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Post by Deleted on Aug 3, 2023 8:10:50 GMT -5
So during my Warriors Rewrite/Series-AU, I was getting frustrated with the ranks and Clan names and...may have...broken Warriors. But It's MY story so I can do whatever want. So I'm introducing The Clawed Chronicles x Warriors Crossover, also known as: my private story nobody knows about x a world-famous battle cat series So, back to business! The Clans will no longer be 'Clans', instead put in the format of my "allegiances" into the Clans, as well as new ranks, names, and JOBS. Luckily, it should be close enough to Warriors that a veteran would recognize or maybe a new fan. However, the characters and (whatever exists) lore will somewhat remain the same. I won't tell you everything 'cause I want to surprise you. The Pinglist Kinship: ! Wisp ! ᦓρ꠸ᥴꫀᠻꪖꪀᧁ (Also some characters that don't exist will be added, such as Spottedleaf will now be a Oracle and now I need a doctor, so I will make one. You are encouraged to fill up the ranks of the other Kinships!) ------------------------------- Explaining the Ranks: Lord/Lady - The leaders of the Kinship Adviser - The second-in-command, sometimes the next-in-line Commander - The FireWalker's next-in-line Heir/Heiress - The Rainsong's next-in-line Successor - The GaleSeeker's next-in-line Champion - The TerraHeart's next-in-line Doctor - The healer Knights - The main residents that hunt and fight for the Kinship Squires - Cats under two years, but older than one year of age Novices - Cats older than six moons, but younger than one year Queens - Mollies expecting or nursing kittens Retired - Elderly that cannot care for themselves ------------------------------- Extra: Jobs - a knight that has a special interest or skill that they dedicate their time to when not hunting or fighting
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Naming in The Clawed Chronichles is similar to 'traditional' Warriors naming. If the kitten survives one month then they will be named after their appearance, unless there is a character trait that makes them stick out from the other kits, something notable happens at their birth, or after an ancestor. Kittens will only have a prefix for their name and they will keep the prefix (normally) for the rest of their life. Only when they reach adult hood (older than two years, unless special circumstances occur), they will receive their name. Example below:
Sand < Sand < Sand < Sand Wing (kit) (novice) (squire) (knight)However there are ways a cat could change their name:
1.) It no-longer suits their identity. The name could change when they are an older kitten, novice, squire, or older
2.) Something happens a.) Injury occurs and the cat wishes to chance their name b.) TBA
3.) Rank Change a.) If cat becomes leader, they will acquire the name of the Kinship as a 'last name'. For example, Blue Storm will become Blue Storm Firewalker. However with it being such mouthful, especially with the title...so it mostly used for formal occasions. b.) If a feline decides/is chosen to become an oracle later in life they are normally named after something sacred. Ex. Spotted Leaf becomes Spotted Stars. -------------------------------Ranks open for Kinship OCs: Firewalkers Kinship: CLOSED Rainsong Kinship: Doctor - 2 spots open, Oracle - 1 spot open, Knights - 14 spots open, Squires - 5 spots open, Novices - 4 spots open, Queens - 4 spots open, Kittens - 8 spots open, Retired - 3 spots open Galeseekers Kinship: Oracle - 2 spots open, Knights - 18 spots open, Squires - 1 spot open, Novices - 3 spots open, Queens - 4 spots, Kittens - 3 open, Retired - 1 spot open TerraHeart Kinship - Champion - 1 spot open, Oracle - 1 spot open, Doctor - 2 spots open, Knights - 20 spots open, Squires - 3 spots open, Novices - 4 spots open, Queens - 4 spots open, Kittens - 8 open spots, Retired - 4 open spots ----------------------------- Character Sign-up Sheet [OPEN] (Warning: Your character will be in my murderous paws once you submit it! I will NOT own it and you can choose to take it out, but I have free will to do whatever I want once they have stepped into my world. Also your character will be assigned a random job if you say 'yes'.)
Owner: Name: Age: Appearance: (Make as simple or complex as you want!) Personality: (Make as simple or complex as you want!)Residence: Rank (in Kinship):
Job: (Yes or No) Backstory (opt):Extra Info (opt):Prefurred death (opt):
[Gathering coming up soon!]
