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Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 22, 2023 16:36:49 GMT -5
Chatting & Plotting Thread: Click here!
It was a lazy day in ShadowClan, and all was quiet in the apprentices' den. Redpaw crept slowly past the sleeping cats, over to where his friend lie. The sandy brown tom crouched there for a moment before dabbing a rusty-colored paw at her face. "Shimmerpaw!" he hissed, glancing around him to make sure nobody else woke up. Warm sunlight was seeping in, and he could hear a few birds, but there wasn't much of the familiar chatter of his Clanmates, like there usually was at this time. "You know that huge hunting party my father was talking about? I think they're doing it now! Most of the camp is empty. Maybe we could go out and explore and come back before anyone even realizes..."
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 22, 2023 16:49:29 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw drowsily opened her eyes. A ray on sunshine hit her face. The morning sun felt good on her pelt. Shimmerpaw let out a small yawn before looking up at her friend Redpaw. “Hunting party? What?” She murmured. “Oh yeah. That Hunting Party. But wouldn’t we be breaking the code? Apprentices are not allowed to go out alone.” She meowed, remembering the Warrior Code. Shimmerpaw stared at Redpaw’s pleading eyes. She rolled her eyes, amused. “Okay, fine. But if we’re caught, don’t expect me to share the blame.” She said teasingly. Shimmerpaw knew they wouldn’t get caught. At least she hoped so.
Shimmerpaw stood up and stretched. She shook her fur a little and quickly groomed herself. “Let’s go!” She said before slipping out of the apprentice’s den.
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Aroace
Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 22, 2023 18:42:57 GMT -5
Redpaw bounced after her, tail waving in the air. It was so easy! He hadn't expected her to agree to come so quickly, but maybe Shimmerpaw secretly wanted to make adventures of her own, too. It was boring always having supervision all the time.
"Don't worry about it. Do you think the Code cares?" Redpaw joked, swiveling his ears. "I don't hear it telling us to stop. Besides, I'm gonna be a Warrior soon!" ... anytime now, he added silently. "Think of it as practice. If I have experience being alone now, I'll just be an even stronger Warrior. You will, too!"
He stopped near the entrance of camp and sniffed the air. The scents were recent, but it didn't seem like anyone was actually there... and the cats who were still at camp were probably busy in their dens.
"Uh... okay." He shuffled his paws. "After you."
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 22, 2023 20:12:00 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw rolled her eyes at Redpaw again. “You’re not afraid, are you?” She asked teasingly. “But sure. I will go first.” She turned to face the entrance with a calm expression. If someone was there, they would just think that she was checking up on them and trying to not make them feel lonely. But if they saw Redpaw, they would know that he was up to no good.
Shimmerpaw stood straight and casually walked through the entrance of camp, putting one paw infront of the other. She glanced to her side. To her relief, there were no guards posted. She relaxed and turned around. “Redpaw, you can come over. No ones here!” She called out.
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Aroace
Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 22, 2023 20:54:45 GMT -5
There was no immediate response, but the leaves rustled and Redpaw came bounding out.
"Great! Come on!" he giggled, nudging Shimmerpaw as he passed her. He couldn't believe it. He was actually surprised they'd made it this far. "I think the hunting patrol went up that way," he said with a nod in the direction of the path ahead of them, "So we should probably gooo... the opposite way."
South. Towards ThunderClan territory. Redpaw had always wondered what that was like. Was it true that ThunderClan had more prey than them? That they didn't eat toads and frogs and lizards?
"And about that thing you said before?" he laughed. "Of course I'm not afraid. I can handle anything that comes at us... even my dad."
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 23, 2023 6:50:57 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw frowned at the thought. If Whitestar found them, she and Redpaw would be dead. Shimmerpaw wiped away that thought with a shake of her head and quickly changed her expression to smile. “Are you surrrreeeee?” She teased. “You seemed nervous back there.”
Before Redpaw could respond, Shimmerpaw bounded ahead. She could feel the wind ruffling her fur. Birds sang from above. Sometimes it made Shimmerpaw feel bad to think of these animals of prey but her clan came first.
