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Post by Copperstar☂ on Jan 9, 2021 17:07:11 GMT -5
Robinskip noticed the apprentice and couldn't help but wonder what was wrong. She looked down at her uneaten mouse and then looked back at the apprentices den where Snailpaw had disappeared. She carried the mouse to the entrance and laid it down on the ground. "Hey Snailpaw,I noticed you looked a little down. I hope this mouse helps cheer you up. If you want to talk about it, I'll be right outside!" she called in to the apprentice. She then went to sit by the fresh-kill pile to groom herself.
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Post by Zz on Jan 9, 2021 17:07:37 GMT -5
nimble, nah. This is gonna add to his character and make him realize he doesn't want to be left behind or left out and so make him try harder to become a great warrior. hehe))
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Post by Zz on Jan 9, 2021 17:11:53 GMT -5
Copperstar☂Who saw Snailpaw? When you make a reply you should put the character's name in the reply. lol, just a tip))
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Post by Zz on Jan 9, 2021 17:12:45 GMT -5
I'm gonna go work on my four clans so I won't be able to reply for a bit))
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Post by Copperstar☂ on Jan 9, 2021 17:14:17 GMT -5
Zz oops sorry! It was Robinskip who saw him. Sorry that I didn't say her name!))
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 13:42:21 GMT -5
(Where did I leave off with Robinbreeze )
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On vacation till the 27th. Will work on replies when I get back.
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Post by Robinbreeze on Jan 11, 2021 13:44:18 GMT -5
Birchcloud nodded to Hawkgrip as he came up, giving a small chuckle and turning to lead the patrol out of camp. “So, how’s training going?” He mewed, trying to start up conversation. It wasn’t his strong suit, but he would try. Lynxpaw simply grunted as the warriors headed out of camp, then padded after them. He didn’t try and add to the conversation, not wanting to socialize. Primrosedawn grinned at the two new warriors, turning her head as Bonestar came toward them. “I think that sounds great, Bonestar. I bet the prey will practically run into our paws; we haven’t been there in a while.” She smiled once more and turned to head out of camp after Birchcloud’s patrol. This was my last post nimble
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 13:46:00 GMT -5
Hawkgrip chuckled. "He's gotten quite good at hunting." he purred. He looked down at his apprentice and winked. Bonestar walked out of camp, climbing up the cliff face. The rocks were cold and snowcovered, the pathway barely visible. his large size carved a path for the others as he braved through the snow. This is where I left off as well
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On vacation till the 27th. Will work on replies when I get back.
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Post by Robinbreeze on Jan 11, 2021 14:54:35 GMT -5
Lynxpaw gave a small smile in response and veered to the side after a mouse he scented. The golden tabby lowered himself into a crouch as the quivering leaves atop the prey came into view. Slowly padding forward, he avoided loose leaves and, once he was within pouncing range, Lynxpaw leaped, landing square on the startled creature. He unsheathed his claws, which sliced into the mouse, and finally picked up his prize. He walked back towards Birchcloud and Hawkgrip with his head held high, but his eyes held no emotion as he showed his skills to Birchcloud. He was good at it, but he had always preferred fighting.
Birchcloud watched as Lynxpaw made a nearly perfect kill. As the golden tabby came back, the cream warrior gave the young cat a warm smile. Then, he mewed, “That was wonderful, Lynxpaw. Now, you may bury your prey and we can get on with this patrol.” Birchcloud gazed at Lynxpaw as he followed orders and then took the lead once more toward the border.
(Ok, maybe when the patrols return, I’ll have Lynxpaw rest in the apprentices den and we could have the Dark Forest Warriors meet him?)
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 15:31:18 GMT -5
(I was thinking they could visit swanpaw too but that wouldn't be till later. I can't wait til his kids are apprentices because then I can do more with the plot. I don't want to kill any of them off but I'll have to choose eventually. Would you prefer my character Coldclaws or do you want me to make a different one to visit him? ALso who did I put on border patrol, was it the other group? I think I have two loners they could meet.)
