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Post by Rainfire on Dec 29, 2021 9:55:04 GMT -5
What scenes do you think would be cool/interesting to see from another particular character's POV?
(e.g. The fire scene but from Ashfur's POV, the scene where Hollyleaf reveals the secret but from Leafpool's POV, etc.)
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uh.. I really like sorreltail
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Post by 𝔖𝔬𝔯𝔯𝔢𝔩 on Dec 29, 2021 13:50:37 GMT -5
I don’t know if this counts but I would’ve liked to see an Ashfur POV thats set before the Foxtrap scene
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Post by 𝕱𝖑𝖚𝖙𝖙𝖊𝖗𝖋𝖆𝖑𝖑 on Dec 29, 2021 14:09:12 GMT -5
Lionheart's PoV during the ShadowClan battle so we find out who actually killed him.
Spottedleaf's PoV as she defends the LionFrost kits and gets murdered by Clawface.
Brindleface's PoV when Tigerstar attacks and kills her to use as dog bait.
Darkstripe's PoV as he decides to poison Sorrelkit leading up to his exile from TC.
Tigerstar's PoV during his iconic death scene.
Hawkfrost's PoV on the entire foxtrap situation including his death and becoming a DF cat.
Ashfur's PoV during the famous fire scene.
Nightcloud's PoV about Hollyleaf's revelation at that fateful Gathering.
Breezepelt's PoV when he attacked Jayfeather and Poppyfrost at the Moonpool.
Dovewing's PoV on her last visit to ThunderClan before joining ShadowClan to be with her mate and kits.
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Post by tema on Dec 29, 2021 14:29:13 GMT -5
I want to see pretty much anythjng from Brokenpaw/tail/star's PoV. tigerstar's death from his own pov would make for a great scary short story to release around halloween. i'm curious what it was tigerstar saw between each death as he lost his lives. Getting some Golden Wind vibes here.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2021 15:10:25 GMT -5
hawkfrost’s pov during his final fight with brambleclaw would be really fun
i think swiftpaw’s pov for his death could be a really good short story
similar to how firestar got a final pov when he died in the great battle, i think hollyleaf should’ve had one too
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Post by Midnightcacoon loves Sunbeam on Dec 29, 2021 16:04:50 GMT -5
A Snowtuft perspective for any chapter of 1-5 of A Light in the Mist would've been cool
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Post by tema on Dec 29, 2021 18:06:53 GMT -5
I'd also like to see the Dark Forest trainee recruitment for the Great Battle from Blossomfall/Thornclaw's perspective. Especially the latter.
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on Dec 29, 2021 18:50:40 GMT -5
Stemleaf's POV while he was fighting his final battle would be cool.
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Post by Skypaw13 on Dec 29, 2021 20:38:48 GMT -5
similar to how firestar got a final pov when he died in the great battle I thought Firestar's death was from Dovewing's POV.
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Post by Skypaw13 on Dec 29, 2021 20:45:50 GMT -5
It honestly baffles me to this day why Flametail's death wasn't from Jayfeather's POV. Like, I remember literally being a 9 year old kid reading that scene and being like... "if Jayfeather is HERE than why is Flametail narrating?" It makes no sense and actively makes the book and the entire ARC about 10x worse just from that one stupid scene. I hate it.
Also, I think Jayfeather would have been a better choice for the Gathering reveal scene, since he was the closest of the POVs to Leafpool emotionally (and physically! he was sitting right next to her). He also has his empath ability, so he could more efficiently portray the shock and hurt that the scene is supposed to provide, by basically getting into every character's head.