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Aroace
Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 23, 2023 13:35:50 GMT -5
"I'm sure!" Redpaw called out, hurrying after her. As they ran, the scent of his Clanmates drifted further and further away. When he realized he could no longer smell them, his worries dissipated, and he wondered why he was ever nervous about being found at all. He and Shimmerpaw were way too clever for that. Of course no one would find them!
"Have you ever climbed one of those?" he asked Shimmerpaw, glancing up at one of the large pine trees as they passed them. "I tried once-- Frogspot told me to get down. He said something about not wanting me to trail sap back into the camp..."
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 23, 2023 14:58:33 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw gazed at the pine trees. “Nope.” She replied. “I wonder why sap is bad. I heard it’s sticky.” Shimmerpaw grinned. “I bet it’ll pull out your fur out!” She said jokingly.
Shimmerpaw walked around the tree, carefully inspecting it. “I bet you a mouse you won’t climb it!” She said with a wink to Redpaw. After inspection, Shimmerpaw knew it was safe. As long as Redpaw didn’t do anything stupid.
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Aroace
Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 23, 2023 15:22:12 GMT -5
"It is sticky," Redpaw responded with a flick of his tail, not expecting anything to come from it. Definitely not a... bet?! "Oh, you're on!"
He skidded to a halt, unsheathed his claws, and bolted back at the tree.
With a flying pounce, the apprentice hooked his claws in the bark and with quite a bit of a struggle (almost falling a few times) he was able to pull himself onto one of the lower branches.
"See!" he panted. "I wasn't lying! Now you..." he tried to catch his breath. "Have to catch a mouse!"
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 23, 2023 17:54:20 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw grinned as Redpaw climbed up the pine tree but she quickly got worried when he almost fell a few times. “Careful!” She called out. Why did I make this stupid bet! We’re Shadowclan cats, not Skyclan! We weren’t trained to climb trees! Shimmerpaw looked up but to her relief, Redpaw was fine.
“Okay, you win the bet. Now come back down now! I’ll catch you a mouse.” Shimmerpaw said.
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Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 23, 2023 18:06:02 GMT -5
Redpaw glowed with pride. See? He knew he could do it!
"Okay!" he yelled, "Coming down!"
He crawled back toward the trunk of the tree and cautiously lowered his two front paws onto it. He could feel them slipping forward-- the tug of gravity had him in its grasp. The ground suddenly looked a lot further away than it had before.
Redpaw yanked himself back onto the branch and curled his tail around him.
"Uhh, just testing it!" he called out. "Haha..."
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 23, 2023 18:56:01 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw watched as Redpaw got backed away from the trunk. She had seen his paws slip which made her panick. What if Redpaw couldn’t get back down? What if he got hurt? It would be all her fault. Everyone including him would hate her. She felt so bad for making that stupid bet.
“Are you sure you’re okay?!” She called out to Redpaw. “I could call for help if you need it!” Shimmerpaw didn’t care that they would get in trouble. Better then Redpaw getting hurt! And even after that they would still get in trouble! Shimmerpaw felt terrible.
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Aroace
Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 23, 2023 19:36:29 GMT -5
"N-No! Don't get anyone!" said Redpaw, almost instantly. He couldn't risk that. Not only would they get in trouble, but everyone would see that he couldn't get out of the tree, and he would feel so ridiculous! "Just... hold on! I can do it," he breathed, stepping towards the trunk again.
He hesitated.
"Shimmerpaw, you think I'd get hurt if I just jumped?"
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 23, 2023 21:11:18 GMT -5
“NO!” Shimmerpaw exclaimed. “Of course you’d get hurt! Don’t even think about it.” She stayed quiet for a moment. “I’m sorry for making this stupid bet. Now you might get hurt!” Shimmerpaw paced around, trying to think of an idea. “Maybe try to hop from one branch to another instead of sliding down the trunk.” She suggested.
