Leowpard clan planning page

Then we should explain the history of the leaders and elders  coming together and deciding to make a clan or something like that. 

@2dhalfheart forestpaw   Is the joining form good enough?
Same with prey and rules?
Open spots for characters?
I didn't know if how we wanted to do the herbs just say same as books or list them

Oh! I have a really good intro! If you guys don't mind me typing it.

With the prey and such the clan is going to be in the forest type area yes?

wait! Sorry I'm working on the intro! But I just had an idea. What if later when we have our clan. We get another clan to border our own. If not we could make one! This is just a suggestion.

I don't tend to stick with a specific type of book. I'm currently reading Cut and The Mediator Series

I have read non of those well actually some of them I started but never liked

Here's the first draft. I still don't know the roles of each of our cats, so I had to stick to "they", "their", or "them". Need me to fix anything? Or trash the whole thing, just tell me!



The sun had just finished rising over the mountains, frog and bird calls echoed in between the trees, and the sound of a water fall could also be heard far off in the background, and finally, there was a cave by a near by cliff for wolves to watch over their land. It was a perfect place for a clan to grow strong in. You take it all in, before forcing yourself to move on. Suddenly, there's a snap of a small branch in the near by brush. You creep closer, your curiousity getting the best of you. You peek over the brush, only to find nobody there. "H-hello?" You call.

Three cats emerge from the shadows.

One of the the cats step forward, speaking in a serious tone, "who are you?" They ask sharply.

You quickly bow your head, "I'm so sorry! I-" you stammer, squeezing your eyes shut.

You suddenly feel a tail tip on your shoulder, you open your eyes to see another cat standing in front of you, their gaze soft, "come with us. You look lost."

You reluctantly follow them back to their camp. When you enter, you get many astonished and confused stares. The cat, who seemed to be leader, beckons for you to follow them to their den. You follow her, nervously looking around camp. Once inside the den you lay down and wait for the cat to speak again.

"Why have you come?" She asks while eying you.

You ponder in what to say for a bit before you finally speak, deciding the truth will be the best way out of this. "I needed somewhere to stay" you finally say, gaze confident.

The she cats stands, "wait here.." She meows before walking out of the den. She soon comes back with the others from the patrol.

"We have decided you can stay." She says calmly.

You jump up, "really?!"

The cat nods, and turns, "let's introduce you to the clan.


^^ remember. It's only the first draft. That's why it might completely suck.

Feed back? We also need to see which one of our OCs are warriors, a leader, kits, med cat, etc

Okay. How can I spice it up?

I almost said add demon pox lol sorry looking for a quote from the infernal devices.
Instead of the other cats walking up to you you could hide in the shadows and watch them and then you find that there is one beside you and they invite you in

Hmm maybe you could confront them? And they bring you in on the act of courage

How's the intro going. Is there anything I should do?

hi I'm here,what should I help with?