Hawkgrip smiled at the apprentice, And then looked away. The brown and black tabby tom scented the air, his ears swiveling. He spotted a blue jay pecking at some roots and he lowered himself into a stalk, the foliage hiding him well. He got as close as he could, and lowered his haunches creeping forward. He pounced on the bird, hearing its neck snap beneath him. He picked it up and dug a hole, dropping the bluejay in. He then turned to find Birchcloud and Lynxpaw.
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Post by Zz on Jan 11, 2021 15:33:08 GMT -5
I could have Nightmare visit someone I like to think he's the worst of the worst as he killed hundreds of cats and got away with it and raised his children in his steps and everything. He got away with it to the point that he was able to hide away and grow old without being tracked down. hehe))
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 15:36:11 GMT -5
(would Nightmare have a problem visiting a kit? or maybe just choose one of the apprentices, but both cant visit the same one. If I had more mentors I could make a few kits older , for the plot line but we'll just have to wait for more joiners lol. I have so much planned. And after they visit the apprentices we could have them visit some warriors, because I know crooked and sinister were meant to be evil characters. I"m rambling lol)
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 15:37:19 GMT -5
They could meet up later, Coldclaws and Nightmare. I had so much planned for Coldclaws when I was younger im fangirling over my oc. )
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Post by Zz on Jan 11, 2021 15:37:29 GMT -5
nimbleNightmare is the type that he would try to convert anyone. His children were only kits when he began to train them (Even killing one of them in the process and rubbing it off as her just being too weak) so you can throw him at anyone. lol))
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 15:49:03 GMT -5
(okay, how about he visits Hickorykit and Swanpaw. And Coldclaws will visit Lynxpaw and Dapplekit. But crooked and sinister will have their part later I suppose. I might make another dark forest character and another adoptable. I think I made too many queens so I'm going to make Daisyhearts kits warriors if thats okay with everyone? )
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 15:53:10 GMT -5
Crookedleg walked ahead to be beside Bonestar, who was slowing down. He looked at his leader, expecting him to say something. The leader wasn't looking at him, but rather at the canyon below. His odd eyes were narrowed but relaxed. Crookedleg realized he was staring and looked aware, a bit embarrassed. He watched his leader continue walking, then stop at the tree line in front of them, and began to mark. Crookedleg followed after, marking ahead of the leader.
Sinisterjaw looked at Primrosedawn, and walked to stand beside her. "It's amazing isn't it. " The black and white tom meowed quietly.
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Post by Zz on Jan 11, 2021 16:15:40 GMT -5
Sounds good to me))
Darkness seems to emanate from his very being, his pitch black fur flowed, the long strands seeming to move and shift, giving the illusion that the tom himself was made of shadows. Dark green eyes shone out, seeming to pierce through your very soul as he moved ever so silently, summoning all of his strength to jump into the dream of Swanpaw, knowing that she would be easier to convince than his second target. She was already full of secrets, what was one more? Especially if that secret brought you strength and power. He spotted her almost immediately and gave a laugh, his voice the sound of claws screeching across rocks. "Hello there little apprentice." He spat out his words with venom, never having been a kind tom to anyone.
((To be clear, Nightmare was about 88 moons when he had his kits (and the she-cat really didn't want to be with him but she had no where else to go)) Ravenblood/ 35 moons when she died/ Dark Forest/ she-cat/ pitch black she-cat with long fur and piercing amber eyes/ secretive, quiet, malicious/ daughter of Nightmare and an unknown rogue. sister to Eclipsedsight and Batkit/ Zz/ strawberry shake/ died before her father
Eclipsedsight/ 54 moons when he died/ Dark Forest/ tom/ pure white tom with piercing green eyes and short fur/ evil, conniving, and ambitious/ son of Nightmare and an unknown rogue. brother to Ravenblood and Batkit. Father to Bloodheart/ Zz/ strawberry shake/ died before his father
Batkit/ 3 moons when she died/ Starclan/ she-cat/ dark gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes/ kind, sweet, hopeful/ daughter of Nightmare and an unknown rogue. Sister to Ravenblood and Eclipsedsight/ Zz/ strawberry shake/ never wanted to be bad and died because of it
Bloodheart/ 32 moons/ Warrior/ tom/ Gray tabby tom with white paws and blue eyes/ shy, hopeful, determined/ grandson of Nightmare. nephew of Ravenblood and Batkit. Son of Eclipsedsight and an unknown she-cat/ Zz/ strawberry shake/ trying to be good but scared his family will come back to haunt him (please, let them tryyyy. Or send someone else to try and recruit him. Maybe he's the one who reveals what's going on to the leader?). Was raised partly by Nightmare
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 17:26:36 GMT -5
(ooh those look good zz, I'll put them up later.)
