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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 25, 2017 2:06:52 GMT -5
I love how it's so green, like their eyes lol. thats the idea lol I put the new chapter in the docs, if you haven't already seen it.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 25, 2017 2:05:36 GMT -5
Could one of you give me a link to the thread? I'm having a bit of trouble finding it. cx' Alright, lemme get it...
Here it is, Maple!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 25, 2017 0:13:34 GMT -5
I think the main problem was the fact that he wasn't always there for Breezepelt, if you know what I mean?
Also, he only took Nightcloud as a mate to prove his loyalty, not out of love, so he neglected both her and his son quite a lot. That's pretty much what I'm trying to say. Glad I summed it up for you.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 24, 2017 1:14:25 GMT -5
Yeah, I get that they'd take a bit. Don't stress; I'm happy to wait.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 24, 2017 1:13:36 GMT -5
"No!" Josh jerked his arm out of her grip, genuine terror shining in his eyes. "They threatened to kill me if I didn't have these... beasts back within the week!" He turned to sprint into the forest, but something leapt out from the bushes to land on top of him. Long claws dug into his shoulders and he realised he had closed his eyes tight. Stinking breath was hitting his face. He forced himself to open his eyes and he saw a dragon-like face glaring down at him, cold, hard amber eyes locked on his face, massive sharp teeth bared dangerously. It's wings were spread wide and it's tail was lifted threateningly. Josh noticed it had some kind of purple-ish green-ish coloured liquid dripping from it's tail. Where it hit the grass, the grass and ground cracked and died dissolving into dust. Josh gulped and his heart beat fast in fear, but he couldn't help himself. "Told you," he said softly to Eveline, who was standing behind him. Eveline looked as if she had suddenly been hit between her eyes, she looked that surprised. "A-alright, I believe you," she stuttered, hands becoming fists as she tried to wrap her head around it. "D-don't touch the tail, that looks bad." Her eyes looked over the dragon creature, not knowing what to do. She'd read fantasy books before, but how was that supposed to prepare you for something like this! There was a creature that shouldn't exist, almost right in front of her! "I think it's some sort of hybrid," Josh said slowly. "It kind of looks like a dragon, but sorta like a manticore, too." He shifted backwards and the creature didn't even move, just blinking at him as he stood up. Josh held out a tentative, shaking hand. The manticore-dragon hissed at him softly, then a forked tongue escaped it's jaws to lick his palm. Josh laughed softly. "That tickles." He looked at his hand to see a small, thin gray-purple trail running the length of his palm. "Weird," he muttered.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 24, 2017 1:10:08 GMT -5
Banned because I have no clue why your avatar reminds me of Connor Murphy, but it does.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 24, 2017 1:07:27 GMT -5
Hi, Thunderfire! Thanks for coming! cx And sure, I'll give it a look! Hehe cool.
I don't know the damn plot twist that ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ wants to do yet, ahaha
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 24, 2017 1:04:47 GMT -5
I'm actually pretty excited for this. Crowfeather is a very interesting character and i'm looking forward to seeing his POV. i'm hoping we'll see more of his relationship with Nightcloud and Breezepelt. I'm actually hoping for some kind of plot twist where we see him trying to be a good mate and father, but because Nightcloud knows he only became her mate to prove his loyalty, she pushes him away and teaches Breezepelt to hate him. It would be an interesting concept. But, then again, I love Crowfeather just as he is.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 24, 2017 1:01:19 GMT -5
@persephone yeah, I'm glad he's started caring for Breezepelt now. Crowfeather always seemed to care about Breezepelt, like how he was worried about him in The Sight after he and Lionpaw nearly suffocate and tried to help Nightcloud carry him afterwards, but she wouldn't let him. Then there was Outcast, where he would occasionally scold Breezepaw whenever he was being rude or reckless, and then saved his life later on. The problem with Crowfeather's parenting is that he would either be a little to harsh in the eyes of some, or just distant in general. I think the main problem was the fact that he wasn't always there for Breezepelt, if you know what I mean?
