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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 30, 2021 18:20:12 GMT -5
Perhaps this old, abandoned camp holds some dark memories? Maybe of a former leader who virtually destroyed the Clan with his wickedness, and in order to move on from painful memories and that "haunted place", the Clan set up and moved? Just a thought. Ooooo yes!!!
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StarClan leader
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 18:21:05 GMT -5
Perhaps this old, abandoned camp holds some dark memories? Maybe of a former leader who virtually destroyed the Clan with his wickedness, and in order to move on from painful memories and that "haunted place", the Clan set up and moved? Just a thought. Yeah. What if CinderClan (That's what this Clan is called right?) goes and finds them?
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:22:00 GMT -5
Perhaps this old, abandoned camp holds some dark memories? Maybe of a former leader who virtually destroyed the Clan with his wickedness, and in order to move on from painful memories and that "haunted place", the Clan set up and moved? Just a thought. Ooooo yes!!! And it could act as a forbidden part of their territory.
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Non-binary
#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:22:27 GMT -5
Perhaps this old, abandoned camp holds some dark memories? Maybe of a former leader who virtually destroyed the Clan with his wickedness, and in order to move on from painful memories and that "haunted place", the Clan set up and moved? Just a thought. Yeah. What if CinderClan (That's what this Clan is called right?) goes and finds them? Erm, finds who?
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#04F9B3
StarClan leader
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 18:24:01 GMT -5
Yeah. What if CinderClan (That's what this Clan is called right?) goes and finds them? Erm, finds who? Oh, whoops. My mind was thinking there had been another Clan there before CinderClan.
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:26:04 GMT -5
Erm, finds who? Oh, whoops. My mind was thinking there had been another Clan there before CinderClan. Ohhhh. My mind was thinking that the old camp belonged to CinderClan a few (or many, whatever) generations ago. Totally different wavelengths here! I was going to suggest we end at a compromise with the old camp belonging to a Clan that CinderClan had driven out, but idk, that sounds a little too SkyClan-esque, I guess? Hmmm...
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StarClan leader
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 18:28:45 GMT -5
Oh, whoops. My mind was thinking there had been another Clan there before CinderClan. Ohhhh. My mind was thinking that the old camp belonged to CinderClan a few (or many, whatever) generations ago. Totally different wavelengths here! I was going to suggest we end at a compromise with the old camp belonging to a Clan that CinderClan had driven out, but idk, that sounds a little too SkyClan-esque, I guess? Hmmm... Okay!
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Post by ~Ƈαммι-`ღ´- on Sept 30, 2021 18:30:20 GMT -5
eyyy I'm still here c'x Just stink at planning out individual personalities for my charries
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:31:11 GMT -5
eyyy I'm still here c'x Just stink at planning out individual personalities for my charries Hey, you've got this! I would normally offer help if someone was stuck, but they're your characters, so... good luck!
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#04F9B3
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 18:32:52 GMT -5
eyyy I'm still here c'x Just stink at planning out individual personalities for my charries You got this!
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 30, 2021 18:40:16 GMT -5
Okay do you want to edit him then before I put him up? I might be MIA for a few hours while I do homework. Unless you think his bio/history is too long (it is pretty extensive...), I'm happy with where he is. I just thought that you changed his background story is all.
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#04F9B3
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 18:41:22 GMT -5
I think there should be a lot of trees around the area that they camp in.
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Non-binary
#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:41:48 GMT -5
Unless you think his bio/history is too long (it is pretty extensive...), I'm happy with where he is. I just thought that you changed his background story is all. Well, unless you have any objections (all critique is welcome!), I answered it before by posting this. "I'll go with the final idea I had conceived. At the age of a couple moons or so, a kit wandered away from the camp at night during a heavy storm and was never found again. Two moons later Brittle showed up at the border, and while some cats would be heavily skeptical that it was the same kit (despite his markings being virtually identical), plenty are convinced that the queen's kit had somehow survived and as such was immediately welcomed back into the Clan. Perhaps a long ways down the track Brittlefrost could learn of his origins and have a huge existential crisis, questioning "what" he was."
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Non-binary
#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:45:44 GMT -5
Mother Dark With that being said, I request that you don't put it up yet until I'm 100% sure, sorry. For instance I'll be changing his name before he joins CinderClan, if I go with that storyline. It would be too coincidental for the kit to have gone missing half a moon ago to have been named "Brittle" as well.
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 30, 2021 18:45:45 GMT -5
And it could act as a forbidden part of their territory. I love this aspect! And there is harsh punishments for going there and 'digging up the past'
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 30, 2021 18:47:19 GMT -5
So I don't know if the whole leader thing works unless the haunted camp is the old burned out one We have 2 leaders in the past the founder Lightningstar and the one who saved them from the fires that burned up the territory, Sparkstar. Then there is Hawkstar the power hungry leader than is dstined to be killed by a kit that is born. So he decreed that there were to be no kits born in the clan which means Willowpaw was the last kit born and she's 6 moons. I was thinking one of my loner kits that Hawkstar hopefully lets into the clan after thier mother dies will be the death of him probably unintentionally.
We also still need a med cat before we begin.
