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Post by Snowfire on May 31, 2021 0:29:05 GMT -5
What POVs would you replace and who would you replace them with?
I think for TNP the last three books should've been Tawnypelt, Crowfeather, and maybe remove Leafpool's POV from the previous book so she can have her own. Another book with a POV I would replace is Stick's from SkyClan's Destiny, he is such an unlikable character and his chapters were the reason why this book was hard to go through, I would probably replace this POV with a daylight warrior, or any of the other rogues, Harley could be a interesting pick, he can show us his suspicions of Dodge's actions and leadership and that could've made him becoming leader after him more interesting.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on May 31, 2021 0:35:40 GMT -5
Each cat from the journey should've gotten a PoV alongside Leafpool. Starlight especially really needed Crowfeather's PoV.
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Post by Cloudy Sky on May 31, 2021 1:18:38 GMT -5
Each cat from the journey should've gotten a PoV alongside Leafpool. Starlight especially really needed Crowfeather's PoV. Adding on to this, I think Moonrise could have been in Feathertail's POV up till her death then it could either switch to Stormfur and the scene could proceed like it did in the book, or it could stay in her POV because that's the last journey chapter before the epilogue, which can stay the same.
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Post by Twilight Sparkle on May 31, 2021 6:54:21 GMT -5
I wouldn't have minded for POT to have POVS from apprentices of all different Clans, although that would be a lot. It seemed like a good arc to have the opportunity to expand on other Clans and characters since this storyline didn't a very strong plot.
TC: Lionpaw, Hollypaw, Jaypaw
SC: Ivypaw or Owlpaw
WC: Breezepaw or Heatherpaw (or Kestrelpaw or Harepaw)
RC: Willowpaw or Minnowpaw (or Pebblepaw or Pouncepaw or Dapplepaw)
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Post by cygna on May 31, 2021 9:59:49 GMT -5
I know we haven’t met her yet but like I’ve said on another thread I would prefer if Harelight stayed in ShadowClan and got a POV instead of Sunbeam.
Needletail should have gotten a POV instead of Alderheart. Honestly why does every series need a Firekin POV it’s really getting in my nerves especially if the character isn’t even good.
We didn’t need Leafpool in the first half of TNP.
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Post by Cloudy Sky on May 31, 2021 10:02:15 GMT -5
We didn’t need Leafpool in the first half of TNP. I think we did need Leafpool in the first half of TNP, as her POV showed the destruction of the forest. Or at least if not Leafpool then someone else who wasn't on the journey.
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Post by Thunderheart57 on May 31, 2021 14:28:34 GMT -5
I always felt that OotS could have benefited from having the three and the fourth cat come from different Clans instead of just ThunderClan.
Here is one suggestion for The Four: Jayfeather (ThunderClan), Heathertail in place of Dovewing (WindClan), Tigerheart in place of Lionblaze (ShadowClan), Willowshine or Rippletail for the fourth cat. I thought it would be interesting if somebody like Sol was the fourth cat. That would be interesting.
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on May 31, 2021 17:13:15 GMT -5
I would occasionally switch Alderheart's POV with Sparkpelt's in AVOS. Alderheart's POV could be incredibly dull sometimes and considering what we've seen from Sparkpelt's personality, I feel that giving her a POV could have made AVOS more interesting.
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Post by 𝕱𝖑𝖚𝖙𝖙𝖊𝖗𝖋𝖆𝖑𝖑 on Jun 1, 2021 11:27:40 GMT -5
I agree with Ṣanɗypaw™. Alderheart could have even been fully replaced with his sister Sparkpelt, whom the authors/editors should have named Sparkfire just by the way, because it really was a wasted opportunity and if they had wanted to have a trio of mixed gender protagonists again, either Twigbranch or Violetshine as toms would have been entirely possible. I'm sorry but Alderheart became rather boring after the first book of the AVoS arc while Sparkpelt still had an interesting personality despite not being important at all.
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