms on the horizon that could bring death and destruction to many more than our family-”
My eyes widened slightly, another wave of hope rolling over me. “So you too have felt her shadows?” I interrupted, truly not caring about ‘death and destruction’ being brought down on the clans as we know it. I am dead after all, so why should it matter?
Cloudspots nodded vigorously. “Yes. She’s much too secretive and too obsessed with finding Jadestar. I think there is more to it that she’s keeping from us…and I feel it’s…,” she hesitated, clearly very reluctant to share the rest of her thoughts.
In a moment of compassion for my granddaughter, I gingerly laid my paw on her shoulder, removing her paws from my shoulder blades.
“Do not share if you feel your tongue recoiling, Cloudspots. What matters now is finding Shadowhunter, and helping Shadowface through this dark time. If your confidence is well placed, she surely might just be able to break this curse,” I soothed.
Cloudspots hung her head, grimacing. “I should have believed in the curse sooner…I could have been of more use to my family.”
I sighed and slipped past her, heading to the portal that would take us to the Realm of the Living.
“Knowledge and awareness is one thing we all wish we could have had more of in our lifetimes. Shadowhunter will have to answer our inquiries this time, even if I have to use my claws.”
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 28, 2018 14:51:33 GMT -5
And another. This is from chapter 28. A very important chapter. Jadestar’s POV I’m slipping into blackness.
This blackness is the unknown, the place without knowledge or foresight.
That is what it feels like to be in my family.
Clueless, powerless, and as dumb as a forest mouse.
Simply…prey…without the extinct to run away.
And there it is again, the dream world; the abyss opening its ancient doors and letting my ancestors speak to me. Not just any ancestors, but the eldest ones. It is a place not even my mother, Shadowhunter, can reach. For some reason, that is comforting.
As the gates open, a gust of hot, burning wind blasts forward and plays with the ends of my fur, reminding me of the rare warm-sun days when there would not be a single cloud in the sky. Yet, this is not the Realm of the Living, for it is currently cold-sun there.
Along with the burning comes a searing, a color of the brightest yellow, a fire that roars with the power of the sun, and instead of destroying, it heals my burning flesh. I feel powerful, unstoppable, and ready for any path that I or another could take.
But something chains this power here….I cannot take it with me, for it is in an eternal duel. Inside the gate there stands a single feline shape, its figure so dark that all I can make out are its eyes, a fiery evergreen.
The yellow flames try to pull away and escape from the green-eyed cat, but the cat has flames of its own, a green flame that pulls and attacks the yellow.
The yellow flame whips backwards to lash at this flame and the cat, but to no effect.
They both seem to be caught in a stalemate. One pulls, the other tugs…but both fight each other for the right to be the only one.
Then, there is a snap, and both flames roll backwards to become one, and vanish within the confines of the cat’s body inside the gate.
That’s when a light turns on above us, almost silvery, like moonlight. It casts definition and color upon the mysterious cat who possesses both flames, and whose fur is as black as the Abyss itself, and whose eyes…
I gasped, ice gripping my legs.
The cat is not at the gate anymore.
The instant I had tried to distinguish its eye color it had transported…but to where?
The sound of heavy, excited breathing behind me answered my question.
I slowly turned, my evergreen eyes wide, my heart hammering with fright. Never before had I felt so…so…
The cat was a she-cat, and her lips were curled upwards in a sinister smile, large curved fangs protruding from a mouth dripping with saliva. Her eyes glowed so brightly they burned the skin on my nose, and they were bi-colored.
The left one yellow, and the right green.
Her smile widened, impossibly so, and then her brow creased, and her jaws opened, her whole body leaning over me, her grin turning to a snarl, her fangs growing longer….
Her snarl echoed loudly in the large empty space around us, forcing me to crouch to the ground, covering my ears. I only dropped my paws when I felt a drop of her saliva splash on my forehead.
“Who are you?!” I cried, wanting to know if she was one of my ancestors, or if she was an embodiment of a message they were trying to give me.
She cackled in response to my inquiry, the sound sending shivers down my spine.
“I am pain…I am fate…I am you,” she hissed, her eyes enveloping my entire field of view.
“No!” I screamed, throwing my right paw out to hit her in the face, my claws digging out some of her black fur.
She stumbled to the side, holding her face, looking up at me with her yellow eye from behind her paw.
“You child!” she cried, “You learn nothing!”
I stood, my own evergreen eyes glowing brightly, heating up the air around us.
“No,” I said quietly, my voice calm, my resolve returning, “I have learned. I will never become a monster like you.”
I then turned and sprinted away from her, towards the opened gates, and to the Realm of the Living.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 28, 2018 15:06:09 GMT -5
Fun Fact: here is what I imagine Tempestkit to look like as an adult kitty. :'D Just give him the fiery amber eyes and it's perfection.
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Post by Dingoleap on Jan 28, 2018 15:09:11 GMT -5
FLUFFY BOY
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Jan 28, 2018 15:17:46 GMT -5
I KNOW HE'S SO FLUFFY <3 And very handsome. Don't know where he got that from because neither Shadowface or Rushstorm are particularly attractive; at least not super model material. I think Eaglefrost and Darkmoon are the only ones out of the main cast who are super model material LOL
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