writing help

hello! i am trying to make a clan but i am not the best at describing things sadly lmao... is there anyone who would be willing to help me write the descriptions or fix my descriptions i have written to be more engaging? any help is appreciated and if anybody reading is looking for payment for writing, tell me your prices please!

here is some stuff i have written for my clan so far:
camp - Snowclan resides on the surroundings of a bumpy hill with the protection of pine trees all around the clearing. Due to the camp resting against the Great Alpines, there are many cracks and crevices utilized for dens inside the camp. These dens provide protection from some of the harshest weather conditions and on rarer occasion, protection from predators in the surrounding areas. Some of the openings on the mountain are higher up and are accessed whenever the snow is too high to access lower dens. The highest hill of the camp, known as High Hill, is utilized by the clan leader for meetings. The other hills are generally used for basking and other leisurely activities. Snow tends to cover the grounds of the camp but during Snow-Bare, the ground is covered in coarse dark brown dirt. The fresh-kill pile is located in one of the middle openings of the Great Alpines to avoid other predators seeking out the smell.

the great alpines - A mountainous range that stretches all the way across to Snowflake Lake and towards the bordering Twoleg area. The Great Alpines is home to many hazardous creatures, including snow sheep, snow leopards, and occasionally grey wolves that venture over from the Mountain Woodland. Hawks can be seen flying overhead, scoping out the area for easy to catch prey. The cats of Snowclan tend to avoid adventuring through the Great Alpines because of how dangerous it is, but that has not stopped those curious enough to face these threats.

mountain woodland - The Mountain Woodlands is considered one of the most dangerous areas near Snowclan's camp to enter. The Great Alpines shelter the clan from the dangers within but sometimes, cats from the clan go far too deep into the wilderness. This had led to a multitude of disappearances among the clan and many have never returned. Some of the dangers of the Mountain Woodlands include grey wolves, lynxes, and wolverines. These predators will not hesitate to attack and it is highly encouraged to stay out.

blizzard's peak - Small and easy to climb, Blizzard's Peak is often used by the cats of Snowclan to practice climbing skills. Around the bottom of Blizzard's Peak is a small cave where apprentices go to train with their mentors. Although smaller than the mountains of the Great Alpines, Blizzard's Peak is still considered treacherous as many cats acquire injuries from falling or are attacked by hawks and owls.

hunting grounds - Hunting grounds is the closest and easiest forest that Snowclan can access for hunting purposes and holds a wide range of prey. The pine trees of the hunting grounds are massive, reaching towards the sky to where the top is hard to see. The danger level of this area is particularly low, but that does not mean it is void of trouble. Owls make their homes in the trees of the woods and will not hesitate to snatch up any wandering cats. Other uncommon visitors include the arctic fox that occasionally ventures onto the grounds in search of food.

snowflake lake - Snowflake Lake is the main source of water for the cats of Snowclan. During Snow-Fall or Snow-Mass, it is not uncommon for the lake to freeze over, meaning the cats of the clan may have to go in search of water from the surrounding rivers or even near the Twoleg nest if the lake inside the abandoned Twoleg mine is not accessible.

abandoned mine - Located against the Great Alpines and near the abandoned Twoleg camp, the abandoned mine is presumed to have been used by Twolegs a long time ago. Most cats avoid going into the mine as predators sometimes make temporary homes inside, but this doesn't mean it has never been explored. Deep down inside, the clan drinks from a small lake within the cave whenever Snowflake Lake freezes over during the harsher seasons.

abandoned twoleg camp - This abandoned camp consists of a torn-up tent with Twoleg supplies inside. The supplies are not of any use to the cats of Snowclan but the tent can provide temporary shelter from the outside. Some cats remain afraid of the camp although it has been abandoned for a long time.

bridge - This bridge acts as a crossway between the main area of Snowclan to the Barrens and the area of Stone Hills.