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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 10, 2018 15:12:13 GMT -5
Fun fact: I can't draw stick figure humans. I have to add more detail. Always more detail. Fun fact: I can only draw stick humans. Everything else has to have more detail :3 We are opposites here, lol.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 10, 2018 15:14:28 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Maybe? I don't know. My brain is kind of always going, but it's a bit weird I get all my good ideas right after waking up XD But I've gotten details about already made ideas while out on walks or doing schoolwork, too. Glad you liked it, especially the bit about the bone! That's my favorite part about the chapter, too. I hope you love chapter 6 just as much Please, tell me what you think again after reading! I love the feedback!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 10, 2018 15:14:41 GMT -5
Chapter 6 up!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 10, 2018 20:19:38 GMT -5
Fun fact: I can't draw stick figure humans. I have to add more detail. Always more detail. Fun fact: I can only draw stick humans. Everything else has to have more detail :3 We are opposites here, lol. Draw me a stick human and I'll draw you a stick cat.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 11, 2018 10:42:00 GMT -5
This will not end well, lol.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 11, 2018 11:32:36 GMT -5
Who said I wanted it to end! O.O WHO HAS LIED TO YOU ABOUT THIS?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 11, 2018 13:44:38 GMT -5
I meant us drawing stick figures for each other XD
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 12, 2018 10:24:25 GMT -5
Well, yes it wont be well, but I'm not going to let it end ... I'll just ... draw a reeeeeeeeeeeally big stick figure. Then it can never end. :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 12, 2018 15:12:57 GMT -5
Well, yes it wont be well, but I'm not going to let it end ... I'll just ... draw a reeeeeeeeeeeally big stick figure. Then it can never end. :3 Good luck uploading that here then XD
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 12, 2018 19:23:13 GMT -5
... Darn Foiled again.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 13, 2018 1:16:45 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur XD Gotta use the logic brain. Yep.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 13, 2018 13:17:29 GMT -5
Anyone who thinks I have the ability to be logical with this brain is more crazy than I am. @.@ *evil, manic laughter here*
I'm just in one of those moods where being serious is a chore ...
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 13, 2018 21:48:48 GMT -5
It happens, lol.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 14, 2018 14:59:06 GMT -5
A lot of things were a chore yesterday, to be honest.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 15, 2018 15:29:59 GMT -5
Aw, I'm sorry to hear that I hope today is better!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 16, 2018 17:00:45 GMT -5
Today was stressful, but okay. First day of school.
Also, I said as soon as I got into school I'd catch up on all my reading. X'D I have completely read this and LOVE IT! Ravenpaw is great. 'I like bones'. And Lizardpaw is ... fun.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 16, 2018 22:21:07 GMT -5
Lizardpaw is fun, indeed XD He'll get better as the story goes on, lol. Ravenpaw is definitely the most fun to write about already. And I'm very glad you're enjoying the story so far! Always great to know ^.^
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 17, 2018 1:21:52 GMT -5
Ravenpaw is awesome. Seriously. All I can think of is I like bones. That's it. That's probably going to be the most memorable part for a long time. I also love how to tied it in, eventually. It make it very interesting to watch that, oh, wait. This rib is relevent!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 17, 2018 15:10:55 GMT -5
Thanks! That's what I was going for. I really wanted the theme of bones to be in this story, since I, myself, have a fascination for bones. I wanted it add a different element to a common theme of Warrior cats, but also adding to the other different element of being a spy. Yet, bones will have deeper meaning too, as the story goes on. I think I might be really proud of this one, just like WITSOP. So, to hear someone else, especially my good friend, is really enjoying it makes me so happy.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 17, 2018 18:11:07 GMT -5
Chapter 7 is up!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 17, 2018 20:08:59 GMT -5
Wooh! I get to read it tomorrow. Yes! They'll have a deeper meaning in the future. I was hoping that it wouldn't just end there. And yes, I really am enjoying it! You've gotten a lot better with your writing since I read The Path Less-Traveled.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 17, 2018 22:38:05 GMT -5
Oh geez, that fic was sooo long ago at this point. You know, a little easter-egg thing, I still put references of that story into my other stories. I put references of past stories in all my stories now. I'll give you a secret... Mintstar's name is one. It's a reference to Mint from TPLT.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 18, 2018 17:54:12 GMT -5
Oh, that is awesome! I wish I could catch more references like that. Read the new chapter today! Really good!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 18, 2018 23:09:55 GMT -5
Glad you enjoyed it! There will be a lot more references as the story goes on. They can be from any fanfic I wrote and posted before, too. Even the unfinished ones. Another hard to spot reference is Darkapple is a reference to both Blackapple from TPLT and Duskfrost from BoB.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 19, 2018 0:03:31 GMT -5
Oooo! I love references! 8D
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jan 19, 2018 17:57:40 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Maybe? I don't know. My brain is kind of always going, but it's a bit weird I get all my good ideas right after waking up XD But I've gotten details about already made ideas while out on walks or doing schoolwork, too. Glad you liked it, especially the bit about the bone! That's my favorite part about the chapter, too. I hope you love chapter 6 just as much Please, tell me what you think again after reading! I love the feedback! So I was pretty sure I replied to this >.< Idk really. I think the important part is that ideas always come when you're not trying to write... Yes, I loved chapter 6! And 7! I like how the bone thing stays relevant, although I think Lizardpaw's way more enthusiastic about it than poor Ravenpaw. And Rainjay's segment made me so sad, it was really heroic but I kinda feel like she ought to have waited for Raven to be a little older I may have to catch up on your other fics some time to get all these fabled references
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 21, 2018 1:10:28 GMT -5
The other fics are sadly gone at this point, except for the one before this. What is the Sound of Peace? is currently the fic I am most proud of. It's 40+ chapters and quiet detailed. I do hope you enjoy it very much if you do decide to read it!
Glad you're enjoying it so much! I do think you're right now about waiting for raven to be a little odler, but there is no going back now. She has to do what she can for the clans, die, or run and never come back. And I can tell you right now that she can't die XD But I don't promise she won't run either. As for the theme of bones, it will stay relevant throughout the story, for sure.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 21, 2018 2:42:02 GMT -5
*stalks through and sits down front and center of the topic* Hello.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 21, 2018 18:34:18 GMT -5
Hey XD
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 22, 2018 3:46:25 GMT -5
Hello! How are you?
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