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Gazekit and Poppypaw with Silverpaw

Gazekit nodded. "There he is now." He said pointing to where the warrior had come in and set down some prey. "He looks like he's still mourning Thymestar and Elmsong. Though aren't we all." He flicked his ear sadly thinking about the great losses of the leader and warrior.

Poppypaw nodded. "I do not envy Elmstar and Silverrose that. I don't think I would want to be in charge of all these cats." She looked at the camp and how it was filled with cats. Even though some were still out hunting and such. She shuddered. "I think having one apprentice is enough for me." She silently added that Elmstar had yet to name a Deputy.


Ivysplash and Wishkit with Shortcake and Weaselkit

Ivysplash had moved off toward the camp entrance to give the young cats space to talk. He chuckled when Shortcake fell trying to get up. Though he wouldn't mention it.

Wishkit nodded her agreement to Weaselkit's statements. "Weaselkit's gonna be leader one day. I can see it now." She said proudly.

Turtlepool with Heronflight.

"That's one thing I liked about Thymestar in his younger years. He always asked other people's opinions. Though he got more pig headed in his later years." She said. She giggled at Heronflight's comment about Rainsong and Cloudflower and Webwillow.

Weaselkit - with Wishkit and Shortcake


Silverpaw - with Gazekit and Poppypaw

Silverpaw glanced over at Basilwhisker, nodding sadly. "He tries to push it aside when we're training but I can tell he's still having a hard time adjusting. I don't blame him. Both were such great cats and Elmsong even was his mentor." He gave an affirmative mew when Poppypaw spoke up. "I'm not sure it's for me either. Sure, it sounds amazing for the most part but it's such a big responsibility! And," he added with a quiet chuckle, "I don't think I'd have the patience for it. No, I'll just focus on becoming the best warrior I can be."

Heronflight - with Turtlepool

"He did, didn't he," she sighed with a slight smile. "It's a good way of leading a clan. Listening to others, thinking things through and making the best decision he could make based on that. Too bad he couldn't have stayed that way but even when Thymestar got older the clan still respected and loved him." She glanced over at Elmstar. "Well, I hope Elmstar can live up to everyone's expectations while still finding his own way to lead our clan. He already did well with how he handled the situation with Roseclan. And now we'll have to see how well he knows his warriors. You know, having to decide who'll work best with which new apprentice," she purred. "He'll have less than a moon to fully decide if he hasn't done so yet."

(Sorry yall it's been the last two weeks of school so Ivy and I have been riding the struggle bus. One more week and it's summer for us though!!.)


Wishkit with Shortcake Briefly and Weaselkit

Wishkit listened to what Weaselkit thought she would do as leader. She nodded along knowing her friend could be all these things. She giggled when she said she would give Houndear more duties. "He might be an elder by the time you're leader." She commented. Then she looked to Shortcake. "Bye. Nice to meet you!" She purred waving her tail in farewell. She turned to Weaselkit and pounced on her full of energy once more.

Gazekit and Poppypaw with Silverpaw

Gazekit nodded sadly. "Thymestar at least lived a very full life. But Elmsong was even younger than Elmstar. I think he might have been Deputy for Elmstar if he didn't die." He had a grim set to his face. "It makes me wonder who Elmstar will pick as Deputy. It's been a bit since he became leader isn't it?" He asked the question innocently.

Poppypaw nodded at Silverpaw's comments about it being a big responsibility to be leader. She also nodded to Gazekit's comments. "Maybe we could go hunting if you know his favorite prey. Sadly we'll have to leave Gazekit behind though." She frowned at the kit.


Turtlepool with Heronflight

Turtlepool nodded as Heronflight spoke. "He must have some idea already. He at least has an easier time if Gazekit goes to Icewhisper. One less cat to match up. But all of those kits are pretty spunky. Minus Foxkit and Coalkit but they are both still unique and wonderful." She turned her head to watch the leader as he sat by himself no longer talking to anyone.

Ivysplash with Shortcake

Ivysplash watched as Shortcake cut off their conversation with the two she-kits and turned to him. "Are you ready? Do you remember where I said we were headed?" He asked the two questions with little pause between them. Yacinthe


Basilwhisker open

Basilwhisker dropped his mice in the prey pile and walked to the side of the Warrior's den. He laid beside it and sighed. He looked around and saw Silverpaw look at him for a brief second. He nodded to the apprentice and then laid his head on his paws.

Marshkit open

Marshkit had found a ball of moss and was tumbling around by himself playing with it. He was having the time of his life getting dust on his already muddy looking pelt.


