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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 15:05:27 GMT -5
post one // directory and links post two // joining forum post three // saved prexies
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Bisexual
𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 15:05:52 GMT -5
please, please, please follow this form! anyone joining without the proper form will not be accepted until proper use. thank you.
name [ gender, age, sexuality ] physical description personality description rank: kin: open to plots?:
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 15:06:14 GMT -5
a prefix can be used once. please, refrain from using saved prefixes. you can save your prefixes before posting your cats(:
a [ apple, ant ] b [ buzzard, basil, bumble, blaze, boar, beetle, bright ] c [ cougar, cherry, cricket, cinder ] d [ dove, dark, dappled, daisy ] e [ elm, echo, ebony ] f [ fly, fog, fallow, fox, fern ] g [ ghost, gold ] h [ honey, harpy ] i j k [ koi ] l [ lynx, lilly ] m [ moth, mint ] n [ night ] o [ oat ] p [ peach, proud, pigeon, panther ] q r [ river, raven, ripple ] s [ silent, sand, smoke, soft ] t [ toad ] u v [ vulture, viper ] w [ wren, wolf ] x y z
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a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 15:06:56 GMT -5
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a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 15:10:45 GMT -5
this joining page is officially open!
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𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 15:12:53 GMT -5
[ saved prefixes ; peach, basil, cougar, buzzard, vulture ]
peachstar [ she-cat, 43 moons, heterosexual ] peachstar is a cream she-cat, long fur cascading off the frame. gentle white spots frequent her fur. this fluffy she-cat has long legs, part of her heritage of bambooclan. she has a feathery tail, one that is tipped with the white. her paws are also ivory in color, just up to her ankles. peachstar's eyes are a soft green. she has a light salmon colored nose. peachstar is a sweetheart. growing up, she always did everything so she could pull through and make sure everyone in her clan was happy. her mother, who is now gone in starclan, was the last leader, falconstar. she wanted to walk in her mothers footsteps, and that often pushes her decisions to this day. now, this can be hard when consulting with others, as others know she often goes with what her mother would have done. but she can be indecisive. she's fierce in battle and loving to her clanmates. peachstar is very involved in her clanmates lives, not in an intrusive way though. she socializes, she likes to know what's going on and what she can do better as a leader. this way of leading isn't often known, but peachstar likes the way she does things. she's hardheaded in that. overall, peachstar is a gentle leader, one who is determined to lead her clan to success. rank: leader kin:n/a open to plots?: yes of course<3
cougarsnout [ tom, 68 moons, heterosexual ] courgarsnout is a tough old tom. layers of muscle ripple under his pelt from moons of serving as a warrior. his bristly brown fur is laced in scars from battles. one scar specifically traces the length from his shouldblade of his left front leg all the way to the ankle of his leg. another scar is lifted right above his eye. along with that, he has a few notches in his ears. his eyes are a deep amber. along his fur, dark tabby markings jut through the brown. cougarsnout, just like his looks, embed in his personality. he's gruff, he can be mean, but he means it in the best of ways. cougarsnout is very specific in the way that he does things. he's done them the same way ever since he became a warrior. he has a specific technique of hunting, specific teqhnique of fighting. of course, this has left him scarred but he's hardheaded and not exactly openminded. he likes things the way that he does them and won't change for anyone. cougarsnout is well-respected in the clan, rising up in the ranks. he was asked to be deputy by falconstar but passed it up due to wanting to stay a warrior. he simply wanted to fight and rest peacefully afterwards. he's.. strange. its ok. this hothead is secretly a big teddybear for any kits. rank: senior warrior kin: n/a open to plots?: of course!
basilsniff [ she-cat, 25 moons, bisexual ] basilsniff is a little cutie. well, little could be the wrong word to describe her. she has the long legs of a bambooclan cat, however, she's small in size. her fur is a blend of light dove grey and white, dapples flecking across her backside. along with that, her toes are a soft ivory color, along with the underside of her tail. this girl also has white dapples along her forehead and up towards her ears. her eyes are a soft blue in color, like the skies that sometimes poke out from above the trees. basilsniff is a very caring she-cat. she would give her life to any cat that needed it. she's open-minded, sweet, and gentle. she's great with kits and apprentices, always lending a helping hand. in fact, initially, she wanted to be a medicine cat apprentice, but dealing with blood really isn't her strong suit. so instead, she became a warrior to help fend off predators that could sneak up on the clan. most importantly, she loves hanging out by the nursery. she loves playing with the kits that are out and about, ready to become apprentices. basilsniff has a motherly side to her, caring about her friends, and her loved ones. rank: warrior kin: n/a open to plots?: yes!
