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Post by Jaysnow on Feb 29, 2020 15:59:20 GMT -5
Are there any novellas you think would've been better as Super Editions instead?
I think Mapleshade's Vengeance and Goosfeather's Curse should've definitely been Super Editions. While both were great, they were very rushed.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 29, 2020 16:24:18 GMT -5
I agree with you on Mapleshade's Vengeance, I wish they would have dived deeper into hers and Appledusk's relationship, to see what kind of cat he was, really all is known about him, is that he is a fierce RiverClan warrior, who is a floozy, and he accidentally killed Oakstar's son.
I would also like to know more about Ravenwing, and about Oatspeckle...I'd love if Ravenwing got a novella, to see what was going through his head, when StarClan sent him that omen.
I think Tigerclaw's Fury would have been cool as an SE, not because I think anything could have been added to it, just because I really liked it, and I wanted it to be longer. It was sooo cool seeing cats like Flintfang and Deerfoot...gosh I loved ShadowClan from that era, and a little bit before, like with the cats from Yellowfang's Secret.
Goosefeather's Curse would have been cool as an SE too, especially if it meant seeing more of his trips to the moonstone, and seeing more Chiveclaw and Hawkheart
Shadowstar's Life maybe, I think it'd be cool if the who dunnit was dragged out, and a bit more mysterious, and took longer to reveal who it was.
I think that's about it
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Feb 29, 2020 16:27:40 GMT -5
Definitely MV. I also feel like CJ could've worked either way, with the second half of the story being the actual journey to the gorge.
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Post by Mistybreeze on Feb 29, 2020 16:58:22 GMT -5
Hands down CJ. It's called Cloudstar's Journey but we don't actually see the journey? What?! It could have been so much better. I would have done a dual POV with Cloudstar and Birdflight after they are separated. I would cover SkyClan's early days in the gorge and Birdflight's kits growing up in TC.
MV as well. Mapleshade was defeated way too soon. I would have preferred if she had bided her time a little more and systematically took out her enemies rather than go on a crazy killing spree. Maybe have her kill some innocents too, to make it clear to the kiddies that she is a villain and not some tragically misunderstood character. Also, she should have had a littermate or parent to stand up for her.
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Post by Fireleap on Feb 29, 2020 17:03:14 GMT -5
Mapleshade's Vengence, Shadowstar's Life, Cloudstar's Journey, and maybe Dovewing's Silence? I the plot was changed up just a bit and extended I feel like it could've worked as one.
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Post by Hollyfall on Feb 29, 2020 17:07:07 GMT -5
Definitely Mapleshade's Vengence as a Super Edition. I also wouldn't have objected to Shadowstar's Life, Goosefeather's Curse and Cloudstar's Journey as Super Editions.
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Post by *Faith* on Feb 29, 2020 17:40:36 GMT -5
Definitely Mapleshade's Vengeance.
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Post by Brindlefern on Feb 29, 2020 18:51:47 GMT -5
MAPLESHADES VENGENCE and Cloudstar's Journey.
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Post by *Ravenpaw* on Feb 29, 2020 22:26:06 GMT -5
Mapleshade's Vengence.
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