Post by Deleted on Aug 31, 2016 7:32:47 GMT -5
Before you read this horrible, horrible passage of a jumbled mess of letters, I wrote this in 7th grade and learned my lesson. I still cringe when re-reading this, and I thought it would be comical to post it here for the forums to see. I copied this ietter to letter, so there WILL be grammar issues. I didn't bother to separate the text like a normal story would, though I made paragraphs so it would be easier on the eyes.
Here it is
As the brown and black she ca shrieked in pain, one by one each can in Riverclan took turns nipping at her belly fur as she just played there hopeless. She was going to die. But how? She looked up into the starry night sky. Clear, dull tears came rolling down her face. But she did not have any other reaction other than innocence. She whispered to herself in a voice full of sadness “oh Starclan, how could this happen to me?” its her fault. I should not even be in this matter. But we are the same person. And no one understand the mockery I have to go through each and every day. They all know. Every single cat, even the kits. She regretted hard the first person she old.
She made sure the would not say anything. She was so firm and sure nothing would get out. But nothing good ever lasts. In only a short time of about 5 days, almost half of the clan had talked and gossiped about her and her other half. But that was then and this is now. She was so weak. What did I do to deserve this? Then she transferred herself into the deep in her own mind. Wha? What is this? Where am I? Just then, A pitch black she-cat much bigger approached slowly and perked her chest up so she looked even more taunting. The midnight black she-cat then narrowed her amber eyes. “I am the cat that did this to you.” She exclaimed. “And do you know why?” She had a dark tone in her voice as she just stared at BlackHeart. “Y-es I do…” She rasped she was shaking and scared to death at the unknown dark warrior. “Nightstar showed me. I know that was my den, but they uncovered a stash full of other be-headed cats. They then accused me and I did not know what to do. And quickly they tied me up and started torchering me.” Her eyes widened full of rage. “WHAT? Do I have DID or something?”
And after she said that, the dark warrior approached Blackhearts. She stopped when their noses were just a mouse length away from each other. Yes you do. It generates when you are abused and mis-treated. There is no cure. So it looks like your stuck with me.” She then smiled to show bloody, super-sharp fangs. “And if there is any cat in my way, Ill just kill them and the rest of the clan can blame you for it. No matter where you go, I will always be there.” “Who are you?”
“I am bloodfang. But there is something I can do to help you escape. This is my body too. Be ready Blackhearts.” Blood fang’s eyes began to glow white and she was transported into reality. Blackhearts watched in horror as she chased down every single cat who had bitten and scratched her. She left their bodies just simply laying in the dusty ground. Just waiting to rot. Then Bloodfang transported herself tot he back of her mind. “Ever cat who bit, nipped, or cawed you is now dead. But you are very weak and I do not think that you can make it for help and shelter.” Bloodfin sighed and just said “I wish I had my thick for instead of having to deal with your short fur. But I guess it will have to manage. And by the way, sharpen your claws alittle more. I almost got scratched can’t you believe it?” Blackhearts eyes then turned white and she vanished into reality. She looked at all of the dead bodies. She cried as she limped deeper in the forest too look for another clan. “Don’t be such a mouse Blackhearts”. And the voice echoed away deeper into her head. Blackhearts sighed and trudged on. One small limp at a time. “Won’t everybody know I have done this?”
Blackheart thought. “Oh, don’t worry about that, I told Leapordstar that if she said anything about me, I would kill her instantly in a heartbeat when nobody is looking. And I would make it look like as if it were caused by another clan, or an “accident”. said Bloodfang. Blackhearts then steadied her eyes on where her paws were leading her. She had just limped over the boundary over to Thunderclap. She has then know she might be hunted there. Alright Bloodfang, said Blackhearts out loud, don’t you dare try anything funny this time. We are for sure going to givee our signal out. Blooding gave out a long sigh and rasped “ok, but just as long as no cat gets in my way of serving our “new clan”. Good that is what I was to hear Bloodfang. Just as long as you don’t go killing other cats who entered our border. “
And just as they had said that, a Thunderclap patrol were running after them, and Blackhearts stopped in her bloody tracks. She sprawled out onto the ground to show that she was not going to pick a fight with them. But in her mind she was still traumatized of dead bodies flashing rapidly in her brain. And she gasped as she stared ey to eye with a powerful ginger tom who had a troubled look in his eyes “Who are you, and state you’re business.” He spoke in a soft tone that almost calmed Blackheart alittle. And she cold barely think of what she would say to this noble cat. “I…”. She then thought of blood clan and how they tried to take over the forest. Black heart was not concouse then, but she had heard lots of cats talk about it when she woke up. So maybe the reason she was unconscious was because of bloodfang. “I-I-I was driven from blood clan and now they had found out I had betrayed them during the battle. When I saw you kill scourge, I thought what, what would of without him. And I had never wanted to take over the forest.