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Aroace
Brokenstars
Not feeling good, really won't be on
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 23, 2023 22:39:42 GMT -5
"I'm on the lowest branch!" Redpaw complained, looking up at the other branches above him. "I'm not gonna go higher!"
Wait. Branches...
"Do you see any really big sticks? Or rocks?" he called down to Shimmerpaw. "Maybe you could make a pile so I can jump on that instead of the ground!?"
OOC: just a head's up, I'm having trouble logging in so I might not be able to reply so quick.
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 24, 2023 8:15:57 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw thought of the idea. “I don’t think that’s a good idea.” She commented. “I mean, the pile idea is good but I don’t think using sticks or rocks are a good idea. Rocks would be a hard hit when you fall, and the sticks could scratch you. Maybe leaves?”
Shimmerpaw looked at her surroundings before quickly realizing something.
“Oh yeah. I forgot we aren’t Thunderclan and Skyclan. There are no leaves here.” Shimmerpaw sighed. “I’ll try your idea. I’ll be right back!”
Shimmerpaw took a quick glance around her, searching for any branches or big sticks. There were plenty in sight. She decided to try and get the biggest ones first. She padded over and dragged them with her jaw over to the tree that Redpaw was stuck in. Then she repeated the process, over and over again. Not long after she began, she had used up all the branches and sticks in the area. She looked at the pile she had made.
“There! That looks good enough.” Shimmerpaw meowed. “How does it look from your end Redpaw?” She yelled to Redpaw.
That’s not good. It’s okay though. Do you need any help of some sort?)
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Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 24, 2023 8:22:27 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw had a point. Rocks and sticks would probably hurt if he fell onto them, but he hoped the pile would be big enough, so it was more like a short jump than a long fall.
He waited and waited, guilt gnawing at him as he watched her hard at work at the base of the tree. Poor Shimmerpaw, doing all of that by herself! He knew if it were him, he'd be exhausted!
He eventually started to doze, but perked up when he heard her voice and peeked his head over the edge of the branch to see the final product. A huge smile broke out on his face.
"Oh, I think it's high enough!" said Redpaw, preparing for the jump. He propelled himself down from the branch and his paws hit the topmost rock. It stung a little bit, but he was okay, and it was just another short jump from there to the ground. Way better than one big jump!
"Jee, thanks!" he mewed, racing up to her. "I was beginning to think I'd never get down."
( Tbh I'm not sure! I can log in on mobile but desktop gives me an error message. )
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 24, 2023 11:42:48 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw sighed in relief. Everything ended up fine after all. “How are your paws? Are they scratched in any way?” She asked. “You might want to get that checked up by Winterfrost.” Shimmerpaw suggested.
She started to slowly walk forward, checking for any sign of the huge hunting patrol. She knew that even if they weren’t caught by them, they would have to tell Winterfrost who would probably tell Whitestar. I mean, there’s no way that she wouldn’t tell her brother. And obviously Redpaw and her would get in trouble and it would be all her fault.
“I’m sorry. Now it’s going to be all my fault we’ll be caught.” Shimmerpaw said. “We’re going to have to tell Winterfrost otherwise your paw can’t get treated. And don’t you pretend that it didn’t, I know it did. It looked it painful.” She paused for a moment, not knowing what to say. “You still want that mouse?” Shimmerpaw asked, trying to lighten the mood.
maybe ask the admins about it on your other working device and ask if they could do anything or if they have a solution)
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Aroace
Brokenstars
Not feeling good, really won't be on
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 24, 2023 12:38:02 GMT -5
"Nononono!" Redpaw babbled, hopping around for emphasis. "My dad can't find out! Look, I'm fine!" He darted in front of her and held out one of his front paws, then the other. They were a little pink, but the pads were intact. "See? I'm not bleeding! They seriously do not have to know."
He could feel his heartbeat quicken. Why was she threatening him like this? Did she want to tell on him before he told on her? But he wasn't gonna tell on her!
"Shimmerpaw," said Redpaw sternly, looking her in the eye. "I need you to promise me you won't tell."
