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Post by 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 on Sept 5, 2017 17:27:26 GMT -5
And I will continue to tell you that there is no need to thank me, because that's how I am xD
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 5, 2017 23:28:02 GMT -5
This could go on for ages, so okay! XD
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Post by 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 on Sept 6, 2017 8:56:21 GMT -5
xD
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 22, 2017 2:33:45 GMT -5
There should be an update soon, I promise. School's just really killing me right now. ;-;
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Post by Maplestone360 on Oct 5, 2017 20:06:21 GMT -5
SUSPENSE
I don't know how you do it, Mint. Your fan fics are always so interesting. cx
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Post by Headphone Actor on Oct 6, 2017 7:17:50 GMT -5
This is soooo good! I love Smokepaw, and I loved the twist about Minnow! Fan me please.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 10, 2017 15:01:24 GMT -5
🎃 You are fanned, Headphone Actor!
And I have half a chapter written. However, I've been working on my October writing project and I don't know when I'll finish it. x.x
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 23, 2017 19:29:45 GMT -5
🎃 Sorry everyone. I promise I haven't dropped this. I've just been working really hard on my October challenge.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 22, 2017 12:20:36 GMT -5
October Challenge and NaNo.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 8, 2017 0:05:01 GMT -5
Also, I don't know what is wrong with the coding in the chapter 11-15 box...
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 20, 2017 18:02:43 GMT -5
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Post by 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 on Dec 20, 2017 20:38:24 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 did you mean to swap to third-person here in chapter 15? The last half clan cat didn’t flinch at Leopardstar’s words, but continued to look at her. She blinked at him, looking with eyes that seemed to grow deader as she gave the order. “Kill him.”
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 20, 2017 20:55:26 GMT -5
Hum... would it be better phrased as:
"The last half clan cat didn’t flinch at Leopardstar’s words as he continued to look at her. She blinked back at him, looking with eyes that seemed to grow deader as she gave the order. “Kill him.”"? x.x Grammar murdered me.
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Post by 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 on Dec 20, 2017 23:00:46 GMT -5
Thats still third person... the rest of the chapter is in first person, so that really stands out.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 20, 2017 23:26:10 GMT -5
I am clearly forgetting the differ - OH! Darn. I see. 'I'. WHOOOPS. XD I'll go change that.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 20, 2017 23:32:21 GMT -5
I must be tired if I forgot that. XD All fixed.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Dec 21, 2017 12:50:47 GMT -5
Smokepaw nooooo!
He better have a good plan to get himself out of there, is all I can say. But honestly, I love the recent chapters! Smokepaw's becoming a proper little hero
*Is identifing with your status way more than I ought to. Just replace 'country' with 'live versions of songs I'm already listening to'*
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Post by phantomstar57 on Dec 21, 2017 14:21:08 GMT -5
Glad I found tis one again. Bumping it so I can find it later this eve to catch up!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 21, 2017 15:04:38 GMT -5
Smokepaw nooooo! He better have a good plan to get himself out of there, is all I can say. But honestly, I love the recent chapters! Smokepaw's becoming a proper little hero *Is identifing with your status way more than I ought to. Just replace 'country' with 'live versions of songs I'm already listening to'*Yes, he better have a good plan. :3 And thanks! Honestly, I could have put any genre in there, but I was listening to old country songs at the time. XD
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Dec 21, 2017 16:08:41 GMT -5
I guess I'll look forward to finding out what it it. Because he totally has one, right?
xD Hey, any variety is variety
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 21, 2017 16:43:30 GMT -5
We'll see. Yup, yup
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 31, 2017 1:15:26 GMT -5
Important Information Update!
@anyone who cares
Due to issues beyond my control (tech. I really hate tech) the next chapters of Where There's Smoke will not be posted on or before New Years. In fact, I'm not sure when they'll be posted as I might have to rewrite most of chapter 16 and can't write the others. I am so sorry. I was planning on finishing it tonight, but I can't make that happen. Please have patients for the next update. >.<
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Dec 31, 2017 19:33:07 GMT -5
Aww no! Tech hates everyone, it's awful when it messes work up like that. I'll look forward to the new chapters whenever!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 31, 2017 19:47:18 GMT -5
Well, late last night I found a way to get my Chapter 16 back, but by then it was too late to write. So it should be up tomorrow/around 1 tonight.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Dec 31, 2017 19:56:54 GMT -5
I'm glad Can't wait!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 5, 2018 3:08:04 GMT -5
HEYYYY. Guess what folks? This fan fiction is finished.That's right. Chapter 16 through epilogue was posted and that is the ending of Where There's Smoke! As usual, it probably needs little touch up here and there, so if you think something isn't right, just shout and I'll try and fix it in a timely manner. Thanks for being such wonderful fans and letting me get through my second finished (posted) fan fiction! Dingoleap ~Sapphire~ Owlmoon ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 Rує 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 Headphone Actor Special thanks to Dingoleap who gave me a layout that was spot on exactly the right length. 19 chapters + epilogue.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jan 5, 2018 9:14:37 GMT -5
*cheers manically*
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Post by 𝓓𝓪𝓻𝓽𝓱 𝓑𝓻𝓪𝓶𝓫𝓵𝓮 on Jan 5, 2018 9:57:02 GMT -5
That was amazing.
One thing though, Chapter 18 you accidentally said "And then my eyes feel on Firestar" I think you meant to say "fell on Firtestar"
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 5, 2018 12:54:41 GMT -5
Yep! Thanks Bramble!
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