raincloud33
victorian novel version of greencough is brain-fever
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Post by raincloud33 on Feb 7, 2022 20:08:23 GMT -5
what would it be and why? This can be things like saving characters, or killing characters, or having someone bad, or good, or an entire series not happening, or a single book not happening - so on.
Personally I would minimize the StarClan and Darkforest influence on the series; no fading souls, no elaborate views of the afterlife, leave it mysterious. Not sure what I'd want most for second.
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Post by epicstyle on Feb 7, 2022 23:23:08 GMT -5
Keep Feathertail alive so that RiverClan would stay relevant past arc 2. This one could be swapped out for keeping Stormfur in RiverClan too, although ever since ASIR came out I have grown very fond of Feathertail and I think it would be cool if she lived. Plus with either of their bloodlines continuing we would have protagonists for the modern arcs since the trend seems to be for them to be related to older characters.
Keep Darktail alive past Shattered Sky. He had a similar presence to Tigerstar I and could have rivalled him as a villain, but he was killed off too soon IMO and the second half of AVOS suffered greatly as a result.
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Post by kells on Feb 8, 2022 0:05:37 GMT -5
The furry/heavy fantasy vibes the series has been donning since TNP
Remove ASC, TBC and AvoS
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Post by Midnightcacoon loves Sunbeam on Feb 8, 2022 0:58:46 GMT -5
1. Either remove or change the tribe
2. Let Darktail live for longer
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Feb 8, 2022 0:59:56 GMT -5
Keep StarClan and the Dark Forest mysterious. I hate how they are written now rip.
Make background characters more relevant. Along with better established relationships with the main protags and their Clanmates.
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Post by whiteflight on Feb 8, 2022 11:23:59 GMT -5
Not make the new books center around Squrrielflight.
Keep Darktail alive until book 6. I didn't read the series but he sounded like a real threat to the clans but hearing how they just killed him off half ways through the series made him sound like a weak cat.
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Post by dreamingof on Feb 8, 2022 11:34:47 GMT -5
Change how Briarlight died so it isn't implied that she spent her last day alive feeling like a burden. In my opinion, I feel like it's disrespectful to Vicky and the vision she had for the character.
Remove the StarClan trial for Leafpool and Squirrelflight or make it a dream bornt of guilt while she is unconscious. It doesn't sit right with me that Squirrelflight was lied to by StarClan to take the kits and it is later used against her without the narrative acknowledging that Yellowfang and Feathertail took part.
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Post by *•.¸♡𝘥𝘢𝘸𝘯𝘳𝘰𝘴𝘦♡¸.•* on Feb 8, 2022 12:46:45 GMT -5
1. Make Hollyleaf the fourth cat instead of Firestar
2. Make a neutral land in between StarClan and the Dark Forest for cats like Juniperclaw and Frecklewish
Another thing that I'm not putting on the list because it's not that urgent for me but remove/further explain fading
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Post by Katanaheart on Feb 8, 2022 13:44:47 GMT -5
1. Make Darktail the son of Blackstar. 2. Have Shadowsight remain dead instead of being brought back to life. A dead ghostly protagonist that later goes onto StarClan would have been nice.
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raincloud33
victorian novel version of greencough is brain-fever
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Post by raincloud33 on Feb 8, 2022 14:38:03 GMT -5
Onestar not becoming leader/unfriending Firestar cuz Onewhisker and his friendship w Firestar rocked I keep imaging them on facebook unfriending c': I do agree though, somewhat. It has been very long since I read those books, but I remember I liked their friendship. At the same time I did like the potential for plot the falling out had - but I'm not sure I like the direction it took.
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Post by 𝐛𝐥𝟒𝐜𝐤𝐬𝐨𝐥 on Feb 8, 2022 16:09:41 GMT -5
1. Making Violetshine Darktail's daughter. 2. Tigerheart not becoming leader.
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Bisexual
featherfire
Lurking in the shadows, Hollywood superstar Shia LaBeouf
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Post by featherfire on Feb 8, 2022 16:53:06 GMT -5
1. Rock, bring back Rock and just give us more Rock. I crave more Rock. What's up with the nakey blind man?? 2. Longtail having been made deputy before the whole rabbit thing. Give my boy more of the spotlight, he deserved it.
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Post by Night Echos on Feb 8, 2022 17:55:52 GMT -5
1. make breaking the warriors code (or at least the more serious acts (things like chasing prey across the border and whatever are fine as is)) a rarer occasion. I feel like they've made it so common for cats to engage in "forbidden love", for medicine cats to have to kits, for the protagonists to disobey leaders orders, etc. to the point where that sort of subplot has become diluted. Breaking the code no longer feels like a big deal or that it matters at all. I always found the strict culture of warriors portrayed in the earlier books to be fascinating; it lead to a lot of moral dilemmas. But we've had so many cats entire storyline revolve around breaking the code that its just not interesting anymore.
2. Give us more pure morally grey characters. Juniperclaw and Needletail, for example were really interesting characters, but they each had that cliche "die saving a life to show your true character" moment. Clear Sky is the only character I can think of who, after he stopped being a villain, remained pretty morally ambiguous throughout his entire life.
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Asexual
#07B04C
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Ṣanɗypaw™
The Shiny User
🎵Guess that's just the way it goes, easy come, easy go🎵
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on Feb 8, 2022 18:21:51 GMT -5
1. Not have so many of Ferncloud and Dustpelt's kits die. 2. Keep the Clan populations and character development at PoT levels. I liked that arc a lot for that.
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