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Post by cygna on Aug 15, 2021 22:35:21 GMT -5
Of course we know nothing about what these kits would have been like but just an idea.
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Post by Aqua on Aug 15, 2021 22:45:02 GMT -5
I feel like Breezepelt would have been a lot happier. He wouldn't feel like he needed Crowfeather's approval all the time, just his siblings would be enough. The only reason he went to the Dark Forest is because of Crowfeather's neglect and now he hurt Nightcloud. If he was given a little more love within his own family, his blood, I think he would've made better choices, and Nightcloud might have been less aggressive as well and would have been a better influence for her son.
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Aug 15, 2021 22:47:43 GMT -5
nightcloud wouldnt have been as overprotective or overbearing as she was if they all lived. crowfeather would still be distant, so that would still make nightcloud mad, and she's still tell her kits how awful crowfeather is, influencing them. i think maybe one of them would be the "good" sibling and not listen to nightcloud's toxic words, and they'd try to convince breezepelt and the other sibling to stop being so rude and stuff. breezepetl would still train in the dark forest, and he'd convince the bad sibling to join him. in the end, i would want the sibling to realize the dark forest is bad, and leave breezepelt to train alone. then the siblings would team up with their half siblings to try and save breezepelt and convince him to leave, but they're all too late.
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Post by Midnightcacoon loves Sunbeam on Aug 16, 2021 5:43:56 GMT -5
Thing's probably would've turned out better for breezepelt, as he would probably have more support from others in his clan. That is assuming that his siblings are nice to him though.
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Post by 𝕱𝖑𝖚𝖙𝖙𝖊𝖗𝖋𝖆𝖑𝖑 on Aug 16, 2021 8:21:00 GMT -5
That would be up to how his siblings are characterized. Are they nice to him or not? Will they have the same feelings as him about their protective mother and distant father? Will their support be enough for Breezepelt to not get swayed to the dark side and be manipulated by the Dark Forest cats or are they even going to train there as well?
The possibilities for such AUs are practically endless and I might actually write one soon and see how it goes.
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Post by finland on Aug 16, 2021 9:29:08 GMT -5
I like the idea of them all being toms.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Aug 16, 2021 13:31:14 GMT -5
I feel like Breezepelt would have been a lot happier. He wouldn't feel like he needed Crowfeather's approval all the time, just his siblings would be enough. The only reason he went to the Dark Forest is because of Crowfeather's neglect and now he hurt Nightcloud. If he was given a little more love within his own family, his blood, I think he would've made better choices, and Nightcloud might have been less aggressive as well and would have been a better influence for her son. I somewhat agree. It's why in my AU, I liked the idea of Mudclaw living and being a father figure to Breezepelt. I felt that if he had better guidence from a father figure, or even the support of siblings, he would have had a better childhood.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Aug 16, 2021 13:42:56 GMT -5
Personally, I think it would make Nightcloud less protective, but still unhappy at Crowfeather's gross neglect. All of his kits would see how obviously distant Crowfeather is, and judge him by that alone. I'd feel bad for them because they'd all probably still try to get their father's approval, but it would end the same way, just because they're not Leafpool's kits. So in the end I can see them just supporting each other instead, and also their mother who still loves them. Hopefully, they stay away from Crowfeather in general too, it was cringeworthy to see him try and influence Breezepelt to hate half-clan cats at the gathering, so I hope they're not as xenophobic as their father when they grow up. I can also see the DF still trying to lure one of them in, if it is Breezepelt, I can see his siblings eventually help through it, and also standing up to Crowfeather eventually for never being there for them. Also Nightcloud defending them when the rest of the clan wants Breezepelt dead, he's still her kit after all.
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on Aug 16, 2021 17:13:55 GMT -5
Breezepelt would have probably grown up in a happier, healthy family now that there are two more cats able to understand and support him. If his siblings turned out to be decent people, I could see them being able to be Breezepelt's role models rather than the DF cats, and keep him away from a toxic, bitter mindset.
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Post by Twilight Sparkle on Aug 17, 2021 4:59:22 GMT -5
I could see Breezepelt as their big brother, maybe a little boastful and more aloof than them, still his mother's favorite kit, but behind this bluffing exterior he would he truly fun, protective, and caring to his littermates. Kind of like what Heathertail said about him at the Gathering one time:
"It's hard to believe, but Breezepaw can be great fun on a good day."
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Post by 𝕱𝖑𝖚𝖙𝖙𝖊𝖗𝖋𝖆𝖑𝖑 on Sept 15, 2021 15:15:28 GMT -5
I just came back here after finally figuring out something for that AU I planned to write mentioned in my comment somewhere in this section. Another thread for it will be up shortly but I wanted to give more people the opportunity to also share their thoughts on this topic. Thank you to cygna for giving me the idea! It's two days before this would have turned one month old, right? So that's not considered as necroposting, I hope.
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