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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 26, 2021 15:36:05 GMT -5
For current apprentices how about Beechflame for Willowpaw and Hawkstar for Heronpaw. I have the elders Turtlepool and Brackenheart open for mentors of the older warriors and Ivy has Frostflower and Foxclaw. Ivy also has Ryesplash who I think is older. I was thinking the territory is probably like the orginal thunderclan territory in the way the trees are. We have the pond, Shun's barn, and Crowley's cabin so far for landmarks. I want to add a tree called the Warrior Oak that warriors make clawmarks on when they first become a warrior. I've used it to replace a silent vigil in other clans. We also need some sort of Moonstone. If none of you can think of anything else, you can always borrow my idea for my pet project Clan and have a sacred tree be in place of their Moonstone/Moonpool. If so, it would have to stand out from the rest. Just a spitball. I would love to hear all of your suggestions though, much like M. Dark!
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 26, 2021 15:38:12 GMT -5
I'll be willing to work out mentors/apprentices with someone
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#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 26, 2021 15:40:22 GMT -5
I don't see Silentsong or Trampleleaf as being mentor material, but I do have some loosely planned character evolution for the latter (no spoilers!), so maybe one day. Also I see Trampleleaf having a crush on a she-cat or two potentially (maybe not right away though) but she would be incredibly doubtful they'd reciprocate.
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 27, 2021 13:33:34 GMT -5
Mother Dark got my characters transferred over to the format
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 28, 2021 11:21:50 GMT -5
Ember do you have Ashenpaw's warrior name? I wanted to put them as mates and the way I have it right now looks weird. Also would you like to include her or the other cat that Iriscry took the name of in the starclan cats? We don't rp them its just for reference.
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Asexual
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 28, 2021 11:26:10 GMT -5
Sure! I choose Ashenheart for ashenpaws warrior name. And for the other cat it was Irispetal
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 28, 2021 11:28:01 GMT -5
For current apprentices how about Beechflame for Willowpaw and Hawkstar for Heronpaw. ~Ƈαммι-`ღ´- Featherstar I have the elders Turtlepool and Brackenheart open for mentors of the older warriors and Ivy has Frostflower and Foxclaw. Ivy also has Ryesplash who I think is older. I was thinking the territory is probably like the orginal thunderclan territory in the way the trees are. We have the pond, Shun's barn, and Crowley's cabin so far for landmarks. I want to add a tree called the Warrior Oak that warriors make clawmarks on when they first become a warrior. I've used it to replace a silent vigil in other clans. We also need some sort of Moonstone. Ok, sounds good.
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 28, 2021 15:49:18 GMT -5
Sure! I choose Ashenheart for ashenpaws warrior name. And for the other cat it was Irispetal Could you also make forms for them. They don't have to be super detailed/. If you look at the bottom of the layouts there are two forms as examples. they are the first leader and first medicine cat
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#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 28, 2021 15:50:44 GMT -5
Sure! I choose Ashenheart for ashenpaws warrior name. And for the other cat it was Irispetal Could you also make forms for them. They don't have to be super detailed/. *Looks at the text walls I gave my characters* *Shuffles off to the side...*
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 28, 2021 16:06:27 GMT -5
Ashenheart- 20 moons at death. A soft cream colored she cat with grey splotches over her fur, one notable on being on her chest in the shape of a heart. She was a gentle and shy she cat. She was friendly to those close with her, and didn't seem to have many enemies.Died during kitting.
Irispetal. 47 moons old at time of death. A black she cat with a white underbelly. She was missing her right eye. Her eye was blue. She was known for being hard working and willing to help out the queens with their kits. Died from from greencough.
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#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 29, 2021 16:54:39 GMT -5
Mother Dark How does your Clan feel about outsiders? (Using the 5 canon Clans as a measuring stick.)
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 29, 2021 22:35:50 GMT -5
Mother Dark How does your Clan feel about outsiders? (Using the 5 canon Clans as a measuring stick.) I feel like in the past they were like thunderclan but maybe now they are more closed off to them. The depends on whether Hawkstar wants to let them into the clan. When he eventually gets killed off for the plot Silverrose would definitely be more wwelcoming of outsiders.