buzzardpaw [ she-cat, 7 moons, bisexual ] buzzardpaw is a pretty little she-cat. she has soft dove grey fur with slightly deeper grey tabby markings scaling the length of her back, just up to the middle of her tail, down to about her forelegs, and slightly cascading onto her face. her still downy fur has yet to change from being a kit, but she doesn't mind her soft fur. her eyes are a chilly mint green in color, with deeper fleck of a blue hinting the edges. buzzardpaw is lively. she's very strong headed and doesn't really like to take no for an answer. she loves getting out and doing things, even if that means getting in to trouble. between her and her brother, she's way more active. buzzardpaw loves a good joke, and is kind of the life of the party - which is probably why her friendships in the clan is large. she cares deeply, and is very protective over her brother, vulturepaw. growing up, they were and still are inseparable, always wanting to go out together, if not, then not at all. really, buzzardpaw just wants to keep an eye on him and make sure that he is ok. rank: apprentice kin: sister to vulturepaw open to plots?: yes!
vulturepaw [ tom, 7 moons, homosexual ] vulturepaw is a deep grey tom, with slightly wirey fur. he has long legs like the standard bambooclan cat, opposing from his sister who didn't inherit the genes. black tabby stripes run up and down his back, stretching all the way down to his paws which are tipped in a gentle ivory color. along with that, his tail and muzzle also carry that ivory color. his eyes are a dark green. vulturepaw is actually very quiet for an apprentice. usually, apprentices are often jumping out of their skin to get to training, but vulturepaw is different. while he does like to train, he's hesitant on getting hurt in the training. he isn't a huge fan of fighting, but absolutely loves hunting. while he doesn't like hurting prey, he also knows its his duty to feed the clan. vulturepaw often isn't noticed unless he's with his sister, buzzardpaw, dragging him around. when he is there, often he'll spook another cat due to him not speaking until being spoken too. he gets snipped at, others thinking it's a lack of respect, however he really doesn't know what to say to others. socialization isn't his strongpoint. rank: apprentice kin: brother to buzzardpaw open to plots?: yess!
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a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 16:46:08 GMT -5
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Mar 16, 2020 17:54:22 GMT -5
kale’s character save ; ; wip
[ prefixes: honey, bumble, lynx, cherry, silent, fly ] [ full names: honeyblossom, bumblebriar, lynxleap, cherrydapple, flyfrost ]
honeypaw [ she-cat, 12 moons, homosexual ] #f7fbbe honeypaw is a long-legged she-cat with a lean build and soft, eerily quiet paws. her short fur has a pale ginger base, with darker ginger tabby markings and dark ear tips. pale white points mark her lower front legs, her paws, her underbelly and chest, her chin, and the tip of her tail. there's a single white marking on her right shoulder that almost forms the shape of a honeycomb. her eyes are a pale blue-green, and her nose is a pale pink. her paw pads are a deep black. honeypaw's fur is very fine, and almost never out of place. the first word that comes to her clanmates mind when describing honeypaw is bright. she is always energetic and fun-loving, and is very adventurous. honeypaw is a sweetheart, and almost too trusting for her own good. she's quite naive, and occasionally gets into trouble because she gets caught up in the other apprentices' mischievous schemes. she is very caring, and often will put herself at risk to protect or take care of her clanmates. she excels at hunting, due to her quiet paws and long legs. battle is where she has issues, though, because she hates the thought of hurting others and hesitates. rank: senior apprentice kin: sister to bumblepaw open to plots?: yes!
