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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 14, 2021 9:42:20 GMT -5
Bet. I’m gonna have Flaxkit and Hopkit be mentored by Violetsky and Strikestone. That way Violetsky can gain that deputy position and they can bond while mentoring together.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Apr 14, 2021 11:19:28 GMT -5
Speaking of which, I actually do love the idea of Violet being a deputy, she showed so much leadership skills in the story with SkyClan, and it was very admirable.
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 14, 2021 11:24:11 GMT -5
Speaking of which, I actually do love the idea of Violet being a deputy, she showed so much leadership skills in the story with SkyClan, and it was very admirable. Oh big same! That was my thing, I really really wanted her to be built up to be the next deputy of Shadowclan from the start, due to me not really liking Skyclan leaving the gorge and joining the lake. So, I wanted her to help restore Shadowclan and find a home there. I certainly plan to build up her leadership skills
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Post by 🔥Firestar🔥 on Apr 16, 2021 13:03:22 GMT -5
This was the first thing that came to my head today when i woke up this morning:
*Suggests Talonpaw admiring Tawnypelt for proving that blood dosen't matter, actions do, and starts idolizing her, making Rowanclaw spend more time with her. And when Talonpaw dies, Rowanclaw and Tawnypelt grow close and comfort eachother*
For your Rowanstar SE.
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 16, 2021 14:01:13 GMT -5
This was the first thing that came to my head today when i woke up this morning: *Suggests Talonpaw admiring Tawnypelt for proving that blood dosen't matter, actions do, and starts idolizing her, making Rowanclaw spend more time with her. And when Talonpaw dies, Rowanclaw and Tawnypelt grow close and comfort eachother* For your Rowanstar SE. Oh I love thinking of ways as to how Tawny and Rowan got close, and that is exactly a way that I envisioned, with Rowan seeing how desperately Tawny wanted to help avenge Talon. That meant alot to him.
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Post by Moonblazer on Apr 16, 2021 14:28:50 GMT -5
I also really really want to allude to Rowanstar’s lack of desire to welcome in outsiders no matter the circumstances is due to how many times Shadowclan has been burned by doing just that. Tigerstar brings Bloodclan to the forest and Rowanstar’s own mentor betrays Shadowclan and fights them on Bloodclan’s side. Then, kittypets murder his first apprentice, wounding him so badly that Talonpaw had to drag himself back to camp before dying. Then, Sol comes in and persuades Blackstar to give up on Starclan and turn Shadowclan away from the Warrior Code. And now, Darktail’s rouges basically destroy everything in his clan and his leadership is uprooted by cats who kill his clanmates. Like...I dunno, I’d be pretty weary of loners and rouges and kittypets if I had all those experiences. Of course he realizes that outsiders can be kind and dedicated Warriors, but it takes time. Basically, why he lets the city cats join Shadowclan when Tiger and Dove return in my rewrite.
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Post by Lizard 🦎 on Apr 16, 2021 16:08:55 GMT -5
I love this rewrite!
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