And after I entered it for the first time in my life, i saw constellations in the sky shimmer and flare as if they were dead ancestors who did good for their clan. And when I saw you, the flare in your eyes had told me you had some sort of spirits seeping inside of you. Helping you in your time of need. So I want to follow you. Maby I can be one of these great warriors one day.” Blackhearts could not believe how good she lied in front of the clan leader. She then remembered his name, Forester. From the river clan warriors she had fought with. Forester thought for a moment and coldly announced “she will be prisoner until we will know what to do with her. What is your name? Blackhearts gulped again. And rasped “Blackhearts. my name is black heart.” She then got up and bowed her head. She wanted to serve her own clan well and there was nothing Bloodfang was going to do to stop her.
She was escorted into camp and she began to retrieve suspicious looks. But she then heard a yowl on top or the high rock and the majestic leader’s fur flowed like luscious fire int he wind. “Let all cats old enough to hunt their own food join before the highjack. we have a non-prisoner. One who came from the edge of river clan’s boundary. and I have yet to decide what I will do with her. So for now, do not try anything with her until I say otherwise. This prisoner’s name is Blackhearts. And I would like to see you in my den privately. “The meeting then can to a close and she walked slowly toward the den. The walk seemed to take forever. And she decided she would tell the truth. As she waited there,, Forester was curled and he had his tail slightly ruffled. He looked like he had not slept for quite some time and something was troubling him. “Tell me the truth Blackhearts. This is your last chance.” He spoke in a cold voice. “ didn’t mean to I swear.” Blackhearts eyes swept up in tears. Forester’s eyes opened some more and he tilted his head. “It wasn’t me it was my other “half”. You don’t know what it’s like having every cat stare at you. And you don’t even have the slightest idea of what happened. “Blackthroat rasped. “Continue.” “Well I was returning to my den when my best friend cam ever to me. She then gave me some leaves I didn’t regonize. They all stared at me and watched ever single bit of leaves I chewed. And then I went out. The last moment I remembered was my friend giving me a cold hard stare.
I then woke up. I was tied to the bottom of the highrock. Each and every one of them took turns nipping at my hair. Taking and tearing chunks out of my pelt. Then one of them shouted “Blackhearts has done enough It is time for her rain of terror to end. She never obeys the warrior code when we say don’t kill any cat on purpose. Only give them a warning nip. She has a stash of be-headed cat skulls in her basement!” And then I passed out and got pulled into my head where I met blooding. And the killed one fourth of river clan before I came back in control again.” Fire heart’s eyes were huge. He could not believe the terror this tiny she-cat had caused. “May I see blooding?” He said in a very soft gentle voice. It turned Blackheart on a bit. Blackhearts nodded and then her eyes slid into snake-like slits. “You called?” She chuckled. “What have you done? What are you? Where did you come from?” “Well…” Bloodfang’s voice suddenly became extremely serious. Though she could not help holding back a dark smile. “I am a spirit. In life, I was once Brokentail’s mate. But then he kicked me out of the clan. Where I stalked into the forest, he stuck his claw in my throat and whispered I never meant for any of this to happen my love.
When I died, time flew by. And I managed to see a vision of my husband’s death. It was all because of you. You the reason he is gone. And then, when all hope has lost for me, TIgerclaw forged a portal between him and me before he was alive. And he said he was your friend. He explained how you killed Brokentail!” Blood fang’s voice came to a startling screech. “IT WAS ALL YOU’RE FAULT!!!” She then burst into tears. And then became serious again. And I’m going to count your lives down. One by one until your banished from this planet. And the best part is . . her voice came a dark chuckle. No matter if you kill Blackhearts, I can still possess other cats. And many I might even possess the one cat you love the most, Sandstorm.” Fire heart’s face began to turn serious as he unsheathed his claws and yell “You do no such thing!” “Try me”! She laughed for a very long time. And then shock took her face as Blackhearts took over. “What happened? I’m so sorry! Are you hurt?!” BLackheart,” Fireheart started, “There is an extremely evil cat from the under world possessing you.
