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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 24, 2018 12:27:21 GMT -5
Looks good Do you think that Lizzle should die or live? Lizzie will make it. She is Razz's character and I would not kill her off.
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Post by Spottail on Mar 24, 2018 21:04:01 GMT -5
Ok, do you think she'll join the ThunderClan
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 25, 2018 15:33:32 GMT -5
Ok, do you think she'll join the ThunderClan I think so. Because she helped Kyemama escape-they will all love her.
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Post by Spottail on Mar 26, 2018 7:56:29 GMT -5
So, what should her clan/warrior name be?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 26, 2018 11:21:27 GMT -5
So, what should her clan/warrior name be? Not sure on that. Guess I'll figure that out when the time comes.
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Post by Spottail on Mar 26, 2018 14:04:38 GMT -5
Ok have ya written more of the it
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 27, 2018 12:00:57 GMT -5
Ok have ya written more of the it Yes but have not posted it yet. Will when I get Blackhawk'sPOV done.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 27, 2018 13:15:40 GMT -5
Blackhawk's POV UP! Kinda fun writing on the fly. . . .
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Post by Spottail on Mar 27, 2018 20:17:20 GMT -5
CYeah and it looks good
Now when are ya gonna start writing Kyestorm's pov
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Post by Spottail on Mar 27, 2018 20:19:33 GMT -5
Sorry if I sound pushy
I just wanna see how Angelglow saves Lizzle and Yoohoo
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 28, 2018 11:57:42 GMT -5
Sorry if I sound pushy I just wanna see how Angelglow saves Lizzle and Yoohoo I am writing that now, and she is as skilled as her older brother :-)
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Post by Spottail on Mar 28, 2018 13:32:09 GMT -5
Cool I can't wait to read it
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Post by Spottail on Mar 30, 2018 9:24:18 GMT -5
Have ya posted it yet
Kyestorm's pov
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 30, 2018 13:37:56 GMT -5
Have ya posted it yet Kyestorm's pov Not yet. Still working on it.
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Post by Spottail on Mar 30, 2018 16:52:36 GMT -5
Ok
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 22, 2018 14:54:43 GMT -5
Bump-still working on the grand reunion
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Post by Spottail on Apr 23, 2018 17:14:42 GMT -5
Ok
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jun 1, 2018 12:03:33 GMT -5
Life as an old person who can't seem to get out of the injury/illness cycle sometimes sucks, but the alternative is worse. LOL Anyway I have to get this done!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 11, 2018 13:31:32 GMT -5
Bumping this as I plan to finish it soon!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 11, 2018 21:45:35 GMT -5
» ѕнαdσω ⚔️ @mintedstar/fur @Spottail Headphone Actor
Nearly done! I am still accepting other POV chapters to add to this. But we are just about done now finally.
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Post by Spottail on Aug 13, 2018 22:06:13 GMT -5
Yoohoo slowly opened his and let out a small groan. 'I'm alive!' He got up on shaky paws and looked around he saw some new cats and waved his tail in greeting. "Lizzle look at all new cats we got here." No response. "Lizzle, Lizzle! Lizzle wake-up!" He shook her but she didn't move, he thought about what Firestar said. "She's giving up." tears came to Yoohoo's eyes. "Lizzle no, don't give up on me. You've become my best friend! Please wake up, please!" Just when he thought all hope was lost, Lizzle stirred and opened her eyes. "Lizzle I was so worried." "What happened? I chasing a butterfly and all of sudden I woke up back in cold again." "I know but this is where we belong." Lizzle was about to protest, when a bundle herbs landed at her paws and same bundle landed at Yoohoo's paws. He licked his right up but Lizzle was hesitant. "Lizzle what are ya doing? Why aren't ya eating those herbs?" "I-" "don't ya wanna keep fighting?" "No, I don't." "Why?" "I'm not like you Yoohoo, I just wanna go back to sleep and be back in that warm forest." 'Firestar help me out here.' Yoohoo thought with worry. Then all of a sudden he saw Lizzle lick up the herbs. "Oh, thank goodness." He breathed out. After a while he started to feel very hungry, he hear Lizzle's belly grumble too. Then he smelled food, his belly rumbled very loudly. 'I'll wait for Lizzle to eat first.' He watched her tear off a very big piece, and munched it down. Then she waved her tail for Yoohoo to join her, very happily walked over to her and together they finished the whole meal. With their bellies full they started to feel sleepy but wondered where they were gonna sleep, then they saw the rock. 'I hope it's warm.' Yoohoo thought and layed down in front of it. 'Oh! It is warm.' He feel asleep very quickly, Lizzle right behind him and this it was a safe sleep, when they woke-up he heard cats talking. He heard Lizzle say something that made his heart skip a beat, and Blackhawk asked if he want to join he happily answered "Yes I love too, I'll have a family again." Then he felt himself getting picked up and tail on his back, "Oh, this feels so good and I'm going to join ThunderClan! This is a dream come true."
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 14, 2018 11:51:59 GMT -5
Will add this in!
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Post by Spottail on Aug 14, 2018 13:03:01 GMT -5
Cool, I hope I got everything in
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Post by Spottail on Aug 14, 2018 13:29:33 GMT -5
It looks good, I like the part where Angelglow gave Lizzle a staurn look to get her to eat the herbs
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 14, 2018 14:58:09 GMT -5
It looks good, I like the part where Angelglow gave Lizzle a staurn look to get her to eat the herbs Yep I thought it a good add since Angelglow was one of your characters. She "grew" into a fine medicine cat. :-)
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Post by Spottail on Aug 15, 2018 12:31:03 GMT -5
Yes she did
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 15, 2018 15:42:11 GMT -5
Just one more chapter from Phantomstar's pov as the patrol brings home Kyemama.
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Post by Spottail on Aug 16, 2018 11:59:56 GMT -5
I can't to wait to read it,
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 16, 2018 14:52:14 GMT -5
Just started the chapter so hopefully it won't take too long. If I get some time to write at night
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Post by Spottail on Aug 17, 2018 12:05:18 GMT -5
Yay!!!!
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