Swanpaw was startled. She saw a pitch black tom, and she didn't know them. Was she still dreaming? She didn't know. His voice was mean, and swanpaw looked up at him. She sat up, puffing out her chest. "Who are you?" She meowed angrily.
Bonestar turned back, satisfied with what they had done. "Lets return to camp." He suggested. hw turned in the direction of camp, his white fur blending in with the snow.
Sinisterjaw followed after the leader, his brother in tow .
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Post by Zz on Jan 11, 2021 17:33:10 GMT -5
Nightmare gave another laugh, his paw steps leading him in an increasingly smaller circle around the she-cat until he was wrapped around her, one paw reaching up to tilt her chin so she was looking right into his eyes. "No one you would know little pet. You weren't born yet when I died. I'm not hear for introductions though... I'm here with a proposition." He was suddenly away from her, sitting as calm as can be with his feathery tail wrapped around his paws. "Up to you on if you want to hear it or not."
(glad you like them!)
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Post by Copperstar☂ on Jan 11, 2021 17:40:28 GMT -5
Robinskip groomed her pelt outside the warriors den, wondering if Snailpaw was feeling any better. She angled her ears towards the apprentices den to see if there was any sign of the apprentice coming out.
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Robinbreeze
On vacation till the 27th. Will work on replies when I get back.
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Post by Robinbreeze on Jan 11, 2021 18:03:01 GMT -5
(Gonna skip Birchcloud’s patrol home ) As Birchcloud entered the camp, he placed his shrews on the fresh-kill pile. It had been a successful patrol, plus they managed to find quite a bit of prey. The cream-colored tom padded off to the side, beginning to groom his wind-blown coat. Lynxpaw dropped his mouse on the pile beside the shrews and glanced at his mentor. “If there’s nothing else you’d like me to do, I would like to go take a nap,” he mewed, and slowly turned to head toward the apprentices’ den. Once there, he circled twice and lay down, gazing around at the other apprentices before drifting off to sleep.
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Post by Copperstar☂ on Jan 11, 2021 18:14:21 GMT -5
Robinskip noticed the patrol returning and flicked her tail in greeting. She dashed over to the fresh-kill pile and grabbed one of the shrews that Birchcloud had just placed on the pile.
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Post by nimble on Jan 11, 2021 21:29:17 GMT -5
Swanpaw narrowed her eyes, the blue sparkling. "I'd love to hear it." She growled
There was a flurry of black tendrils and smoke, and Coldclaws appeared out of it. The brown tabby tom had his eyes narrowed and his mouth was in a smirk. "Greetings Lynxpaw.." He purred
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Post by Zz on Jan 11, 2021 21:53:32 GMT -5
Nightmare grinned maliciously and stood, holding up his paw and sliding out her claws, admiring them. They had once been pearly white but was now stained a horrid red, the color making the tom smile widely. "It's simple really, you come and train with me and my... acquaintances. We will get access into the clan through you and in return you will gain strength, recognition, and, above all, power." His voice had turned soft, a velvety tone that he was sure would draw the others attention to his every word and phrase.
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Post by nimble on Jan 12, 2021 14:46:42 GMT -5
Swanpaw considered what the tom had said for a moment, visions of being clan leader flowing through her mind. She didn't want to wait until she was old to receive recognition for her talents. Her heart pounded, and her coat filled with heat. She was excited and it didn't seem like to bad of any idea to receive extra training. "I'll do it. "
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