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no im not okay, I suck at a game I play 8 hours a day
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Post by ☾ѕησσzє☽ on Aug 19, 2019 17:46:12 GMT -5
Yes, let them have kits. It's a rule I never understood but with leaders and a deputy I can kinda stand behind, they have a lot more power in the clan and probably will try to go out of their way to protect their kits from harm. Who am I kidding, idk, but let's let the leaders and the sentials suffer for a bit haha.
So mentors will be spending a lot of time with their apprentices from kithood to actually being an apprentice, that's a good idea. It'd help them form a stronger bond with the one they are training and hopefully learn their shortcomings before they even set foot outside of the camp walls.
I love the idea of apprentices learning herbs and all of that good stuff, I think it's important for them to know the basics in case a healer {in the case of warriors, medicine cat} dies without an apprentice. That way the clan isn't completely messed up.
And of course! ^^ I hope my coding gets to be that good, I just learned how to not make a picture repeat itself recently tho so got a bit to go
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Aug 19, 2019 17:47:09 GMT -5
yooo this all sounds so dope and i'm def down to join!!
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Post by 🇳ᴇcʀᴏᴅ🇦🇳cᴇʀ on Aug 19, 2019 17:47:46 GMT -5
I’m legitimately already excited at the prospect of joining! Is there anything we can help with?
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 17:50:46 GMT -5
Hm, I think it's more leave and survive. They can choose where they go and how far.
Oh Necro, could you help me with territory / camp? I'm super bad at that stuff. I can't visualize anything.
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Post by 🇳ᴇcʀᴏᴅ🇦🇳cᴇʀ on Aug 19, 2019 17:52:14 GMT -5
Id happily do both if you’d like me too  can do the coding too if you wish but understand if not
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 17:57:08 GMT -5
I have some of the territory on the first page on one of my posts. I'll try to find it.
Coding will be decided later once I figure other things out first.
Real, we can do the prophecy? So names would have to be involved and their names are really general.
I do like things that rhyme. It makes me giggle.
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 17:59:12 GMT -5
@ Nerco - this is my sad territory XD
Marsh - To the west of the forest is a massive expanse of marsh land. A few dry islands dot between the thick water, covered with long wild grass and reeds. The marsh can overfill in months of rain. The marsh is great to hunt and the islands, if a cat can get to them, are perfect for a sunning spot.
Field - To the south of the forest is a large grassy field. This field is where many animals come to graze and travel on. It is the best to hunt large birds like pheasants and turkeys.
Forest - Most of the territory is a large oak forest, lots of undergrowth and a massive canopy of thick branches and leaves. Not a lot of sunlight filters through. The forest is shared with other animals like deer who aren't a threat. The camp is at the heart of the forest.
Marsh - To the west of the forest is a massive expanse of marsh land. A few dry islands dot between the thick water, covered with long wild grass and reeds. The marsh can overfill in months of rain. The marsh is great to hunt and the islands, if a cat can get to them, are perfect for a sunning spot.
Field - To the south of the forest is a large grassy field. This field is where many animals come to graze and travel on. It is the best to hunt large birds like pheasants and turkeys.
Forest - Most of the territory is a large oak forest, lots of undergrowth and a massive canopy of thick branches and leaves. Not a lot of sunlight filters through. The forest is shared with other animals like deer who aren't a threat. The camp is at the heart of the forest.
River - The river flows from the north.
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Post by 🇳ᴇcʀᴏᴅ🇦🇳cᴇʀ on Aug 19, 2019 18:02:36 GMT -5
Do you want me to add more, or just rewrite it?
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 18:03:37 GMT -5
I'm just not sure what to add. I also have no special names for these things. I feel like there needs to be more places on the territory that are noteable.
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Post by 🇳ᴇcʀᴏᴅ🇦🇳cᴇʀ on Aug 19, 2019 18:05:01 GMT -5
I’ll see what I can do
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 18:06:03 GMT -5
Shadow would be good. They are known to have darker pelts.
The murderer could be Shine or Bright. Just to offset the Shadow.
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 18:09:54 GMT -5
i have so much faith in you. lame or not, thank you!
Code
1. Defend with your life. Death is the greatest honor.
2. The sick, the old, the young, are put above the rest. They must be fed and taken care of.
3. Prey is a blessing. Do not waste it.
4. At birth, kits will be given a mentor. The mentor will guide them through life and at 8 moons, they will start full training.
5. Once training is completely, apprentices will leave for a moon. Those that survive will be accepted as a full warrior.
6. Boundaries are marked and watched daily.
7. Challengers are met with claws and teeth, do not show kindness.
8. Accept those that come from another life.
9. The Beholder's word is law.
10. Once you leave, you may never return.
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Aug 19, 2019 18:25:19 GMT -5
those sound cool! but, and this is literally just coming from a personal opinion so take it with a grain of salt, it feels like they lose their rhythm towards the end of each. could i take one and try my hand at re-scaling the rhythm? only if you're cool with it, of course
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 18:29:28 GMT -5
oh they sound so cooL!
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 18:35:33 GMT -5
yes, kittypets and loners are welcome. but they would have to commit fully to the group so they can't go home.
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Aug 19, 2019 18:39:23 GMT -5
Shadow is overtaken by the bright
But it doesn’t end with the fight
Shadows cover the moon
Leaving all behind in ruin
*****
Shadows will seek those that shine
Their paths beginning to intertwine
Blood will run
Until the shadow is done.
anyways...
Shadows overtaken by light,
the darkness cast out in the fight.
The moon, now covered in endless days,
will make the journey, our souls to raize.
(pattern: aa,bb ; 9 syllables each)
*******
Shadows seek the stars that shine.
the paths we trod intertwine.
One wrong move and blood will run,
no more light 'til shadow's done.
(pattern: aa,bb ; 7 syllables each)
i changed up the words some to help with making it sound proper and be slightly mysterious, so 'light' could mean bright or shine or sun or anything for that matter, and 'one wrong move' alludes to the attempted killing ^.^ i hope you like them! |
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Aug 19, 2019 18:43:30 GMT -5
// squeal ah! thank you! i like creative writing, so i tried to channel that into it ^.^' i appreciate that so much!
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 18:45:17 GMT -5
Oh they are all so good. ;-; i love them
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 18:57:16 GMT -5
Hm, Shadow doesn't need to try to overtake them really. Just get revenge. If they used cunning and lies they could take cats down one by one. Or just turn others from the group against one another.
Depends on who plays the character and how they wanna do it.
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Aug 19, 2019 18:59:34 GMT -5
oooo manipulation on that level is so devious i love it
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Post by PudgeCat on Aug 19, 2019 19:01:13 GMT -5
characters that are premade i will allow people to interpret them in anyway they wish.
writer creativity is important.
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can do the coding too if you wish but understand if not 