bumblepaw [ tom, 12 moons, pansexual ] #ccfbbe bumblepaw is a bulky tom with long, messy fur and large paws that are great for slamming opponents. his fur is a darker ginger than his sister's, with darker tabby markings across his forehead, shoulders, spine, and tail. his paws, underbelly, and lower chest are all a soft ivory white color. bumblepaw has pale green eyes with yellow around his pupils, and his nose is a deep gray color. with broad shoulders, large paws, and muscle for days, bumblepaw was built for battle, not speed. for a tomcat, bumblepaw is very feminine in nature. he is kindhearted, soft, and shy. he prefers sharing tongues to going out on and getting into trouble for no real reason. bumblepaw is easy to talk to and very clearly cares about his clanmates - he's not afraid to show his emotions. despite his preference for solving problems rationally, he is excellent in battle, because he is built like a battering ram. when he is angered, he is tough to calm down, because his good nature causes him to bottle his emotions until they're too much for him to hide. rank: senior apprentice kin: brother to honeypaw open to plots?: yes
lynxleap [ tom, 20 moons, bisexual ] #acecea lynxleap is a medium-furred tomcat with an average build. his base coat is a soft cream color, with white on his toes, ear tips, and eyes. his face, legs, and tail are all gray with dark tabby markings. his eyes are a bright but pale blue, and his nose and paw pads are both pale pink. lynxleap is not built for any one activity, which gives him the advantage of being able to do it all. rather than excel at one task over others, he is on equal footing in each one. lynxleap is not an emotional cat. he feels, and he feels strongly, but he does not show emotion easily. it has never been something he did, even as a kit. he faces his feelings in private, where he can cry or shout or stomp his paws without fear of being judged or pitied. it helps him keep a handle on his emotions, and prevents him from being rash or impulsive. whilst he is still kind and good with others, he focuses on his clan, almost to the wrong extent. he wants nothing for the best for his clan, and is a little too willing to sacrifice for that. rank: warrior kin: open! open to plots?: yes!
cherrypaw [ she-cat, 13 moons, homosexual ] #eac4df cherrypaw is a small she-cat, with a pale pink nose and pink paw pads. her fur is short but messy, and is primarily a soft gray in color. it is mottled with very pale orange spots that are almost rose-y. with a bobbed tail and a very petite build, it's clear that cherrypaw was never meant for battle or hunting. her soft green eyes are good for showing sincerity and caring to her patients. cherrypaw has a small problem with her balance, which makes it hard for her to keep up on long journeys or walks, because she has to stop frequently. from the very beginning, cherrypaw was always a soft, sweet-hearted cat. she loves to care for and help others, and absolutely detests the idea of fighting. because of this, she comes across as a bit too non-confrontational for some cats. as much as she'll stand up for herself, she would rather walk away and calm down than raise her voice. she can be quite timid, and is easy to manipulate. rank: medicine cat apprentice kin: open! open to plots?: yes!
silentstep [ tom, 32 moons, demisexual ] #b9c9f3 physical description personality description rank: warrior kin: open! open to plots?: yes!
flyfrost [ tom, 75 moons, bisexual ] #b9f3d5 flyfrost is a tom of average size, with a lean build and medium-length fur. he is a gray tabby - his base color is a soft ash gray, with darker points just above his eyes and on his toes. darker gray markings cross over his shoulders, legs, back, tail, and head. the lower part of his legs, his chin, his ears, and his stomach are all a soft ivory color. flyfrost's eyes are a pale blue-green color. his nose and paw pads are all a soft pink. with long whiskers, flyfrost has above-average coordination and balance. flyfrost is many things. he is intelligent, quick, observant, and witty. one thing he is not though is good with emotions. flyfrost has always struggled with how his emotions overwhelm him, causing him to be a bit impulsive and temperamental. his strength makes him a good warrior, but his recklessness and temper get him into trouble often. as he has aged he has calmed down mildly, but he is far from cool and collected. rank: senior warrior kin: open! open to plots?: yes!
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Post by 𝑓𝑜𝑥 on Mar 16, 2020 18:09:04 GMT -5
i love the idea for a clan in this territory. <3 i refrained from writing up descriptions just yet as i was curious what amount of detail/length you were looking for? let me know and i can definitely get them done now. ^^
harpyshriek [ she-cat, 48 moons, heterosexual ] Harpyshriek is a warrior a bit on the smaller side, but what she lacks in build she makes up for in character. Her coat is long and on the fluffier side, however, she isn't known to take care of it, so it often becomes scraggly and matted. Harpyshriek is not one to trouble herself with appearances. Her fur is pale grey, detailed with faint black tabby stripes and a patch of white covering her underbelly up to her chest, neck, muzzle, and blaze. Her eyes are a stale amber shade and her face is riddled with faint scars, concentrated mostly around her nose. Harpyshirek isn't what you would consider the friendliest sort. She has always been a feisty cat, although she's learned to bit her tongue more with age. She still is, however, the type to jump paws first into action without asking questions or considering consequences, which gets her into trouble even as a warrior. Battle has always been a second nature to her, thus her talents lie more in fighting technique than they do hunting. The brashness of her attitude does not come without its hangups, and although she is a loyal warrior, her clanmates oftentimes find her hard to get along with. She's gruff and snarky and does not hesitate to speak her mind, whether that's with her tongue or her claws, and she has an immense distaste for whatever she considers "weakness". rank: warrior kin: open to relations of any kind! open to plots?: definitely.