Also, he only took Nightcloud as a mate to prove his loyalty, not out of love, so he neglected both her and his son quite a lot.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 21, 2017 1:04:51 GMT -5
Aqua yeah, you've got a point. But I still love him, tbh. I mean, every character has flaws, some are just so small that they are overlooked and people hate it when major flaws pop up in characters.
@persephone yeah, I'm glad he's started caring for Breezepelt now.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 21, 2017 0:36:17 GMT -5
So, uh, well, I personally love Crowfeather to pieces, he and Bramblestar and Alderheart are my favourite characters. I'm also really excited for his se. i think it will probably cover his feelings towards nightcloud and leafpool. Maybe something about Breezepelt? I dunno. Some Feathertail action? Here's a longer explanation, so if you don't bother reading this, i won't argue against any of your arguments, so please either just state your opinion and prediction without starting an argument or read this full explanation.
So, anyway...
I love Crowfeather. First, I think he's a pretty awesome looking character. Second, he really doesn't need all this crap dumped on him.
I mean, look at it logically.
If someone you loved with all your heart, who you knew loved you back, died, saving you, wouldn't you be crushed, heartbroken and feel really guilty?
For Crowfeather, that person, or cat, persay, was Feathertail. She saw beneath his grouchy exterior and into his heart, and she died saving them all and Crowfeather felt guilty. Heck, he even chose his warrior name, Crowfeather, after Feathertail!
Ok, she was from another Clan, so it was wrong, but seriously, how many other cats have had forbidden romances and they don't get shit?
Bluestar, Yellowfang, Oakheart, Raggedstar and, heck, even Leafpool doesn't get that much hate.
Seriously, what's wrong with people?
Ok, yeah, he had forbidden romances twice, but so what?
Yellowfang gave BIRTH to BR0KENSTAR of all cats. Bluestar lied to her ENTIRE CLAN. Oakheart lied too, Raggedstar lied too and Leafpool not only lied to the Clan, but made SQUIRRELFLIGHT lie too, so that gave Squirrelflight a bad rap in the Clan.
Crowfeather's first love died before anything could even go down between them, too, so shut up.
He genuinely loved Leafpool, but when she abandoned him for her Clan, he was left heartbroken again, so he decided to shut her right out and he took a new mate, Nightcloud, to prove his loyalty. He didn't really want kits, since he was still sour over Leafpool and still sad about Feathertail, so of course he ignored Breezekit.
Ok, that in itself was a bad choice, since Breezepelt ended up turning out bad, but he was hurting.
All in all, I reckon Crowfeather had good reason for what he did. He was always grieving over ruined love and was constantly in pain because of it.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 21, 2017 0:20:02 GMT -5
If you still want cats drawn, I'm not half bad... I'll either be able to get it done today or by Monday (in my timezone)
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 21, 2017 0:18:12 GMT -5
Same when I made the rp server that's in my siggie. It took me 300 years to be able to put it in my siggie lol
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 23:36:20 GMT -5
Seems awesome! I'll probably use this Clan alongside TundraClan in a fic I'm planning. what's tundraclan like? I don't want to make a desert clan and it be in the middle of antartica or smth xD also fantasy or realism? It's only called TundraClan because the first leader was called Tundra. I generally put them either on a moor or in a forest.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 23:09:14 GMT -5
Banned because Stay Alive Reprise, Dear Theodosia and Laurens Interlude made me cry.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 23:07:12 GMT -5
Seems awesome! I'll probably use this Clan alongside TundraClan in a fic I'm planning.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 23:05:36 GMT -5
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 23:04:33 GMT -5
Form:
Name: Morgan Sn: EthanTheAnnus Age: 16 Looks: Morgan is tall, but not overly tail. He has shoulder-length auburn hair that shines a golden colour in the sun. He has aqua-blue eyes and is lithe yet strong. Personality: Morgan is more sympathetic than most visitors and does sometimes try to help the fighters out a bit, though its always the one he bet on. Fighter or visitor: Visitor (for now, I guess) Other: I'm a violent person, so I had to join this, no duh.
Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/44177/man-who-win-fighting-rp?page=1#ixzz4tHaN1E00
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 22:59:56 GMT -5
I LOVE YOU.
also I didn't know Crowfeather was getting his own book. Is it a novella or a SE? Super Edition. Recently revealed. *Lets out excited squeal* HAVE I MENTIONED I ACTUALLY REALLY LOVE CROWFEATHER?????
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 22:46:44 GMT -5
I LOVE YOU.
also I didn't know Crowfeather was getting his own book. Is it a novella or a SE?
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 22:45:30 GMT -5
"They did, ok?" Josh snapped. "Some bull about the 'Beasts of Shadow and Light' and about 'the only Tamer left' and some other wacko stuff." "Yes," said Eveline, nodding her head. "Of course they did." She carefully started to drag him along by one arm. "Let's get out of the woods now and go ask a nurse if that's what you really saw." "No!" Josh jerked his arm out of her grip, genuine terror shining in his eyes. "They threatened to kill me if I didn't have these... beasts back within the week!" He turned to sprint into the forest, but something leapt out from the bushes to land on top of him. Long claws dug into his shoulders and he realised he had closed his eyes tight. Stinking breath was hitting his face. He forced himself to open his eyes and he saw a dragon-like face glaring down at him, cold, hard amber eyes locked on his face, massive sharp teeth bared dangerously. It's wings were spread wide and it's tail was lifted threateningly. Josh noticed it had some kind of purple-ish green-ish coloured liquid dripping from it's tail. Where it hit the grass, the grass and ground cracked and died dissolving into dust. Josh gulped and his heart beat fast in fear, but he couldn't help himself. "Told you," he said softly to Eveline, who was standing behind him.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 20, 2017 22:38:23 GMT -5
Maplestone360 Well then, you're actually reading one of my fics lol. I'd reccommend Wingless too, the one that me and ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ are working on together. It's fairly new, so you won't have much to read.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 17, 2017 3:27:29 GMT -5
Raggedstar was an idiot to be honest. All his motives where for his own good. Foxheart as his deputy; solely to make Yellowfang jealous because he loved Yellowfang AND Yellowfang had his son. Making Brokentail deputy; simply because Brokentail was his son. He was very selfish. He didn't even account for Yellowfang's side of the story, didn't even bother to hear her out when she said that she couldn't raise their son, didn't even consider any of her other feelings when making Foxheart deputy, didn't notice the badness in Brokentail because he was biased, refused to listen to any outside input on his decisions and even refused Yellowfang's advice.
All in all, he was a very bad leader and started the dynasty of shitty leaders.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 16, 2017 0:54:54 GMT -5
Banned for being a Hufflepuff and banned because I'm craving chocolate and I can't have it.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 16, 2017 0:52:33 GMT -5
Moo rtay9
Welp. That's that.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 16, 2017 0:51:23 GMT -5
False. I'm too young, and in another country.
TUBM plays Animal Jam.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 16, 2017 0:48:05 GMT -5
Josh was torn between wanting to hug her out of relief or slap her across the face. "These people... uhhh... kidnapped me... said some crazy stuff... then they let me go." Josh had been about to swear a lot in that sentence, but he knew how Eveline felt about swearing. "Yes," said Eveline, unashamedly looking at Josh's head to look for bumps and bruises. "Of course they did. Because kidnappers always let people they kidnap go after 'saying some crazy stuff.'" "They did, ok?" Josh snapped. "Some bull about the 'Beasts of Shadow and Light' and about 'the only Tamer left' and some other wacko stuff."
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 16, 2017 0:46:08 GMT -5
❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ I entered a few posts above.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Sept 16, 2017 0:44:53 GMT -5
"Art is calming and a very good way of venting, ok?" Louis spat, defensive. "And just because you obviously haven't tried researching to become better at art, doesn't mean art is bad!"
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