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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Aug 15, 2021 14:53:32 GMT -5
how would the series turn out?
in my AU fanfic, ravenpaw tells bluestar, spottedleaf, and lionheart about tigerclaw right off the bat, but they all keep it secret until they can prove tigerclaw's treachery. so it involves a lot of spying and sneaking around in order to get proof. if they just expose tigerclaw right then and there from the beginning, the clan might not believe it because tigerclaw used to be well respected as a strong warrior.
what do u think? would bluestar be quick to believe the word of a scared ravenpaw?
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Post by 𝕱𝖑𝖚𝖙𝖙𝖊𝖗𝖋𝖆𝖑𝖑 on Aug 15, 2021 15:07:09 GMT -5
It's kind of funny how we both made threads about Ravenpaw only a few minutes apart. But about your AU, I really like it! There is even a fanfiction collection over on AO3 about Ravenpaw being the protagonist instead of Rusty/Firestar (although it doesn't involve spying or at least not for now): archiveofourown.org/series/715845
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Aug 15, 2021 15:15:22 GMT -5
It's kind of funny how we both made threads about Ravenpaw only a few minutes apart. But about your AU, I really like it! There is even a fanfiction collection over on AO3 about Ravenpaw being the protagonist instead of Rusty/Firestar (although it doesn't involve spying or at least not for now): archiveofourown.org/series/715845ooh i'll check out the fanfic. i was looking through my documents and re-read what i wrote about the AU.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Aug 15, 2021 15:22:37 GMT -5
I'd love for Ravenpaw to have been the protagonist, but I don't see why Bluestar would believe him that quickly, especially because Ravenpaw was so skittish. She didn't even believe Fireheart, and even when he told her what Ravenpaw said, this was her response:
Even Fireheart doubted him on occasion, including right after this conversation.
And even if she did believe him, why would she keep a traitor around? She's a leader, so it doesn't make much sense why she would wait around for evidence and potentially put the rest of the Clan in danger if she already believed what Ravenpaw had been saying. It'd make more sense if she at least kept Tigerclaw imprisoned if she believed it immediately.
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