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Post by Saint Ambrosef on Oct 13, 2020 22:18:37 GMT -5
couldnt think of a accurate thread title lol. what are some small moments, scenes, relationships, and such that you think are "missing" from the series, a specific book, etc?
for me, it really bugged me that we didn't get any reaction from Brackenfur when his sister sacrificed herself for his mate and kits. sorreltail seems more distressed than he is. it reads like the erins just forgot they were littermates (they probably did tbh).
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Post by silentbreeze on Oct 13, 2020 22:49:34 GMT -5
Probably Cinderpelt and Brightheart's relationship as well. I feel like there was a lot of missed potential to build more on their sister relationship, especially since they both had tragic life-changing experiences during their apprenticeship. Sure Brightheart helped with Cinderpelt's medicine cat duties, but that's all they really acknowledge.
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oh it's none of them
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Post by AsiPasasi on Oct 14, 2020 0:27:58 GMT -5
Still on the Brackenfur-Cinderpelt thing: How Brackenfur wasn't mentioned to recognize any part of his sister in Cinderheart.
I feel like in TBC, at some of the rebel gatherings, with Lionblaze, Jayfeather, and Tigerstar II, they should've at least talked about the possibilty of faking a sign from StarClan like they did back when Sol was a thing.
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Post by Lizard 🦎 on Oct 14, 2020 0:39:27 GMT -5
Some missing things. Maybe the three and Ivypool using their abilities more? Also, we're missing lots of chapters based on emotion. The books are becoming built on what's happening, and not how everyone feels about what's happening. SIBLING OR PARENT-CHILD INTERACTIONS PLEASE
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2020 0:43:02 GMT -5
firestar and cloudtail giving a proper farewell to princess
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Post by thehiddenicewolf on Oct 14, 2020 1:44:20 GMT -5
Firestar and Cloudtail both introducing their kits to Princess and they all have a little family gathering!
Goldenflower's thoughts on Tigerclaw's exile. I created a whole short story where he invites her to join him and she replies with a dramatic monolouge on why she'd never join him
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2020 1:54:14 GMT -5
Firestar and Cloudtail both introducing their kits to Princess and they all have a little family gathering! Goldenflower's thoughts on Tigerclaw's exile. I created a whole short story where he invites her to join him and she replies with a dramatic monolouge on why she'd never join him i thought whitewing and birchfall were born at the lake
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Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Oct 14, 2020 1:58:21 GMT -5
So many, but probably the biggest one for me is Bramblestar not interacting with Mothwing at all. Hopefully we'll get some sisterly moments between her and Tawnypelt in DW.
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Oct 14, 2020 2:01:26 GMT -5
Firestar and Cloudtail both introducing their kits to Princess and they all have a little family gathering! Goldenflower's thoughts on Tigerclaw's exile. I created a whole short story where he invites her to join him and she replies with a dramatic monolouge on why she'd never join him i thought whitewing and birchfall were born at the lake I assume it's been awhile since you've read TNP? Whitewing was still an apprentice when the Clans left (in fact, she's older than Squirrelflight and Leafpool) and Birchfall was still a kit. The first Clanborn kits to be born at the lake were Sorreltail's.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2020 2:05:51 GMT -5
i thought whitewing and birchfall were born at the lake I assume it's been awhile since you've read TNP? Whitewing was still an apprentice when the Clans left (in fact, she's older than Squirrelflight and Leafpool) and Birchfall was still a kit. The first Clanborn kits to be born at the lake were Sorreltail's. idr when i started reading warriors
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Post by Rainfire on Oct 14, 2020 4:12:32 GMT -5
The entire Brackenfur/Cinderpelt/Brightheart/Thornclaw litter felt like a missed opportunity for sibling interactions.
Younger me felt like Crookedstar's Promise was really missing a scene where Rainflower at least tried to apologize to Crookedstar.
I feel like TBC is missing out on Shadowsight/Bristlefrost interactions. I was expecting/hoping for all three main protags of this arc to be a tight-knit little group of friends with each other, but that hasn't really happened? Yeah, Root and Bristle have their whole thing, and Root and Shadow have cute moments too, but I've been sitting here waiting for some good Shadowsight and Bristlefrost interactions. I'm hoping we get something in next 3 books, because I'd love to see Shadow and Bristle end up as friends.
Pouncestep and Lightleap just feel missing a lot in general, ESPECIALLY in VoS lol
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Post by Goldy from Dappleclan on Oct 14, 2020 7:34:21 GMT -5
More moments where cats are just enjoying themselves, enjoying the territory that they live in.
Like, most of the background characters only seem to patrol and hunt. Don't they have any hobbies? Lives?
I liked the scene where Lionblaze and Hollyleaf climbed a tree together because at least it's different than discussing something while on patrol.
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Post by Saint Ambrosef on Oct 14, 2020 11:42:02 GMT -5
i thought whitewing and birchfall were born at the lake I assume it's been awhile since you've read TNP? Whitewing was still an apprentice when the Clans left (in fact, she's older than Squirrelflight and Leafpool) and Birchfall was still a kit. The first Clanborn kits to be born at the lake were Sorreltail's. also birchfall is dustpelt/ferncloud's kit, not firestar's or cloudtail's
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2020 12:42:43 GMT -5
What people have already said. Also, how Spiderleg doesn't seem to care about Shrewpaw's death, despite Shrewpaw being his littermate. Whitewing is the one who sits vigil for him. Only Lilyheart seemed to care when Snowbush died. It would have been cool if siblings from different litters acted like siblings, and it wasn't only just littermates who do, even though that's pretty rare in itself.
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Post by Fernsong on Oct 14, 2020 13:39:32 GMT -5
I mentioned this in the Cloudtail thread a couple days ago, but a Cloudtail-Firestar moment I wish we could've seen was Cloudtail's reaction to Firestar's death. I forget which author said so, but apparently Cloudtail was "very upset" upon hearing that Firestar died, but we get no evidence of that in TLH, Dovewing's Silence, or I believe any book after, which I found weird since Cloudtail and Firestar had a closer non parent-kit relative relationship than most other cats.
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🎵Guess that's just the way it goes, easy come, easy go🎵
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on Oct 14, 2020 19:04:52 GMT -5
I wish there had been more interactions with Brambleclaw and the Three before the secret had come out- just playful, family interactions.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2020 21:48:25 GMT -5
Where's my son Egg
Mothwing having scenes with Tawnypelt and Bramblestar. It's been 4 1/2 arcs and they haven't interacted once?
Cats actually talking to cats other than their kin (and even then they don't really)
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Post by Fernsong on Oct 14, 2020 23:18:07 GMT -5
Assuming you mean Egg from SkyClan (surely, right? haha), he was sadly one of those SkyClan cats that pretty much got Thanos'd before the beginning of Hawkwing's Journey. Which sucks, because Shrewtooth also just disappeared but he had a cool arc.
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