Frostfeather open

Frostfeather was at the Pond sitting at the edge and fishing. Her silver tipped pelt had some splashes of water on it from landing a fish. She had two fish dead on the bank and was eying a third.


Snowdapple and Coalkit open

Snowdapple and Coalkit lay near the nursery curled up next to each other. Coalkit watched the clan while Snowdapple had her eyes closed her head resting her head on her paws.

warrior
Crystalfur
13 moons
a beutiful sleek she cat with a glossy silver pelt and shining blue eyes a great hunter can stalk prey VERY well great spy and not afraid to try new things not interested in love of any sort after her first mate dyed on a thunder path and got hit by a monster very loyal to her friends an keeps the warrior code and is ready to get her first apprentice and wants to pass on her skill to many cats to come.

So apprentices become warriors at 13 moon so Crystal's would have to be much at least 19 moons to have a mate and an apprentice. Also there isn't a nearby Thunder path. So if you could make these changes that would be great. Either by making her 19 moons or older or editing her story to be a fresh warrior's story.

Elmstar made eye contact with Rainsong as he started moving towards him. When Rainsong came up and asked his question Elmstar nodded. "Yes actually. I was thinking that you would be a great match for Coalkit as her mentor." He said quietly. Not wanting anyone else to over hear. "I just wanted to warn you that she has yet to say a word to anyone. I wanted to make sure you were up for the challenge."

Cedarfrost: 42 moons. A light brown tom with dark brown patches and blue eyes. He is a serious cat who detests laziness and weakness. He also doesn't think too highly of cats who aren't clanborn, at least until he thinks they've proven themselves to be trustworthy and reliable. While he can be very harsh to those he sees as useless, not serious enough, weak or stupid and will also criticise others for tiny mistakes he cares a lot about Thymeclan and wants everyone to reach their full potential, as any of his former apprentices will know all too well. He might even give some advice to any young cat who's brave enough to approach him and will try to be patient with them. Despite his dislike for weakness he can be surprisingly kind to clanmates who are old, sick or injured and will always make sure that they get enough food. Pineclaw

Elmstar with Rainsong

Elmstar sighed in relief that Rainsong said he would mentor Coalkit. Obviously relieved he listened to what the other tom had to say. "I guess I hadn't noticed her play with Silverpaw. I'll have to commend him on his abilities to understand a kit who doesn't speak and get her to play despite her shyness." He purred as he looked between the apprentice and kit. "It's easy to forget what one may miss if you don't stop and watch. Thank you for pointing this out."

ok thanks for the feedback!

I fixed the grammar and took out the Thuderpath thing cause the cats barely know about the Thundercats becuase it's multiple days travel from camp. I also put it into sentences. How does that look to you? Becuase I would approve it like this.)
Also when out of rp we put something at the end at least of our text so everyone knows it's not part of the rp/]) <-like that)

Cloudflower - To Webwillow

"Aye, I suppose." He said a bit melancholic as he placed his muzzle between his paws. "Well, I guess it's inevitable, but it hasn't been very long since Elmstar became leader. It feels too early to think about his successor." He kneaded the earth with one paw. "I feels like... jinxing him. You know? Not that the kits don't have the chops." Cloudflower paused, then let out a sigh. Their leader had many lives still to live, why was he worrying so much? Webwillow was right about those kits, they show real promise before they were even apprentices. That's already more than a furball like me. "Sorry, I'm just bringing the mood down. I'm sure you're right about them."


Shortcake - To Ivysplash

Shortcake flicked their tail goodbye to the playing kits and dashed off to Ivysplash's side. "I'm ready to go!" They announced with a hop.

Shortcake - to Ivysplash

Shortcake's ears flattened in embarrassment. "Oh, um. theee..." They shuffled thier paws they thought, then suddenly leapt up. "The meadow! Right? We're going to hunt?"

Shortcake - To Ivysplash

Shortcake restrained themself, though the tip of their tail still jittered. "Yes, Ivysplash." They looked around. "So, where do we go first?" They were not particularly familiar with the territory yet; where would prey hide?

Webwillow nodded as Cloudflower spoke. "I see what you mean by jinxing him. He just got his lives about a moon ago. I doubt we will get a new leader for a few seasons at least. Thymestar had to be a good 100 or more moons when he finally last his last lives in the fox attack." She sighed and turned to watch the kits as they started to tumble again. "Well they certainly are something. And I bet you or Berrythorn get one of them as your apprentice too." She said grasping at straws to make conversation.