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Post by Midnightcacoon loves Sunbeam on Jan 5, 2022 11:40:36 GMT -5
Who was your first main warrior cat oc?
Mine was Spottedwing, she was a beautiful tan colored she-cat with white dapples and light green eyes. Spottedwing had two cat's who loved her named Redfur and some other cat I forget the name of. Her mother was Starryecho, and she had a sister named Milkkit(Milkfur). She also had 3 other foster siblings named Cedarkit(Cedardrift), Driftingkit(Driftingshadow), and Skykit(Skymist). She was a warrior of FeatherClan, and was in a prophecy that I never wrote.
Her original story was that she had a forbidden romance with some rouge, but I only had that as her backstory for like a month. I mainly just roleplayed with her on WC roblox games(Not Warrior cats Unlimited)
Her name is a combination of Spottedleaf and Dovewing's names because they were the prettiest cats I knew.
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Post by *β’.ΒΈβ‘π₯π’πΈπ―π³π°π΄π¦β‘ΒΈ.β’* on Jan 5, 2022 11:43:25 GMT -5
Breezeheart (No I didn't know that was a canon name), a grayish-white she-cat and the biggest Mary-Sue ever
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Post by Midnightcacoon loves Sunbeam on Jan 5, 2022 11:46:41 GMT -5
*β’.ΒΈβ‘π₯π’πΈπ―π³π°π΄π¦β‘ΒΈ.β’* Spottedwing was a Mary-sue too in my first writing of her. In my allegiances for her original clan she got paragraphs for her description while everyone else got a sentence or two. She also was apparently better than a warrior at tracking and fighting just as new apprentice.
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Post by *β’.ΒΈβ‘π₯π’πΈπ―π³π°π΄π¦β‘ΒΈ.β’* on Jan 5, 2022 11:48:55 GMT -5
*β’.ΒΈβ‘π₯π’πΈπ―π³π°π΄π¦β‘ΒΈ.β’* Spottedwing was a Mary-sue too in my first writing of her. In my allegiances for her original clan she got paragraphs for her description while everyone else got a sentence or two. She also was apparently better than a warrior at tracking and fighting just as new apprentice. For a while I just never gave my OCs flaws and made them really good at everything. And yeah Breezeheart became leader of ThunderClan later on.
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Post by ππ¬π―π―π’π© on Jan 5, 2022 12:56:19 GMT -5
My first ever warriors OC was Ambertail (Gray with a black ear andβ¦an amber tail) but she never actually went any further than this
My first main OC was probably I think Sunpelt? The story was vaguely about her being in a Half Clan relationship with a cat called Larkfall, but then she died?β
I rediscovered some of the ancient writing I did on her kits and it wasβ¦a wild trip
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Post by πdappleπ (formerly freckle) on Jan 5, 2022 13:16:14 GMT -5
My oc was called Moose. A loner.
He was a red tom with pale spots on his back, had an attitude problem, had indigo eyes and was a munchkinππ
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Post by π±ππππππππππ on Jan 5, 2022 13:56:59 GMT -5
Most of my early OCs were Mary Sues or Gary Stus but my very first one was the biggest of them all. Her name was Goldenheart but I have since then rewritten her personality and story to make her less of a perfect character who previously was amazing at what ever she put her mind to (hunting, fighting, solving problems and getting everything she ever wanted because everyone just loved her for some reason).
Original: Goldenheart was a bright golden tabby she cat with a fluffy pelt and tail as well as golden eyes. She was the daughter of her Clan's leader Blazestar and her mother was their Clan's healer Lightflower. Her mate Silverclaw was the deputy and named her as his successor after he became leader himself by secretly murdering Blazestar. Goldenheart later finds out about this and kills him thus becoming leader herself. Her mother then announces that Goldenheart is carrying Silverclaw's kits. The End.