koipaw [ she-cat, 12 moons, homosexual ] Skinny for her age, Koipaw may not have fared well as a warrior, however this wasn't what drove her to select her path in the clan. She has a short, downy coat of calico fur, predominately white with the majority of her orange and black spots appearing on her back, flank, and head. Her eyes are a light shade of green and her facial features are on the daintier side, with a small pink nose and plentiful white whiskers Koipaw is known for being quite the know-it-all and a severe perfectionist. She has a very strong passion for her work as a medicine cat and strives to be better at it everyday. This desire, however, can lead her to overwhelm herself at times and she always pushes herself too hard. She knows that lives depend on her abilities, especially in the sometimes severe climate of Bambooclan and her biggest fear is to lose a patient because she wasn't "good enough". She has a tendency to blame herself harshly for her failures, even when they are small or inevitable. She can come off as quite severe at times, being overbearing and easily flustered. While she needs to work on her bedside manner, she is truly dedicated to the well-being of her clanmates. Internally she is incredibly sensitive to criticism and failure and tends to take things too personally. For this reason, she is known not to get too close to others or confide in them as she is afraid of appearing weak or like a bad medicine cat. However, she is a sweet and sensitive young cat who just pushes herself too hard. rank: medicine cat apprentice, if that's okay! kin: open to any relations. <3 open to plots?: definitely!
fogdapple [ tom, 24 moons, bisexual ] Fogdapple has the long legs of Bambooclan blood as well as sharp and angular features to his physique. His ears stand tall and pointed while his eyes and muzzle are very narrow and thin. Fogdapple's fur is an ashen grey color, patterned by frequent black spots that give him his name. Three of his paws are entirely black, and he has a darker grey smudge along the blaze of his nose. His eyes are a dull gold and his nose is charcoal. As a young warrior, Fogdapple has yet to grow out of his apprentice face... and many believe he never will. He is happy-go-lucky and has a hard time taking anything seriously. He was an apprentice much longer than he should have been, and many of his denmates received their warrior named before him, but this never bothered the tom. As a warrior he's gotten a bit better, but frequently needs a nudge or some stern supervision to make sure he completes his duties. Fogdapple is incredibly chatty and loves to socialize with his clanmates and get involved in their business, often crossing the polite line into being downright nosy. It comes from a good place, however, as he has a good heart and cares deeply for his clan. When necessary, he can pull himself together to feed or defend his clanmates, but it takes a lot to get the severity of some situations through his naivety and blind optimism. rank: warrior kin: open to all! open to plots?: yep!
boartusk [ tom, 65 moons, heterosexual ] Boartusk is an aptly named warrior. He's larger and bulky in size, unlike most long-featured and lithe Bambooclan cats, with broad shoulders, thick limbs, and muscles toned from years of use. The tom's fur is a bit wiry, like a boars, and a dark brown in color. He has lighter brown highlights along his face and chest, and dark, mackerel tabby striping. Boartusk earned his warrior suffix for a slight underbite that makes his two bottom canines protrude from his mouth at all times. The canine on the on the left side if broken off halfway from a bad tumble he took as an apprentice. His eyes are a light green color. Boartusk has a grandfatherly attitude, although not the sweet, warm disposition you might expect. He's more of a grumpy, "get off of my lawn, you crazy kids" type of guy. His disposition if gruff and no-nonsense. Boartusk never had the time or the patience for those who'd rather play and goof around, as he has dedicated his life to hard-work and serving his clan. His manners need some work and he can be especially short-tempered with kits and apprentices, but he means well. Boartusk has a big heart for his entire clan but believes that his hard attitude is what has made him a good warrior. He regrets the sacrifices in relationships he's made at times to serve his clan, as the tom always wanted a mate and kits to raise into strong warriors, but that just never seemed to be in the cards for him. rank:senior warrior kin:none, but open. open to plots?: yep!