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Post by Deleted on Aug 3, 2023 12:40:16 GMT -5
Pinglist Kinship: The Star-Wood AllianceFireWalker Kinship
LADY Blue Storm - a muscular, pale blue molly with icy-blue eyes, long, grizzled fur, and a scarred shoulder. ADVISOR Red Tail - a small, dark tortoiseshell tom with a fox-like tail and bright amber eyes. COMMANDER Red Tail ORACLE Spotted Stars - a beautiful, dark tortoiseshell molly with with petal-shaped white spots and enchanting amber eyes. DOCTER Soft Feather - a gray-and-white molly with downy, white paws and darker spots. KNIGHTS Lion Heart - a pale ginger tabby tom with green eyes and a darker mane. Golden Flower - a small, sleek, pale ginger tabby molly with darker, marbled stripes and dandelion-yellow eyes. Hound Claw - a brawny, black tabby tom with unusually long front claws, a scarred body, and striking amber eyes. White Whisper - a snowy-white tom with dark gray ears-and-tail and yellow eyes. Willow Stream - a dainty, pale gray molly with a unique long coat. SQUIRES Mouse - a small, chocolate-point molly with a black tail. Stoat - a long-limbed, chocolate-tabby-point with dark eyes. Weasel - a lean, cinnamon tabby tom with a narrowed, "masked" face and bright green eyes. NOVICES Grackle - a black spotted tabby tom with a white tail-tip and paws. Raven - a black "ghost tabby" tom with white toes, chest spot, and tail-tip. Goose - a deaf, white tom with blue eyes thick coat. Charcoal - a gray tom with a long coat and a single, black stripe. Ember - a strapping, ginger tom with flame-like markings and electric green eyes. QUEENS Brindled Mask - a sleek, fluffy gray speckled molly with fluffy tail-and-ears. Speckled Paws - a dark cream molly with marbled stripes and gentle, white paws. RETIRED Sparrow Tail - a black tabby-and-white tom with brown eyes. Dappled Nose - a pretty, white molly with lovely tortoiseshell tail-and-ears. Ivory Ears - a cunning, white molly with unique black markings and one yellow eye. Prologue -------------- TW: Death, Death Description (very descriptive), blood -------- Pinglist Kinship ! Wisp ! ᦓρ꠸ᥴꫀᠻꪖꪀᧁ
Shadows had spread their black wings over the forest, only the crescent moon hanging in the sky, but just barely. Thick, charcoal clouds raced across the darkness, stealing the stars and threatening to steal the moon’s.
Everything was grimmer below the celestial planes, the earthy forest was wild and untamed, bracken, brambles, and other vegetation spilling into a pine-strewn clearing. Bark glowed copper and distant eyes flashed amber. Despite the tranquil appearance of the scene, invisible lightning flashed between the oaks and the pines, the groaning of the wood and the whispers of needles were halted.
Suddenly, in a single moment, every shred of peace, every beautiful aspect of the two timbers was broken. Furry bodies flew and wrestled each other, claws and fangs bared.
Fast as lightning, a huge, black tabby lunged at a gray tom, a striped paw on the rival cat’s throat. When he spoke it was as if thunder had roared from the tabby’s mouth, several cats paused for a moment before continuing with the maul.
“Black Claws! How dare you challenge the FireWalkers’ borders!” He boomed, claws crimson as blood soaked from the ebony-faced opponent's throat. “The Boar Run is ours!”
“Think again, Hound Bite,” Icy blue eyes peered into the tabby’s amber ones and the tomcat forced himself not to flinch at such a cold, ruthless stare. “While Selene’s eye is open, the TerraHearts shall thrive!” With a mighty kick, Hound Bite was thrown off the colorpoint cat and forced to struggle on the other side of the wood.
Hound Bite winced, blood leaking into his eyes with every pawstep. Before he could launch a counter-attack, many TerraHeart knights pounced on the tomcat.
“Coward! Come fight me yourself!” hissed Hound Bite.
“I don’t fight Apalos,” The knight watched in shock as Black Claws left him to the scarred fighters.
Summoning all his strength, Hound bite desperately leaped out of the tangle of felines, but his leg gave way, sending him crashing to the dirt.
𖦹𖦹𖦹 “Up, Hound Bite. I will not lose another knight!” A steady voice ringed in the tabby’s ears and he heaved himself upward, finding the burden of Terraheart enemies had ceased. Hound Bite’s head throbbed and legs threatened to buckle. Another? He recalled the commander’s words.
“What do you mean ‘another’?” Hound Bite met a dark tortoiseshell’s words with a snarl. “What do you mean, Red Tail?” He felt his claws unsheathe once more as he met the commander’s amber gaze. Red Tail closed his eyes, sorrow and sympathy dripped from his voice.
“Too many have been lost,” Hound Bite hissed at Red Tail's answer.
“Who, Red Tail, who?!”
“Snow Step is gone… so are Frost Leap and Coon Whistle,” The answer sent Hound Bite to the ground, his gaze glued to his claws, broken and crimson. S-Snow step? She’s…dead? Just the thought seemed foreign. He had been told since kit-hood that on average one warrior is lost in a border skirmish, but…Snow Step? She was the best fighter, second only to him, and they had kits.
“We need to collect the dead, then retreat.” Red Tail’s words brought Hound Bite back to reality. The tabby hissed with defiance!
“NO! We need to avenge their deaths, or they would’ve died for nothing!” He could feel a ball of salty emotion bubble in his throat and tears sting the corners of his eyes. “Snow Step would’ve died for nothing!”