(I'm gonna see if it's still happening and then yeah probably have to do that </3)
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Aroace
Brokenstars
Not feeling good, really won't be on
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 24, 2023 12:48:13 GMT -5
"Nononono!" Redpaw babbled, hopping around for emphasis. "My dad can't find out! Look, I'm fine!" He darted in front of her and held out one of his front paws, then the other. "See? I'm not bleeding! They seriously do not have to know."
He could feel his heartbeat quicken. Why was she threatening him like this? Did she want to tell on him before he told on her? But he wasn't gonna tell on her!
"Shimmerpaw," said Redpaw sternly, looking her in the eye. "I need you to promise me you won't tell."
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 24, 2023 16:19:27 GMT -5
Shimmerpaw sighed. “Fine. I won’t tell anyone Redpaw.” She grumbled annoyed a little. “But aren’t your paws sore? Also, what about the sap! What if some of it got on your paws. What would happen! Something that would tell the entire clan that we snuck out! Better to have one cat know then every one of your clanmates!” She snapped.
Shimmerpaw turned her back to Redpaw, trying to calm herself down. She hated being angry. She hated snapping at her clanmates. Especially her friends. “I’m sorry.” She mewed. “I shouldn’t have gotten angry. It’s all my fault that this is happening. I just want to make sure that you’ll be okay.” Shimmerpaw admitted as she looked to face Redpaw. “It’s okay if you’re mad. I don’t blame you.”
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Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 24, 2023 18:49:24 GMT -5
Redpaw flattened his ears, and waited for her to stop yelling before he said anything.
"I'm not mad," he said slowly, trying to be reassuring. "I can just wash my paws off in the river if there's sap, annnddd.... I really think my paws are going to be fine. It's not your fault."
He lifted each paw up and set it down again. They did hurt a little, but he wasn't too upset about it. He imagined Warriors got hurt way worse than this in battle all the time.
"Listen, if it gets bad, we'll just make up a story about it, okay? It's been so hot lately. Maybe I stepped on some really hot dirt and it scorched my paws?" He tilted his head at Shimmerpaw to see if she found it as believable as he hoped it was. "Or maybe I was walking around camp practicing my hunting moves and slipped?"
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 24, 2023 20:29:08 GMT -5
“Okay, sure.” Shimmerpaw replied, unconvinced. “We’ll do that. We’ll have to workshop the ideas a little though.” She meowed. “Go wash your paws in the river. After that we’ll head back to camp.”
Shimmerpaw padde along the trees, making sure not to go to fast. Even if Redpaw didn’t admit that his paw hurted, she knew that it did, and she wasn’t going to make him suffer for it. She stalked through the trees until she her the rushing water of the river. She quickened her pace a little and searched for a safe spot for Redpaw to wash his paws.
“Here is good. The water isn’t flowing that fast here.” Shimmerpaw told Redpaw. “Be careful not to fall in though.” She added.
Shimmerpaw stepped back and sat down, curling her tail over her paws. She watched the water flow in the river and wondered what it would feel like to be to water. The flow freely wherever it pleased.
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Aroace
Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 24, 2023 21:36:44 GMT -5
Redpaw padded past Shimmerpaw and hesitantly placed his paws in the water. It wasn't very deep here, but he still didn't want to get wet. Maybe he thought it would be fun to be a SkyClan or ThunderClan cat, but he did not think it would be fun to be a RiverClan cat... at all.
"What did you mean, go back to camp?" he asked, shaking water off his paws. "You're joking, right? You don't actually wanna go back already?"
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 25, 2023 7:28:51 GMT -5
“Eh. Not really.” Shimmerpaw admitted. “I don’t want something else bad to happen that could possibly get us caught. So we should probably play it safe and go back to camp. Plus, what if the hunting party is back by now! Did your father tell you when they were coming back? I mean I guess if they aren’t coming back soon we could stay out a little longer but I don’t really know.” Shimmerpaw paused and stopped thinking. “I’ve been talking for too long, haven’t I. I’ll stop unloading all my thoughts now.” She said.