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
pfp made by sparkscatter
Pronouns: She/Her, They/Them
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 30, 2021 18:49:41 GMT -5
Hmmmm true that wouldn't work oh well back to the drawing boards
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#F4B548
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Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:51:14 GMT -5
Sorry I'm flipping back and forth, I WILL be changing Brittlefrost's origins, if anything to make things less confusing and to "trim the fat", if you will. I'll let you know and his and Snowflower's profiles have been edited. Note: I copied over Brittlefrost's entire character sheet in case I want to reuse him sometime in the future for something totally unrelated, so all is good there. Edit: I'm currently in debate whether to make Brittlefrost (or Brittlepaw) a scared, timid young apprentice who encounters that rogue tom, accidentally kills him (even if indirectly), and slowly morphs into that non-feeling, murderous fox-heart towards outsiders, or if I should start RPing him when that transformation has long since been completed, and he already has a lot of blood on his paws. Hmm...
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 30, 2021 19:01:49 GMT -5
We could still use a burned up camp as forbidden territory and the abandoned campsite as a camp even if its a temporary one.
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#F4B548
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Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 19:15:27 GMT -5
Mother Dark Both of their profiles have been updated and are ready for launch.
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Pronouns: She/Her, They/Them
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Post by Ember34 on Oct 2, 2021 13:06:49 GMT -5
Mother Dark if you want, I could make the second med cat real quick as a starclan cat. And have it set up to where they died during the night from old age and move cedarsong to being the full med cat. So we could start this up
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Post by Mother Dark on Oct 2, 2021 17:32:42 GMT -5
Mother Dark if you want, I could make the second med cat real quick as a starclan cat. And have it set up to where they died during the night from old age and move cedarsong to being the full med cat. So we could start this up sure. I'll write up a quick description of camp. Should it be an old campsite with a bunch of old cabins or just permanent tents set up?
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
pfp made by sparkscatter
Pronouns: She/Her, They/Them
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Post by Ember34 on Oct 2, 2021 17:40:21 GMT -5
Cabins would be fun!
And I'll write up the starclan cat real quick
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Non-binary
#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Oct 2, 2021 17:49:05 GMT -5
Oooh, here's an idea for another landmark! Instead of another Thunderpath, how about an actively used train track? Mother Dark Do you know the Paint 3D app? I'm pretty sure every Microsoft computer comes with the app, if you use one of those. Perhaps when we're finished mapping out the territory, you could draw out said territory using that program? It doesn't matter if it would be super crude, but it would help with people who are very visual (if you get what I mean), such as myself. Just a thought!
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Asexual
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
pfp made by sparkscatter
Pronouns: She/Her, They/Them
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Post by Ember34 on Oct 2, 2021 17:53:11 GMT -5
Briarleaf. 89 moons at time of death. Briarleaf is a calico she cat with green eyes, with curled ears. SHe had no qualms with being a medicine cat or the rules that came with it, such as no mate or kits, as she never desired to have any.She worked hard to serve her clan well, even when she didn't agree to what the leader did. Such as when Hawkstar put a ban on kits, she was outraged that he was trying to manipulate a prophecy from their ancestors. She attempted to get advice from Starclan on what should be done but unfortunately never got an answer while she was alive. Died in sleep from old age
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Post by Mother Dark on Oct 2, 2021 18:03:42 GMT -5
I could definitely try to use 3d paint. I don't know how well my laptop will run it. If I try to run more than chrome it crashes sometimes. Definitely adding a traintrack should it be called a Lightningpath or something else.
Ember I'm gonna say that Basilfrost was Briarleaf's mentor. He was the second medicine cat in the clan.
If anyone wants to add anything I'm on my laptop now
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
pfp made by sparkscatter
Pronouns: She/Her, They/Them
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Post by Ember34 on Oct 2, 2021 18:04:46 GMT -5
Sound good!
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Non-binary
#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Oct 2, 2021 18:13:00 GMT -5
I could definitely try to use 3d paint. I don't know how well my laptop will run it. If I try to run more than chrome it crashes sometimes. Definitely adding a traintrack should it be called a Lightningpath or something else. Ember I'm gonna say that Basilfrost was Briarleaf's mentor. He was the second medicine cat in the clan. If anyone wants to add anything I'm on my laptop now I used to have that issue with Paint 3D all the time. I don't know if they updated it or something, but I've yet to have it crash in the past year or so. Hopefully it's not your computer and it was the program itself. Is there a Twolegplace nearby? If so, how dense is it? Is it an urban town or a rural town? How large is the Twolegplace? Are there any farms and/or barns nearby? Are there any Thunderpaths that lead to other locations? (Ex. Another Twolegplace, the countryside, to a major highway that leads to a city, etc.) Have we decided on their version of the Moonstone/Moonpool yet? Also, here is a list of Clan terminologies. A train track is called a "Silverpath" and trains are called "Thundersnakes". It's up to you, Dark, if you want to change that! warriors.fandom.com/wiki/Clan_terminology
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Post by Mother Dark on Oct 2, 2021 18:31:02 GMT -5
I like silverpath and thundersnakes.
We could all decide about the twoleg place together. I know we've got Shun's barn on a sheep farm. Living in an abandoned campground means there's obviously more twolegs around but maybe its a rural town. I'm going to save this so everyone can read the history and other stuff I added and see how it sounds.
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Asexual
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Pronouns: She/Her, They/Them
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Post by Ember34 on Oct 2, 2021 18:33:36 GMT -5
Small town maybe, and the camp ground is just a possibility summer camp kind of thing since there's cabins
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