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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 19, 2021 20:41:00 GMT -5
--what period of his life would u want it to mainly be about?
im personally not a big fan of the kit and apprentice period of prequel SE's, but i'm sure he'd get that in the first couple pages.
but i want this to cover a few main things:
his courtship with both smoke and whitetail (when did he get with whitetail? she was shown to be in the nursery way before heathertail was ever born, so did she had onewhisker's kits earlier but they died? does this imply onewhisker cheated on whitetail with smoke [depending on when darktail is actually born. me and a few others on here already speculated he's possibly a bit older than leafpool and squirrelflight]?)
his POV on the tallstar and mudclaw situation. i want to read word for word his cowardace mindset during this. i just want confirmation on my years long headcanon/assumption that onestar blamed firestar and thunderclan because of the peer pressure , to make him leader when 1) he didnt want to (and only said yes out of cowardace in front of everyone), and/or 2) he didn't feel worthy or ready "yet."
i want to know his mindset going into the eclipse battle, and having the SE end with darktail's arrival. the manga could then show onestar's thoughts as he fought his long lost son. i think that'd be a perfect ending.
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Post by Rainsplash on Sept 19, 2021 20:45:21 GMT -5
I really ant confirmation that he didn't cheat on Whitetail because OneWhite is really precious to me :'( I want to know about just his whole story because it's really interesting and it's going to be even more if it's handled right.
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Post by Chicken on Sept 19, 2021 20:48:18 GMT -5
I would like to see all the stuff you mentioned, but I would also like to see a good portion of his kithood/apprenticehood, it'd be cool to see a young Mudclaw and Tornear, I just hope they don't make Mudclaw a bully or something lol.
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 19, 2021 20:48:35 GMT -5
I really ant confirmation that he didn't cheat on Whitetail because OneWhite is really precious to me :'( I want to know about just his whole story because it's really interesting and it's going to be even more if it's handled right. she first shows up as a queen as early as a dangerous path, so in my mind, onewhisker cheating on her with smoke would make sense, given how big a coward he always was. it'd suck for whitetail, but it'd also make things more interesting to explore in the SE.
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Post by Chicken on Sept 19, 2021 20:49:20 GMT -5
I really ant confirmation that he didn't cheat on Whitetail because OneWhite is really precious to me :'( I want to know about just his whole story because it's really interesting and it's going to be even more if it's handled right. she first shows up as a queen as early as a dangerous path, so in my mind, onewhisker cheating on her with smoke would make sense, given how big a coward he always was. it'd suck for whitetail, but it'd also make things more interesting to explore in the SE. What if he was with Smoke first and Whitetail is his Nightcloud?
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 19, 2021 20:49:36 GMT -5
I would like to see all the stuff you mentioned, but I would also like to see a good portion of his kithood/apprenticehood, it'd be cool to see a young Mudclaw and Tornear, I just hope they don't make Mudclaw a bully or something lol. i hope young mudclaw is shown as an actual good guy, then progessively more aggressive as the SE goes on to show a shift in character. maybe something bad happens when windclan is exiled to push mudclaw into being who he became? who knows!
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 19, 2021 20:50:39 GMT -5
she first shows up as a queen as early as a dangerous path, so in my mind, onewhisker cheating on her with smoke would make sense, given how big a coward he always was. it'd suck for whitetail, but it'd also make things more interesting to explore in the SE. What if he was with Smoke first and Whitetail is his Nightcloud? ooh actually, that makes a lot of sense lol. like if he met smoke when he was still mentoring whitetail, then something happens to make him pull an appledusk/crowfeather like "i need a mate in my own clan to throw off suspicions and doubt on me"
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Post by Chicken on Sept 19, 2021 20:58:58 GMT -5
ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆That would be great about Mudclaw! About Whitetail, that makes sense, I can see that happening, since they were already close since he was her mentor.
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Post by Moonblazer on Sept 19, 2021 22:32:24 GMT -5
I’m 99.99% sure he fell for Whitetail after he had already given up his feelings for Smoke. Onestar being cowardly is obvious, but even for him, I can’t see him cheating on Whitetail. I think they got together and were already close from being a young mentor and apprentice combo, and they both had mutual feelings by then. I do wanna see OneWhite dynamics though! They were shown as being close and content much later in the series so they probably had a pretty good relationship, but who knows!
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 19, 2021 23:01:05 GMT -5
I’m 99.99% sure he fell for Whitetail after he had already given up his feelings for Smoke. Onestar being cowardly is obvious, but even for him, I can’t see him cheating on Whitetail. I think they got together and were already close from being a young mentor and apprentice combo, and they both had mutual feelings by then. I do wanna see OneWhite dynamics though! They were shown as being close and content much later in the series so they probably had a pretty good relationship, but who knows! i remember the little scenes we saw of them, and they do seem like a nice enough couple.
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Post by Ivyfalcon on Sept 19, 2021 23:28:17 GMT -5
I agree with pretty much everything you said, I’d like to see his relationships with Smoke and Whitetail, his reaction to becoming leader and Mudclaw’s rebellion from his POV, the attack on TC in Eclipse, and his reaction to Darktail coming to the Clans.
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Post by Pineclaw on Sept 20, 2021 3:24:55 GMT -5
I definitely want to see Mudclaw's rebellion and the Eclipse battle from his POV. And his thoughts about the whole Darktail thing. The latter two would probably be infuriating to read but it would be really interesting. I also wanna know about his relationships with Smoke and Whitetail. Well, as long as we don't get any pointless drama with the latter relationship. But who am I kidding? This is Warrior Cats. If we ever get a Onestar SE I just hope they won't try to downplay his cowardice and his more heinous actions or make him look sympathetic. Onestar was a shitty leader and they shouldn't shy away from showing us that. What I do wanna see however is his descend from good ole Onewhisker to outright disgusting Onestar. If done right it would make for an amazing read. Oh, and like Chicken I also hope Mudclaw doesn't get cast as the obligatory bully of the Onestar's kithood (because every SE focusing on a leader's life needs one, apparently).
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Sept 20, 2021 18:04:26 GMT -5
I definitely want to see Mudclaw's rebellion and the Eclipse battle from his POV. And his thoughts about the whole Darktail thing. The latter two would probably be infuriating to read but it would be really interesting. I also wanna know about his relationships with Smoke and Whitetail. Well, as long as we don't get any pointless drama with the latter relationship. But who am I kidding? This is Warrior Cats. If we ever get a Onestar SE I just hope they won't try to downplay his cowardice and his more heinous actions or make him look sympathetic. Onestar was a shitty leader and they shouldn't shy away from showing us that. What I do wanna see however is his descend from good ole Onewhisker to outright disgusting Onestar. If done right it would make for an amazing read. Oh, and like Chicken I also hope Mudclaw doesn't get cast as the obligatory bully of the Onestar's kithood (because every SE focusing on a leader's life needs one, apparently). i agree. if onestar gets an SE, there should be a build up to his change in character. maybe he was always a coward, but we see varrying degrees of it until it consumes him by the time he is forced to become leader
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Post by Rainsplash on Sept 20, 2021 20:35:18 GMT -5
I really ant confirmation that he didn't cheat on Whitetail because OneWhite is really precious to me :'( I want to know about just his whole story because it's really interesting and it's going to be even more if it's handled right. she first shows up as a queen as early as a dangerous path, so in my mind, onewhisker cheating on her with smoke would make sense, given how big a coward he always was. it'd suck for whitetail, but it'd also make things more interesting to explore in the SE. Unrealistic, but I'll just cross my fingers so that the Erins or the editors or whomever will forget about that.
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