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Post by UnsightlyHeretic831 on Mar 16, 2020 18:10:29 GMT -5
{I'll make more OCs later ^^} Elmflower [ she-cat, 34 moons, pansexual ] Elmflower is very unique Maine Coon in coat pattern. Her fur is a dark brown, with lighter brown, almost beige, stockings, and chest. Her fur is soft and fluffy, and long in length. Plus, her tail is long and flexible. Elmflower has light brown freckles and a black nose. She has a scar on her right shoulder, making the skin around the area tough. Elmflower has lighter brown tufts on her ears. Elmflower does not mix well in social situations and comes off as awkward and shy, despite being easily capable of striking up interesting conversations with close friends. She likes to keep a tight circle and tries to be her best self in front of others, but fails most of the time and embarrasses herself instead. Elmflower can get very jealous when it comes to crushes and friends who stop hanging out with her, and shuts them out. Elmflower has a talent in hunting, but not always down to go out on patrols, whether it be hunting or just patrolling. She takes strolls by herself on Greenleaf mornings to calm herself down from any stress or problems she might have, which she does have all the time. rank: Warrior kin: Open open to plots?: Yes.
Blazepaw {Future name will be Blazecreek}[ Tom, 13 moons, homosexual ]
Blazepaw's name is his description in a nutshell. His fur is short and fiery colored, and he has a sleek frame built for swimming. His eyes are a dark green and he would be considered handsome. His nose is pink, and light striped tabby patterns cross his fur. His chest and underbelly are darker blazing shades. Blazepaw is very charming and a social butterfly. He loves to make friends and be productive. He's a jock type and very creative and smart. Sometimes he can be too full of himself and can make snide remarks to things. He's not the kind of cat to sit around and do nothing, he has to be doing something. Blazepaw is a little clumsy and a diva, but that won't stop him from his main goal: be awesome and have everyone like you. He doesn't take rejection or criticism well, but he can make a joke out of anything if you give him some time. rank: Senior apprentice kin: Open open to plots?: Yes.
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a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 18:13:10 GMT -5
hi 𝑓𝑜𝑥 ! for descriptions I'm just looking for like a small paragraph of each physical and personality! just something simple so people can get a feel of your characters!
as for koipaw being the medicine cat apprentice, definitely! we'll just have to make sure we have a medicine cat now haha!
i'll add both of you guys prefixes to the saved post! ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ »
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𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 18:14:48 GMT -5
UnsightlyHeretic831 hi! i reviewed you characters and they're accepted! i'll add them to the main page here soon!
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Post by 𝑓𝑜𝑥 on Mar 16, 2020 18:15:30 GMT -5
[ sounds good, thanks! i'll get them typed up now. (: ]
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Mar 16, 2020 18:16:58 GMT -5
i actually posted on the main page asking if i could reserve medicine cat apprentice earlier ^.^’ i wanted to ask beforehand so it was clear 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
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a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 18:19:54 GMT -5
ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » , i replied to your post on the main page c; im so sorry i didn't see that earlier. 𝑓𝑜𝑥 has the med cat apprentice - its my fault for not seeing. however, we could do something a little different and have two medicine cat apprentices? if you guys are ok with it? its not standard but i want to fulfill both of your wishes c;
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Mar 16, 2020 18:22:20 GMT -5
i just saw that! and it’s alright - i’m down to do the two apprentice thing if red is!
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Post by UnsightlyHeretic831 on Mar 16, 2020 18:22:20 GMT -5
I'd be happy to make a medicine cat, if you're fine with it!
