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Post by lozi on Jul 29, 2017 9:04:06 GMT -5
OMG I LITERALLY HAVE A CHARACTAR FOR THAT PURPOSE IM- yes absolutely great idea 10/10
Thank you astro! You could start writing territory descriptions? We made a couple brainstorm ideas but we haven't actually pulled things together regarding the territory or camps. Something simple will do I think, with some landmarks like ones we discussed earlier. Can you quote the landmark post? From what I read it's in a run down city.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 29, 2017 10:20:21 GMT -5
Yeah basically anything that fits the bill for what should be expected for those ranks is fine. I was thinking a jungly, plant-overrun city. There could be sewers used for hunting and traveling through when it rains (potential for acidic rain). I was thinking the weather always being humid and warm. I'm thinking for a divider between the Clans' territories is basically a rut in the road with stagnant water in it. Omg I already have character ideas xD I'm bringing Stagnantpetal for sure. And creating Lightninghollow, Cloverbee, Dawnthistle, and Onyxstorm. I could certainly get to writing a list up of animals that have overrun the civilization in a hot climate! Nothing like crocodiles or anything, but some birds and plant life probably.
Sounds like a good territory basis! We can work on more in-depth things if need be. A good peaceful meeting place could be a fountain? It is absolutely neutral territory to be at, kind of like Peace Rock in the Jungle Book, because it is a source of fresh water for cats and other creatures alike! A library would be good too! We should work out clan camps, how the two are different?
I never do much regarding religion in roleplays, so it could just be the simple Starclan belief?
Will the clan have any special traditions? My mind always goes to jewelry or paint work, but idk, it's up to you, if you can think of anything special? I think that would be fine. It would be interesting to have a more diverse Clan with colors and such, so I'm totally okay with that idea. Yes! I really wanna have a skirmish there that causes StarClan to be unnaturally quiet. FaithClan is going to have the more timid style, but with a crazy leader. WhisperClan will be more battle-oriented but have a quiet, timid leader. I think instead of two Clan pages, we just keep everything together on one page. It would be easier for members wanting to join both Clans so they don't have to jump from page to page. I think FaithClan should have the western side of the territory. Their camp could be a collapsed bank that only has one entrance due to the others being blocked from fallen buildings and such. Maybe prisoners can be kept in the vault and that's also where the soldiers sleep? WhisperClan could be on the eastern side and their camp could be the upper floor of a taller building. Here are some ideas I'm brainstorming for landmarks. In FaithClan, I was thinking maybe a twisted tree growing up through the broken gravel road? And maybe a tunnel in the downtown region where moss grows abundantly? In WhisperClan, I was thinking about having the sewers be in their territory. And also maybe a vine-tangled lamppost that marks the center of their territory? I also added to the main post, including more on the warrior names. For names of the landmarks, I was thinking maybe just the Twisted Tree and Moss Tunnel for FaithClan. And maybe for WhisperClan, they could be called Rat Drainpipes and the Vine Post? I think sewers go through entire cities, just something to think about EDIT*** I suppose if part of it has rotten down, it could work Yeah they go through the whole city but like you said, I was thinking part of the sewers are either collapsed or barricaded. I added a bit of plot in the history, hopefully thats good enough for a starter! If you'd like to edit, please do.
We also need to work on the plot itself. My thoughts were simply they didnt get along and cats never bothered to apologize or fix it, or even see the other side's point of view, hence relationship conditions getting worse and worse. With disease and famine, it makes cats in even poorer of a situation to help eachother, and really everything is just a big mess. Its pretty clear the clans need to work together, but we discussed that while one leader is willing, the other is not. Perhaps there is a clogged sewage area that both clans use and have access too? Perhaps the trench separating their border partially runs into the underground sewer system that is half on Faithclan's territory, half on Whisperclan's? Therefore an area for them to work together on, since its diseasing food and making cats sick and really just needs to be removed, but one sickly clan can't do it alone. There is a lot of room for drama in there that we can add. Cats that dont want to help, cats that really want to help, cats from outside the clans get involved, old wounds picked open, murder, intentional poisonings, etc., and there can be personal reasons the leaders do or dont want to help eachother, why some cats are more willing to assist than others, maybe some half-clanners get in there- there is so much we could take the plot, honestly. This is just my thoughts! What do you guys think? Here you are astro! These are all of the posts discussing territory and landmark descriptions that have been agreed on.
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Post by lozi on Jul 29, 2017 10:42:12 GMT -5
Thank you so much mystic.
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Post by lozi on Jul 29, 2017 10:56:39 GMT -5
I'm working on the territory rn, but I'll be busy for most of the day. I'll post it as soon as I get it done.
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 29, 2017 11:01:17 GMT -5
Thank you Astro! I usually write the territory as one big paragraph for each Clan, basically going through it as a tour and describing each landmark. And then I bold the landmarks name the first time it's mentioned. Thank you for your help!
I believe both Generals, Medics, and Medic Cadets are spoken for but there is one spot open for Lieutenant.
