I'm back at it with the evil AUS
Jan 28, 2022 16:14:34 GMT -5
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Post by Cheetahstar on Jan 28, 2022 16:14:34 GMT -5
Listening to Hayloft II by mother mother and it made me think of an au
if you wanna listen while reading
Evil Petalkit
So the plot is
Mapleshade, Larchkit, and Patchkit still drown however as riverclan takes the queen and the three kits to camp, thinking them all dead. Petalkit starts to weakly cough up water. This was just when Appledusk was about to lie about not knowing them (why would he say the truth when they were all dead?)
He can't turn Petalkit away as much as it pains him. Reedshine is still hurt but forgives him much like the book.
Petalkit is taken in reluctantly and raised but is treated like trash.... Reedhsine gives birth and Petalkit gets to see just how much more favoured they are compared to her. Two clans now have rejected her.
Her dad, last kin, is awkward around her and once his new kits arrives, actively avoids her.
Eventually Petalkit is made a paw, and then Petaldawn. She had requested shade but was denied and questioned why she would want the suffix of a thunderclan traitor. She was given dawn instead to try and link her to Appledusk. She hates it.
Eventually she takes her half sibling Shypaw on a patrol during winter. While on the river the ice breaks and Shypaw falls through, being swept away and unable to be rescued despite Petaldawns best attempt.
She is blamed and Appledusk in his grief even says she did it deliberately just to hurt him.
This sticks with her to the point..and eventually this as well as the mistreatment of her from the clans causes her to snap.
She later drowns Peachfrost (renamed from Applefrost) and feels delight in seeing Appledusk in grief.
Shes satisfied until she learns Reedshine is expecting her second litter.
Shes satisfied until she learns Reedshine is expecting her second litter.
When the kit is born, she steals it in the middle of night... leaving behind a clump of fur for Reedshine to find and a rock near the gorge to send a message.
Its recived and Reedshine wakes up after going to pull her kit closer only to see it missing. She fears she may be too late and rushes off. Appledusk wakes up not too late after. Sees the same message and sees his mate and kits gone. He follows. When he gets there he sees Reedshine cornered against the ledge. The kit behind Petaldawn (alive or dead, idk yet how dark this au should be)
Once Petaldawn sees Appledusk she swipes at Reedshines face, causing the queen to stumble back and fall. Appledusk yowls and runs to where she fell but is obviously too late.
Petaldawn taunts him and he turns to attack.
The two fight and Petaldawn is fatally wounded across the neck. Appledusk turns to run at this point but after a few leaps hes tackled from behind by the she-cat and his head is slammed against a rock HARD.
His vision is blurring and he knows this is it. Petaldawn gives a toothy smile before coughing up blood, stumbling on her paws.
His vision is blurring and he knows this is it. Petaldawn gives a toothy smile before coughing up blood, stumbling on her paws.
Appledusk sees Mapleshades ghostly figure (starclan maybe? or ghost, idk) press herself against her daughter. Shes saying something but he cant make it out.
Petaldawn collapses and Appledusk dies. For a moment each body has spirits beside them. Shypaw, Peachfrost, and Reedshine (and maybe that kit) by his and Mapleshade, Patchkit and Larchkit by Petaldawns.
Their two bodies remain there until a search party finds them
Their two bodies remain there until a search party finds them
NOTES
-I kinda like the idea that at one point Petaldawn had kits to try and fit in the clan more. It doesnt work and she remains distant from said kits. Maybe Crookedstar is a from this bloodline instead of Reedshines? Petaldawns motive could be wanting all of Appledusk bloodline gone, even if its her own...?