Red Tail shook his head and Hound Bite felt his neck fur prickle. Three knights were dead, and he wasn’t going to do anything?!
“Blue Storm will honor your courage and theirs, but this battle was lost before it even started.” The commander shook his head, leaping onto a fallen boulder and raised his bushy tail.
“The FireWalkers give in!” At this mighty yowl, the battle halted. Fighting pairs were now separated and each collecting the fallen, some even helping the other lift a dead rival.
Hound Bite hissed under his breath as he watched a young cat help Stoat to his paws, aiding the tomcat to his paws. The tabby grumbled to himself, before his eyes landed on a horrifying scene. Black Claws. The colorpoint was carrying a limp, white body in his jaws.
“Get away from her!” snarled Hound Bite, snapping at the advisor’s paws. Black Claws promptly backed away, though his eyes were unfriendly and silted.
“Last time I checked, the TerraHearts won this battle,” sneered Black Claws. Hound Bite bristled his short fur, lowering his head and standing over his mate’s cold body protectively. “Do well to remember your place, knight.” With that the higher-ranking tom went off, black tail snaking behind him as he went to oversee his own clanmates’ affairs. Hound Bite looked down at Snow Step’s body, staring in terror at the carnage before him.
It was twisted and broken in an awful way, her once long and elegant neck was now bent backward at an awkward angle. Her snowy-white fur was brown with blood and crimson around a neck wound which still ran thick with blood. Snow Step’s eyes…her eyes, what had been so lively and bright before were now dark and lifeless, what had been blue gems were now a cloudy mix of red and gray.
Hound Bite didn’t dare question how they killed her…the neck wound and her shredded ears reminded him of the argument they had before.
“Don’t go, TerraHearts are mercilessly.” He had told her, paw moving swiftly over hers and tail lashing as he tried to warn her.
“I’ll be fine. Bet none of them have fought a cat like me before!” She had signed back, a chuckle vibrating her chest. “I promise, I will return to camp without a scratch on my coat!”
Hound Bite bit back tears, ignoring the wail that threatened to overrun him. He took her scruff gently in his mouth and gingerly began carrying her back to camp. His wounds were forgotten as he numbly walked alongside his clanmates, stealing glances at the few who carried the others teary-eyed.
The mighty warrior looked back, his eyes cold and hard as he glared at the TerraHearts. Someday…they would regret the day they took Snow Step away from him.
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Post by ! Wisp ! on Aug 3, 2023 19:58:00 GMT -5
(I saw this in the shoutbox, and it looks super cool. I'm really interested in where you take this. Also, dw, I also broke Warriors w/ my Beyond the Plane AU. Anyway, here's my OC's submission/sign up. I would do more than one, but I'm not sure if I can.) Owner: ! Wisp ! Name: Dust Age: 1 y/o Residence: Galeseekers Rank (in Kinship): Squire Job: (Yes or No): Yes Backstory (opt): N/A Extra Info (opt): N/A Preferred death (opt): None, literally do whatever you want. Appearance: Brown and white tabby tom with amber eyes & a fluffy tail Personality: Adventurous, Over-Confident, Insensitive, Stubborn
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2023 7:06:54 GMT -5
Accepted! This is super cool, and feel free to do more! You are encouarged to make more, since no-one else is signing up at the moment, feel free to make one in each Kinship (I've rewritten this so many times now.)
It makes me smile knowing other people made characters for this! Would you like to be on a pinglist when important things come out, Kinship character lists, updates, rule changes, etc? Random Sneak Peak/Fact: Dustpaw and Ravenpaw are novices, and brothers! Also my brain can't comprehend siblings not having similar-themed names so They have been renamed Grackle and Raven! Along with the many changes to their family tree, Hound Claw and Golden Flower are their parents with Snowpaw being a novice alongside themed name Goose. (I don't know if this is a spoiler, but I recently made this change and I LOVE it. It has nothing to do with plot, just family trees!)I've read Beyond the Plane it is well-written and an interesting concept!
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Omnisexual
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I need to finish An Isolated Clan ahhhhh
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Post by ᦓρ꠸ᥴꫀᠻꪖꪀᧁ on Aug 4, 2023 8:20:29 GMT -5
This looks so cool! Owner: ᦓρ꠸ᥴꫀᠻꪖꪀᧁ Name: Blossom Age: 8 moons Residence: Rainsong Rank (in Kinship): Novice Job: (Yes or No): No Backstory (opt): Found as an abandoned kit Extra Info (opt): N/A Preferred death (opt): Just something brutal lol Appearance: Fluffy white she-cat with amber eyes Personality: Cheerful, overly confident, stubborn Owner: ᦓρ꠸ᥴꫀᠻꪖꪀᧁ Name: Crow Wing Age: 5 y/o Residence: Galeseekers Rank (in Kinship): Knight Job: (Yes or No): Yes Backstory (opt): N/A Extra Info (opt): N/A Preferred death (opt): N/A Appearance: Large black tom with ear tufts and blue eyes Personality: Ambitious, easily irritated, humble
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Post by ! Wisp ! on Aug 4, 2023 8:30:58 GMT -5
Accepted! This is super cool, and feel free to do more! You are encouarged to make more, since no-one else is signing up at the moment, feel free to make one in each Kinship (I've rewritten this so many times now.)