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 29, 2017 11:02:39 GMT -5
Lieutenant of WhisperClan and Medic Cadet of FaithClan is open.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 29, 2017 11:14:04 GMT -5
Well im gonna add my daylight warrior character in with the rest of mine.
Thank you astro! It's no problem, I'm fairly busy today as well.
Is there anything else ya'll would like me to write up or look at?
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 29, 2017 11:36:57 GMT -5
I need to figure out which characters to add and then decide on mentors.
I'm not sure what else needs to be done. If Astro is doing the territories, we need the camps done. I'm going to do an introduction.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 29, 2017 11:39:20 GMT -5
If lemon dou would like to do the camps, that would be fantastico- Im going to work on what I've already written and clean them up more. I believe you said you would reword the soldier code so I'll leave that bit to you c:
Do we need a battle move list done still?
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 29, 2017 11:46:58 GMT -5
My daylight soldiers are going to be Belladawn and Pennyshine.
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 29, 2017 11:48:02 GMT -5
Oh yeah we need a battle move list. I'm going to clean up the Soldier code and herb list and add them when I can.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 29, 2017 11:55:38 GMT -5
I can see if I can wrangle some soldier moves up. I hope the code and herb list are clean enough for you to work with, I just went with whatever I found that would make sense c:
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Post by lozi on Jul 30, 2017 12:12:28 GMT -5
The city of Pyre was once elegant, the picture of perfect architecture and order, where many thrived. Now, after being abandoned due to radioactive traces in the sewers, the city has become overgrown with plant life. Over time, many buildings have collapsed, providing shelter for many wildlife. Now, groups of cats who call themselves Clans have taken over the city.
From a young age, many cats get to know the territory like the back of their paw. Several landmarks can help to orient oneself. The Twisted Tree grows up through a break in the ground of FaithClan territory. The Moss Tunnel can be found downtown, a place where moss grows abundantly, and can be used to soften and line nests. The Rat Sewers is a network of sewers that run underneath the city of Pyre. Rotting in the sewers has caused part of it to collapse, blocking the way to FaithClan territory, and making it only accessible by WhisperClan. The Vine Post marks the center of WhisperClan territory, an old lamppost with english ivy climbing up it.
I'm not the best at territory description, but I did my best. Feel free to add on to it as you'd like.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 30, 2017 12:33:47 GMT -5
why did i not get a notification when you mentioned me ? i just need general ideas for the camps and i'll get on that! There was a post a while back mentioning info on possible camp stuff!
Damp:
I think FaithClan should have the western side of the territory. Their camp could be a collapsed bank that only has one entrance due to the others being blocked from fallen buildings and such. Maybe prisoners can be kept in the vault and that's also where the soldiers sleep? WhisperClan could be on the eastern side and their camp could be the upper floor of a taller building.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 30, 2017 12:34:36 GMT -5
The city of Pyre was once elegant, the picture of perfect architecture and order, where many thrived. Now, after being abandoned due to radioactive traces in the sewers, the city has become overgrown with plant life. Over time, many buildings have collapsed, providing shelter for many wildlife. Now, groups of cats who call themselves Clans have taken over the city.
From a young age, many cats get to know the territory like the back of their paw. Several landmarks can help to orient oneself. The Twisted Tree grows up through a break in the ground of FaithClan territory. The Moss Tunnel can be found downtown, a place where moss grows abundantly, and can be used to soften and line nests. The Rat Sewers is a network of sewers that run underneath the city of Pyre. Rotting in the sewers has caused part of it to collapse, blocking the way to FaithClan territory, and making it only accessible by WhisperClan. The Vine Post marks the center of WhisperClan territory, an old lamppost with english ivy climbing up it.
I'm not the best at territory description, but I did my best. Feel free to add on to it as you'd like. That looks like a great start! I can probably add on a little bit if needed, but I think it looks fine. Im not all the best at territory descriptions either c:
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Post by lozi on Jul 30, 2017 12:36:23 GMT -5
Alright. I'll start claiming characters.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 30, 2017 12:40:37 GMT -5
Im working on my own character descriptions atm. Thanks for helping!
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 30, 2017 13:01:52 GMT -5
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Post by lozi on Jul 30, 2017 13:04:42 GMT -5
WhisperClan
{ Littlepath } - { F } - { 27 Moons } - { Runner } Calico maine coon with amber eyes. Distant, Distracted, Mournful
{ Ashpaw } - { M } - { 9 Moons } - { Combatant Cadet } Ashy brown maine coon with white chest, underbelly, and tailtip, and amber eyes. Jolly, friendly.
{ Cliffpaw } - { M } - { 9 Moons } - { Combatant Cadet } Huge brown ticked tabby maine coon with copper chest, white chest splash, toes, and chin, and green eyes. Determined, loyal, proud.
{ Maplepaw } - { F } - { 9 Moons } - { Combatant Cadet } Large calico maine coon with grey green eyes. Imaginative, creative, head-in-the-clouds.
