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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 28, 2021 16:13:27 GMT -5
years ago in 2015/2016, i wrote down a short AU fanfic of this happening, and re-visiting what i wrote made me think...what would change?
in the old fic i wrote in a journal, firestar exposes all of ashfur's crimes before the entire clan and exiles him. firestar tells thunderclan that if they ever find ashfur near clan territory, they have permission to harm him and do whatever it takes to chase him far away. make sure he can never come back.
looking back on it, i think firestar's harshness was kinda ooc. i think he would still exile ashfur, after hearing ashfur's confession to working with hawkfrost to try and get firestar killed all those moons ago, but i have a feeling ashfur would become a reccuring villain and might even team up with cats like sol and darktail if he ever ran into them. hollyleaf obviously wouldnt get to kill him since he'd be exiled. do u think one of the cats would leave thunderclan to track ashfur down and kill him out of anger or something wild like that? since ashfur wouldnt be a threat, secret wise, hollyleaf would have no reason to hunt him down.
firestar would let the clans know about ashfur at the next gathering (the one where the secret was originally revealed by hollyleaf), and they'd all be on alert for ashfur if he ever came around one of the other clans to start something.
idk if the secret would still be kept in this AU or not though
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Post by cable on Sept 28, 2021 16:34:30 GMT -5
i think the threats to ashfurs safety would be ooc (given firestar let an attempted kit murderer go simply after exiling) but warning everybody about ashfur is completely in character.
i still think hollyleafs paranoia might degrade her mental state to the point that she'd hunt him down anyways
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 28, 2021 16:37:38 GMT -5
i think the threats to ashfurs safety would be ooc (given firestar let an attempted kit murderer go simply after exiling) but warning everybody about ashfur is completely in character. i still think hollyleafs paranoia might degrade her mental state to the point that she'd hunt him down anyways agreed. my 2015/16 self made firestar a bit ooc in that! it'd be interesting to see hollyleaf sitll go out of her way to hunt him down even if he was exiled. the three would still find out their true parentage, but what about an exiled ashfur? would he be able to put two and two together? "who would squirrelflight risk everything for to protect? obviously her sister" and then he'd remember what the clans forgot, and know leafpool once ran off with crowfeather and then 3 moons later, jay, holly, and lion were born... like if windclan reports they saw ashfur around, hollyleaf would go near windclan land and wait for ashfur to show up and get him there.and if she sitll kills him, no one would be shocked or outraged by it either bc he was already exiled
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on Sept 28, 2021 18:29:06 GMT -5
Firestar would definitely yeet Ashfur out of the Clan. I don't think he'd do something like give him the death penalty or let someone kill him in exilment, however.
I can see someone, probably Hollyleaf, getting this hero complex in mind and trying to track down and kill Ashfur, although I don't know how well that would go.
It could also spark a discussion on whether he should be executed for his crimes (like the murder of Firestar) as some cats in the Clan would probably be all for it. Idk how that would go either though lol.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2021 19:54:46 GMT -5
Exile for sure
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