Here it is
As the brown and black she ca shrieked in pain, one by one each can in Riverclan took turns nipping at her belly fur as she just played there hopeless. She was going to die. But how? She looked up into the starry night sky. Clear, dull tears came rolling down her face. But she did not have any other reaction other than innocence. She whispered to herself in a voice full of sadness “oh Starclan, how could this happen to me?” its her fault. I should not even be in this matter. But we are the same person. And no one understand the mockery I have to go through each and every day. They all know. Every single cat, even the kits. She regretted hard the first person she old.
She made sure the would not say anything. She was so firm and sure nothing would get out. But nothing good ever lasts. In only a short time of about 5 days, almost half of the clan had talked and gossiped about her and her other half. But that was then and this is now. She was so weak. What did I do to deserve this? Then she transferred herself into the deep in her own mind. Wha? What is this? Where am I? Just then, A pitch black she-cat much bigger approached slowly and perked her chest up so she looked even more taunting. The midnight black she-cat then narrowed her amber eyes. “I am the cat that did this to you.” She exclaimed. “And do you know why?” She had a dark tone in her voice as she just stared at BlackHeart. “Y-es I do…” She rasped she was shaking and scared to death at the unknown dark warrior. “Nightstar showed me. I know that was my den, but they uncovered a stash full of other be-headed cats. They then accused me and I did not know what to do. And quickly they tied me up and started torchering me.” Her eyes widened full of rage. “WHAT? Do I have DID or something?”
And after she said that, the dark warrior approached Blackhearts. She stopped when their noses were just a mouse length away from each other. Yes you do. It generates when you are abused and mis-treated. There is no cure. So it looks like your stuck with me.” She then smiled to show bloody, super-sharp fangs. “And if there is any cat in my way, Ill just kill them and the rest of the clan can blame you for it. No matter where you go, I will always be there.” “Who are you?”
“I am bloodfang. But there is something I can do to help you escape. This is my body too. Be ready Blackhearts.” Blood fang’s eyes began to glow white and she was transported into reality. Blackhearts watched in horror as she chased down every single cat who had bitten and scratched her. She left their bodies just simply laying in the dusty ground. Just waiting to rot. Then Bloodfang transported herself tot he back of her mind. “Ever cat who bit, nipped, or cawed you is now dead. But you are very weak and I do not think that you can make it for help and shelter.” Bloodfin sighed and just said “I wish I had my thick for instead of having to deal with your short fur. But I guess it will have to manage. And by the way, sharpen your claws alittle more. I almost got scratched can’t you believe it?” Blackhearts eyes then turned white and she vanished into reality. She looked at all of the dead bodies. She cried as she limped deeper in the forest too look for another clan. “Don’t be such a mouse Blackhearts”. And the voice echoed away deeper into her head. Blackhearts sighed and trudged on. One small limp at a time. “Won’t everybody know I have done this?”
Blackheart thought. “Oh, don’t worry about that, I told Leapordstar that if she said anything about me, I would kill her instantly in a heartbeat when nobody is looking. And I would make it look like as if it were caused by another clan, or an “accident”. said Bloodfang. Blackhearts then steadied her eyes on where her paws were leading her. She had just limped over the boundary over to Thunderclap. She has then know she might be hunted there. Alright Bloodfang, said Blackhearts out loud, don’t you dare try anything funny this time. We are for sure going to givee our signal out. Blooding gave out a long sigh and rasped “ok, but just as long as no cat gets in my way of serving our “new clan”. Good that is what I was to hear Bloodfang. Just as long as you don’t go killing other cats who entered our border. “
And just as they had said that, a Thunderclap patrol were running after them, and Blackhearts stopped in her bloody tracks. She sprawled out onto the ground to show that she was not going to pick a fight with them. But in her mind she was still traumatized of dead bodies flashing rapidly in her brain. And she gasped as she stared ey to eye with a powerful ginger tom who had a troubled look in his eyes “Who are you, and state you’re business.” He spoke in a soft tone that almost calmed Blackheart alittle. And she cold barely think of what she would say to this noble cat. “I…”. She then thought of blood clan and how they tried to take over the forest. Black heart was not concouse then, but she had heard lots of cats talk about it when she woke up. So maybe the reason she was unconscious was because of bloodfang. “I-I-I was driven from blood clan and now they had found out I had betrayed them during the battle. When I saw you kill scourge, I thought what, what would of without him. And I had never wanted to take over the forest.