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#F4B548
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Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 29, 2021 22:38:59 GMT -5
Mother Dark How does your Clan feel about outsiders? (Using the 5 canon Clans as a measuring stick.) I feel like in the past they were like thunderclan but maybe now they are more closed off to them. The depends on whether Hawkstar wants to let them into the clan. When he eventually gets killed off for the plot Silverrose would definitely be more wwelcoming of outsiders. Good to know! Would you be opposed if I create one more character who holds a vicious hatred towards outsiders? I've never had the opportunity to explore that type of character before; usually all of mine fit my values (as in they would be suspicious of (initially) but ultimately accepting towards loners/rogues/etc.).
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 29, 2021 22:40:55 GMT -5
I feel like in the past they were like thunderclan but maybe now they are more closed off to them. The depends on whether Hawkstar wants to let them into the clan. When he eventually gets killed off for the plot Silverrose would definitely be more wwelcoming of outsiders. Good to know! Would you be opposed if I create one more character who holds a vicious hatred towards outsiders? I've never had the opportunity to explore that type of character before; usually all of mine fit my values (as in they would be suspicious of (initially) but ultimately accepting towards loners/rogues/etc.). Go for it. Just let me know when you're done tweaking them so I can add them to the layout.
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#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 29, 2021 22:42:09 GMT -5
Good to know! Would you be opposed if I create one more character who holds a vicious hatred towards outsiders? I've never had the opportunity to explore that type of character before; usually all of mine fit my values (as in they would be suspicious of (initially) but ultimately accepting towards loners/rogues/etc.). Go for it. Just let me know when you're done tweaking them so I can add them to the layout. Cool. I'll work on them sometime this evening. I'll tag you when they're done.
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#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 1:03:27 GMT -5
Brittlefrost - 53 months - A mid-sized white tom with a black throat, chest, underbelly, and paws. He has a rather scrawny build with relatively underdeveloped shoulder muscles, slim, almost bony legs, relatively small paws, and a skinny waist with some of his ribs clearly visible under his flesh and fur. Other traits include somewhat large, triangular shaped ears, a black nose (with small white dapples), a handsome face, and icy blue eyes. He has few physical scars but the ones he possesses are pretty gruesome, including several tears in his ears, another the end of his tail, which has been bitten off at the tip, a broad gash across his throat, stretching from just beneath his chin and running down almost to his left shoulder, and three large claw marks scored across his right shoulder blade; no fur has regenerated from any of these injuries. Despite his size, he possesses remarkable strength, rivaling that of the largest toms and she-cats even, although his move set has never been the most impressive. However, when in battle, he often doesn't know when to quit, and will sometimes sacrifice his own body to get the job done. Brittlefrost was born to a queen by the name of Snowflower, and he had never known his father, who apparently had abandoned his Clan with no real explanation and was never seen again. As an apprentice he was a scared, timid tom who was a poor student at hunting and especially at battle skills. After encountering a stubborn old rogue tom on their territory and accidentally killing him however, something in him changed. His focus finally emerged, becoming prevalent in his training, and while he had graduated two moons later than usual, he paid that no mind. This once frightened, innocent young cat, who still remains quite likeable to this day, has developed a habit of not only chasing away outsiders, but killing them outright - no monologue, no hesitation, just to the point. There is no bloodlust or malice in his actions, and kills as effortlessly as a cat hunting their prey, although his sanity is slowly, tragically failing. He believes outsiders and half-Clan cats to be no better than rats in than rats in terms of value, and regarding the latter, he believes them to be a dangerous breach of security, and proclaims that one day, if even one outsider is allowed to remain in the Clan, and to breed, that all of CinderClan will fall. He is undoubtedly loyal to his Clan, but perhaps too loyal. Dark Sun (Violetsky) Mother Dark
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#F4B548
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Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 1:06:13 GMT -5
1. I apologize this is so long, I had a lot of fun writing his history. Feel free to cut out his history section if you want! I really don't mind! 2. I assume your Clan follows the warrior code or something similar, yes? If not, please let me know! 3. Is there anything about this character's backstory or personality I should change? Is it a little too dark? Genuinely asking. 4. Since Hawkstar isn't too fond of outsiders either (am I misinterpreting that?), it will be interesting to see how he perceives Brittlefrost, especially if he learned of his previous "merciless incidents" regarding plenty of rogues/loners/etc. But we'll cross that bridge when we come to it! 5. In reference to the first time he "killed" a rogue, it's likely (but not concrete) that the old tom instead died of a heart attack or some other cause.
