tallstar x jake (feel free to rate as a post to the thread)
May 13, 2023 9:40:39 GMT -5
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Post by {Azure} on May 13, 2023 9:40:39 GMT -5
awfully written, but i lost a bet so here you go
JAKE POV:
As the sun shines through Jake's window gently waking him up, he walks over to the sound of pellets rattling in his bowl. As he eats, he thinks of his life compared to that of a forest cat. “Hey Jake!”. He turns around and sees his brother Ferris. “Hey Ferris, how’s life with the new housefolk?” asks jake. “Oh it's fine” responds ferris “they’re really nice and-” “I’m going” says jake. “What? Where?” “to the forest” says Jake “and see how the forest cats live. “No!” ferris says, “You'll die out there!”. But Jake was already off yelling: “I'll be back at sunhigh!”
TALLSTAR POV:
As Tallstar walked out of his den, He took a look around. what's wrong tallStar asked mudclaw, oh nothing said tallstar. it's just that as I look around I see everyone with mates, but none of the she-cats in windClan sparked my interest. Oh tallstar said mudclaw, you’ll find her eventually. "I'll be back", said tallstar. Take care of the camp while I'm gone. and he was off .
NO ONE’S POV:
As tallstar and jake ran through the forest they were unaware that one headbutt would change their lives forever
Jake and tallstar: ow!!
Tallstar: what the-
Jake: Who are you?
Tallstar: I'm the leader of windclan, and what are you doing on my territory?
Jake: What's windclan?
Tallstar: what do you- oh you’re a kittypet
-A bit of explaining about clan life later–
Jake: So you live, hunt and fight together?
Tallstar: yep!
Jake: That sounds awesome!
Tallstar: it is
Jake: Well, I need to get back to my housefolk now. Same time, same place tomorrow?
Tallstar: sure, i’d like that
Jake: see you tomorrow then.
At windclan -
Tallstar’s mind: man, that kittypet was adora- wait WHAT AM I THINKING? I can’t fall in love with a kittypet! Just don’t think about his beautiful green eyes, or flame ginger pelt or- I’M DOING IT AGAIN.
At jake’s house-
Jake’s mind: NO NO NO NO I’M FALLING IN LOVE WITH A TOM! WHYYYY? WHY IS HE SO CUTE??? No, I can't and I don't love a tom and i never will!!
The next day-
Tallstar: so where do you live
Jake: in twolegplace
Tallstar: Why were you outside yesterday?
Jake: i got a sudden urge to explore
Tallstar: I'm glad you did, cutie.
Jake: huh?
Tallstar: n-nothing!
Jake’s mind: did i just imagine that?!
Tallstar’s mind: did i just SAY that?!
Jake: well it’s getting late so goodbye
Tallstar:goodbye!
Tallstar and Jake's mind: what IS GOING ON WITH ME?!
-the next day-
Tallstar: So your two legs are leaving?
Jake: only for a while
Tallstar: well come to windclan while they’re gone!
Jake: bu-
Tallstar:oh come on, it’ll be fun!
Jake: fine.
-at windclan-
Tallstar:i’ll show you around
Jake: ok!
Tallstar:over there is the warrior’s den, medicine cat den, and elders den. Over there i-
Jake: What's up there?
Tallstar: that’s the highest spot in windclan, the end of the moor
Jake: Can we go there?
Tallstar:sure
Jake: wow what a view!
Narrator: jake’s tail subconsciously wrapped around tallstar’s, he smiled and wrapped his tail around jake’s
Mudclaw: tallstar?
Narrator: tallstar unwrapped his tail from jake’s
Tallstar: What?
Mudclaw: the patrols are ready
Tallstar: thanks
Narrator: jake tried to wrap his tail around tallstar’s again but tallstar pulled away this time
Tallstar: i’ll be right back
Jake: oh, ok… i’ll be in your den
-at tallstar’s den-
Tallstar: So what's wrong?
Jake: nothing
Tallstar:i know you jake, you’re lying
Jake: well i-
Tallstar: i know what you’re trying to do, but it can’t happen
Jake: Why not?
Narrator: jake had forgotten the denial about his love for the windclan tom
Jake: We were having a moment before that cat ruined it.
Tallstar: two toms can’t be mates
Jake: Why not?!
Tallstar: because-
Narrator: but he couldn’t think of anything
Jake: i see now what my place in your heart is
Tallstar: wai-
Jake: goodbye tallstar, i’m going home
-an hour later-
Tallstar: hey…
Jake: What are you doing here?
Tallstar: i came to-
Jake: don’t say anything, I see how much you care about me now.
Tallstar: *sigh*
Jake: what are y-
Narrator: jake was interrupted by tallstar tackling him
Jake: tallstar what th-
Narrator: but this time he was interrupted by tallstar kissing him
Tallstar: that’s how much i care about you, and don’t you forget it
Jake: wh-
Narrator: but tallstar already left.
