SH I am Kind of really disappointed but not?
Sept 5, 2019 6:31:39 GMT -5
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Post by ☾ѕησσzє☽ on Sept 5, 2019 6:31:39 GMT -5
So I have no clue how popular my opinion is but I just finished the book (And spammed my discord server with lots of spoiler tags and rage). Let me unpack this, be gentle if I misread or forgot bc my memory is so bad even though I did just read it lol. Also spelling or grammar mistakes happen with me, I apologize I did proofread this but you know.
My first complaint; Bramblestar. I get it, he's the leader and he shouldn't be undermined so much. It's annoying and whatnot but he never really heard Squirrelflight out and that annoyed me. It didn't feel like Brambleclaw. I know they bickered but still, it just felt off and made me mad. Not even discussing the kit thing, I get him there. He doesn't want them, that's fine. But he never took into account how his mate/deputy felt during this whole thing or why she was speaking out.
Second; Shadowclan and Riverclan. Actually, let's say all the clans. It was a major asshole move on their part and I refuse to believe any different. It was a heavily pregnant queen, willing to give up the territory later, that they barely needed. She died for their selfishness. Not just that but it's rugswept by them, just like they did for Skyclan all those years ago because of their 'guilt'. Good, let them feel guilt for what they did. They should be punished harshly for it. Moonlight should not have died, nor should have Leafpool. (RIP Leafpool, my email is still crowfeatherxleafpool when that was a thing). I know they trespassed but it was an accident, I think? They kidnapped the leader and deputy but they obviously discussed why with the clans and tbh Leafstar seemed less angry later on? Same with squirrelflight. They also saved the clans from dying from poison but who even cares right? Not the clans.
Not a complaint but just sad; Poor Sparkpelt. I feel so sad for her. I completely forgot about TBC book and was heartbroken for her, poor gal.
Third complaint; STARCLAN. I know judging is a way they do things, I liked discovering how they did it. But...really? Being punished for the three? Are you kidding me? They saved the clans. You guys straight up said the three had to happen. Ashfur is in there for goodness sakes! A S S F U R. I hate that rugsweeping too, like oh he almost murdered me but like...its fine lol. I'm cool with it. Hollyleaf...no. How...who judged him. I need to know right now because he belongs in the DF and I stand by it, I knew he would show up, I knew he was in there but I didn't expect harsh judgement on Squirrel and Leaf like that with him being there. And BLUESTAR GIRL HOW YOU GONNA TALK ABOUT TAKING MATES FROM ANOTHER CLAN WHEN YOU ARE WITH OAKHEART IN STARCLAN (which btw, I am okay with.). I just, ugh. It's frustrating.
Still thinkEmberstar Ashfur is the bad guy
Second; Shadowclan and Riverclan. Actually, let's say all the clans. It was a major asshole move on their part and I refuse to believe any different. It was a heavily pregnant queen, willing to give up the territory later, that they barely needed. She died for their selfishness. Not just that but it's rugswept by them, just like they did for Skyclan all those years ago because of their 'guilt'. Good, let them feel guilt for what they did. They should be punished harshly for it. Moonlight should not have died, nor should have Leafpool. (RIP Leafpool, my email is still crowfeatherxleafpool when that was a thing). I know they trespassed but it was an accident, I think? They kidnapped the leader and deputy but they obviously discussed why with the clans and tbh Leafstar seemed less angry later on? Same with squirrelflight. They also saved the clans from dying from poison but who even cares right? Not the clans.
Not a complaint but just sad; Poor Sparkpelt. I feel so sad for her. I completely forgot about TBC book and was heartbroken for her, poor gal.
Third complaint; STARCLAN. I know judging is a way they do things, I liked discovering how they did it. But...really? Being punished for the three? Are you kidding me? They saved the clans. You guys straight up said the three had to happen. Ashfur is in there for goodness sakes! A S S F U R. I hate that rugsweeping too, like oh he almost murdered me but like...its fine lol. I'm cool with it. Hollyleaf...no. How...who judged him. I need to know right now because he belongs in the DF and I stand by it, I knew he would show up, I knew he was in there but I didn't expect harsh judgement on Squirrel and Leaf like that with him being there. And BLUESTAR GIRL HOW YOU GONNA TALK ABOUT TAKING MATES FROM ANOTHER CLAN WHEN YOU ARE WITH OAKHEART IN STARCLAN (which btw, I am okay with.). I just, ugh. It's frustrating.
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