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Post by Sea Drops by a Bird on Mar 10, 2019 20:12:16 GMT -5
We all know that one area the warrior's series is lacking in is quality love stories. Couples seem to come out of nowhere or have little to no foundation to them, or your favorite one ended or was ruined for some reason. And the ones that are the best are typically the ones we never see. SO which couples love story would you redo in your own perfect warriors world, and what would you do differently?
I would redo SpottedxFirexSand. I don't think this series has ever had a real love triangle and this could be it, but in order for that to happen Spottedleaf can't die a week after she meets Firestar. At least let her live until the third book, so that we can see her and Firestar working together and bonding so that he has a reason to care about her after she dies. Perhaps she travels with Firestar and Graystripe to bring back WindClan, and then as she sees what happens to Silverstream she is shocked back into remembering why they can never be together, right when they were close to admitting their feelings. Then she dies and enter Sandstorm.
I'd also redo OakxBlue- I just never really got what they saw in each other. It sort of came out of nowhere and while I like the complexity it added to Bluestar I would have liked to see the budding crush, her being drawn to him and not being able to control herself, only to realize too late that she never really liked or loved him and that she shouldn't have acted like she didn't know better.
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Post by kinkajou on Mar 10, 2019 22:17:33 GMT -5
Many things (LeafxCrow, BluexOak) but most of all FinxTwig by making Fin not be a jerk in TRS
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Post by Brindlefern on Mar 10, 2019 22:25:57 GMT -5
I'd make FinTwig not go down in the dumpster like TRS did with it. Just remove Finleap's atrociously manipulative behavior and call it a day.
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Post by copperfur on Mar 10, 2019 22:31:03 GMT -5
If I had to redo one, I would have Silverstream survive and join TC.
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Post by mymerlincat on Mar 10, 2019 22:38:09 GMT -5
Have Mapleshade not have one by not existing
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Post by scint on Mar 10, 2019 23:27:26 GMT -5
Actually, I'm going to do more than one: LeafxCrow - Make it not exist SilverxGray - Have it not exist SquirrelxBramble - Have them not get back together by the end of BrS TwigxFin - Never exists in the first place HawkxPebble - Either have it never exist or make it so that it's not a horribly written FirexSand clone TigerxDove - Have Dovewing join ShadowClan earlier than what she did in canon HalfxJay - Never exists in the first place SpottedxFire - Never exists in the first place ThunderxViolet - Have them introduce Violet Dawn in AFD or TBS, and slowly develop their relationship. I might make a rewritten version of it sometime in the future) StarxSky - Doesn't exist LionxCinder - Remove the whole situation with Cinderpelt being Cinderheart but she's not but she is and all that confusing crap
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Post by graygoyle on Mar 11, 2019 1:59:08 GMT -5
TigerxDove should just not exist.
CrowxNight should remain, I just wish the Erins presented it in a healthier manner, or at least allow the couple to heal and forgive, instead of fester. However, if it didn't exist, neither would Breezepelt and I would be super okay with that.
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#FF55A3
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Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Mar 11, 2019 3:54:12 GMT -5
SkyStorm- Give them some more development and genuine moments and I might have just liked them and feel for the couple when Storm died.
My mind jumped to SpottedThistle when I thought of bad couples but I would just erase them completely rather than redo them. rubs eraser aggressively
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Post by sylveon on Mar 11, 2019 5:25:26 GMT -5
Tiger X Dove: give them more growth, Dovewing joins ShadowClan around BrS Bramble X Squirrel: throw the whole Jessy plot away. Instead see them working through their problems and understanding why Squirrel did what she did instead of a rushed few lines of dialogue. Jay X Half: throw it in the garbage Holly X Fallen Leaves: no. Only platonic. Storm X Clear Sky: sigh. I understand it was a thing because of Thunder, but love at first sight is boring and it seemed like an unhealthy relationship Clear X Star: I don't really like this ship, but i think it's because of the way it played out. She never should have been a love interest to Thunder and brought into the story earlier. More build up between them since it really did seem like Star Flower just wanted to be mates with him at first just for a secured spot in the group. Violet X Thunder : more build up. It was bland and she should have had an earlier role in the books Turtle X Gray: Turtle doesn't die the end
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Post by Deleted on Mar 11, 2019 15:59:32 GMT -5
I would redo FeatherXCrow. It seemed kind of heartless for the Erins to kill off Feathertail so soon, who was Crowfeather’s only ally in the group and RiverClan’s representative for The Great Journey. I dunno, I just feel Crowfeather’s development as a character wouldn’t have been so stilted, and besides that, LeafxCrow would never have happened. Also: Feathertail never got to see the lake territories.