-one moon later-
Narrator: lots of things happened after that, tallstar left windclan and relinquished leadership to onewhisker, now onestar. He became mates with Jake and apologized for everything that happened.
it's cringe i know but it's here anyway
also please share your opinions
JAKE POV:
As the sun shines through Jake's window gently waking him up, he walks over to the sound of pellets rattling in his bowl. As he eats, he thinks of his life compared to that of a forest cat. “Hey Jake!”. He turns around and sees his brother Ferris. “Hey Ferris, how’s life with the new housefolk?” asks jake. “Oh it's fine” responds ferris “they’re really nice and-” “I’m going” says jake. “What? Where?” “to the forest” says Jake “and see how the forest cats live. “No!” ferris says, “You'll die out there!”. But Jake was already off yelling: “I'll be back at sunhigh!”
TALLSTAR POV:
As Tallstar walked out of his den, He took a look around. what's wrong tallStar asked mudclaw, oh nothing said tallstar. it's just that as I look around I see everyone with mates, but none of the she-cats in windClan sparked my interest. Oh tallstar said mudclaw, you’ll find her eventually. "I'll be back", said tallstar. Take care of the camp while I'm gone. and he was off .
NO ONE’S POV:
As tallstar and jake ran through the forest they were unaware that one headbutt would change their lives forever
Jake and tallstar: ow!!
Tallstar: what the-
Jake: Who are you?
Tallstar: I'm the leader of windclan, and what are you doing on my territory?
Jake: What's windclan?
Tallstar: what do you- oh you’re a kittypet
-A bit of explaining about clan life later–
Jake: So you live, hunt and fight together?
Tallstar: yep!
Jake: That sounds awesome!
Tallstar: it is
Jake: Well, I need to get back to my housefolk now. Same time, same place tomorrow?
Tallstar: sure, i’d like that
Jake: see you tomorrow then.
At windclan -
Tallstar’s mind: man, that kittypet was adora- wait WHAT AM I THINKING? I can’t fall in love with a kittypet! Just don’t think about his beautiful green eyes, or flame ginger pelt or- I’M DOING IT AGAIN.
At jake’s house-
Jake’s mind: NO NO NO NO I’M FALLING IN LOVE WITH A TOM! WHYYYY? WHY IS HE SO CUTE??? No, I can't and I don't love a tom and i never will!!
The next day-
Tallstar: so where do you live
Jake: in twolegplace
Tallstar: Why were you outside yesterday?
Jake: i got a sudden urge to explore
Tallstar: I'm glad you did, cutie.
Jake: huh?
Tallstar: n-nothing!
Jake’s mind: did i just imagine that?!
Tallstar’s mind: did i just SAY that?!
Jake: well it’s getting late so goodbye
Tallstar:goodbye!
Tallstar and Jake's mind: what IS GOING ON WITH ME?!
-the next day-
Tallstar: So your two legs are leaving?
Jake: only for a while
Tallstar: well come to windclan while they’re gone!
Jake: bu-
Tallstar:oh come on, it’ll be fun!
Jake: fine.
-at windclan-
Tallstar:i’ll show you around
Jake: ok!
Tallstar:over there is the warrior’s den, medicine cat den, and elders den. Over there i-
Jake: What's up there?
Tallstar: that’s the highest spot in windclan, the end of the moor
Jake: Can we go there?
Tallstar:sure
Jake: wow what a view!
Narrator: jake’s tail subconsciously wrapped around tallstar’s, he smiled and wrapped his tail around jake’s
Mudclaw: tallstar?
Narrator: tallstar unwrapped his tail from jake’s
Tallstar: What?
Mudclaw: the patrols are ready
Tallstar: thanks
Narrator: jake tried to wrap his tail around tallstar’s again but tallstar pulled away this time
Tallstar: i’ll be right back
Jake: oh, ok… i’ll be in your den
-at tallstar’s den-
Tallstar: So what's wrong?
Jake: nothing
Tallstar:i know you jake, you’re lying
Jake: well i-
Tallstar: i know what you’re trying to do, but it can’t happen
Jake: Why not?
Narrator: jake had forgotten the denial about his love for the windclan tom
Jake: We were having a moment before that cat ruined it.
Tallstar: two toms can’t be mates
Jake: Why not?!
Tallstar: because-
Narrator: but he couldn’t think of anything
Jake: i see now what my place in your heart is
Tallstar: wai-
Jake: goodbye tallstar, i’m going home
-an hour later-
Tallstar: hey…
Jake: What are you doing here?
Tallstar: i came to-
Jake: don’t say anything, I see how much you care about me now.
Tallstar: *sigh*
Jake: what are y-
Narrator: jake was interrupted by tallstar tackling him
Jake: tallstar what th-
Narrator: but this time he was interrupted by tallstar kissing him
Tallstar: that’s how much i care about you, and don’t you forget it
Jake: wh-
Narrator: but tallstar already left.
-one moon later-
Narrator: lots of things happened after that, tallstar left windclan and relinquished leadership to onewhisker, now onestar. He became mates with Jake and apologized for everything that happened.
it's cringe i know but it's here anyway
also please share your opinions