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Post by Headphone Actor on Sept 18, 2017 19:04:57 GMT -5
It could work, although Trials is set far, far into the future, when all the cats from the main series are nothing more than myths and stories that elders tell, lol. Maybe, though, I can bring in one of the older cats from Trials, such as the current leader Ripplestar or the deputy Stormbrook. Probably as apprentices or young warriors, by this point, under the leadership of Bluefrost's mate? Or is Bluefrost's mate Mistystar? Just for clarification. I might be able to bring one of the elders into it as warriors sent to search for Kyestorm or something since Bluefrost is probably worried sick that her mother is missing, haha. I'm definitely going to read New Blood, though! I have tonight off, and I'm down for the count with a fever, so what better way to spend it than binging stories, am I right? At this point Troutleap, Bluefrost's mate is leader of RiverClan. Phantomstar has sent out a search party . . . Got it! Slightly off topic question, in Trials, is it okay if I mention Troutleap/Troutstar as a previous leader of RiverClan? I'm assuming, if Phantomstar sent off a search party, then Cloudpatch is just a dumb young warrior trying to help when he probably should have kept his patchy butt in RiverClan.
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Post by Headphone Actor on Sept 18, 2017 19:07:20 GMT -5
Help for Yoohoo came in a blur of black and white. The newly named Cloudpatch wasn't the strongest cat, but his long limbs definitely gave him a good reach. Yoohoo wasn't his mission, but he couldn't sit by and let the rogues outnumber the kittypet. He let out a fierce yowl and tore into the fray. The RiverClan tom hadn't noticed the three she-cats yet, which would have been beneficial to his health more than likely, but he was solely occupied on the fight. While he was fierce, he also fought defensively. There were a lot of rogues, after all, and the last thing he needed was to be injured while he was searching for the missing Kyestorm. His amber eyes narrowed at the attackers, and he gave a fierce hiss. This sure could work. Themthree she-cats including Kyestorm turn back when they hear the fighting. So likely Cloudpatch and Kyestorm would know each other! Cool. I will continue writing pov in the next day or two!Awesome! I'll keep my eye on this thread! *dives back into New Blood* EDIT: Added note, Cloudpatch was probably Cloudpaw when Kyestorm was taken by the Twolegs. He's only very, very recently been named as of this time.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 19, 2017 11:39:41 GMT -5
At this point Troutleap, Bluefrost's mate is leader of RiverClan. Phantomstar has sent out a search party . . . Got it! Slightly off topic question, in Trials, is it okay if I mention Troutleap/Troutstar as a previous leader of RiverClan? I'm assuming, if Phantomstar sent off a search party, then Cloudpatch is just a dumb young warrior trying to help when he probably should have kept his patchy butt in RiverClan. Works for me-then he is Cloudpaw in this tale? Tho I made the assumption he just became a new warrior. . .
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Sept 20, 2017 22:02:04 GMT -5
{ Here is my sad entry x'D }
Shadowface didn't like these newcomers, especially since they had all witnessed her burst of power. She wasn't going to use it. She never wanted to use it, especially on other cats, but the sheer number of pesky rogues had prompted her instincts, and thus her flame came forth...much more willingly than she would have liked.
She stepped forward as two white cats trudged out into the clearing. One was clearly recognizable by Kyestorm given her exclamation. She seemed happy, despite the merciless killing she had just witnessed.
Shadowface wasn't happy that these two new cats seemed to be wanting to join them. More cats meant more trouble and conflict. It also meant more cats she had to protect.
And not to mention more wary eyes watching her.
"Kyestorm, who are these cats?" Shadowface asked, not bothering to keep the suspicion out of her voice. She wasn't going to fake or lie about her feelings on the matter. Best to get all hostilities out in the open.
Kyestorm turned, her large red form slightly glowing in the dim light from the sky. "This is Cloudpaw...or Cloudstep now, I guess?"
Cloudstep nodded, a smile on his handsome face. "Yes, Cloudstep is my warrior name now. I come from the same clans that Kyestorm does."
At least he is a warrior. That will be helpful.
Shadowface turned her attention to the other tom, clearly much weaker than the other seasoned warrior, Cloudstep. "And you? What kind of a name is Yoohoo?" She growled.
Yoohoo, surprisingly, replied back immediately. "The better question is, what kind of power disintegrates cats where they stand?"
