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Post by hazelstar on Mar 24, 2019 15:57:04 GMT -5
I see a lot of complaints that the new writing style is childish, but in OVAS, I don't really see that... If you think this, I would love to know if I missed something
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Post by hazelstar on Mar 24, 2019 16:09:25 GMT -5
has the writing style changed? it seems pretty similar to how it's been since POT It has since AVOS started. Not by a longshot I don't think. But with the new editors and the new girl now writing the Novellas, yeah.
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Post by kinkajou on Mar 24, 2019 17:32:02 GMT -5
I haven't noticed anything different
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Post by Brindlefern on Mar 24, 2019 21:20:59 GMT -5
The writing style isn't childish in AVoS.
So idk where you got the idea that people are saying the writing style is "childish" now.
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Post by Rανєη'ѕ ƑƖιgнт on Mar 24, 2019 21:24:59 GMT -5
If anything, the writing seems a little more mature, due to the Erins using some more complex vocabulary (such as probation). But I’ve also noticed some repetition of those words, so it’s a mixed bag.
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Post by foxstep on Mar 24, 2019 21:25:32 GMT -5
I find the style a bit different starting in AVOS but I don't see anything childish in it.
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Post by 𝗟𝗢𝗨𝗜𝗘〡𝑟𝑦𝑜 𝑎𝑠𝑢𝑘𝑎 𝑚𝑢𝑡𝑢𝑎𝑙 on Mar 24, 2019 21:34:34 GMT -5
i know theres a new writer for the new novellas, and i've kind of noticed the difference in writing style there- like in the redtail's debt preview. but i reeeally enjoyed the redtail's debt preview ("i'll just... be over here...") so! idk!
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Post by Papillon on Mar 24, 2019 21:45:45 GMT -5
I've never seen anyone say this
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Post by *Ravenpaw* on Mar 24, 2019 22:05:02 GMT -5
I haven't heard anyone say this. I would say that the writing for AVOS is different, not childish.
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Post by hazelstar on Mar 25, 2019 13:22:47 GMT -5
The writing style isn't childish in AVoS. So idk where you got the idea that people are saying the writing style is "childish" now. I've heard it a few times, not on these forums though
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Mar 25, 2019 16:43:37 GMT -5
what does "childish" writing even mean though...?
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Post by Falconfrost on Mar 25, 2019 17:09:38 GMT -5
I haven't heard anything about this, but it's interesting that some seem to view the writing that way. You'd think it would only get better after so many years.
yay warrior of love!!
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Mar 25, 2019 17:13:49 GMT -5
I haven't heard anything about this, but it's interesting that some seem to view the writing that way. You'd think it would only get better after so many years.
yay warrior of love!! tbh i dont think it has to do with "getting better with time." not only are the main erins older women, but there's this mystery team of editors, who people assume are kind of young...?
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Post by Falconfrost on Mar 25, 2019 17:14:55 GMT -5
I haven't heard anything about this, but it's interesting that some seem to view the writing that way. You'd think it would only get better after so many years.
yay warrior of love!! tbh i dont think it has to do with "getting better with time." not only are the main erins older women, but there's this mystery team of editors, who people assume are kind of young...? That's a good point.
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