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𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 18:24:04 GMT -5
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Post by 𝑓𝑜𝑥 on Mar 16, 2020 18:27:56 GMT -5
[ i'm definitely okay with two apprentices if that's alright with everyone! if not, i wouldn't have a problem changing her role or aging her up a little to be a full medicine cat, although she'd be rather inexperienced. either way! ]
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𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 18:29:27 GMT -5
ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » & 𝑓𝑜𝑥 , perfect! we'll have two medicine cat apprentices. and i believe UnsightlyHeretic831 will be playing the medicine cat! it'll be a full team but i'm excited to have everyone happy with it<3
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Post by UnsightlyHeretic831 on Mar 16, 2020 18:58:10 GMT -5
{I was listening to sad nostalgic music making this so here you go} Fallowfeather [ She-cat, 47 moons, asexual ] Fallowfeather is a black she-cat with short fur and blue eyes. Her paws are white and so are her ears, and muzzle. Her nose is black and her tail is a stump. She's on the larger scale, and her fur is well kept and tidy. Her paws and ears are relatively small, but not very distinctive. Her build is very graceful and agile, making it look like she exercises a lot. Fallowfeather is well-spoken and speaks her mind, and a very calming and sensible cat overall. She does not fail to keep herself together in public and is not easily spooked. She would give her life for any cat, and is not afraid to ask questions. She encourages others to be themselves, and to pull themselves together, even if she can't. Fallowfeather has many problems and requests not to speak about them to anyone except those she trusts. She tries to be someone greater than she is already, and her mind's a mess, but that's okay, because she has hope for others to stay sane. Even if she has no future in improvement. rank: Medicine Cat kin: Open to relations open to plots?: Yes.
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 16, 2020 19:02:47 GMT -5
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Post by lillypopper on Mar 16, 2020 23:50:46 GMT -5
Nightshade [Female, 86 moons, Bisexual] nightshade is a small lithe pure black cat with bright blue eyes. She has a small scar on her right eye that is slightly shut from a fight with a badger before she became to be a clan cat. Even though she is small she does not back down from fights, she makes up the lack of strength she does not have with her speed of being lithe. Nightshade loves to wrestle and play with kits and train with the apprentices. Her eyes are always filled with happiness, and playfulness. She is a lovable she-cat who can be mean if it comes to push or shove she will fight tooth and nail for the clan. rank: senior warrior kin: None alive open to plots?: Yes
Applepaw (Appleswipe) [ Male, 8 moons, Heterosexual] Applepaw is a large tom who has a mangy orange pelt with two front white paws that are always dirty and never clean. He has dark green eyes that is very observant and always scanning around him. He has a small head with his large body. He is very lopsided in that way, but he makes up for it with his movements. Applepaw has no speed but he makes up in his strength and power. Applepaw is very headstrong and would rather do stuff his own way. He does not take to orders well and would rather run head first into a fight. rank:Apprentice kin: Open to Kin open to plots?: Yes
Lillypelt [Female, 35 moons, Heterosexual] Lillypelt is a large she-cat who has a white and gray pelt that has a large scratch on her left side from a fight with a loner when she first became a apprentice with a reddish orange colored eyes. Her eyes are always filled with concern for other's and sometimes filled with shyness. Lillypelt has a large body that is mostly all muscle but she doe not know how to use it well. She loves to hunt but she does not like to fight other cats and would rather try to talk then fight. Lillypelt is super sweet and loves to sit with the elders and talk to them and help them with anything they need. rank: Warrior kin: Open to kin and mate open to plots?: Yes
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𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 17, 2020 10:56:39 GMT -5
lillypopper hi! do you think you could lengthen the descriptions of your characters? as for your queen, i would prefer having a solid story in place - that means having a mate for your queen. preferably, queens would develop through the roleplay. if you would like to join her as a warrior to begin with, and then develop her becoming a queen, that would be better.
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Post by lillypopper on Mar 17, 2020 11:19:19 GMT -5
I was still working on them, doing forms on the phone is hard lol, I just got my laptop up and running so i was gonna go through and fix up the posts. And i dont mind making the queen a warrior. Ill get that changed and fixed up within the hour C:
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Bisexual
𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 17, 2020 11:23:00 GMT -5
lillypopper im sorry! i didn't realize they weren't finished c; sounds good! thank you so much<3
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Post by lillypopper on Mar 17, 2020 11:26:19 GMT -5
𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ You are completely fine. I thought i had put in that they were still wip but i guess i didn't put it lol.
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Post by lillypopper on Mar 17, 2020 12:09:39 GMT -5
Do they look better? Or a little more description? 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
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Bisexual
𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡
a whisper of a voice, it echos in my mind
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Post by 𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡ on Mar 17, 2020 12:13:36 GMT -5
lillypopper preferably a little bit more? i don't mean to be nitpicky. a little more on personalities would be a bit better? other than that they're looking better!
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Post by lillypopper on Mar 17, 2020 12:32:08 GMT -5
𝒂𝒍𝒎𝒂 ♡You are good. I haven't filled out a form in a long time, I had dissappeared from the site for a while and just came back not to long ago So im getting back into it So i do not mind you being nitpicky CX
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