Shadowface's evergreen eyes narrowed, taking note of his question, but not immediately answering.
Not strong, but sharp. The look in his eyes looks more than curious, it's almost...hungry. Like, when he saw my power, he wanted it for himself.
If only he knew its true nature.
She flicked her tail, and said,"A kind of power you won't be seeing again."
"Why?" Kyestorm protested, giving her a wondering look.
Shadowface shook her head. "Like I said, you should have never seen that. I need to keep it under control."
"But it just saved us all," Kyestorm pressed, now looking almost amused, as if the thought of not using her flame would be beyond idiotic.
Shadowface sighed, turning away from the large red she-cat. "We don't have time for this. Finish up your greetings and lets keep moving. More rogues may show up now that I've killed most of their patrol."
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Sept 20, 2017 22:04:45 GMT -5
BTW I love how everyone is describing Shadowface's power differently. x'D It makes an author happy to see different interpretations!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 21, 2017 11:56:21 GMT -5
BTW I love how everyone is describing Shadowface's power differently. x'D It makes an author happy to see different interpretations! Welcome Shadow!! COOL to see Shadowface's perspective! I'll get her POV on the main page asap!
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Post by Spottail on Sept 21, 2017 18:37:31 GMT -5
Yoohoo looked at Kyestorm is she smiled at him. But then his eyes went wide as he saw her face turn into a puzzled look. "Why are you looking at me that?" Yoohoo asked. Kyestorm looked at him and answered. "You been living in the wild in the for a while. So why do you still have the scent of two-legs on you?" "Also why is it so strong?!" Shadowface asked with growl. Yoohoo jumped at Shadowface's loud growl. "It's a long story." Yoohoo answered, with a sigh. "Well we have a long trip, so we have time. Tell us! Tell us right now!" Shadowface yowled right in Yoohoo's face. Yoohoo shook with fear and hid behind Lizzle. "Shadowface! There was no need for that. Say your sorry right now. Or will continue on this trip without you, Blackhawk and Cloudpatch know the way back already and can help us get through these mountains safety so I guess we don't really need ya anyway. It's your choice." Shadowface gasped at what Kyestorm said. "You don't mean that?" Kyestorm nodded. "Fine, Yoohoo I'm sorry for yowling right in front of your face." "That's ok, I forgive ya and ya guys should know the truth anyway. I wasn't always a kitty-pet I was turned into a cat meny moons ago." "You were turned into a cat?" Lizzle gasped. "Yes, and in my old life I used to have powers just like you Shadowface." "That would explain the look in your eyes, like you wanted to take my power." Shadowface said, in a calm voice. "Oh, no I would never take anyone's power, I can promise ya that." "Well that's good to know." Shadowface sighed, with a small smile on her face. "So, what was your powers Yoohoo?" Lizzle asked. "I used to have superspeed and and my eyes would change color when I got mad." Yoohoo answered. "Cool!" Lizzle said. "Yeah and you said that ya were changed into a cat. What did you used to be?" Cloudpatch asked. "You would never believe the rest of my story." "Oh, try us." Kyestorm meowed. "Ok, I used to a bush baby and I four friends and we so close that we were more like a family." "What were their names?" Lizzle asked. "Chewoo, Lemmee, Roodee, and Pammee. We all lived in a place called Greenit which was being threatened by two crocs named Opps and Copps and they being controlled by someone called big boss. Well one day we were kidnapped by them and well long story short I survived and they didn't. Then shortly after I was turned into cat. And was found by two-legs, I loved it at first because I lived in a house when I lived in Greenit but then one day something changed and wasn't enjoying anyone. So I ran away. I've lived in the mountains for a few days alone I sad thoughts of my Family." "Who were your group of friends." Lizzle interrupted. "Lizzle that was rude." Kyestorm said. "Sorry continue." Lizzle sighed. Yoohoo just smiled. "It's ok and your right, I thinking about them today and that's when I heard the fighting and found you guys. The End." Yoohoo said. "So, that's why you still have two-legs smell on you and still so strong you only just left them just like Lizzle." Kyestorm meowed. Yoohoo nodded. "Yeah, and I've trying to get off but some reason I can't and it's been so hard trying to live in these mountains and I heard about clan I think would be safer living in a clan." "That's right ya would, we look out other and care for each other, also welcome ya open paws." Kyestorm meowed, with a huge smile. "That me so happy. It would be just like my old life just a little bit different though." "Yeah I guess it would." Kyestorm replied. Shadowface just rolled her eyes and sighed. "This is all very touching but can all just get going?" All of the cats nodded in agreement. "Good then let's go." Shadowface meowed, as she started to move again, the rest of the cats right behind her. "Hey, thank's for the story by the way." Lizzle and Kyestorm replied. Yoohoo purred "And ya guys believed too?" Lizzle and Kyestorm nodded. Shadowface narrowed her eyes at them. 'I didn't you didn't tell the whole story, why did leave things out like why you lived and your friends died and why you turned into a cat? You're hiding something Yoohoo. I don't trust ya and I have my eye on you.'