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 25, 2023 16:10:01 GMT -5
Redpaw glanced back the way they'd come, in the direction of camp. He knew Shimmerpaw had a point. It would be really bad if they got into a situation they couldn't get themselves out of so easily, or if one of them actually got hurt. Not to mention how much trouble they'd get in if they got caught.
But...
"He didn't tell me anything," Redpaw sighed, looking back at her. "He might be back now, he might not... do you want to go back?" He looked at her pointedly, and angled his ears forward. Clearly, he meant... her. Shimmerpaw.
By herself.
"I mean, like, I won't keep you if you're scared or anything. I was just thinking about... seeing Twolegplace, y'know...?" His voice got really quiet at the end, and he looked down at his paws and then around at the trees, but avoided Shimmerpaw's face. "BUT it's okay if you don't want to!" Redpaw blurted, "I mean, it's weird to want to see a kittypet. They might not even be real, I dunno, I've never seen one in real life."
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 25, 2023 19:11:34 GMT -5
“I mean…” Shimmerpaw hesitated. “I’ll go with you. Even if your father is back by now, I’d rather go and explore more then get in trouble rather then go back now and face the same consequences except it wasn’t worth the adventure we had. So I’ll go too. If you want to see the Twolegplace, then I support you!” She said with a smile. “Let’s go now! Then we could get away before your father could even find us!”
Shimmerpaw started padding to the Twolegplace. She thought it was strange that Redpaw wanted to see if so bad but she wasn’t going to judge. But it still racked her mind and she started to wonder what the true meaning behind this is. Is Redpaw sick of clan life and wants to become a soft kittypet? Was he plotting some sort of attack on the Twolegplace? Was he plotting with rouges there to take over the clan?! Shimmerpaw panicked at the thought and stumbled a little on some rocks. Or he was just curious and wanted to explore. Yeah. That must be it. That seems like the most “Redpaw” like. She thought to herself. I guess the other ideas aren’t really realistic. I trust him. He knows what he wants and I’ll follow.
Shimmerpaw laughed at herself in her head. Of course Redpaw just wants to explore. She knows her friend wouldn’t do anything bad like that.
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Brokenstars
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Post by Brokenstars on Aug 26, 2023 21:15:28 GMT -5
Redpaw's eyes lit up.
"Really?" he exclaimed. "You'll go?"
He happily hopped after her, sniffing the air and the trees all around them. He thought they might have to cross through ThunderClan territory to get to Twolegplace, but maybe there was another way to do it. And if not... they could just avoid the ThunderClanners like they were avoiding his father, couldn't they? They were just two apprentices, and it's not like they were hunting.
Not that it should be a problem if we were, Redpaw thought. If ThunderClanners were hunting in my territory and I saw them, I wouldn't care a bit.
"I guess when we smell something weird, we'll know we're close by," he meowed. "Do you think they actually don't know how to hunt?"
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Post by []̷ 𝓜𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓯𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓽 []̷ on Aug 26, 2023 21:32:31 GMT -5
“I don’t know.” Shimmerpaw shrugged. “I’ve heard from other apprentices at the gatherings that some can! Like, really? That would be surprising.” She said with curiousity. “But we’ll find out soon, won’t we?” Shimmerpaw meowed with her gaze shifting to Redpaw.
Shimmerpaw trotted along but soon realized that she forgot the way to the twolegplace. “Where was the Twolegplace again?” She asked Redpaw. “I forgot and I wanted to make sure that at least one of us knew so we wouldn’t get lost. How long do you think it’ll take to reach there?” Shimmerpaw realized she had more questions then she thought she had. I don’t want to bore Redpaw with my questions so I’ll keep those to myself. She thought. Shimmerpaw did just also realize that they were heading in the direction of Thunderclan territory.
“Wait.” Shimmerpaw halted in place. “Do we have. To pass Thunderclan territory to reach the Twolegplace?”
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