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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jun 16, 2021 1:35:14 GMT -5
Okay, so I've been thinking about Stormcloud and how much of a wasted character he was. So here's a very basic overview on a rewrite for him, as well as a bit for Brindlewing and Hawkwing's kits. Okay, so for starters, Bramblestar and Squirrelflight never get back together for reasons I'm quite sure don't need to be said at this point, but their relationship is much stronger than it's ever been. The sixth arc also doesn't have this big timeskip, but when Stormcloud has only just become a warrior.
His relationship with Squirrelflight is a very close one to the point where he sees her and Bramblestar as parental figures and they make him feel welcome, but Stormcloud can't help but feel doubtful over his choice to join ThunderClan, especially after he encounters Minty again. He and Cherryfall are also close, but it soon becomes evident that she only sees him as a little brother, much to his disappointment.
The plot of AVoS is basically the same, except with WindClan in the role of ShadowClan. If you've read my AVoS AU, you'll know the basics, except Stormcloud is basically the Alderheart of this AU and accompanies Sandstorm on the journey (along with Minnowtail, Strikestone, and Brindlewing, who's now a medicine cat in this one) and after the kits are separated, this starts to shatter Stormcloud's idealized version of Bramblestar.
He becomes good friends with Brindlewing, whose own idealized version of Onestar has also been broken after both the separation and refusing to give ShadowClan herbs, but they just stay friends, and Twigkit and Violetkit's meetings go on for longer.
Fernsong eventually becomes Stormcloud's mate because why not, and Twigpaw (later Twigshine) is treated as their adopted daughter. As the story goes on, he starts to feel more at home in ThunderClan, but still struggles with forgiving Bramblestar over his decision. Violetpaw (later Violetwing) is later revealed to be Darktail biological daughter, but still sees Twigshine as a sister. After Darktail is defeated, she wishes to start over after having such a bad experience with WindClan under Onestar's rule and is essentially adopted by Hawkwing after joining SkyClan. As you can see, Found Family is a big theme here. I'll probably expand on this version of my AVoS AU later.
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Post by Majonez on Jun 21, 2021 16:32:49 GMT -5
I love this sm.
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