Jayfeather is like the ultimate POV because he can contain other characters' POVs, lol
Those are examples I wish were in the books. As far as just things I'd like to see (rather than things I wished were changed), I think Leafpool during her trial would be interesting.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2021 21:36:34 GMT -5
similar to how firestar got a final pov when he died in the great battle I thought Firestar's death was from Dovewing's POV. he had a final chapter right before it switched iirc
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Dec 29, 2021 21:47:29 GMT -5
Bramblestar PoV during any of the time he's outside his Body in TBC. Bluestar PoV when she sacrificed herself to kill the Pack Leader. Bramblestar got one I believe in TST prologue! c: Also Bluestar got that exact POV in the prologue of her SE ^^
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Post by Cloudstorm on Dec 29, 2021 22:20:19 GMT -5
Bramblestar PoV during any of the time he's outside his Body in TBC. Bluestar PoV when she sacrificed herself to kill the Pack Leader. Bramblestar got one I believe in TST prologue! c: Also Bluestar got that exact POV in the prologue of her SE ^^ I just checked and your right. Though I still do wish that both Ashfur and Bramblestar had POV’s outside of prologues when everything’s much more dire and heavy. Totally forgot about Bluestar’s PoV in in the prologue of her Super edition though. I need to reread it sometime here.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Dec 29, 2021 22:47:46 GMT -5
Bramblestar got one I believe in TST prologue! c: Also Bluestar got that exact POV in the prologue of her SE ^^ I just checked and your right. Though I still do wish that both Ashfur and Bramblestar had POV’s outside of prologues when everything’s much more dire and heavy. Totally forgot about Bluestar’s PoV in in the prologue of her Super edition though. I need to reread it sometime here. You're good lol. Just thought I'd say something haha
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Post by Skypaw13 on Dec 30, 2021 0:00:52 GMT -5
I thought Firestar's death was from Dovewing's POV. he had a final chapter right before it switched iirc I checked. He does not. The battle starts in Chapter 22 in Dovewing's POV. 23 is Dovewing's, 24 is Lionblaze's, 25 is Ivypool's, 26 is Dovewing's, and Firestar dies in 27 in Dovewing's POV. Though it is worth noting that chapter 26 is moving so quickly and Dovewing thinks so little that it may as well be from no one's POV. It's all action, no thoughts. But is technically Dovewing's.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2021 1:57:45 GMT -5
he had a final chapter right before it switched iirc I checked. He does not. The battle starts in Chapter 22 in Dovewing's POV. 23 is Dovewing's, 24 is Lionblaze's, 25 is Ivypool's, 26 is Dovewing's, and Firestar dies in 27 in Dovewing's POV. Though it is worth noting that chapter 26 is moving so quickly and Dovewing thinks so little that it may as well be from no one's POV. It's all action, no thoughts. But is technically Dovewing's. oh wow! i must’ve misremembered that, thanks!
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Post by thewinterblaze on Dec 30, 2021 17:36:00 GMT -5
Clear Sky's POV for the entirety of the First Battle Ashfur's POV during the fire scene Maybe some random DF cat's POV for the Great Battle
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Post by 🔥Firestar🔥 on Dec 31, 2021 20:19:39 GMT -5
I'm suprised no one has mentioned any of the Mapleshade characters. I would go with a Frecklewish, Reedshine or Appledusk perspective
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Post by *•.¸♡𝘥𝘢𝘸𝘯𝘳𝘰𝘴𝘦♡¸.•* on Dec 31, 2021 22:24:35 GMT -5
A couple of people have mentioned this already, but Tigerstar's POV during his death scene would be really cool! Also Ashfur during the fire scene
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Post by tema on Dec 31, 2021 22:26:07 GMT -5
The more I'm rereading this thread, the more I'm thinking "villain scenes from the villain's PoV."
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 31, 2021 23:22:03 GMT -5
Ashfur during his final death scene in A Light in the Mist. But from his point of view.
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Post by aether on Dec 31, 2021 23:45:05 GMT -5
i think swiftpaw’s pov for his death could be a really good short story Oooh yeah! Or even Brightpaw/heart's perspective before, during, and after would be interesting.
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Post by Featherstar on Jan 1, 2022 0:26:50 GMT -5
How about seeing Raggedstar's death scene from his POV?
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