Sorry it's so long
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 21, 2017 22:16:17 GMT -5
No problem about it being long. I'll work it in. I'm tweaking it just a bit, to be sure Kyestorm and Shadowface stay in character, but I like that you left us with another mystery.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Sept 21, 2017 22:38:38 GMT -5
I'll jump in again once more is written. (': Thanks again for doing this Phantom for the marathon, it's a super fun/cool idea!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 21, 2017 23:23:19 GMT -5
I'll jump in again once more is written. (': Thanks again for doing this Phantom for the marathon, it's a super fun/cool idea! Thanks and Cool! I look forward to it. Having a lot of fun here and even dragged a few others into it heheheheh.
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Post by Spottail on Sept 22, 2017 10:35:03 GMT -5
OH thanks
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Post by Spottail on Sept 22, 2017 11:11:32 GMT -5
I will explain what a bush baby is I just need to find the right info to explain more easily
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 22, 2017 15:08:10 GMT -5
I will explain what a bush baby is I just need to find the right info to explain more easily OK that can be a future section. No rush. I still have to finish the section I started.
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Post by Spottail on Sept 22, 2017 16:22:03 GMT -5
Ok
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Post by Spottail on Sept 22, 2017 17:53:56 GMT -5
I found it
I'll make Yoohoo explain what a bush baby is
In my next section
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 23, 2017 9:20:45 GMT -5
I found it I'll make Yoohoo explain what a bush baby is In my next section Cool. I couldn't get on here last night. Not sure what was up but lad all seems ok this am.
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Post by Spottail on Sept 23, 2017 10:39:54 GMT -5
Ok and when ya get back to it could ya change Yoohoo's color to light gray instead of white?
Please
If ya can't that's fine
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 23, 2017 12:45:44 GMT -5
Ok and when ya get back to it could ya change Yoohoo's color to light gray instead of white? Please If ya can't that's fine Sure.
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Post by Spottail on Sept 23, 2017 15:26:08 GMT -5
sorry I got color wrong again it's cream-colored, with light gray paws, ears and his fluffy tail has light gray and light blue stripes
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 25, 2017 11:36:14 GMT -5
sorry I got color wrong again it's cream-colored, with light gray paws, ears and his fluffy tail has light gray and light blue stripes OK he almost sounds like a blue-point in color. Long haired? Once I know I can change the descriptions.
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Post by Spottail on Sept 25, 2017 14:11:58 GMT -5
Yes and ok
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 25, 2017 20:49:17 GMT -5
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Post by phantomstar57 on Nov 5, 2017 17:43:26 GMT -5
Working on more story! Stay tuned!
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Post by Spottail on Nov 5, 2017 17:52:52 GMT -5
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Spottail on Nov 6, 2017 17:39:57 GMT -5
Wow! It's looking good
And it's Yoohoo not Yahoo
But I still knew what ya meant
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Post by phantomstar57 on Nov 6, 2017 18:06:25 GMT -5
Wow! It's looking good And it's Yoohoo not Yahoo But I still knew what ya meant Ooops! LOL dumb typo! I will fix it!
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Post by Spottail on Nov 6, 2017 18:35:11 GMT -5
Thanks
And that's ok, it happens
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Post by phantomstar57 on Nov 7, 2017 13:32:01 GMT -5
Got it all fixed.!
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Post by Spottail on Nov 7, 2017 17:41:37 GMT -5
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks you
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Post by Spottail on Nov 7, 2017 17:48:25 GMT -5
OH,ya missed one.
Settled on Yahoo's head
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