I would also have redone SandXFireXSpotted, however that already has been done on here.
Plus, I would have redone BrambleXSquirrel. They were a horrible match in my opinion. For them to have worked would require a major overhaul in either Bramble or Squirrel’s character, and that was not happening anytime soon.
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Post by Sea Drops by a Bird on Mar 11, 2019 17:48:43 GMT -5
I would also redo BramblexSquirrel, because them getting back together and him making her his deputy felt so fake and was a prime example of an author wanting something to happen without building a story around it. He literally didn't speak to her the entire arc and then was like "you're the cat I trust most be my deputy?" Then by the end of BRS they were together and surpirse! Squirrelflight isn't barren and has his kits.
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Post by Rio on Mar 11, 2019 18:55:16 GMT -5
Needletail and Rain. I just really want to know more about their relationship and Rain in general. Even at the end I still couldn't figure out his actual motives.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Mar 12, 2019 22:20:45 GMT -5
MudNight: Mudclaw becoming Mudstar and being mates with Nightcloud, please and thank you. SilverGray: Have Silver live and move to TC or vice versa with Gray. FireCinder/DustSand: I'd scrap the SpottedFire thing completely and have Fire get with Cinder and Dust with Sand. FireGolden: In a scenario where Cinder stays a medicine cat, then I'd probably put Fire with Goldenflower, much more interesting than something generic like Fire/Sand. StormSquirrel: Should have been a thing tbh, I could see this if Silver lived. BrambleFeather: Like StormSquirrel, I would have made this a thing instead of BrambleSquirrel, imo they suit each other and probably would have worked out in the long run. ClearPetal: Have Petal live, she and Clear Sky become mates, and Star Flower never comes back, thanks. TigerDove: They stay broken up after DW and BrS, Dove focuses on herself and self-love, Tiger gets with another she-cat in ShadowClan, or dies, I really don't care. Just no Tigerstar II please. MapleMyler: Have Mapleshade move on and live a life with Myler in the barn, whether she's still murderous or not is debatable but interesting lol. LeafCrow: Never be a thing, just like...why? If they had to have the three then it could have just been StormSquirrel kits instead. HollyFallen: Shouldn't exist period. Either put Holly with Cinder or Mouse, I don't care. LionCinder: Utterly boring and unnecessary drama, Lionblaze doesn't deserve a mate. FinTwig: Trash, shouldn't exist. Finleap is just...intolerable and I hope Twig doesn't have kits with him, she deserves better. RowanTawny: Was only a thing because the Erins felt bad for getting Rowan's gender wrong, just...no thanks. Tawny really didn't need a mate. BerryPoppy: I feel like this was only a consolation prize, like GrayMillie. Imo I would have had Honey live and stay with Berry, maybe put Poppy with someone else. GrayRiver/GrayFern: Both of these are more interesting than Gray's other suitors tbh, Storm was tolerable. ShatteredDappled: I feel like Shattered Ice and Dappled Pelt had a thing going on, wish it went somewhere. ThunderViolet: Just give him a better love interest period, Violet has as much personality as a paperbag with makeup and Star Flower was much worse. SpottedThistle: Gross. HawkDove: I don't know...but after Dovewing develops on her own for a while, I wouldn't have minded if she and Hawkwing hit it off, and she started out fresh. SparkMole: I hope these two hit it off instead *sigh* NeedleRain: I kinda wanted to see more of their relationship, it was interesting.
I probably have more, but oh well.
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Post by Ivyfalcon on Mar 13, 2019 20:21:57 GMT -5
I'd make FinTwig not go down in the dumpster like TRS did with it. Just remove Finleap's atrociously manipulative behavior and call it a day. I second this!
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