It makes me smile knowing other people made characters for this! Would you like to be on a pinglist when important things come out, Kinship character lists, updates, rule changes, etc? Random Sneak Peak/Fact: Dustpaw and Ravenpaw are novices, and brothers! Also my brain can't comprehend siblings not having similar-themed names so They have been renamed Grackle and Raven! Along with the many changes to their family tree, Hound Claw and Golden Flower are their parents with Snowpaw being a novice alongside themed name Goose. (I don't know if this is a spoiler, but I recently made this change and I LOVE it. It has nothing to do with plot, just family trees!)I've read Beyond the Plane it is well-written and an interesting concept!Yes, I wouldn’t mind being on the ping list. I’m busy at the moment, so I’ll submit more characters later on.
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I need to finish An Isolated Clan ahhhhh
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Post by ᦓρ꠸ᥴꫀᠻꪖꪀᧁ on Aug 4, 2023 8:33:35 GMT -5
Accepted! This is super cool, and feel free to do more! You are encouarged to make more, since no-one else is signing up at the moment, feel free to make one in each Kinship (I've rewritten this so many times now.)
It makes me smile knowing other people made characters for this! Would you like to be on a pinglist when important things come out, Kinship character lists, updates, rule changes, etc? Random Sneak Peak/Fact: Dustpaw and Ravenpaw are novices, and brothers! Also my brain can't comprehend siblings not having similar-themed names so They have been renamed Grackle and Raven! Along with the many changes to their family tree, Hound Claw and Golden Flower are their parents with Snowpaw being a novice alongside themed name Goose. (I don't know if this is a spoiler, but I recently made this change and I LOVE it. It has nothing to do with plot, just family trees!)I've read Beyond the Plane it is well-written and an interesting concept!Could I also be a part of the ping list if you wouldn’t mind? Thanks!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2023 8:36:29 GMT -5
! Wisp !ᦓρ꠸ᥴꫀᠻꪖꪀᧁ Thanks, I'll add you both! Edit: You've been pinged to Pinglist Kinship Important Edit: I fixed it now, but I forgot the appearance and personality in the sign-up sheet. I'm so sorry for this mistake, could I ask for your cats' appearance and personality? So sorry!
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Post by ! Wisp ! on Aug 4, 2023 10:00:02 GMT -5
Updated it.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2023 14:02:41 GMT -5
Thank you so much! Random Fact: Weasel (Runningwind) , Stoat (Longtail) , and Mouse (Mousefur) are siblings, originally Sand (Sandstorm), Stoat, and Mouse were going to be siblings with Weasel (Run) as the father. Family Tree and Naming Fact
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2023 7:21:29 GMT -5
Aw thank you!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2023 8:31:38 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by Darkwillow on Aug 8, 2023 9:54:15 GMT -5
Owner: DarkwillowName: Bat Fang Age: 4 years Appearance: A small midnight black tom with dark yellow eyes and a stumpy tail. He has protruding fangs. Personality: Bat Fang tends to be a lone wolf and is quite stubborn when he knows that his way is the right way. Despite his loner status, he cares deeply for the cats in his Kinship. He is insecure about his size but makes up for it with his fierce claws and teeth. Residence: Rain Song Rank (in Kinship): Knight Job: Yes Backstory (opt): N/A Extra Info (opt): N/A Prefurred death (opt): Drowning
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2023 10:46:53 GMT -5
Accepted, he seems super cool! I read 'drowning' and thought Whiteclaw's death replacement ? Thank you very much!
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Post by Darkwillow on Aug 8, 2023 11:04:10 GMT -5
Accepted, he seems super cool! I read 'drowning' and thought Whiteclaw's death replacement ? Thank you very much! LOL ;-;
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Post by valleylight on Aug 10, 2023 11:08:48 GMT -5
I really enjoyed your Prologue— the way you’ve adapted your lore and world-building to the story is awesome! The new characters and the motivation change for Hound Claw are very interesting— he definitely feels like a more sympathetic character out of the gate. I also liked the detail of him and Snow Step signing with their paws and tails before the battle. Excited to see what comes next!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2023 12:07:28 GMT -5
Thank you, I'm still trying to make a conlang for the Kinships and some sign language for deaf cats! Fun Fact: Snow Step and the other two fallen were created on the spot
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