Littlepath + Toadspots = Cliffpaw, Ashpaw, Maplepaw
FaithClan
{ Owleyes } - { M } - { 30 Moons } - { Spy } Small black and white tabby oriental shorthair with large grey eyes. Skittish, jumpy, alert.
{ Vixenpelt } - { F } - { 32 Moons } - { Guard } Russet somali with green eyes, and long furred tail. Fierce, Protective, Firm
{ Swiftstep } - { M } - { 32 Moons } - { runner } White oriental shorthair with blue eyes. Wise, skilled.
{ Nightwhisper } - { F } - { 18 Moons } - { Spy } Jet black oriental shorthair with grey mask and green eyes. Serious, commanding, wise.
Swiftstep + Owleyes = Nightwhisper
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 30, 2017 14:22:22 GMT -5
Hey guys. I'll read through everything after work. I am working on the introduction as well. So we just need the battle moves. Astro, I actually have the prefix Tiger claimed. It might not be posted with my characters but I claimed it for a warrior named Tigertail. If you could just change Tigerpaw's name
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 30, 2017 14:27:17 GMT -5
On that same note, I also have Bear- saved for one of my own characters c:!
Do you think we should allow x2 of a prefix? Thats what I typically do for my clans, as it can be difficult to think of so many different prefixes that don't start to stray from realistic, yknow?
Okay, sounds cool! I'll edit the post. Im currently cleaning up the plot introduction post, so if someone could wrangle up some soldier-like battle moves, that would be gr8t!
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 30, 2017 14:29:31 GMT -5
I typically do a one prefix limit to bring in more creativity. That way we have more of a variety of names.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 30, 2017 14:37:37 GMT -5
I feel that friend! Alright Im going to comb through the territory and the plot post and clean them up and bit and add stuffs.
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Post by lozi on Jul 30, 2017 14:40:16 GMT -5
I typically do a one prefix limit to bring in more creativity. That way we have more of a variety of names. I changed prefixes to Dawn, Ash, and Cliff. Are those open?
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Post by dou on Jul 30, 2017 15:11:31 GMT -5
faithclan:
FaithClan's camp is rather old and rustic. Crumbled pieces of the walls are falling, and the camp itself could possibly fall down at any moment. Located on the western side of the territory, FaithClan has taken refuge in an old, collapsed bank. While dens aren't exactly set-in-stone, there are a few general areas. Taking perch on a splintery desk settles the General's Slab. Quite an interesting name, isn't it? There's nothing quite fancy about this, though there is one thing. The general sleeps under the desk, announcing important news from the top of the desk. It has a broken leg and missing some drawers, but most of the desk itself is still in tact, though rotting slowly. In what used to be a meeting room holds the medic's den, or in this case, Medic's Hideout. Still secluded from the rest of the camp, they're quite safe hidden here, and keeping it quiet and calm is fairly important, due to the fact that cats are in and out of here with cuts, bruises, broken limbs. There are chairs- though broken down- forming makeshift nests. Soldiers sleep in The Vault. Here is a very carefully protected room, previously known for its holding of money. Prisoners are also held here, being taunted and beat by the soldiers sleeping there. The cadets, however, don't have any set-in-stone sleeping place. They basically sleep anywhere else they're told to, but they are not, by any means, allowed to sleep in any other den unless they are specifically told by the medic that they're allowed to sleep there. The nursery is attached to the medic's hideout. They're held in another meeting room, this time without windows or doors. The only entrance is from the medic's hideout.
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whisperclan:
WhisperClan's camp is held high up in the sky, on one of the highest floor of an old apartment building. Doors have been ripped from their hinges, letting the cats have easy access in and out of the rooms. Soldiers often have to guard the windows, making sure no kittens manage to get out and fall stories down to their deaths. The general is kept nice and cozy in their own little closet, the General's Nook. No other cats are allowed to sneak their way into this closet unless they're the lieutenant. They're welcome there. The generals have bits of fabric to create a nest. The medics have a very specifically placed den, kept in the bathroom, or in otherwords the Medic Haven. Herbs and of the sort are kept in drawers and cupboards. The medics take refuge in the bathtub. While it's not the most comfortable place, it is the safest. Soldiers sleep in what used to be the kitchen. Each nest is held in the cupboards, nice and dark, though musty. Apprentices and kits share the same room; the living area. Each cat shares a couch, sharing warmth. Soldiers have to protect the windows, and apprentices are given that as one of their dreaded duties.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Jul 30, 2017 16:04:14 GMT -5
That looks great lemon!
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 30, 2017 16:17:29 GMT -5
Those names are great, Astro! But unfortunately now you have one more female than males haha. Could you add a tom to either Clan?
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Post by lozi on Jul 30, 2017 16:55:17 GMT -5
Those names are great, Astro! But unfortunately now you have one more female than males haha. Could you add a tom to either Clan? Alright. I just changed Swiftstep's gender.
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Jul 30, 2017 20:03:22 GMT -5
Alright I am here and working on the page, getting everything together. Myst, what was Monarchstar's warrior name?
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