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Post by Tealraven on Jun 19, 2024 11:44:00 GMT -5
Looks great to me c:
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Post by tumblepaw on Jun 19, 2024 11:45:47 GMT -5
|| Tried I really did.
any amendments to request, anything I've missed.
Am I okay to add it to the front page? One of the last sentences: their litters have been buried long before the time in ConiferClan camp. โTheโ should be โtheir.โ Otherwise it looks great.
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Post by ๐ก๐ธ๐ฌ๐ด๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ท๐ท๐ฒ๐ท๐ฐ on Jun 19, 2024 17:10:12 GMT -5
Damn, so sad but really good
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 19, 2024 17:12:53 GMT -5
|| Beilliant I can make those amendments and get it added
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Post by whispering on Jun 19, 2024 18:21:10 GMT -5
today has been a day, but im gonna finish up on replies here in a minute
and the plot looks good to me! now to figure out who uncovers the secret? i think it would be good to kick it off after silver gives birth and maybe someone is like โdamn, all these hard birthsโ
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 1:31:37 GMT -5
|| No worries whispering I hope youโre okay
And that makes sense to me as a catalyst
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 3:31:07 GMT -5
|| Happy month-iversary to ConiferClan.
I'll be honest this got waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay bigger than I was ever expecting. and I'm truly so happy with how far we've come, and really looking forward to so much more!
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 4:34:31 GMT -5
|| Considering expanding the timeline/history portion of the page. how long ago do we think the Fallenmoon plot will have happened, what seems reasonable?
yes I know I said the Clan would be very old, I now need to decide how old very old is[/s]
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Post by Feathertalon on Jun 20, 2024 10:46:57 GMT -5
hmmmm, are we talking very old as in 20-30 years (about how long the clans are in the books), or even older, so like?? 50-60+ years?
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 11:03:08 GMT -5
||... that made me feel weird learning that the clans in the books are 20-30 years old.
I could have done without that knowledge I'll be honest with ya.
Maybe a little older, but not tonnes. So we could say 40?
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Post by Feathertalon on Jun 20, 2024 11:10:30 GMT -5
you're very welcome, im here to ruin everybody's day uwu
40 sounds good! if i did math right that's about 60 generations of cats
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 11:13:08 GMT -5
|| If everyone's okay with the same, I'm aware its my clan but I am also a people pleaser to a fault, I think that's what I'll go with. Makes sense for it to be long enough ago that most cats only remember it in half-told, half-shifted stories.
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Post by Feathertalon on Jun 20, 2024 11:16:53 GMT -5
^^^^ hailstar is probably the only first generation cat that coniferclan can still even remember, and stories about him are probably all sorts of twisted and whatnot
and just a little thought, but in one of Buckpaw's posts i referenced a cat (that i made up on the spot) named Brookberry, and she was spoken of as the first medicine cat of the clan. I kinda wonder if maybe she had been Fallen's apprentice and after the whole ordeal with Fallen, Brook was told in stories as the first medicine cat instead to further cover up fallen's "betrayal"?? o:
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Post by whispering on Jun 20, 2024 11:19:44 GMT -5
ouuu i love that ^^ like that's actually really good O:
also, i imagine a scene where darkstep is like "spare wisteriasnow's litter, they'll be special" *a year later* fallenmoon *snorts* so if conifer is 6 generations, we should add 2 more leaders prior to miststar right?
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 11:22:16 GMT -5
|| OOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I am in love with the way your brain works.
yeah that makes sense, any preferences on names?
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Post by Feathertalon on Jun 20, 2024 11:28:52 GMT -5
ouuu i love that ^^ like that's actually really good O: also, i imagine a scene where darkstep is like "spare wisteriasnow's litter, they'll be special" *a year later* fallenmoon *snorts* so if conifer is 6 generations, we should add 2 more leaders prior to miststar right? darkstep: these kits are gonna be great, dont kill them fallenmoon: sure, alright - a year later - fallenmoon: so about those kits darkstep: shut up my only preference for leaders is that we need some girl power up in here, too many tom leaders xD
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 12:23:39 GMT -5
|| Dark: these kits show great potential
Fallen: potential at being idiots maybe
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Post by whispering on Jun 20, 2024 12:25:00 GMT -5
all my joining forms have been updated finally plus i edited silent's form(i hated the quality in her ref)
and i agree on more women leaders ^
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 12:29:39 GMT -5
|| I admit I didnโt realise how much of a boy club, Iโll add some badass ladies
Lowkey excited for eagles response ps, the poor guy might need an extra life of his own
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 12:31:00 GMT -5
|| What you thinking re Iris & the curse ps?
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Post by whispering on Jun 20, 2024 12:34:30 GMT -5
i think his mom died kitting him and his foster mother was similar to a lizardstripe situation and she wasn't happy to have another kit to take of and that's why he's so bitter
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 12:35:07 GMT -5
|| I like that
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Post by whispering on Jun 20, 2024 12:49:17 GMT -5
i just realized since their preemies, they're really tiny x3 just adding on to the "tiny critter" name lore i love it
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Post by tumblepaw on Jun 20, 2024 12:50:01 GMT -5
That explains some of their names! XD
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 12:52:07 GMT -5
|| Poor old Eagle expecting a Tigerkit
โYou four have embarrassed meโ
Briar should make it one of their warrior names when theyโre all grown
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 13:28:35 GMT -5
|| Iโve effemanated (definitely not a word) the notable cats list a bit
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 14:04:49 GMT -5
|| Christ I knew it was going to hurt but I didnโt realise how much it was going to hurt
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Post by whispering on Jun 20, 2024 14:09:47 GMT -5
yes our eagle is falling into a bout of depression x.x nothing is more sad than his starter for next moons timeskip
he needs a hug
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Post by ladylantsov on Jun 20, 2024 14:11:50 GMT -5
|| Oh no what happens to him?!
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Post by Feathertalon on Jun 20, 2024 15:24:46 GMT -5
writing for rattlepaw is so fun sheโs so dramatic cโ:
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