And after I entered it for the first time in my life, i saw constellations in the sky shimmer and flare as if they were dead ancestors who did good for their clan. And when I saw you, the flare in your eyes had told me you had some sort of spirits seeping inside of you. Helping you in your time of need. So I want to follow you. Maby I can be one of these great warriors one day.” Blackhearts could not believe how good she lied in front of the clan leader. She then remembered his name, Forester. From the river clan warriors she had fought with. Forester thought for a moment and coldly announced “she will be prisoner until we will know what to do with her. What is your name? Blackhearts gulped again. And rasped “Blackhearts. my name is black heart.” She then got up and bowed her head. She wanted to serve her own clan well and there was nothing Bloodfang was going to do to stop her.
She was escorted into camp and she began to retrieve suspicious looks. But she then heard a yowl on top or the high rock and the majestic leader’s fur flowed like luscious fire int he wind. “Let all cats old enough to hunt their own food join before the highjack. we have a non-prisoner. One who came from the edge of river clan’s boundary. and I have yet to decide what I will do with her. So for now, do not try anything with her until I say otherwise. This prisoner’s name is Blackhearts. And I would like to see you in my den privately. “The meeting then can to a close and she walked slowly toward the den. The walk seemed to take forever. And she decided she would tell the truth. As she waited there,, Forester was curled and he had his tail slightly ruffled. He looked like he had not slept for quite some time and something was troubling him. “Tell me the truth Blackhearts. This is your last chance.” He spoke in a cold voice. “ didn’t mean to I swear.” Blackhearts eyes swept up in tears. Forester’s eyes opened some more and he tilted his head. “It wasn’t me it was my other “half”. You don’t know what it’s like having every cat stare at you. And you don’t even have the slightest idea of what happened. “Blackthroat rasped. “Continue.” “Well I was returning to my den when my best friend cam ever to me. She then gave me some leaves I didn’t regonize. They all stared at me and watched ever single bit of leaves I chewed. And then I went out. The last moment I remembered was my friend giving me a cold hard stare.
I then woke up. I was tied to the bottom of the highrock. Each and every one of them took turns nipping at my hair. Taking and tearing chunks out of my pelt. Then one of them shouted “Blackhearts has done enough It is time for her rain of terror to end. She never obeys the warrior code when we say don’t kill any cat on purpose. Only give them a warning nip. She has a stash of be-headed cat skulls in her basement!” And then I passed out and got pulled into my head where I met blooding. And the killed one fourth of river clan before I came back in control again.” Fire heart’s eyes were huge. He could not believe the terror this tiny she-cat had caused. “May I see blooding?” He said in a very soft gentle voice. It turned Blackheart on a bit. Blackhearts nodded and then her eyes slid into snake-like slits. “You called?” She chuckled. “What have you done? What are you? Where did you come from?” “Well…” Bloodfang’s voice suddenly became extremely serious. Though she could not help holding back a dark smile. “I am a spirit. In life, I was once Brokentail’s mate. But then he kicked me out of the clan. Where I stalked into the forest, he stuck his claw in my throat and whispered I never meant for any of this to happen my love.
When I died, time flew by. And I managed to see a vision of my husband’s death. It was all because of you. You the reason he is gone. And then, when all hope has lost for me, TIgerclaw forged a portal between him and me before he was alive. And he said he was your friend. He explained how you killed Brokentail!” Blood fang’s voice came to a startling screech. “IT WAS ALL YOU’RE FAULT!!!” She then burst into tears. And then became serious again. And I’m going to count your lives down. One by one until your banished from this planet. And the best part is . . her voice came a dark chuckle. No matter if you kill Blackhearts, I can still possess other cats. And many I might even possess the one cat you love the most, Sandstorm.” Fire heart’s face began to turn serious as he unsheathed his claws and yell “You do no such thing!” “Try me”! She laughed for a very long time. And then shock took her face as Blackhearts took over. “What happened? I’m so sorry! Are you hurt?!” BLackheart,” Fireheart started, “There is an extremely evil cat from the under world possessing you.