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 30, 2021 17:32:31 GMT -5
Dark Sun I think maybe if he didn't he were a rogue that would work unless you like the idea of him being a giant hypocrite. I would love for you to make the queen's profile. I can add it with the other starclan cats.
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 17:35:59 GMT -5
Good to see this is still going.
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 30, 2021 17:38:36 GMT -5
Yea, looking forward to this
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#F4B548
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 17:50:44 GMT -5
Dark Sun I think maybe if he didn't he were a rogue that would work unless you like the idea of him being a giant hypocrite. I would love for you to make the queen's profile. I can add it with the other starclan cats. Alright, cool! I'll go with the final idea I had conceived. At the age of a couple moons or so, a kit wandered away from the camp at night during a heavy storm and was never found again. Two moons later Brittle showed up at the border, and while some cats would be heavily skeptical that it was the same kit (despite his markings being virtually identical), plenty are convinced that the queen's kit had somehow survived and as such was immediately welcomed back into the Clan. Perhaps a long ways down the track Brittlefrost could learn of his origins and have a huge existential crisis, questioning "what" he was.
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StarClan leader
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 17:58:21 GMT -5
Cool!
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 30, 2021 18:00:26 GMT -5
Okay do you want to edit him then before I put him up? I might be MIA for a few hours while I do homework.
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 30, 2021 18:01:41 GMT -5
Featherstar Ember34 got any territory or camp ideas?
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StarClan leader
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 18:01:52 GMT -5
Okay do you want to edit him then before I put him up? I might be MIA for a few hours while I do homework. Oof, homework! I haven't had to do Homework in years! And I'm only in 10th grade!
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Non-binary
#F4B548
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Dark Sun
Sage of the Stars
I'm devious, I'm devilish, I'm ever so deliciously evil
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:05:19 GMT -5
Snowflower - 61 moons at death - A medium-sized black-and-white bicolored she-cat with a white face, highlighted by a predominantly black neck (nape, sides, and throat) and shoulders. She had a long, windy tail, long and nimble legs, dainty paws, and short belly fur, with miscellaneous features including a striking pink nose and paw pads, regular triangular-shaped ears, and green eyes. She has no noticeable scars on her body excluding a couple of small tears in one ear. Ever since she was an apprentice she knew she had felt she had no place with her denmates, out there fighting, as she was always a little squeamish and even cowardly and weak-willed, so after she had kits with a tom (whom she never gave the name away of, out of choice), she quickly decided to remain in the nursery as a permanent queen. She was described as a soft spoken, gentle but firm, and optimistic she-cat who many cats came to if they were going through a rough time and needed some cheering up or some friendly advice. Cause of death: After two out of three of her litter were born as stillborn, and following that her mate leaving CinderClan, she struggled to fight for her only remaining kit, Brittlekit. The stress had taken a massive toll on her and her milk supply quickly dried up as a result. Not too long after, she died of shock and other forms of inner turmoil. Dark Sun (Violetsky) Mother Dark
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Non-binary
#F4B548
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Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:06:46 GMT -5
Okay do you want to edit him then before I put him up? I might be MIA for a few hours while I do homework. Unless you think his bio/history is too long (it is pretty extensive...), I'm happy with where he is.
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Ember34
Golden Deer Leader
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Post by Ember34 on Sept 30, 2021 18:12:29 GMT -5
Maybe set up in an old camp ground that isn't used anymore?
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StarClan leader
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 30, 2021 18:16:19 GMT -5
Maybe set up in an old camp ground that isn't used anymore? Sounds like a good idea.
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#F4B548
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Sage of the Stars
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Post by Dark Sun on Sept 30, 2021 18:18:23 GMT -5
Maybe set up in an old camp ground that isn't used anymore? Sounds like a good idea. Perhaps this old, abandoned camp holds some dark memories? Maybe of a former leader who virtually destroyed the Clan with his wickedness, and in order to move on from painful memories and that "haunted place", the Clan set up and moved? Just a thought.
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