Rewritten: Goldenheart is still a bright golden tabby she cat with a fluffy pelt and tail but now has amber eyes. She is not a forestborn cat but instead began her life as a kittypet named Goldy. One day, a Clan cat stumbles upon her during one of her trips to explore the forest near her Twoleg den and after a few conversations and assessment of her current skills and willingness to learn about living like a wild cat, invites her to join the Clan. The End for now but I might rewrite her story yet again since it sounds a lot like the beginning of Firestar's story.
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Post by π΅πππππππππ on Jan 5, 2022 20:55:44 GMT -5
My first warriors oc was Flamestar. Flamestar is an orange tabby tom. His parents are called Spottedsomething and Smokeclaw and he has a sister named Ivypaw (Who disappears halfway through the story ). Right off the bat, Spottedsomething is killed in a battle while Flamestar is still a kit. He is then apprenticed to Smokeclaw, who is very strict with Flamepaw. The other two apprentices his age are Lilypaw and Frostpaw. Lilypaw has a crush on Flamepaw, but Flamepaw prefers to spend time with Frostpaw. Flamepaw becomes a warrior really early and immediately gets to mentor Frostpaw because her mentor died? Then rogues light fire to the camp, Lilypaw pretends to be hurt so Flameclaw will help her, but he totally ignores her and helps Frostpaw. Then Frostpaw and Lilypaw become warriors; Frostwhatever and Lilyheart. Frostwhatever and Flameclaw become mates and Lilyheart is jealous and runs away. I think the last part of the story I had was Lilyheart plotting to steal their kits. (And he eventually became leader)
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2022 21:02:18 GMT -5
My first OC was Redstar, a dark ginger she-cat, leader of CloudClan. I created 4 OC clans starting in 2010, and have updated their allegiances in real-time (meaning the cats age one year every year) ever since. Hundreds (maybe even thousands) of OCs later, I now have hundreds of word documents keeping track of the allegiances, kin, personalities, ages, etc. I always thought I would grow out of that hobby, but I havent!
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Post by Saint Ambrosef on Jan 5, 2022 21:50:24 GMT -5
Oh goodness. My first OC was Shadeforest and she was definitely a scary-sue. But I can at least say her story was somewhat creative/original?
Shadeforest had long, jet-black fur and pale gray eyes, long claws, a large build, and heavily battle scarred. Long story short, she had an alter-ego called "the Shadowslayer" that was basically a violent murderer she could only somewhat control. It was often (but not always) triggered by battle, perceived threats, or certain words. It was a bit unpredictable. When under its influence, she didn't notice pain or wounds. IIRC the bloodthirsty alter ego was created by the trauma of her family's murder or something. This alternate persona was not a separate personality, but sorta like a disassociation for which Shadeforest remained conscience and present. The "normal" Shadeforest was fairly cold, calculating, and ruthless, although not without strong personal morals. So the "Shadowslayer" persona was like a more extreme version of herself stripped of those more rational principles that checked her wilder side. Her primary skills were stealth and strategy, which made her a dangerous fighter. As time goes on she learns to control the persona better, although never entirely.
So like I said, scary-sue.
IIRC, I roleplayed her as an anti-hero/villain counter to a more heroic character (Slashfang, I think?), who slowly figures out about her alter ego. Basically a long murder mystery. I even drew a fake Warriors book cover about the plot titled "Secrets of the Shadowslayer", I bet I still have it somewhere. And at some point I tried to make an RPG game about it.
EDIT: Forgot to mention that she was leader (and founder) of her clan, which operated under slightly different rules and codes than the canon book clans. I think she also had a brother but I can't remember his name. It's in here somewhere -- started with a W. But he was a normal dude.
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Post by ααͺα α½ αΎf fαͺαα αΎms γβ on Jan 5, 2022 22:01:09 GMT -5
first one i remember is silverfeather, the mary sue medicine cat who had 3 love interests and survived a wolf pack attack (i dont like her since i made her a mary sue for a roleplay site i was apart of years ago lol)
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