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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 18, 2017 4:44:08 GMT -5
Nice chapter! Clan by Clan, we're slowly getting there... I hope Minnow manages to keep out of trouble for now - I'd love to find out more about his motivations/version of events.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 18, 2017 9:11:20 GMT -5
The fact that as I was writing this chapter I was thinking 'Oh drat....I need to write a book about Minnow.'
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 18, 2017 9:24:55 GMT -5
Well, what are you waiting for? Or a chapter where he talks to Smokepaw would be great...
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 20, 2017 19:04:52 GMT -5
Waiting to get back from vacation and to get a hang of this thing called school. @.@ Things are in the future, trust me.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 21, 2017 9:12:45 GMT -5
I've heard that this "school" is a terrible thing that forces you to get up in the mornings. Stay strong!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 21, 2017 9:44:05 GMT -5
I'll try. <3
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 21, 2017 15:00:34 GMT -5
You can do it! <3 I'll look forward to the future 'things', whenever they come. When do you start lessons? Or have you already?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 21, 2017 15:46:47 GMT -5
Yes, yes. Future things are planned. Currently, I'm lowkey working on a storyboard animation. Hopefully, I'll get to write chapter 14 once I get into the rhythm of classes. Speaking to you, pre-lesson two. They start today. So far, I think I'll survive, but I haven't gotten to my second class yet.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 22, 2017 9:54:14 GMT -5
Ah yes, the long-awaited animation project!
Ooh, I hope it went well! A good first lesson has to be a good omen, right?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 22, 2017 10:11:09 GMT -5
Well, I finished the one I told you about. I thought I told you. ^^' This one is a continuation of it.
Yeah, the second class was okay. I think the 'worst' part, or what will be the most challenging, will be needing to write papers.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 23, 2017 4:25:23 GMT -5
You probably did, sorry My memory hates me sometimes. Papers? That sounds pretty scary/challenging. What do you have to do for them?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 23, 2017 20:12:29 GMT -5
I can't remember. I mentioned it to a lot of people and I couldn't remember all of them, so I'm 100% sure I missed telling some who were interested that it was done.
Probably History. -_-
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 24, 2017 12:18:08 GMT -5
I'm glad you did finish it, anyway I'm detecting a dislike of history here? If a paper's a superlong essay, which is what it sounds like, I completely understand x.x
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 24, 2017 13:25:40 GMT -5
Well, I like history in general, but I think that this time it is going to be harder than history that I had last year. So far, in my other classes, I haven't been assigned superlong essays, but I have been given a lot of little ones that have to be turn in within a short space of time. Or at least, it seems like it to me.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 24, 2017 14:59:57 GMT -5
Fair enough c: School has a horrible habit of doing that, stepping up the work at the beginning of the year. Good luck!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 24, 2017 15:39:53 GMT -5
Thank you. Hopefully, on the weekend, I'll get to do some stuff I have wanted to do. I'm thinking of doing a short story for this before doing the next chapter, but we'll see.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 27, 2017 16:07:27 GMT -5
A short story sounds very interesting... I hope you had a successful weekend
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 27, 2017 18:25:04 GMT -5
Friday blew that out of the water. That was not a fun day. Hopefully I'll get back into the groove by Monday. ^^
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Post by luckgandor on Aug 27, 2017 18:49:58 GMT -5
So I'm not usually a fan of alternate universe fics, but this one is really great! Keep up the good work.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 27, 2017 19:14:28 GMT -5
Thank you very much!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 28, 2017 15:54:02 GMT -5
Aww no! PM me if you need to talk about anything... I hope you've had a good weekend to make up.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Aug 28, 2017 18:58:12 GMT -5
OOC I read this all in one sitting. It's so good! Definitely add me as a fan!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 28, 2017 20:13:18 GMT -5
OOC I read this all in one sitting. It's so good! Definitely add me as a fan!
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Thank you very much! You are added!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 28, 2017 20:40:15 GMT -5
Aww no! PM me if you need to talk about anything... I hope you've had a good weekend to make up. Alright. The weekend was better. I watched a bunch of humorous shows.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 31, 2017 6:55:11 GMT -5
I'm glad! c: Humourous shows are always a good coping strategy.
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Post by 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 on Sept 2, 2017 22:58:30 GMT -5
Just read chapters 11-13. Really good, but I noticed: In chapter 11, you said "I raised back to my den" When I think you meant "I raced back to my den"
Also, I'm less sure about this one, but in chapter 13 you say, "'I thought that Bramblepaw was the spy' I have whispered" I think you don't need the "have".
(*Raises hand and speaks in a small voice back at mint* I didn't see it coming.)
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 4, 2017 22:17:19 GMT -5
Thanks! I'll fix it tomorrow. ^^
(Oh goody! I love surprises.)
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Post by 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 on Sept 4, 2017 22:36:46 GMT -5
No need to thank me, I'm a bit of a neat-freak (unless it comes to my own stuff or works. Then I couldn't care less xD)
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 5, 2017 9:56:52 GMT -5
I'm going to thank you. Spelling is one of my weak-points, so I'm glad when someone can help!
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