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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 15, 2018 14:21:43 GMT -5
(; I actually managed to finish it, though! I love how Ravenskull manages to unite the two Clans - the bit where all the NightClan cats stand up to Thornstar is very satisfying. As for killing Lightstorm... Not so happy, I guess, especially as he was just becoming friends with Lizardblight. But at least he got to spend some time with Ravenskull, right? And the kits at the end were very sweet cx |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 15, 2018 18:05:52 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ So glad you liked it! I'm sad about Lightstorm, too. Don't worry. But, it had to happen, and it was a pretty happy ending anyway. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 16, 2018 12:16:14 GMT -5
Same, happy endings are definitely the best kind! I think you ended it pretty well  Allow me to be a little bit sad though  |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 16, 2018 12:36:58 GMT -5
We will all be a little sad together.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 16, 2018 16:14:33 GMT -5
Agreed. rip
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 21, 2018 21:53:30 GMT -5
I do want to keep this story bumped up relatively, so, do you have a favorite scene in the story?
Does anybody?
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Post by Pyropelt on Jun 25, 2018 5:28:10 GMT -5
I really liked all the battle scenes that you wrote in your story! You have detailed sentences that depic action well! The battle between Darkapple and Ravenpaw was great when she stabbed him with the bone! Very unique!
Plus the kits getting along too was pretty cute, during the discussion of GrayClan.
Ooh I have to mention the whole reveal of Lizardblight killing Ravenskull's mother. Man, that was epic! I know I kept saying this but I totally didn't expect that! You write very good that I keep getting surprised when reading.
I felt so much emotion for both Lizardblight and Ravenskull when that happened!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 25, 2018 12:00:23 GMT -5
Oh yeah, the battle scenes are always fun. They're great fun to write and nice to read after. I do very much like the reveal, too. Although, it wasn't my favorite. I'd say my favorite scene of all time was the battle with the rogues and how Lightstorm and Lizardblight helped in the fight and each other. It really was fun to write and think about and so sweet.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 12, 2018 20:13:40 GMT -5
This is a bump to ensure that I don't lose this fic accidentally.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 15, 2020 18:06:42 GMT -5
This is a bump, so it's not lost.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Mar 15, 2020 23:10:01 GMT -5
Oh wow. I remember this!  |
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