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Deleted Member Deleted	OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 10, 2020 21:11:18 GMT -5 ☾ѕησσzє☽ likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2020 21:11:18 GMT -5 Hi! I’m new here and was wondering about making a Clan, but definitely needing help. I will take any ideas given

Non-binary ☾ѕησσzє☽ no im not okay, I suck at a game I play 8 hours a day Pronouns: They/Them	OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 12, 2020 18:54:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ☾ѕησσzє☽ on Feb 12, 2020 18:54:08 GMT -5 whats your ideas?

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OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 12, 2020 21:17:21 GMT -5

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Feb 12, 2020 18:54:08 GMT -5 ☾ѕησσzє☽ said:

whats your ideas?

I currently don’t have many, but I’m definitely thinking about having a few Clans, like three or four, and different people owning them. There could be a great battle between the Clans that the Clans don’t want, but the leaders are rivals and they end up taking their Clan into a battle and killing themselves off. The deputies would be kind of shook by it, and not being great leaders. And a bunch of side plots that I need suggestions for.

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OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 12, 2020 21:38:24 GMT -5

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oh, okay, are you sure about all the deputies because that might lead the clan to anarchy because they aren't being ruled properly. If I were you I would at least make most of them competent because if not the clan might revert themselves back to rogues.

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OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 13, 2020 20:08:18 GMT -5

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Feb 12, 2020 21:38:24 GMT -5 ☾ѕησσzє☽ said:

oh, okay, are you sure about all the deputies because that might lead the clan to anarchy because they aren't being ruled properly. If I were you I would at least make most of them competent because if not the clan might revert themselves back to rogues.

Maybe not all the deputies, but I would like at east 1 or 2 to be a little scared to become leader because they may have just become deputy and didn't know the leader would die so soon.

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OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 14, 2020 6:57:20 GMT -5

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I guess that could work, just be wary of the idea of other cats trying to overthrow the new leader ya know? I feel like that would certainly be a cause for concern if you just wanted them to be inexperienced. I'm not bashing your idea at all, it sounds fun just trying to help you work out the ideas.

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OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 14, 2020 19:09:39 GMT -5

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Feb 14, 2020 6:57:20 GMT -5 ☾ѕησσzє☽ said:

I guess that could work, just be wary of the idea of other cats trying to overthrow the new leader ya know? I feel like that would certainly be a cause for concern if you just wanted them to be inexperienced. I'm not bashing your idea at all, it sounds fun just trying to help you work out the ideas.

You’re right, but that could kinda be part of the plot, cuz the new leader has to pick a deputy that might wanna take over or something.

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OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 15, 2020 18:02:59 GMT -5

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Um... ☾ѕησσzє☽, so I tried to make a somewhat decent plot, whatcha think? ~~It's terrible >-<~~:

OceanClan has lived on the beach in peace for a while now... But, when troops and Oceanstar head into the unknown, they never return... Meanwhile, it has been many moons back at camp, and OceanClan is getting worried. Many want to go find the leader, but know they might not return either. Marshshallow, the OceanClan deputy, might have to take over, but he is very new to being a deputy, and maybe not as worthy as Oceanstar had thought... Now, it's time for Marshshallow to become Marshstar and choose a deputy who might be one to take his power. Marshstar had always wanted to make his mentor proud, but now she might be proud of another...

Deleted Member Deleted	OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 20, 2020 18:07:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2020 18:07:36 GMT -5 Sand can you please move this to clan planning pages?

Rainbow Sand "cosmic lattes." Pronouns: she/her	OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 20, 2020 19:44:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sand on Feb 20, 2020 19:44:41 GMT -5 @hollyice, the thread is already in [Clan] Planning Pages.

Deleted Member Deleted	OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 20, 2020 20:07:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2020 20:07:50 GMT -5 Thank you, Sand.

Rainbow Sand "cosmic lattes." Pronouns: she/her	OceanClan By the Beach Planning Page {Help Needed} Feb 20, 2020 20:13:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sand on Feb 20, 2020 20:13:21 GMT -5 You're welcome!